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I want a hug now... Yes, I'm the nut who runs around at school giving all my friends hugs. I think I'll make a sign like that now... xD

In psite of herself, Jade screamed as pieces of Shegetsu's heart sprayed. Recovering quickly, she cleared her throat and dismissed her sword. "Always the theatrics with you, isn't it?" she threw Kiba a sort-of compliment; the closest she would ever get. "So, when do we get to the treasure?"

Jade offered a half-apologetic bow to the permanently injured Geshurax and moved on. With both kneecaps exploded, the Nobody could never walk again. She dashed through the clones of Shegetsu, sword held in both hands; the pistol had disappeared. "Having fun yet?" she yelled to Kiba and Xidar with a sarcastic grin.

Jade wiggled the fingers on her left hand and grinned. "Leave her to me." She dashed forward, Shadowsword leading. As she ran, she manipulated the fingers on her left hand and pulled a pistol from a holster across her back, keeping it hidden from view. With a battle cry, she leapt forward at the injured Organization member, swinging her scimitar to create a wave of ash, then snapping around nin midair to fire two precise shots through the ash.

Jade snarled in Geshurax's face and flung a protective covering of opaque ash around herself. "You irritate me," she hissed, striking out with her left foot in a sidekick that should have had enough power to shatter ribs, sending Geshurax flying backward.

*facepalm* You are a pervert, Roxas. Haha, I love how you've written Darkandroid. I like the added romance, just please don't go overly mushy. My eyes might bleed. Hope I don't get killed in the next chapter...

OOC: Apologies for taking so long; I had about six pages to read through. Let's get me back in the RP, shall we? I like cheese.

Jade's breath came hard asa she sprinted down the seemingly endless corridors, Shadowsword clutched tightly in her right hand as she ran. "I can't believe they left me behind," she gasped. "I hate stairs," she added, remembering the flight she had recently assailed. She skidded around a sharp corner and barely managed to duck beneath a rain of red fire.

"Son of a-!!!!" she screamed, throwing herself to the ground and covering her head. "The hell-?"

*bump*

A friendly bump before I go read Chap3.

EDIT: Wow. I read it. Risk Own died already. o.0 That was fast. Team Dark, huh? Hmmm.... Nice work, Roxas!

AHH! Roxas, you are awesome. I'm signing off in a few minutes and won't be back online until tomorrow afternoon. Now I get to read it before I go. xD

Pokity-pokity-pokity-pokity.... hola. Have nothing more to say, since I've stated all my views via PM...

WAK! After all the whining NeD did about being on the council, he never applied... damn. This changes things.... >_< Unless he submits a resume by Friday, any votes for him cannot be counted.

HOW TO WRITE WHEN MULTIPLE LANGUAGES ARE REPRESENTED

I've often seen this with anime-fans who try to write fanfiction that incorporates two or more languages, such as Japanese and English. If your main story is written in English, any words in a different language should be italized. Therefore instead of "Edward-kun" with the Japanese suffix -kun, it should read "Edward-kun" to emphasize that it's a different language.

The same applies with any other language:
"No, Señorita!" he cried frantically. "Vamos from this cursed place!"

I'd like to introduce another topic: HOW TO CORRECTLY USE A SEMI-COLON IN THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE, and HOW TO CORRECTLY PLACE A COMMA IN THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE.

Semi-colons are not used simply when you think it would look prettier than a comma. The semi-colon is generally used to join two simple complete sentences that relate to each other.

I read the title of the book before me. A chill breeze rustled the curtains, and I shivered as though it had been caused by the words themselves.

How boring, yes? Now, a semi-colon would look very pretty here.
I read the title of the book before me; a chill breeze rustled the curtains, and I shivered as though it had been caused by the words themselves.

DON'T OVERUSE THE SEMI-COLON!!!! I am guilty of that, myself. >_< Whenever possible, join the sentences with the more-convenient comma.

I sat beside the window. The sun's rays illuminated the page.

x_x Two short, blah sentences. Join sentences with a comma plus a conjunction such as "and", "but", "or", "nor", or "yet". With a comma, it should be:
I sat beside the window, and the sun's rays illuminated the page.

Much prettier, yes? There are several further rules about this in the English language, but these are the basics.

*Grammar Hammers you back* Microsoft Word says "hemorrhage"

Hehehehe....

ZOMG I ISH TEH CLONE TROOPER!!! Haha, I can do things like this because I am awesome.

1337 hax wtg! pwn n00bs ftw! Lol! Roflmao do-do-dododo! ph34r m1 1337 p0w3r!

I will never do that ever again, so I hope you all enjoyed that. xD

I'm very proud of you, Risk Own... do you use proper grammar?

Thank you for including me, Roxas... I'm honored. Really. I'm excited to see how you're going to kill me... xD

*twitch* Did Risk Own put you up to this? PM me or something so we don't spam this thread to death.

I was on vacation. ^_^ Anyway, when I came up with this voting idea, I failed to take into consideration that today is an American holiday; consquently, I will barely be able to be on until tomorrow afternoon. Anyway, here are all the resumes collected:

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Please vote for no more than five members who are on the above list. I figured the fairest and least-rigged system would be to post who you voted for. I'm casting my vote based on the above resumes, but more importantly actions within the KF itself.

Please don't vote for yourself, or else I shall have to vote for myself, and that's cheating. x_x

DPWolf
NeverendingDarkness
Shadow Tactician

Again to reiterate, you can vote for anywhere from 1-5 people. The votes will be counted by me (although you'll obviously be able to check my count) and finalized next Monday at the earliest.