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  1. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thank you for helping me choose my last story. It went really well, I knew what people wasnted to read, and everything went smoothly! :D But now, it's time to pick a new story. This will occur in the same manner as the last time, but now I've added a small key that shows my idea of a short, medium, and long story. So now, when you vote, you have a COMPLETE understanding of what you pick! Thanks alot! *huggles all*

    Key:

    Short story = 6 to 7 chapters

    Medium story = 9 to 10 chapters

    Long story = 12+ chapters

    I will not make as story go under 6 chapters, and unless it is a HUGE story (like the summer story I'm working on, I usually won't make it go over 20 chapters.

    The Story Choices:


    Story 1:

    The 14th Key

    Long

    Funny/thriller/adventure/action

    When there is a small mishap with weapons in the Castle That Never Was, Xemnas calls someone to repair and rebuild them. Simple, right? But, when Xemnas discovers that this weapon specialist is more powerful and more amazing than they look, he decides he wants a 14th edition to Organization XIII. Why does he want this person in? What is their secret? And would Xemnas be willing to sacrifice the ULTIMATE price of this person to harm them? Or would it be to protect them? Or maybe, the only person who can help is a true Keyblade master...
    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    Story 2:

    Forgotten Eyes: Got it Memorized?

    Medium-Long

    Tragety (more or less)/funny/rememberance

    Axel had worked hard to forget his past, his childhood. But when an unexected call from a forgotten friend comes, the memories come flooding back. His friend tries to help him remember, but Axel only ends up pushing them away. Why does Axel want to forget? Who is his friend? What do they mean to him? And can Axel ever remember again? A tale of forgotten promises, and forgotten secrets, this story reveals Axel's past, and will leave you shocked...
    ~~~~~~~~~~~

    Story 3:

    Memory Break

    Medium

    Tragety/rememberance

    An innocent night of fun turns into a terrible night of fear when an accident occurs, and Zexion is the victum of it. He wakes up from a two-day coma, unable to remember anything. Not his name, not the Organization. He can't even remember how to speak or write! All he can remember is the beginning of a story about a young boy...Can Zexion follow the story to gain his memories back? Or will they forever remain fragmented? Can a broken being survive being even more broken? Or will what's left of him collapse?
    ~~~~~~~~~~~


    SO THERE YA' GO!!! Happy voting! :D *passes out cookies to all voters*


    (Yes, I know these are the ones from last time, but people really wanted these ones, so I put them back up. I'll add new ones next time :D)
    Thread by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007, 19 replies, in forum: Archives
  2. Axel's#1fangirl
    yeah! *high fives*
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  3. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thats ok! *sits down on thread and waits paitiently*
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  4. Axel's#1fangirl
    thank you for reading! And i'm glad you liked it! :D *takes a bow and falls out of computer chair*

    OWWWWWWWWW.....

    I REALLY need to stop doing that...:)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  5. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thanks! I'll have another one of these open all day today. And if you still don't get a chance to vote, you can just mail me your choice, and I'll count it as a vote :)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  6. Axel's#1fangirl
    LAST CHAPTER! I know, it was short, but you had fair warning....A while later I'll need help deciding which story to start next, so please help out! I want to thank everyone who read my story :) You guys are the reason I keep on writing :)

    ~Chapter 6~

    “Where is he?†Roxas asked. Axel had disappeared in a Corridor of Darkness about 20 minutes ago. He said he was getting someone who could help Sora and Roxas switch back. Donald tapped his foot impatiently. Suddenly, a Corridor of Darkness appeared, and Axel came out of it. Close behind him was Zexion.
    “Axel, what was so important that you had to pull me out of my room and interrupt me while practicing a spell?†Zexion said irately. Sora and Roxas walked up to Zexion.
    “Zexion,†Roxas (still in the Sora body) said. “We need you to switch us back into our right bodies.†Zexion was surprised that Sora knew his name. Sora (still in the Roxas body) saw his confusion.
    “You see, when we broke The Twist Orb, something happened, and now I’m in Sora’s body while Sora is in mine.†Zexion nodded his head.
    “Do you know a way to fix them back?†Goofy asked. Zexion thought for a moment.
    “Possibly…I may know something that could help…†he said. He summoned his spell book, and flipped through a few pages, muttering something to himself about the stupidity of 15-year-olds. Then, he stopped on a page, nodding.
    “This should do it!†He exclaimed. While holding the book in one hand, he lifted the other and pointed at Roxas and Sora. He began to recite:

    “Turn it around, make it right. Twist, change, rearrange, the power of orb’s blight!†He shouted. The area around Sora and Roxas began to spin with swirls of blue and green. When it cleared, Sora and Roxas looked down at themselves.
    “I’m me again!†Roxas shouted, in his own body. He was happy to be back.
    “Yes!†Sora shouted, as equally as happy as Roxas. Goofy went up to Sora.
    “It’s nice for you to be back, Sora!†he said. Donald nodded in agreement.
    “You know,†Roxas said, walking up to Sora. “It’ll be hard fighting against each other, now that we’ve had a walk in each others shoes.†Sora nodded and smiled.
    “Yeah but, I’m sure we’ll find a way.†Roxas nodded.

