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My first fan-fic. I hope you enjoy it. Please let me know what you think.

Attention: I apologize for this error:

I put the wrong title for the thread name! The story title should be Keyblader Chronicle, not B.T.C.A.S.M.

<edit>(I guess I should put something like a summary...*sigh*)
I made this story to be many years after the time of Sora and his friends. Later on after I finished it, I realized that I'd want to put Sora and the others with these characters in a future story. So if I continue this, ( I'm planning for a K.C.2, and maybe 3) I'd add Sora and the others into it. But this story...Well...at least there are some Characters from the series. (If I told you who, I'd be spoiling it.)

Part 1: Strange Greetings

Raven sat in a subway car, and she wasn’t enjoying the boring ride. Two boys sat across from her. They were talking about Kingdom Hearts. She rolled her eyes when one them started singing Simple and Clean.

“I like that song,” she thought, “but hearing too much of it?! I’m trying to get kingdom Hearts out of my head.”

When she reached her stop, she gloomily walked out of the subway station. Half an hour later, she arrived at her apartment building. Before she could put the key in the front lock, she heard a loud meow.

“Probably just a stray cat.” she muttered.

A meow sounded again, and she decided to find where the cat was. When she walked to the side of the building, she saw a kitten. It had its paw stuck in some tangled wires and cords.

“I have to help it!” was the first thing going through her mind. “Lord please don’t make the cat attack or scratch me. It could have rabies.” she said, going over to the kitten.

The kitten looked very scared. Raven carefully untangled the cords and wires, freeing the kitten’s paw. The kitten seemed overjoyed, and rubbed against Raven’s pant leg. It was purring happily. Feeling the warmth of happiness in her heart, she turned around. The kitten ran away quickly.

She jumped when she heard a crackling sound behind her. When she looked around, she saw a huge portal.

“Woah!” she exclaimed, before it pulled her in.

It closed behind her. She was being spun around in glowing space.

“I’m dreaming! Oh no, what if I’m dying?” she cried, panicking.

After a while, she blacked out. When she opened her eyes, she saw a yellow glowing light.

“Is she dead?” a voice asked.

“No you dummy! If she was dead she wouldn’t be laying there!” said another voice.

Raven slowly sat up. She saw a little boy with green eyes, glasses and brown hair. She also saw a tall girl with black hair and brown eyes.

“Where the heck am I?” she asked, standing up.

“You’re in Fiddle Town of course!” the little boy exclaimed.
“Fiddle Town?” Raven said, puzzled.

All of a sudden, a big black dog came charging down the street.

“Oh no!” Raven exclaimed as the dog knocked her down, licking her on the face. “Ewww!” she cried, pushing the dog away, and wiping her face on her sleeve.

She froze as she saw her sleeve was a different color.

“What? Wow! I have new clothes!” she cried in amazement.

She had on a black jeans jacket over a gray long sleeve shirt with black sleeves. Her pants were black, comfy, and had a chain with silver stars and circles hanging from it. She also had those gloves where the fingers stick out. A worried looking girl holding a big brown dog on a leash came running down the street. She grabbed the leash of the dog that knocked down Raven. Then she looked curiously at Raven.

“Who’s she?” she asked the tall girl.

“Oh! We didn’t introduce ourselves. My apologies. I’m Lena.” the tall girl with black hair said.

She pointed to the little boy, adding: “And this is Larry.”

The girl holding the two dogs said “My name is Anna. What’s your name?”

“Raven.” Raven replied.

“Raven...I like that name!” Larry exclaimed. “Are you okay, though?” “I’m fine.” Raven said.

“You know Anna we just found her laying here. Maybe she passed out.”

“Where do you live?’ Anna asked.

“Um,...I live in the Bronx, in New York.” Raven replied.

Anna seemed puzzled.

“The Bronx? New York? I’ve never heard of it.”

Raven moaned, and thought “Will I ever get to go home again? Plus, why am I here?”

“Why don’t you come with us Raven?” Larry suggested.

“That would be great. Thanks.” Raven said, smiling.

Later on in the day, they were all at Lena’s house. As Larry, Lena, and Anna were talking in the kitchen, Raven was in the bathroom looking at herself in the mirror. Many thoughts were going through her mind.

“What if they think I’m crazy? And...Come on...Fiddle Town? I wish I knew why I was here!”

She slammed her fists on the sink, and some water flew out of the toilet.

“Oh my gosh. They must have a toilet ghost just like in Harry Potter...Cool!” she cried. Then, she looked into the toilet. “Hmm, seems normal to me.”

She walked out of the bathroom and headed for the kitchen. Anna was pouring water out of a pitcher into a cup. She knocked over the pitcher and it was like slow motion.

“No!” Raven said in her mind, closing her eyes.

When she opened her eyes she saw that the water was floating in the air. Anna, Lena, and Larry all had surprised expressions on their faces.

“Raven, you’re a water-mover!” Larry exclaimed.

“A what?” Raven asked.

“You can control water!” Anna said.

“I can?” Raven cried.

“Yes! Make it go in the pitcher.”

