Thanks! :D Oh, btw, I'm working on the last chapter of Memory Break! :)
Would someone please watch the new vid I made? http://video.kh-vids.net/video/4740132d-e291-4cbd-b513-99100152de6a.htm I worked REALLY hard on it, and I'm soooooo insanely proud of it :D And I know that the song has been used a million and one times, but I don't care. I love the song, and it fit the vid perfectly :D Thank you! :D Critisism is ALWAYS welcome!
Thanks! *gets to work on last chapter*
w00t! congrats to all of the winners! Awesome job! :D
Chapter 9! YES!!! *plops back in computer chair* Ok, the VERY last chapter will come out tomorrow after school. I'm sorry that the evil world has to put me back in school.....:( Enjoy the chapter! :D ~Chapter 9~ “Find your voice…†Who are you? “Who are you?†Just tell me who you are! “You know who I am.†Really? “Find your voice…†Xigbar and Zexion were walking around. It was pitch black outside, with the moon shining brightly. Xigbar looked over at Zexion. “So…you remember anything else?†he asked. Zexion nodded slowly. “Really?†Xigbar said, sounding excited. Zexion sighed. He looked up at Xigbar. Can you live if you are broken? Xigbar looked back at him. Zexion seemed worried. “What’s wrong?†he asked. Zexion looked at the ground. Me. There’s something wrong with me. Xigbar smiled. “Hey Zexion?†he asked. Zexion looked up at him. “Are we still friends?†Zexion looked at him. That word…friend. What did it mean again? His eyes widened. He forgot! Xigbar noticed his fright. “Zexion.†He said quietly. Zexion looked up at him. “No matter what you remember, or what you forget, we’ll always be friends.†Zexion smiled. Best friends… ~FLASHBACK~ “Ienzo, we’re best friends! I’m not going to let you get hurt like this anymore!†Braig said, pushing open the door to the other boy’s house. “Braig, please, stop!†Ienzo cried, trying to pull his friend out of the house. “So…Ienzo’s home from school early today, eh?†Ienzo and Braig looked up to see Rhais coming down the stairs towards the two. Ienzo moved behind Braig. “Please! We can still run!†Ienzo whispered as his brother came closer. “No! It’s time you found your voice.†Braig said. He then walked up to Rhais, who was grinning, amused. “Leave him alone! I know that you hurt him!†He said. Rhais laughed. “So?†He then punched Braig in his face, causing him to fall to the ground. Ienzo was horrified. “Braig!†he shouted, running to his friend’s side. Rhais shoved Ienzo out of the way. “Move it, brat.†He said cruelly. Braig stood up. “I’ll tell if you don’t leave him alone!†he said. Rhais laughed again. “Awww…who are you going to tell?†he said in a mocking voice. “Anyone! Everyone!!!†Rhais punched Braig in his chest, causing him to fall again. “You better not, or I’ll beat you up!†Rhais growled. Braig looked up at Rhais. “Go ahead! Just leave him alone!†he shouted. Rhais kicked him in his side. Braig yelled out in pain. He looked up at Ienzo, too afraid to do anything. “Ienzo! RUN!!†He shouted, as Rhais kicked him over and over again in his side. “RUNNNN!!!!!†~END OF FLASHBACK~ “RUNNNN!!!!!†Zexion looked up. While he was lost in thought, many large Heartless had appeared, and were surrounding the two of them. Xigbar summoned his Laser guns. “RUN!†Xigbar shouted again, shooting at a Heartless. He knew Zexion still didn’t remember how to fight. Zexion looked around. What were those…things? Hear…tl…ess? He…eartl…e..ss? Suddenly, one charged at him, but Xigbar shot it away. “Run! NOW!!!†He shouted. He was clearly out numbered. No…I won’t leave you… +++ “No…I won’t leave you…†“Run Ienzo!†“NO!†“Shut up kid!†“Leave him alone Rhais!†+++ Find your voice… “Run! Ienzo, run!!! “No…Braig…†+++ No…Xigbar… “Find your voice…†Who are you? “Who are you?†Broken…so broken… “Find your voice…†Why am I broken? “Find your voice…†My voice…Ienzo… “Who are you?†I am… Zexion…Ienzo… I remember… “Find your voice…†I’ve found it… +++ “LEAVE BRAIG ALONE!!!†+++ “LEAVE XIGBAR ALONE!!!†Zexion shouted, summoning his spell book. Xigbar looked at him in surprise. “Storm of Swords!†Zexion shouted, as a whirlwind of swords appeared and destroyed every last Heartless. Once they were all gone, Xigbar walked over to Zexion. He looked like he was close to tears. “Zexion…you can talk?†Xigbar said, smiling. Zexion nodded. “I remember how to, now.†He said. Xigbar smiled wider. Just then, Axel came running outside, along with Roxas. “What’s going on? I heard someone yelling.†Axel said. “It was me!†Zexion said. “I was yelling.†Roxas and Axel’s jaws dropped in surprise. “Zexion! You can talk!†Roxas shouted. Zexion smiled. Xigbar turned t. “But…why now? Why can you talk now but you couldn’t before?†he asked. Zexion struck a thoughtful pose. “I’m…not sure. I just saw you were in danger and…I needed to help.†He replied, smiling. Xigbar put his arm around Zexion’s shoulder. The four Nobodies walked inside towards the Castle. “Maybe it was time for Zexion to find his voice.†Xigbar said, smiling. Zexion smiled back. “Or maybe…†he whispered. “It was time for Ienzo to find his voice…â€
ya really :) thank you!