    “HEY GIVE THAT BACK YOU STUPID DUCK!†Zexion shouted. Everyone turned to see Donald with Zexion’s spell book, and Zexion running after him.
    “I want to try a spell!†Donald shouted, landing on a page, where the first spell was called ‘Rewind Time’.
    “NO GIVE IT BACK NOW!!!!!!†Zexion yelled. Donald started to read:

    “Rewind time, a little way back. And what had happened, memories shall lack.†Donald recited. Nothing happened.
    “Awww, this spell doesn’t work!†Donald said, throwing the book at Zexion, who caught it. Zexion was quite literally about to kill Donald when all of the sudden there was a bright flash of light….


    And all was silent….
    +++
    Keyblades clash, swinging wildly. Roxas and Sora were fighting at Memory Skyscraper. Roxas had been sent there by the Organization to seek out a very old, yet very powerful, magic orb: The Twist Orb. The Twist Orb was capable of twisting time, space, anything. With it, the Organization XIII could do terrible things. Sora was also after it. King Mickey had told him that the Organization wanted it, and they had to get it before they did. Sora wouldn’t let him down.

    So there they were, battling it out. Roxas swung his Oathkeeper at Sora, who dodged it and parried the attack.
    “The orb belongs to the Organization!†Roxas shouted. Sora tried to strike Roxas with his Ultima weapon, but Roxas jumped in time.
    “Well you can’t have it!†Sora yelled back. They exchanged a few hits of the Keyblades, before Roxas jumped back. They both suddenly stopped fighting. Roxas looked at Sora.
    “Did this…happen before?†he asked. Sora thought for a moment, and then sook his head.
    “I don’t think so…†he replied. They both shrugged, and started to fight once again…


    THE END!!!!

    (I hoped you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! :))
    Thread by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: Archives
  7. Axel's#1fangirl
    *imagines* 0_o

    Uh...oh.... lol :)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  8. Axel's#1fangirl
    Sorry...It was a short story, sorta of like Larxene's Crush. Also, I was able to type it faster and post it faster, because i knew *exactly* what i was going to type :)

    TRUST ME. the next story will be longer :)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thank you! *bows and falls out of computer chair*

    OWWWWWWW.....I need to stop doing that, lol :)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 12, 2007 in forum: Archives
  10. Axel's#1fangirl
    lol i liked that part too! (i love putting bits of humor in my stories) thanks! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  11. Axel's#1fangirl
    CHAPTER 5 IM ON A ROLL! (naw, just hyper!)

    Oh, and this one might get a *little* confusing. Just read and you'll be fine! Reread if you must ;)

    ~Chapter 5~

    Sora and Axel were walking through the Twilight Town market place. It was surprisingly empty. Axel couldn’t help but look at Sora every now and then. Sora noticed it, and looked up at Axel.
    “What?” He asked. Axel opened his mouth to say something, but changed his mind. He shook his head.
    “It’s nothing.” Suddenly, a huge mass of Heartless appeared, surrounding the two.
    “Stupid Heartless!” Axel said. Sora smiled.
    “We can take them.” Axel smiled back. He summoned his Chakrams, and Sora summoned his Keyblade—but it was the Ultima. Axel looked at him.
    “Where are your regular Keyblades?” he asked. Sora looked around nervously. A Heartless tried to attack, but Sora whacked it with his weapon and it faded.
    “I’ll tell you after we beat these guys.” Sora said. Axel nodded.
    “Right.” He said, and with that they began to fight.
    +++
    “SORA!” Goofy called. They were all calling Sora’s name, trying to see if he was nearby.
    “SORA!!!!” Donald called. There was still no reply.
    “SO—“ Roxas stopped suddenly, staring off in a direction. Goofy walked up to him.
    “Roxas, what’s wrong?” he asked. Roxas pointed.
    “Look!” he said. Donald and goofy looked where he was pointing, and they saw a large black crowd of Heartless.
    “We’ll take care of them!” Roxas shouted, summoning his Oathkeeper and Oblivion, and then charging in to fight. Donald summoned his staff and Goofy summoned his shield and charged in after them.

