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  1. Axel's#1fangirl
    This will probably be THE LONGEST chapter i will ever write for this story! Enjoy! :)

    ~Chapter 6~

    ~~~Wednesday~~~

    Axel opened his eyes and stretched. It was morning. He looked around to find that he had fallen asleep on the sofa. Wait! He thought, we fell asleep! He quickly felt his neck for any bite marks. He could feel none. On the sofa opposite to him was Zexion, who was still sleeping. Axel walked over to him. From what he could see, Zexion had no bite marks. He shook him roughly.
    “Zexion, wake up!” He said. Zexion opened his eyes abruptly and sat up. He stretched, looking at Axel.
    “What?” he asked.
    “We fell asleep out here.” Axel said. Zexion looked around. He was right. Then his eyes got wide.
    “We fell asleep! We could’ve got bitten!” he said, scared. He then felt his neck for the mark.
    “You don’t have it; I checked.” He said, sitting down on the sofa next to Zexion.
    “What about everyone else?” Zexion asked. Just then, Vexen walked down the stairs and into the living room.
    “Good morning, guys!” He said cheerfully. Zexion and Axel rushed up to him.
    “Did you fall asleep?” Axel asked. Vexen thought for a moment.
    “I guess I did.”
    “Did you get bitten?” Zexion asked. Vexen ran his hand against his neck. He shook his head.
    “Hope. Doesn’t seem like it.” Luxord walked down the stairs into the living room groggily.
    “Well, I hope you guys all had pleasant nights.” He said bitterly. “This morning I woke up, on the floor! I don’t even remember how I got there.” Axel and Zexion exchanged nervous looks as Zexion walked over to Luxord. He took a quick look at him, and then put his head over his face in frustration.
    “Oh smoof…” he said. They all looked at him in confusion. Zexion looked up at them. “He’s been bitten.” Luxord’s jaw dropped.
    “WHAT?” He yelled. Then, he started muttering something—curses and gibberish—under his breath. Then, he stormed up the stairs. Zexion, Axel, and Vexen listened as they heard a door slam upstairs. Vexen turned towards Axel and Zexion.
    “So now what do we do?” he asked. Zexion started to think. Axel tried to think as well, but then he noticed something.
    “Hey, did anyone notice that we haven’t seen Larxene, Roxas, or Demyx for a while?” he asked. Vexen looked up.
    “You’re right…” he said.
    “Vexen, you check for Larxene. Axel, you check for Roxas, and I’ll check for Demyx.” Zexion said. They all nodded, and ran off…
    +++
    Vexen walked up to Larxene’s room. He looked around for her. She wasn’t there. He was about to leave when he noticed a dartboard on the wall, with something tacked to it with a dart. He walked over to it and looked. It was a picture of him! Vexen angrily snatched the picture off and crumpled it up. He turned to leave, when he noticed a note on Larxene’s pillow. He picked it up and began to read to himself…
    +++
    Axel ran up to Roxas’ room. The door was closed. He knocked loudly on the door.
    “Roxas? Roxas, you in there?” he said. After receiving no response, Axel walked in. His room was the way it always was—messy. He looked around and, after seeing no Roxas, he turned to leave. But, as he reached for the doorknob, he noticed a note taped to the back of the door.
    “What’s this?” Axel said to himself as he pulled the note off. His mouth dropped as he read the note…
    +++
    Zexion walked up to Demyx’ room. He knocked twice—Zexion’s signature knock. No one answered the door, so Zexion walked in. He took a step and tripped over something. He looked and realized it was a pair of Demyx’s shoes. He looked around the room. It was a mess! Zexion stood up and began to walk out the door. He almost tripped over some of Demyx’s junk, and to stabilize himself, he grabbed a nearby end table. His hand rested on a crumpled note. Zexion picked it up and skimmed it…
    +++
    The three of them met back in the kitchen.
    “Look! I found this in Roxas’ room!” Axel said, holding up a note. Zexion held up his.
    “So did I.” He said. Vexen showed his.
    “And so did I!” he exclaimed. Zexion read his aloud:

    “It is time I return to Kingdom Hearts, my true home. The dark is awaiting my return, and so is the light. I shall be back, to take you with me. Join me. Do not fret. Do not fight back. Us Vampire Nobodies must stay together. Alone, we are powerless. But together, we are strong…
    I will be back…

    We’ll go together…
    ---Demyx”

