The monster suddely gave his finger a little nudge and a full thrush of air hurled twords Kairi, hitting her against rocks and knocking her out. "I will have no interfearance!" The monster said chuckling. "If you wont make the first move, then I will!" The monster took a huge bolder and threw it at Sora "Sora! Look out!" Breanna shouted
Peter Pan seemed the most useful to me!
(Im not trying to mock Sora...)
Very descriptive and frightning! Its a really good poem but you might want to think about punctuation. Like periodes, because I dont see any in here....
ooc: youll have to ask LOTO (Last of the Organization). Dont post on here asking him because he never comes on this thread anymore but PMing him should work The monster suddenly stopped, giving Rikku a glimps of air and then suddenly grabbed her by the neck, taking a few of her potions and then looked back up at Sora "Give it your best shot!" The 1,000 foot monster said, bitterly laughing "Sora, stop him!" Breanna said to him, a little frightend by his apperance
Katie looked around, trying to find a way out "What if we go through there?!" Katie said, pointing at a back door and hoping it would be the way to get out. "Is anyone there?" Crystalize shouted, seeing that noone was around. "Raxtion, what have you done?" Crystalize said, looking around to see if their was anyone still alive
ooc: yay! This thread is back! Ok ummm... where did we leave off again?
I agree! Eternal, eternal, eternal!!! (goes on strike)
lol, 120%?! Hehe Ok back on task, love the story so far! Both of them are great! ("My story, but you included" and "A new story im planning on writing"!) Love them, love them, love them! (wait's for more)
"Haha, then why dont you just give up?" Orochimaru said laughing The monster then flew down by Rikku and circled her, making the oxygen fade away from the small area that she was in. Breanna turned around and saw that the monster was quickly taking away the air. "Rikku!" Breanna said, running to stab the monster. But she suddenly couldnt move. "Silly little brat! Your now paralized and so are your two other friends! So dont even try to save your poor little friend Rikku!" He said waiting for Rikku to die
They could be true because I had a fortune and it said that riches would come my way and I found $10 the next day!
I hate to see you go, even though we dont really know eachother... but I ♥ed your stories and I hope you come back ASAP!
searching the forms! What else?!
Cheetos!!! #9
Ill be your friend! :3
Breanna turned her head to observe everyone and that they looked fine. While everyone was taking a short break to see if their teamates where ok, the peices of the dead monster where starting to form together to create an even powerful monster. It gave out a loud scream. Breanna was forced down to the ground and covered her ears, feeling pain.
Nobodys caught both Kairi and Namine by the waist and carried them off to an unknown place, leaving Roxas to suffer.
Almost done?! No!! Sorry! Its just a great story and I dont want it to end!!! But on the bright side! I kissed Sora!!!! :D *faints!*
Aww you dont have to be sorry! But welcome to KH-Vids.net, im Kairi234! Dont forget to read the rulez, post lots, spam only in the spam zone, pm the staff and the mod if you have any questions, and have a whole bunch of fun!!! See ya around!
Awww poor Amber, everyone's taking her job! Lol Anyways... Welcome to the one and only KH-Vids.net! *trumpets start going off* Read the rulez, post lots, spam in the spam zone, and have fun! See ya around!