    The fight was on…
    +++
    Sora hit a Heartless with his Keyblade and it faded. He looked around. The number of Heartless had tripled, and he could no longer see Axel. I hope he’s ok… Sora thought, as he blocked a Heartless’ attack and counterattacked it. He was attacking intensely, and hadn’t noticed someone advancing towards him…
    +++
    Roxas had eyed a Heartless, about as tall as he was. It was completely black. He walked carefully over to it and raised his Oathkeeper in preparation to attack. He got closer, and when he got close enough, he brought the weapon down hard on the Heartless’ head…
    +++
    “OWWWW!!!” Sora yelled as something hard struck him in the back of his head. He collapsed to the ground, in a semi-unconscious state. His attacker raised its weapon, about to strike again…
    +++
    Roxas was about to attack again when he realized that the Heartless wasn’t a Heartless—it was Sora! In his body! He dismissed his weapon and kneeled down next to Sora. He shook him gently.
    “Sora?” He went shake him again when all of the sudden a blast of fire knocked him away from Sora. Axel walked in front of Sora.
    “Stay away from Roxas!” He yelled, angry. Roxas was shocked.
    “What are you talking about? I’m—“ but then he remembered: At the moment, he was Sora. And Sora was Roxas. By this time Sora had sat up, rubbing the back of his head. Axel turned towards him and held out a hand to him. He helped Sora to his feet.
    “Roxas! You ok?” he asked. Sora nodded. He looked to see Donald and Goofy finishing off the last of the Heartless.
    “Donald! Goofy!” Sora shouted. They turned to see Sora, in Roxas’ body, calling them. They walked up to them. They looked at him.
    “So, you’re Sora?” Donald said to the Roxas body. Sora nodded. Goofy turned to the Sora body.
    “And you’re Roxas?” Roxas nodded. Axel was confused.
    “What’s going on?” he asked. “This is Roxas, not Sora!” he said pointing to the Roxas body. Sora turned to him.
    “No, I’m Sora.” Sora said. He then pointed to the Sora body. “And he’s Roxas.” Roxas then gave a quick summary of how they switched places. Axel looked at the Sora body with suspicion.
    “How do I really know this is Roxas?” He said, beckoning to the Sora body. Roxas walked up to him.
    “Last Saturday, you told me as secret of yours.” Roxas said. “You told me that Larxene makes you feel like—“
    “OK! I believe you! You’re Roxas!” Axel shouted, cutting Roxas off and blushing insanely. He then turned to Sora.
    “So I’ve been hanging out with you all day, huh?” he asked. Sora nodded. Axel laughed. “Funny. You may have seemed different to me, but it felt exactly like I was hanging out with Roxas.” Sora smiled.
    “I hate to interrupt this happy moment here,” Donald said, crossing his arms, “but how are we going to switch you two back?” Axel thought for a moment, and then he snapped his fingers and smiled.
    “I know just the person who can help…”
    Thread by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007, 7 replies, in forum: Archives
  12. Axel's#1fangirl
    Ummm...I'm not planning on it...but if I can think of a good connection that makes sense, maybe I'll end up making a sequal. But I'm glad you liked my vampire story! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  13. Axel's#1fangirl
    THIS IS GETTING GOOODDDD!!!!

    *grabs popcorn and soda*

    I cant wait for the next chapter!

    I SAY DOWN WITH ROXAS!!!! (which is sorta a pun, because Roxas is falling DOWN towards the ground...lol)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  14. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thanks! I wanted to show that Sora and Axel have a connection, because Roxas is truely Sora, so it would make sense for Sora to be Roxas. I wanted to show that, although they switched places, a part of Roxas was still there, because Roxas is a part of Sora's heart.

    Cheesy, i know :)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  15. Axel's#1fangirl
    awwww...*passes Zexion a bucket of chicken*


    Great story!!! You know, kh vids should honestly have a top 5 stories for each week! There are just so many talented writers! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  16. Axel's#1fangirl
    Nice! Can't wait to read the rest! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  17. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thanks! *starts typing ch 5*

    I AM REALLLLLLLLLLLLLLYYYYY HYPER!!!!!! *jumps up and down and falls out of computer chair*


    OWWWWWWWWWW..........
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  18. Axel's#1fangirl
    CHAPTER 4 WOOT I'M HYPER!!! *cough* sorry about that :D