    Zexion looked up.
    “That’s what it says on mine, except its signed ‘Roxas’.” Axel said. Vexen nodded.
    “Doubtless they’ll be back tonight.” He said.
    “Well, we’re no longer tired, so it should be easy for us to stay awake.” Axel said. They all nodded.
    +++
    It was 12:09 a.m. The three Nobodies (Marluxia insisted he had other things to do) sat in the Kitchen, waiting. Vexen stood up.
    “I’m going to the library. Anyone who’d like to join me?” he asked. Zexion and Axel looked at each other, and then back at Vexen, shaking their heads. Vexen shrugged. “Suit yourselves.” He said, walking off upstairs.
    +++
    I wonder what I’ll read today…Vexen thought. Perhaps a science-fiction novel? Vexen walked up another flight of stairs, making his way to the end of the hall where the library was. He reached the door and was about to open it when he heard someone talking. Marluxia? No, it couldn’t be. He was on an entirely different floor. Besides, the voice belonged to a girl. He walked over to a partially cracked door, leading to the main meeting room. Through the gap, he could see Larxene, Roxas, Demyx, and Luxord sitting on the table in the room. They were listening intently to whatever someone was saying. The person walked closer to the group of Nobodies, and Vexen could see her clearly. She was about the same age as Roxas, give or take a year. She had pale rose-colored hair that went to her shoulders. She was wearing an all-white Organization-type coat. She seemed vaguely familiar. He listened as well when she began to talk.
    “It is time.” She said, her voice soft. “Most of you are with us now. We can go home soon.”
    “What about the others, Rose?” Larxene said. Oh, Vexen thought. Her name was Rose. He cocked his head. It seemed familiar. Had someone mentioned it to him? Larxene continued: “There’s still Axel, Zexion, Vexen, and, of course, Marluxia.” Roxas looked at her and smiled deviously. Vexen could see his fangs.
    “We can take them easily.” He said. Luxord nodded in agreement.
    “Especially Vexen. The guy’s a wimp.” He said. Demyx laughed in agreement. Vexen was angry now, but he shook it away. Now wasn’t the time to be mad. He could always get him back later. He listened closer.
    “You aren’t to make fun of him, Luxord.” Rose said. “He is family. Now listen closely: we only need one more Vampire Nobody. Whoever you can bite first, that will be it.”
    “What about the other two?” Demyx asked. Rose smiled. “Leave them to me.”
    “What do you plan on doing to them?” Roxas asked. Rose smiled again.
    “Let’s just say, they’ve lived a good life…” Vexen’s jaw dropped. After one more was bitten, the other two would be killed!!!
    “What should we do about Marluxia?” Larxene asked.
    “I’ll talk to my brother. I’m sure he’ll…think reasonably.” Rose said. Vexen couldn’t believe what he was hearing. The Vampire Nobody was Marluxia’s sister! Which meant only Marluxia could call her off, and end her hold over all of the others who were bitten. Vexen stood up from where he was crouching, and as he did, he hit his head on the doorknob, making noise and pushing the door open, releasing a loud noise. The Vampire Nobodies turned to see him standing there, frozen with fright.
    “Looks like he’s coming home as well.” Demyx said, standing up and walking towards him, along with the others. Vexen then took off running. Rose watched him run off.
    “Luxord,” she said, with him looking at her, “bring Vexen home.” She smiled evilly. Luxord smiled a half-smile and took off after him. Once he was gone, she turned towards Larxene.
    “Did you get what I told you to?” she asked. Larxene made a book appear in her hands—Zexion’s book.
    “I always do as I am told.” She said, handing it to her. Rose opened the book, and flipped to a page. The first spell was called ‘Fast Forward’, and the spell at the end of the page was called ‘Everlasting Moonlight’. She looked up.
    “Perfect.” She whispered.
    +++
    Vexen ran as fast as he could, with Luxord close behind him. He tired to make a Corridor of Darkness, but couldn’t make one since he was running. Suddenly, an enormous card blocked his path. Vexen stopped. He was trapped. Luxord walked closer to him.
    “Come, Vexen.” He said, stepping towards him. Vexen put his back against the wall, desperately trying to focus long enough to summon a portal. But he was too scared. Luxord smiled, revealing his fangs.

    “We’ll go together…”
    +++
    Axel and Zexion were still at the kitchen table, playing hangman on a piece of paper, trying to occupy themselves.
    “Where’s Vexen?” Axel said. “He usually comes back with a book.” Zexion shook his head.
    “I’m sure he’s—“

    “AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!”

