"Fine! Be that way you idiot!" Crescent disappeared. She couldn't control where she was headed. Crescent felt herself falling, then she could no longer feel herself. The sensation of falling was incredible! Your body, lifeless and useless, falling down... and the wind, nothing felt better.
Birth Defect >.< it happens <3 or whatever you want it to be.. :]
x3 I love you :]
"I-It's nothing!" Crescent screamed and got up. She was shaking and felt extremely weak. ".......I don't need your help Rai". Suddenly, a piercing pain came upon her. "Damn it! What the hell is happening to me?"
Rain? Come here, we have rain almost 24/7.
Crescent felt terribly wrong. She couldn't scream, it seems that the pain engulfed her body. Crescent fell on her knees. "Cr*p!" was the only thing she managed to yell.
Ask the company that controls your connection. The same thing happened to mine. They said the were having technical difficulties.
Fine hun <3 How about you?
"Well, master till next time." Crescent said and disappeared, leaving dark flames. Her stomach started hurting. What the hell?
Bad Vexen D:!
I was born at 12:01 o.o...??
I know :] ..
"I'm not really sure, master." Crescent said, half smiling.
We are because most of us like 75% are made up of the less fortunate. Luckily, I'm extremely well off :]
Crescent gave a sly grin. "Let's see, I think Kino was looking for you and Rai, well, last time I saw him was when he was fighting his little brother.
The Philippines is made up of 7,107 islands. Yes, if it does get better we could have more tourists coming in.
"No one yet, master. I have not seen any worth taking. It seems some neutrals are still too weak." Crescent muttered.
It's okay. Were not that popular because my country is still quite young and corrupt. Due to the lack of trust in the government the country has...
"Till next time, Arixia" Crescent said and disappeared. She had sensed her master's appearance on earth. Crescent appeared behind Master Cassady. "Master.." she said with a slight bow " There seem to be many neutrals. Should we take the stronger ones and force them to join our side?"
I have to agree with Cariad. Well, I think there's just too much usage of the word 'you'. Plus, I'm not really used to reading stories that are from the reader's point of view. I guess it would have been better if you made it from the main character's point of view. This is just my opinion, please don't get mad. :] By the way the 2nd chapter is bit better :3