Raven moved her hands. She was shocked to see that the water moved with them. Slowly, she directed the water back into the pitcher. Anna clapped with joy.

“I love water-movers!” she cried.

Raven was still amazed by this discovery.

“So I can control water,” she thought, “I have powers.”

She sat down on a chair at the kitchen table.

“I can control wind.” Anna said.

“I can control fire.” Larry said.

“I can control anything earthy!” Lena cried.

“Wow.” Raven said. “Does anyone else in this town have these abilities?”
“Yes. But some people don’t.” Lena replied. “What element you have depends on your zodiac sign. I’m a Capricorn. Anna is a Libra. Larry is an Aries. And you are a...”

“Pisces.” Raven finished.

“Awesome! We should be great friends then!” Lena exclaimed, giving her a big hug.

The next day Raven sat on the front steps of Lena’s house, still thinking about how she would find out her purpose of being in this strange world. Her train of thought was interrupted when Lena came running out of the house.

“Hey Raven, why don’t you come with me to Hiromi’s house? Maybe he can help with your situation here.” she said.

Raven nodded, and they both walked to Hiromi’s house. When they got there, the front door opened to reveal a tall boy with short gray hair, brown eyes, and a fang ear ring.

“What’s up, Lena darling?” he said, giving Lena a big hug.

He looked at Raven.

“And you must be Raven, I presume?”

“Yes. Um, hi.”

A little while later, Lena and Raven were sitting on a tiger stripe patterned couch; across from Hiromi, who sat on a black armchair. He listened attentively as Raven told her story. He thought a while before he spoke.

“That’s possible. I think I might know why, but I’m not sure. There’s still the reason why you were transported here.”

As he thought more, his mother came into the house. She was tall, wore a pink dress, had brown eyes, and brown hair.

“Hello Hiromi. Lena. Who’s your new friend?” she cried, sounding tense.

“Hey mom.” Hiromi said. “Her name’s Raven.”

“Hello Raven. Hiromi...” she put her hand on her forehead. “Hiromi, it’s been such a long day.

The things I have to deal with. T.J.’s store has been robbed. There’s been an outbreak of heartless at the east side.”

Raven froze at the mention of “heartless”.

“Did she just say heart-less...? That means...I must be in...”

Hiromi stood up.

“Let’s go to Marie’s place. I have a message to tell her.” he said to Lena and Raven.

They all arrived at Marie’s house in a few minutes. Lena was about to knock on the front door, when they all heard a loud scream.

“That was Marie!” Lena cried, running to the backyard.

Raven and Hiromi followed. They all saw a huge monster holding a little boy in its hands. Marie was trapped in a block of earth, and the monster started to run away.

“Oh great!” Hiromi cried.

He made some thick vines rise from the earth , which wrapped around its legs. Lena threw a sharp rock at the monster’s arm, and the boy fell. Raven caught him, struggling with his weight.

“I need to work out more!” she cried, putting him on the ground.

Next, she freed Marie from the block of earth.

“Thank you!” she cried, hugging the little boy in her arms.

Raven ran to help Lena and Hiromi. She looked around and spotted a pipe with a faucet. She turned it on full blast and gathered water. She ran to the monster. She had an idea. She made the water wrap around the monster.

“I just hope I can freeze it.” she thought.

When she opened her eyes, she saw crystals of ice starting to form.

“Awesome!” she cried, sending sharp spikes of ice through it.

The monster screeched in fury. It broke the ice. Together, Hiromi and Lena slammed the monster with big boulders of rock. It disappeared in a flash.

“Are you okay?” Hiromi asked Marie.

“Yes. I am.” Marie replied. “I’m just so glad to have my son back.”

“I do wonder why it was after him, though.” Lena said.

“It could have been hungry.” Hiromi said.

“Hungry? Since when do monsters feed around here?” Lena cried. “The only monsters we know here are the heartless. It was obviously not from around here.”
Raven stopped daydreaming and looked up at them.

“I agree with Lena.” she said.

Suddenly, they heard a loud crash. Heartless had knocked down the fence, and were coming toward them.

“Run!” Marie cried, running away with her son.

Raven shot many large icicles at them, and Lena trapped them with many vines. A boy with red hair and blue eyes came out of a house. He sent a huge mass of flame after the heartless in the street. Soon, they had gotten rid of all the heartless.

“I really didn’t expect that!” Lena cried.

“Neither did I.” Raven added.

“Thanks for all of your help Max.” Hiromi said to the boy with red hair.

“No problem.” Max said.

They all heard a loud bark from down the street. It was Anna’s big black dog. It was running towards Raven. Raven ran to avoid being knocked down by it, but it wouldn’t give up. When she let down her guard, it knocked her down and licked her in the face.

“Ewww! Not again!” she cried.

“He must really like you.” Lena said, laughing.

Anna came running down the street.

“Why must that dog always ditch me?” she said, grabbing its leash quickly.

“Hi Anna!” Max cried.

“Hello Max.” Anna gasped. “Mayu...Mayu’s gone missing.”

“What?!” everyone cried at the same time.

please let me know what you think. *.*