    A scream could be heard upstairs.
    “VEXEN!” Both Axel and Zexion shouted in unison as they ran from the table and up the stairs…
    +++
    When they reached the upstairs hall, they saw Vexen on the ground, his back against the wall. They ran over to him.
    “Vexen!” Axel said, kneeling next to him. Vexen looked up at him. He couldn’t focus his eyes, and were straining to keep them open. Axel could see the bite mark on his neck.
    “Axel…Zexion…” Vexen said slowly, trying to speak. He seemed to be in pain.
    “What is it?” Zexion asked, hoping Vexen would keep talking. Vexen closed his eyes, and then opened them again. I must keep from changing…Vexen thought. They need to know what I heard…
    “Rose…Marluxia…Kingdom Hearts…” Vexen said with great difficultly.
    “What are you talking about?” Axel said. Vexen took a breath. He had to get this out.
    “Marluxia’s sister…”
    “Marluxia has a sister?” Zexion said surprised. Vexen nodded slowly.
    “Vampire Nobody…Rose…Marluxia’s sister…Vampire Nobody…” Both Axel and Zexion’s eyes grew wide.
    “Marluxia’s sister is the Vampire Nobody???” they both yelled. Vexen laid his head back against the wall.
    “You two…dead…run…leave…” He said, looking at them. “Go…NOW! We’ll…we’ll…”
    “What?? We’re going to die?” Axel asked. Vexen closed his eyes. He seemed more relaxed. He laughed—a laugh that wasn’t his own. He opened his eyes. They were now white with pale rose-colored cat eye pupils.

    “We’ll go together…” he whispered.
    Thread by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: Archives
  2. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thank you! Chapter 6 is almost done. (Its annoying how long these chapters take, but i need to make sure they are good!)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  3. Axel's#1fangirl
    She'll have her say REAL soon...
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  4. Axel's#1fangirl
    Yay! Thanks! :D I'm not sure if they can fix this before the rest come back, but i'm sure they can....*cough* yeah right *cough*...
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  5. Axel's#1fangirl
    :D Thanks!
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  6. Axel's#1fangirl
    Ch 5 is out! Poor Luxord, lol.....

    The next morning Roxas and Larxene were sitting at the kitchen table.
    “I’m am SO tired…†Roxas complained, laying his head down on the table. Larxene nodded in agreement.
    “I don’t even remember when I went to sleep.†She said. They looked up to see Axel and Zexion walking down the stairs. They looked tired.
    “You guys ok?†Roxas asked.
    “No, we were up all night hiding from you two.†Axel said, yawning. Larxene gave him a puzzled look.
    “What are you talking about?†she asked. Zexion sat down at the table.
    “Well,†he said, taking a shout pause to yawn, “Roxas bit you, Larxene, and you turned into a Vampire Nobody. Then, you two bit Demyx, and now…â€

    “AHH!!â€

    Demyx came running down the stairs, pale-faced. He pointed to the bite mark on his neck.
    “What’s going on???†He shouted. Zexion stared at him for a moment, and then turned back to Larxene.
    “Like I said, you two bit Demyx and now all three of you are Vampire Nobodies.†Roxas looked shocked. Demyx looked scared. Larxene looked mad.
    “YOU BIT ME???†Larxene yelled at Roxas, who was now the one who was scared. Her eyes showed that she was furious. Roxas then got out of his seat and ran away from the table. “COME BACK HERE PUNK!!!†she yelled, chasing after him. Axel and Zexion laughed softly at her reaction. Demyx slowly walked back up to his room, muttering something about ‘karma’. Zexion looked up at Axel, who was trying to keep his eyes open.
    “Tonight gonna be a long night?†he said. Axel sighed tiredly and nodded.
    “Tonight’s gonna be a long night…â€
    +++
    It was 8:33 p.m. Axel, Zexion, Vexen and Luxord all made a pact to stay up tonight, so that no one can bite them. Marluxia walked past them sitting on the sofa, talking about ways to find the Vampire Nobody who started all of this.
    “You going to stay up with us?†Luxord asked. Marluxia shook his head.
    “No.†he said, walking up the stairs in his room. Axel turned around to see him.
    “Aren’t you worried you’ll get bitten?†he asked. Marluxia turned towards him and smiled half-heartedly.
    “No. And if I do get bitten, it’ll be what I deserve.†He said. Then he walked up the stairs, leaving the other members confused.
    +++
    Marluxia, once in his room, sat down at his desk. He then sighed and looked out of the window, at the bright moon. He then found himself rummaging through one of the drawers of his desk. After a minute his hand rested on something wooden and smooth. He looked in the drawer to see a medium sized wooden box. He pulled it out and placed it on the surface of his desk. Marluxia smiled. I remember this…he thought. He unlatched the box and opened it. Inside were a few papers, a small necklace with an ‘R’ on it, and a few old photos. He looked at one of the photos. In it was a young boy, about 17, and a young girl, about 12. They were sitting on the beach, eating ice cream together. Another photo was just of the boy, smiling. The last one was just of the girl, smiling. She had pale rose-colored hair and soft blue eyes. Marluxia smiled. What I would do to see that smile again…he thought. Marluxia laid his head down on his desk, on his arm. He closed his eyes.
    “I’m sorry…†he whispered, before drifting off to sleep.

