Vexen froze; she had just been kissed! And by all people by Marluxia. She could feel her pulse grow faster and she nearly fainted. She had never been kissed before. Marluxia carried a dazed Vexen to the parking lot. The girl was shaking, still in shock. Could she have feelings for this man whom she had known for so long? She had never felt anything for him before, and she did not know what she felt for him now. All she knew was that she was very confused. She mindlessly followed Marluxia, unable to think or make sense of the situation. Did she harbor feelings for him? She had no heart, so she could not possibly feel anything for anyone. She looked to them man leading her. Still, all that she could think about was if in fact she had seen Roxas or not.
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The two had not even been served yet and Vexen's date (boy, was that weird to say) was pulling her away in such a rush you would think that the restaurant was about to explode. They sped past waitors balancing plates and customers shocked at their speediness. As they reached the exit Vexen looked back and saw someone familiar: Roxas? What was he doing here? Before Vexen had a chance to think, the pair was outside the door. As Marluxia leaned against a wall, panting, Vexen wondered if she really had seen the boy. If so, she was relieved; she had felt sufficiently awkward with Marluxia and Roxas may be able to get her out of here. "Marluxia, why were you in such a hurry? We did not even eat. And did you see Roxas in there, too? I could have sworn I did!" The girl made her way towards the door; she wanted to check if the boy really was in the restaurant.
Vexen followed Marluxia, all the while thinking to herself, What are you doing? You do not have feelings for this person; you do not have feelings at all! She looked at the beautiful restaurant that Marluxia brought her to. The balcony view was gorgeous. Still, Vexen was feeling very shy. She looked to the man sitting before her; he was casual and confident and... Marluxia! How on earth did Vexen ever end up on a date with him! A waitor came up to her and asked what she would like to eat. Vexen looked down at the menu and decided to get the first thing that she saw: Gnocci. While the waitor went off with both of the customers' order, Marluxia stared at Vexen. "Umm... Marluxia, whatever made you want to ask me on a date?" The shy girl twitched her feet and played with her hair very nervously.
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Vexen looked to the man speaking to her and she had to examine him for a bit before realizing that he was Marluxia. He was wearing a very manly and sophisticated suit, and his hair was pulled back into a pony tail, revealing his masculine face. He also had a rose, which Vexen took hesitantly. Her face turned red. She did not want to go out with Marluxia, or anyone else for that matter; she had never dated before and was too shy to start now. Still, she felt awkward saying no. "Umm, well...," she stumbled out, while avoiding eye contact with Marluxia, "I suppose so." Her head shot up and she wore a did-I-really-just-say-that expression on her face. ----------------------- OoC: I'm off for the rest of the night cause I've got an art project that I have to get finished!
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Vexen found herself in a back corner of the Castle. She had run away from Marluxia, very shy about the idea of a date; she never thought of Marluxia in that way before, and she did not feel that way now. If anything, Marluxia frightened her. She let out a deep sigh, glad to have escaped, and walked around the Castle, relaxing in her own thoughts.
Vexen had to stop and think about what he just heard. Did Marluxia really just ask her on a date? But she'd never dated before. She felt a tug at her chest, where her heart would be if she had one. "A.. date?" She looked to Roxas, who said nothing. "Umm..." She looked to Marluxia and answered in a low whisper, "Alright.." She could not believe that she had just said that. "Actually, I think I left something at the shop, I'll be right back." She opened a portal and ran into it, leaving Marluxia behind. ---------------------------- OoC: Sorry, but I have to go shower and then I'm going to be gone for most of the night...:o
Vexen looked to Marluxia, blushing. "Thank you, I guess." She looked away. Marluxia continued to state at her and she felt awfully awkward. She realized that she was now the only woman in the castle, or atleast the only one around. She suddenly became very aware that she may call some unwanted attention. Even though she was now a woman, she continued to be introverted and so she was very embarassed by her new realization.
1. There should have been more time dedicated to the story of Organization13 and its members. 2. Not very challenging. 3. Too many repeat worlds. 4. More Roxas 5. More Axel 6. Kairi seemed a little too prissy 7. More on Riku and Mickey's story 8. Sora was a bit corny 9. Not enough sidequests 10. Atlantica and Pooh's world weren't very good 11. I think that the story could have been a little deeper and delved more into the back story of memories and hearts. (I mean more like an FF game that is more serious.)
Vexen held the mirror up, examining her new face. Her high cheek bones sparkled with bronzer, her eyes popped with the mascara, and her lips looked sensually beautiful with the lipgloss. "I look beautiful," she said. "If I were still a man, I would probably stare at a woman who looks like I do." She stood up and looked to Roxas, who was beaming at his "masterpiece". Then, she went over to him and gave him a hug, though she did so awkwardly. She had never hugged anyone before. "One, question, Roxas: Where did you learn to handle make-up like this?"
Vexen was about to apply some lipstick to her eyes just when Roxas spoke. "Am I doing this wrong?" The new woman rumaged through the goods she bought and pulled out a hand mirror, looking at herself. She shuddered. She looked like a clown. No, she looked worse than a clown. Vexen looked to Roxas. "I need your help..." ----------------------- OoC: I will be temporarily missing, but it will only be for a few minutes!
A few hours after Vexen's leave, she returned, opening a portal into her room; her arms were full of sewing material, makeup, and a razor. She had no idea what she was doing. "Well, I suppose I should adjust this organization cloak..." She looked at all the sewing supplies she had bought and could not make sense of them. Still, she got down to business, only after shaving her legs, because she had to admit that their hairiness was unattractive. ------------------------- OoC: Only one post in the morning for me today because I have to be off soon...
Vexen felt tears at his eyes, which was very unusual for her. Being a woman even changed her emotions. She looked to the laughing Roxas, then to the still-a-man Marluxia, and then to her new body, over and over until she finally make a decision. "Fine, I'll do that and I'll be a woman." She paused. "For now, atleast." She opened a portal and turned to both boys. "I'll be back. I'm off to buy some make-up and a razor... I just hope that I know how to use them." The confused new woman walked off in an out-of-it way, leaving Roxas and Marluxia to think about her sudden decision. ---------------------------- OoC: I have to take my dog out for a walk, even though its late. I might be back on later?
Vexen's head snapped up at the boy, who was laughing on the floor. "Roxas, I don't think this is funny!" she protested. She walked back into the machine and attemtped to type into the keypad but it seemed as if the procedure caused the machine to run out of power. She would not be able to get it working for atleast a week now with the amount of damage it received. She looked at Roxas, defeated. "Roxas! I'm a woman! What am I suppose to do now?"
Roxas's voice caught Vexen off gaurd. The scientist was still trying to deal with the situation. "Roxas, this is not a joke! Something happened with the preocedure and I really am a woman." Vexen was turning around, examing the new him... er, her. She was thoroughly surprised by this turn of events.
