I have edited it! I'm sorry for all the mistakes. Like I said,I'm a newb at writing -even though I love it ;P
^-^ I'm doing good. Playing FFX right now. How bout you?
lol... how are you today?
Soo..how are you today?
uh-huh. ;D yay!
well,i used a cheat,so it shouldn't matter. XD XD XD
-_-' I made Riku,Kairi,and Sora,but Sora and Kairi died in a fire-AGAIN.
Hello^^ Thanks for adding me.
because they had 9 million dollars. T^T
ooh,that sucks. my sora drowned...>_<
I like your profile too! It's cool...^-^
Thanks for the friend request! ^-^
Has anyone been watching the games between The Lakers and the Celtics? If you have, you know this is the final game. Yes,the FINAL GAME. :D Whi do you think will win? I say LAKERS~!
but I didn't want my family to die...T^T
i made KH characters. Kairi died in a fire...T^T
my family died on sims 2...T^T I got bored og the new family that I made and came on here...Sims can make you bored.
I cried and screamed,"I DON'T WANT IT TO END!!" I was 10 years old...XD
heh,yaah...<3 i'm bored...
the graphics are cool...<3
Thank you! (= I fixed it up. There's spaces between the commas and I fixed some of the words. It looks better. Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. ^-^ Yeah,Rokushi definitely popular... Two over ice cream/part three "Roxas... I don't like this place... It makes me uneasy.... " Xion said, stepping back toward the closing portal. Roxas said nothing. Their mission today was to explore a new world, the dark and spooky Halloween Town. The sky above the two teens was black and dark clouds moved slowly. They stood on a cobblestone road and a wall surrounded them on both sides. Lanterns were lit beside the two, casting off an erie light. Xion's right, this place does make me uneasy... Roxas glanced over at the girl. She was shaking slightly and her blue eyes were wide. Roxas looked away as his face began to feel warm. She's so cute... Wait, what am I THINKING? Roxas shook his head. Xion looked at him. "What's wrong?" she asked. Roxas shook his head again. "Er,nothing. Let's just get this mission over with," he said. He smiled down at the girl and started to walk. Xion watched him go,then followed. ~~~~~~~ Xion kept glancing at her surroundings. When she and Roxas passed through a large, black gate, she flinched. The gate was pointy and it just spooked her. I want to get out of here... Xion sighed softly and followed Roxas into the main plaza. A weirdly, shaped fountain was in the middle of the dark plaza. Green water poured out from a hole. Wait...That hole looks like a mouth... Xion thought. She came toward the fountain and stopped when she was right in front of it. She peered down at her green reflection. She stared up at the hole. The mouth ,or hole, was attached to a long pipe that looked like a neck. The green water pored out. Xion stared at her reflection some more. "Xion! C'mon!" Roxas called out to her. Xion looked away and ran over to the boy. They continued to walk around the plaza, examining places of interest. They came to a large house that was seperated from the plaza. It was blocked off by a gate. Roxas tried to open it, but it wouldn't budge. Xion summoned her keyblade. "Maybe... This will work," she said, swinging her key against the gate. It broke open and Xion smiled with satisfaction. Roxas laughed. "You know you could have just put it in the keyhole...." he said, going in front of her. Xion held up the key. "Don't you see how big this key is? It's not possible," Xion smiled. She saw Roxas turn away. "L-let's go," he walked up the steep stairs leading up to the doorway. Xion stumbled and fell on her knee. "Ow!" she cried out, clutching her knee. Roxas turned swiftly,almost falling. He caught himself and ran down to Xion. He knelt beside her. Xion was rocking back and forth, clutching her knee. She bit her lip to ignore the pain. "Xion! A-are you okay?" Roxas asked,leaning over her. Of course she isn't you idiot! She's in PAIN! Roxas covered her knee with his hand and pressed down firmly. "Ow! Roxas! Don't do that! It hurts!" Xion cried. She tried to push Roxas' hand away with her free hand, but he wouldn't let go. Xion's face was beet red. She looked at Roxas and her face felt hot. God... It hurts so much! She bit her lip when Roxas pressed down even harder. She leaned forward and covered Roxas' hand with her other one. Roxas was taken aback. She was so close to him... Her short black hair hung in his face and he could hear her breathing. She looked up at him through her hair and he removed his hand. He scrambled up a step and Xion looked up him. She saw his that his face was red, like hers. She saw something in his eyes and she stared at him. For a second, she thought she heard his thoughts. But the moment passed. Roxas stared back. His eyes widened in fear at what she was thinking. What..? Why is she staring at me like that?! He stood up and turned away from Xion's stare. He raced down the steps and ignored Xion's calls. ~~~ END.