That was nice :) Sad for Demyx, but nice :) *hugs Demy* *hits Saix over the head with a frying pan*
its what they want to say to each toher, but cant :) thanks! (my page pwn lol :)) :D working on it now :D
Hilarious! Awesome story :D Well done! *claps* PAGE PWN!!!
Chapter 8! :D Sadly, there is probably 2 more chapters after this one :( I'm doing my best to get it all done today, so that you guys don't have to wait when I'm at school ~Chapter 8~ ~FLASHBACK~ Braig was walking home the boy from the dream from school. The boy had had a heat stroke from wearing the long sleeve shirt and jeans, and the nurse sent him home, along with Braig to take him there. The boy was panting hard, the sun feeling miserable on what was visible of his skin. “Dude, take off the shirt!†Braig said. “You’re gonna get another heat stroke!†“I don’t care!†the boy breathed. Braig looked at him with fright in his eyes. “You have to tell someone.†“About what?†“Your brother hurting you.†“Who am I supposed to tell?†The boy asked. “Uhhh…your parents?†Braig said with a tone. The boy sighed angrily. “I can’t.†“Why not?†“I just can’t!†he yelled. “WHY NOT??†Braig yelled back. The boy looked up at him with fierce eyes. “BECAUSE THEY HURT ME TOO!!!†he shouted, crossing his arms, but never looking away from the other boy. The rage in his eyes melted away into pain and fright. “How come you’ve never told me?†he asked. The boy looked away. “They said if I told anyone, they’d hurt me more.†He said, hurt in his voice. Braig looked at the ground, and then back up at him. He saw how defeated he looked, how afraid he was. He wasn’t going to let his best friend live like this. “If you won’t speak up, I will!†he shouted, running off in the direction of the boy’s house. “Stop, wait Braig!†the boy yelled, running after him. “Come on, —“ ~END OF FLASHBACK~ What was the boy’s name? “Ienzo.†Huh? “His name was Ienzo.†Who are you? “Who are you?†I am… “Find your voice…†Zexion opened his eyes. He was still sitting on his bed. So the boy’s name was Ienzo? He smiled. He was remembering. This was definitely a good thing. He sighed. It would take time to put back together his memory, but he knew he could do it. All he had to do was follow the story. His thoughts went back to Ienzo. Ienzo…it sounded familiar. Did he know someone named Ienzo? Just then, the loud chattering of two Organization members broke his train of thought. He walked over to the door to listen better. Someone laughed. Zexion could tell it was Larxene. “So any news on Zexion?†she asked. “Yes, some bad news.†Another voice said. He could make it out as Vexen’s voice. He continued: “It seems that Zexion, in the accident, had suffered a terrible head injury, and caused him to lose all of him memories.†Accident? There was an accident? What accident? Larxene laughed again. “That’s no surprise.†She said. “But it’s not just memories!†Vexen said. “He’s lost his ability to write and speak. I doubt he can even think straight.†I can too think str..ai..ght…? Strai….gh…t? Straight? See! “Awww…poor Zexy.†Larxene said teasingly. “Sort of funny, actually.†“How is this funny?†Vexen asked. “Well, Nobodies are already broken. We’ve lost half of what we are, and we’re left with basically our memories, will, and personality, right?†“Right.†“Now, Zexion’s lost his memories.†“Yes.†“And pretty much half of his personality was reading and writing, so he’s lost that too.†“Yes. Your point is?†“I’m just saying he’s already broken, but he’s becoming more broken by the second.†Larxene laughed again. “Well, I hear that Axel and Xigbar are trying to help him remember.†Vexen said. Larxene rolled her eyes. “Yeah, good luck to them with fixing the broken toy.†She said. Then, their footsteps faded as they continued walking down the hall. If Zexion had a heart, he was pretty sure it’d be broken, along with the rest of him. He leaned against the door. All he was doing, trying to remember, it was all for nothing. He sighed sadly. I’m…broken? He thought. Why? Why am I broken? His eyes started to sting. He would’ve held back his tears, but he didn’t remember what they were. +++ Zexion walked down the stairs slowly and sat down at the kitchen table. He put his head in his hands. How could he live life knowing he was broken? That there was a time when he wasn’t broken? He felt a hand on his shoulder. He looked up to see Xigbar. He was smiling at him. Xigbar. Zexion thought. I’m sorry that I’m broken. “Hey, Zexion, are you ok?†Xigbar asked. Zexion shook his head. Xigbar’s smile faded. He wished he could tell his friend that he could tell him what was wrong, but he couldnt tell him if he wanted to. Xigbar then had an idea. “Zexion.†He said. Zexion looked up at him. “You want to go for a walk?†Zexion nodded slowly, standing up. They walked out of the kitchen door, and decided to walk around the Castle (after all it was relatively big). Xigbar, I’m sorry that I’m broken… Zexion, I’m sorry I let you become that way… “Find you voice…â€
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *cries hysterically* AXEL!!!!! *cries more* Great chapter, btw :)
interesting :) nice chapter
this is the....end? :( Pfft, yea right.... what about the organization? First post = PAGE PWN!