    ~Chapter 4~

    Sora and Axel had arrived in Twilight Town. They went up to the Station Tower to eat their ice cream. Sora looked out at the view. Axel looked at Sora. Sora noticed him looking and turned towards him.
    “What?†he asked. Axel stared for a moment longer, and then shook his head.
    “It’s nothing. You just seem…different. That’s all.†Axel said. Sora nodded.
    “That’s because I am.†He muttered.
    “Huh?†Axel said. Sora looked up in surprise at him.
    “Uh…nothing…†He said, quickly diverting his eyes. They sat there, in silence. Axel sighed.
    “I’m going to miss this.†He said. “Just you and me hanging out.†Sora turned to him.
    “Why’s that?†Axel laughed.
    “I think you fell on your head yesterday. You must’ve to have forgotten.†Axel blinked slowly. “So you’re going to go through with this?†Sora was lost. He had no idea what to say.

    Yeah, I will. The words popped into Sora’s mind. They seemed…right…

    “Yeah, I will.†He said aloud. Axel looked at him.
    “I’m going to miss you, Roxas.â€

    I’m not going to be gone; just…I’ll be part of Sora again.

    “I’m not going to be gone; just…I’ll be part of Sora again.†Sora said. He had no idea where these words were coming from. But something told him to say them. Axel chuckled.
    “Still, you won’t be YOU anymore. You’ll be Sora.†He said. Axel stood up. “Sora’s lucky.†Sora looked up at Axel.
    “Why?†he asked.
    “Because…he has a heart. And soon you’ll be part of it. You’re lucky, too, Roxas.†Sora stood up.
    “Why is Roxas lucky?†Sora said. Axel gave him a puzzled look.
    “Why are Axel and Roxas speaking in the third person?†Axel joked. Sora laughed.
    “Why am I lucky?†Axel looked at him.
    “Because…you’ll be whole again…someday.†He looked out. “The rest of us…will go back to darkness. But you get to stay in the light.†Sora nodded.
    “Don’t worry, I’ll never forget you.†He said. Axel smiled. Sora felt weird.

    What he had said, had come from him…not from any voice in his head…
    +++
    Roxas, Donald, and Goofy arrived in Twilight Town. They looked around.
    “Sora! Donald! Goofy!†A familiar voice called. They all turned around to see King Mickey walking up to them.

    Hello, your Majesty. Huh? Roxas thought. Those words weren’t his. But they sounded right…

    “Hello, your Majesty.†Roxas said. He had no idea where the words were coming from, but they worked. King Mickey looked at him.
    “Sora, did you get the orb?†He asked. Roxas scratched his head.
    “Well…†he started. “Not exactly. During the fight, me and Sora broke it.†The king gave him a confused look.
    “You and Sora?†He asked.
    “I meant me and Roxas!†he said. King Mickey looked at him. Roxas looked back.
    “What’s wrong?†he asked. King Mickey looked up at him.
    “You seem different, Sora…†he said. Donald and Goofy exchanged nervous looks. What if the King could tell that he was Roxas? The King shook his head.
    “Never mind.†He said. Roxas let out a sigh of relief. The King sighed himself. “Well, the orb was better off destroyed.†He said. Goofy walked up to Roxas.
    “Roxas,†He said quietly, “I think we should let King Mickey know about what happened to you and Sora.â€
    “Why?†Roxas asked.
    “We can trust him. And I feel sorta bad about lying to him.†Roxas nodded.
    “King Mickey?†Roxas said. The King looked up at him.
    “Yes Sora?†Roxas sighed.
    “I’m not Sora. My name…is Roxas.†The King looked surprised.
    “Huh?†he said. Then, Roxas told King Mickey about how he and Sora were fighting, how they broke the orb, and how he found out he switched places. The King nodded.
    “Well,†he said, still surprised, “I had a feeling you weren’t you.â€
    “We’re looking for Sora now.†Donald said.
    “Yeah, maybe if we find him, we can switch them back.†Goofy said. Roxas nodded. King Mickey looked at the three of them.
    “Well, I can’t go with you. I have something to get done.†He said.
    “No problem! We can take care of the situation oes!†Roxas said. Goofy and Donald nodded. King Mickey nodded as well, and smiled.
    “I hope you can.†He said, before walking off. Donald turned to Roxas.
    “So where do we start looking?†he asked. Roxas thought, and then his eyes lit up.
    “The Station Tower!†he exclaimed.
    “Why?†Goofy asked. Roxas shrugged.
    “It’s that feeling again.†Goofy and Donald nodded, and all three of them ran off towards the Station Tower.
    Thread by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007, 6 replies, in forum: Archives
  19. Axel's#1fangirl
    :D You'll see...
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives
  20. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thank you! After i update my achive thing i'll start on ch 4! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 11, 2007 in forum: Archives