Nakir regained his breath and jumped forward, running after the man and other boys. Wo are these guys?
((Hey Cupcake, were you talking to me?)) Ha he s fast, cool, he really is like me Ed shot forward, letting out his speed as his wings pumped faster and faster.
Nakir tried to get the girl but the man punched him hard. Nakir felt the breath go out of him and he collapsed, gasping, and eyes watering.
Laith lay pressed into the dirt, still coughing. He felt a pain in his side and turned his head to, see a large cut. Only a few drops of blood dripped out but it kinda hurt. He wondered how he had gotten it but suddenly he remembered. The gang that had mugged him. He continued wheezing, trying to master his asthma. It was slowly overcoming him and panic welled up.
Edmondus was alone, completely so. The wind whipped around the church steeple and his bare chest was a bluish color. He extended his wings, wrapping them around himself. The down gave him protection and the stiff contours gave him balance. He stared blankly out at the sky. What am I?Not a human....not a demon......not even a mix......doomed to wander the line between civilization and the abyss. He shook himself and regained control of his thoughts. To make matters worse, none of my 'kind' are left. I haven't met one damn person who looks remotely like me. Ed truly believed that and he rubbed the back of his neck, where the strange golden feathers grew into his skin, uncomfortably. Because of this believe he was unnerved at the sight of a human rising into the sky. Eagerly, he jumped off the steeple and flew out over the city once more. Considering that I have the social skills of a tree, I had better not let him see me.
This was his chance. A boy, about his age probably, had walked into view in front of them. The man whirled just as the boy called out, and ran straight for Nakir. Summoning up his courage, Nakir stepped out onto the road and delivered a punch square into his face. His knuckles stung but as the man was distracted, he got the girl. She was surprisingly light and he jumped back, away from the man.
Laith set down Shigiku and ran back. He took a breath, steeled himself, and jumped through the fire. It singed him a bit but didn't hurt as much as he thought. He went to take in a breath, but couldn't, there was no air. Quickly, he grabbed the princess's hand and dove for the outer wall of fire, this time they went through it so fast it was just warm.
Edmondus flew over the city, wings spread gracefully. His shadow passed over a grouping of people and he looked down, golden hawk eyes analyzing them. He dismissed them as nothing. Feeling his wings tire, he landed on the top of a church steeple, close to where he had seen the group. Pulling out his ipod, he put it on shuffle and stared out at the sky.
Suddenly one word got through to him. Girlfriend. Relief coursed into him and he stood taller, the old self coming back but the new appearance staying. "Girlfriend? So you're NOT trying to hurt her," he asked. "I'm not trying to hurt her, I was trying to PROTECT her, from...you," he rubbed his neck uncomfortably. ((I gotta improve a bit so we can get out)) Laith saw Jacky getting more powerful and turned to Jecht. "We gotta get the girls out now!!You get the princess and I'll get Shigiku," he said. Laith whirled and grabbed Shigiku. "Please don't hurt me," he said as he ran off into the woods, leading Jecht to a secret place he knew about.
Played By: The Fifth Element Name: Saxon Looks: (white button up shirt, black jeans, black and white converse speakers) Personality: keeps to himself almost all the time Past: He lived with his mom and dad until his dad died in a car wreck. Now he just lives with his mom Weapon: nothing at the moment Element:metal Other: has a wolf dog named Smoke
same here Filler of doom!!
yay I needed it too thank you *gives cookie then runs off to download vid*
I used Peter Pan alot...and..really I don't know why
*nearest member happens to be me and I stare at you* 0.0 lol ok here is the next chapter. And hey guys/girls the writers block is still hitting me hard so this one is gonna be shorter sorry Chapter 6 The Warrior Encampment Riku stepped under the hanging vines into an enclosed camp space. There was brush and thorns around the outer walls and the inside of the camp was bustling with activity. Whitestorm led them through the crowds of cats, each one stopping to look at the new arrival. Whitestorm left them at the base of a couple large boulders, going to speak with a bluish white she-cat. He returned moments later with her. She leapt gracefully onto the rock and raised her voice. "Let all cats who are old enough to catch their own prey gather at highrock for a meeting," she mewed out across the campsite. Immediately all of the cats came up to the rocks, to stand at this cat's paws. "We have found three new cats in our territory today, They don't have the scent of Shadowclan, Windclan, or Riverclan." Murmurs between the cats rose and Riku heard one shout out. "Rouges!!!" The blue cat shook her head. She turned back to Riku and whispered to him. "We will accept you into our clan but do not betray our trust," she said, a hint of warning in her voice. Riku nodded fervently and waited as she told the other cats this news. It was met with mixed feelings but regardless the blue cat again turned to Riku. "Today Starclan will welcome a new apprentice. Riku, from this day forward you shall be known as Silverpaw. " The blue cat turned to an orange cat. "Sandstorm, you are ready to take on an apprentice. You will be mentor to Silverpaw. Sandstorm, you have shown yourself to be a warrior of courage and discipline . I'm sure you will pass on all you know to this apprentice." Sandstorm dipped her head and padded up to Riku. She touched noses with him and then led hm over to the side of the clearing. "Now its time to organize hunting parties," the leaders voice drifted off as the walked further away.
yes that kind of hurt. also the "SH!T I can't move my legs, the fire has spread to the gas tank of the car, which is crushing me, and its about to explode" hurt too but thats not important at the moment
Edmondus walked the streets of the city, lonely and abandoned as the desolate city around him. What he saw threatened to make him retch. Bodies lay in the street, men still clutching their women, still trying to protect them. Children lay slumped over, looks of horror still painted on their faces. He tilted his face up, and closed his eyes. A single tear, escaped his eye, cleaning a path of dirt on his face. He fell to his knees in the mud, dirt mixed with these peoples' blood. It began to rain. Slowly at first but then it began to pour. Edmondus released his wings, ripping his shirt up. He just took off the remains. On his back, below his white and black wings, were whip lashes. They crisscrossed his back, ugly red welts. He lifted off the ground with two powerful strokes and carried himself away from the lonely place. ((Was that an ok starter?))
ouch dude, that had to hurt, well I'm glad you are back buddy here is mine Name: Nakir Age: 17 Gender: male Side: Light Weapon(s): twin short swords Appearance: Other: he looks like he is from the dark but he isn't
((too late to join?)) Name: Edmondus Age: 17 Demon/Human/Other(Please specify): Other(teehee you will find out) Personality(What makes them happy, sad, mad, jealous? O.o): He has a split personality, when he turns "black" he gets angry and will get into fights and tear things up, but when he is "White" he is calm and very laid back. Biography(Also their past please): Ed doesn't remember what happened past last year. But last year he had saved many kids, from other demons. Because he had carried them back, the parents though he had kidnapped him and they captured him. He went with out a fight, trying to show they he meant no harm. But the punished him, 50 whiplashes. He still has the scars and has been very distrustful of anyone since then. Appearance: Weapon: two short swords Other:
"You won't hurt her!!!" Laith sank lower in his crouch bit winced. This newly found power was hurting him. Cuts were appearing on his skin. He sank to the ground, clutching his shoulder, still growling fiercely. He would protect her till death. "I won't let you hurt her, you will have to kill me before you kill her." This isn't good.
Nakir came in just in time to see a strange man, throw a girl over his shoulder. Thats not good, I don't think I can take him by myself, I'll follow him. Nakir quietly followed in the woods off to the left a little bit and back about 50 feet.
