"Your just a clone and probally just a figment of my imagination! So just go away!" Katie said getting a little annoyed and walked another way
It was very good but their were a few mistakes and you might want to work a little on periods and punctuation. Other then that it was a very good poem!
"Well thats the only place your useful, to be of no help at all...." Orochimaru looked around and saw that they were almost their. He then got on the monsters back and pressed his hands on the monsters back. A second or two later, wings poped out from the monsters back and they flew above the clouds.
Katie looked around and jumped from the tree's to the dirt road and ran "Stop bothering me Raxtion!" Crystalize stummbled into a room that was filled with weapons and she read the directions " Whats willing to the eye will be willing to you" Crystalize looked around the weapons that would catch her eye and found a thick silver and gold sword and put a firm grip on it.She then fell down down from the floor and landed on something hard and wet
Katie jumped from tree to tree, talking to Crytalize as she ran Crystalize gulped and started to heavy breath. She gripped onto the statue and smashed it to the ground and closed her eyes as she smashed it. She then slowly opend her eyes and looked down. All she saw was smashed peices of clay on the ground. Crystalize looked straight ahead and spoke into the walky talky "N-not-hing......" Crytalize said and her eyes widend When Katie heard Crystalizes responce she heard something in the backround and relized what it was "Crytaslize.... GET OUT OF THEIR!!!!!!!" Katie shouted Crystalize looked up and she noticed that the walls were starting to tear down. She then ran as fast as she could into a whole that had been made by the rocks
Orochimaru laughed "Like your actually going to learn how to not show emotion!" He said, now mocking her
ooc: lol, who would put a banana in a police station?! Katie ran deep into the woods and climbed a tree, slightly laughing from earlyer and talked into the walky talky "Crystalize, are you their?" "Yeah, and im very confused! The directions say to look where I wouldnt look and that I only have three guess, but I have no idea where that spot is..." "Well whats around you?" Katie asked, a little nervose "A bunch of statues......" She said looking everywhere she was able "Choose one of them!" She said Crystalize looked around carefully and chose one of the statues and smashed it but nothing came out of it. "Nothing...." "Try another one!" Crystalize chose another one and smashed it and once again, nothing. "I didnt find anything!" "Carefully choose another!" Katie said warning her Crystalize carefully chose a statue and picked it up, feeling very nervose
"You still dont get it! Its not that easy to take! If it was I would have already of took it! i need to do some special things before I can get it! And besides, I love seeing you get torchered in your life!" Orochimaru said laughing
Crystalize got really mad and started to bang her head on the wall, no matter how painful it was Katie walked up to Crytalize when the officers were talking "Got the paper?" "Yep!" Crystalize said smiling "I gave the officet a decoy!" She said winking "Ok, open it up and hold it out in front of you...." She then took a special kind of water and poored a small amount of it on the paper. Words suddenly appeard and they looked to be directions. Crystalize read the directions and looked around for a slighly crooked brick and pulled it out. A door slid open. "Come on Katie, lets go!" "Just go on without me!" Katie said, handing her a small walky talky and they both slightly put them in their ear. She soon ran out the door and Crystalize went down the steps and closed the door
"Foolish little girl! You just dont get it! You have something that I need, something that I want! It lies deep within you! Thats why you dont have a normal life! Its because of the thing that I want!" Orochimaru said bitterly. "But dont think ive told you something important, because that isnt as nearly important as the millions of facts that has to deal with a brat like you!" "I dont care! Ill do whatever it takes to get Rikku back and thats a promise im going to keep!" Breanna said, running even faster
"Ugh! I told you wouldnt beleive me!" She then stopped, remembering that the good Raxtion said the bad Raxtion was just a clone. "Which Raxtion is dead? Theirs two Raxtions! Theirs a clone and theirs a real Ration.... which one of them is dead?!" She asked the officer, urging to know
"Why would you even think that I would tell you something like that?" He asked, slightly mocking her "No! I cant stop! Rikku could be de-. She could be de-. Never mind! I have to save her no matter what!" Breanna said, running even faster
"Do whatever you want..... I mean, who really wants to have a normal life?" Orochimaru grinned and kept on going through the forest "Rikku! Rikku!" Breanna said, looking around in hopes of finding her
Breanna looked over at Byakuya and smiled. "Orochimaru hasnt won yet!" She said to Sora and went after Rikku. Orochimaru laughed. "So you want a normal life do you?!" He said smileing
ooc: You might want to PM Last of the Organization to join Orochimaru yawned out of boredom. "That was too easy......" He said, sencing something suspicious. "hahaha, and stop trying to warn them because you know they cant hear you...." He said to Rikku, giving a smirk. "Lets go Rikku... wait, why am I telling you? Im the one who's in control." getting a laugh out of himself. He then took a step back, threw a bomb at them and rushed into the tree's. The monster followed Orochimaru/Rikku into the forest, giving a big, evil, grin. "Well Rikku, If your friends follow us, lets just say that theirs going to be a little suprise for them..." He said laughing Breanna screamed in fear as the bomb hurdled twords them. She looked around, and saw that Sora wasnt able to move because of his injured leg. She extended her arm and reached out for him "Come on!" She said. "We dont have alot of time! Take my hand! Hurry!"
Orochimaru laughed "You mean those two pathetic fools Sunada and that Pervey Sage? Ha, I left them a long time ago! The were usless to me! No wonder your so weak! Those friends of yours make you soft, so soft that you always end up loosing! I mean really, they stoped you from killing me... So why do you still hang around them? And dont try and say they make you stronger because its obvious that they just make you weaker..." Orochimaru said, Releasing even more poison from his hand "Get ready to loose complete control of your body, because soon you will mine!" bitterly laughing. Breanna was shocked when she saw blood come pooring out of Rikku's mouth. "Rikku, are you going to be alright?" She asked, worriedly
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Orochimaru chuckled "What a pathetic answer.... You actually think that your friends are more important then your own life?" He laughed more and gripped on to Rikku's heart, almost making it bleed and large amount of poison coverd her whole intire heart. "Rikku, please take it!" Breanna insisted. "Please, it'll make you fell better." She said, not knowing what was happening.
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