*dies laughing* *reads again* *dies more* THAT IS HILARIOUS!!!
huh? what?
oooooooo drama up in here :D This is good! :D first post = PAGE PWN!!!
Thank you! :D My summer project is going to be a story (duh :)) and a long one. it'll be REALLY good!
Thank you! :D I feel bad for Zexy too :( I mean, could u imagine waking up one day, and not remembering a thing? I'll get to work on chapter 8 a bit later. I *HOPE* i can finish this story today, so i can start another one when i go back to school, i dont leave people wondering what happens at the end
Thanks! :D:D
Chapter 7! w00t! Oh, and if you were wondering why sometimes the chapters are somewhat choppy and inconsistent, its not an accident. its on purpose :) ~Chapter 7~ Running down the stairs, and not paying attention to where he was going, Zexion slammed into a tall figure and was knocked down. He looked up to see Xigbar, standing over him. He seemed to be slightly amused. “You ok?†he asked, reaching his hand down towards him to help him up. Zexion took his hand and let him help him up. Then, he grabbed his hand and yanked him into the kitchen. Once in the kitchen, Zexion sat down, and Xigbar sat down as well. Zexion put the paper in front of him, and held the pen up against it. Come on, Zexion… he thought. Write…please write! But the pen in his hand wouldn’t move. Write!!! He shouted in his mind. Nothing. He started cursing at himself again. WRITE!!! Still nothing. He sighed. He needed to ask Xigbar about Braig. Then he had an idea. He pushed the paper and pen in front of Xigbar. “What do you want me to write?†he asked, confused. Your name. Zexion pointed to him. Xigbar cocked his head. “My…name?†he asked. Zexion nodded. Xigbar scribbled something, and pushed the paper back in front of him. XIGBAR He couldn’t read it, but he knew that whatever was on the paper, was Xigbar’s name. He nodded. Xigbar took the paper back. “You want to see my other name?†he asked. Zexion looked confused. He had another name? Zexion nodded. Xigbar scribbled on the paper again, and handed it back to Zexion. BRAIG Zexion couldn’t read it. The marks looked familiar though. Xigbar saw his confusion. “It says ‘Braig’.†He said. Zexion’s eyes got wide. He was Braig? Those dreams he had, they weren’t dreams…they were real! So…he did forget! Best friends… They were…best friends? He had to get Xigbar to remember. Did he forget? Zexion stood up suddenly. Xigbar stood up as well. “Zexion…what’s…?†Zexion then grabbed his Organization coat sleeve, and pulled it up to his elbow. Xigbar looked at him. Come on, Zexion thought, do the same thing. Xigbar shrugged, and pulled his sleeve up like Zexion’s. What is he doing? He thought. Zexion then punched Xigbar in his exposed arm—HARD. Xigbar stepped back, grasping his arm, wincing in pain. “What the smoof was that for!†He shouted, angry. Then, he pulled his coat sleeve over his bruised arm. Zexion then held his hand out, as in a kind gesture. Xigbar just looked at him. Shake my hand, Xigbar. You must remember! Reluctantly, Xigbar reached out his hand and took Zexion’s hand. He had no idea why Zexion was doing this, but he was trying to get some point across, so he decided to just go with it. After a quick shake, Zexion imitated what Braig had done to the boy in his dream; he used his other hand to pull up the sleeve of Xigbar’s outstretched hand to his elbow, revealing the bruise he had given him. “OOWWW!!†Xigbar yelled, ripping his arm away from Zexion’s grip. He was about to curse at him when all of the sudden, he remembered. He had done this to Zexion such a long time ago, when they were kids. He never forgot it, because it had scared him so much to know that Zexion was being hurt like that. Xigbar looked up at Zexion. “You…remember that?†he asked. Zexion nodded excitedly. He hadn’t forgotten! Xigbar smiled. His best friend was still there! He could remember! How he remembered that event was unknown to him, but he was happy that Zexion could remember. Just then, Zexion dashed up the stairs excitedly. He had something to do… +++ Zexion sat down on his bed. He took a breath, and tried to make sense of this entire situation… The dream he had was real. It had really happened. He didn’t remember it, but it happened because Xigbar remembered it. Also, Xigbar was Braig. He was a friend to the little boy. But… he thought… who was the little boy? Was it… he? There was only one thing he could do: Since the only thing that he could somewhat remember was the story from his dreams, he’d have to go by that. He decided that, if he was to ever remember again, he had to find out why the dreams were happening, and why he could remember only them. He may not be able to remember how to read, but he had to follow the story. Zexion closed s eyes to think. Maybe closing his eyes would be enough to bring on another dream. “Find your voice…†Find my voice? “Who are you?†I am…