    ~DREAM~

    The young boy from the picture was sitting next to a bed. In the bed was the young girl from the picture. Her face was pale and sickly. She looked up at her brother.
    “Miluara?†she said, sitting up.
    “Yes?†he answered, looking at her.
    “Does it hurt when people die?†There was silence. Miluara fought back tears. He didn’t want his sister to die. The sickness had come in his hometown, choosing some and leaving others alone. But why’d it have to choose her? Why couldn’t it have been him? Miluara shook his head, and sat on the bed next to his sister.
    “No, Rose. It doesn’t hurt.†He lied. It may not always hurt physically, but it always hurt your heart. But he’d never tell her that. She looked up at him.
    “Then why don’t people want to die? Why are they scared?†she asked. He moved closer to her and held her hand.
    “Because…†he started, “Because people don’t want to leave the ones they love. Like their family and friends.†Rose started to cry.
    “I don’t want to die, Miluara!†She said, throwing her arms around her brother in a hug. “I don’t want to leave you!†Miluara hugged her back tightly.
    “Don’t cry Rose!†He said. “You’ll never truly leave me, like I’ll never truly leave you.†Rose looked up at him.
    “What do you mean?†she asked.
    “No matter where you go, or how far we’re apart, I’m always going to be in your heart. I’ll always be there to protect you, and I’ll always be there to love you.†He said smiling. Rose hugged him again. He hugged her back. Unlike mother and father…he thought bitterly.
    “So, we’ll go everywhere together?†she asked. He smiled at his sister. He loved her so much.
    “Yeah, we’ll go together.â€

    ~END OF DREAM~

    A tear slid down Marluxia’s cheek. He opened his eyes, and then closed them again.
    “I’m sorry…Rose…â€
    +++
    Down in the living room, the group had split up. Luxord went off to play a car game in his room. Axel and Zexion were attempting to stay awake by talking. Vexen went to the library to read. The night was indeed going to be a long one…
    +++
    Luxord was playing a game of solitaire. It was hard to see the cards, since he was so tired. He didn’t notice Demyx walk in.
    “Hey Luxord.†Demyx said casually as he walked in and sat down next to Luxord. Luxord looked up at his eyes. They were still green.
    “Good to see that you’re still you.†He said, laying his head down on the table, not caring that he was messing up his card arrangement. Demyx smiled.
    “Yeah, I don’t know when I’ll turn into a Vampire. Actually, I was scared at first, but now it sounds sorta cool and I’m…†but Demyx was cut off by the loud snoring of Luxord. Demyx chuckled softly and reminded himself to make fun of him later for that. All of the sudden, he got this feeling over him—like he was beside himself or something…He started to shake.
    “We’ll go together, Demyx.†A voice said. Something about roses flashed through his head.
    “Wha….?†He said aloud. The voice came stronger.
    “We’ll go now…†Demyx closed his eyes, and he stopped shaking. He opened them again. They were now all white, with pale rose-colored cat eye pupils.
    “We’ll go together…†he repeated, eyeing Luxord. He walked over to the sleeping member shook him hard. Luxord sat up abruptly, looking around.
    “Wha? What’s on?†he said. Demyx then pulled him out of his chair by his collar, and slammed him into a nearby wall. By this time, Luxord had woken up fully, and was aware of what was going on.
    “Demyx? What are you—�
    “We’ll go home together, Luxord.†Demyx said, coming closer to his neck. He whispered into his ear:
    “Kingdom Hearts is waiting…â€
    +++
    “AHHHHHHHH!†Luxord screamed. But it didn’t matter. Anyone who could help him and would help him had fallen asleep…
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  7. Axel's#1fangirl
    :D thanks!
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  8. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thanks! She is really cool :)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  9. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thanks! :D It's about a friend of mine that I haven't seen in a long time. *sigh* I really miss him...
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  10. Axel's#1fangirl
    lol thanks! I agree, Marluxia SHOULD have been bitten, but he can't...YET...*muahahah* I mean *cough*
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 9, 2007 in forum: Archives
  11. Axel's#1fangirl
    Oh really? I'm already on spring break :) (goes back to school next monday- :mad: )
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  12. Axel's#1fangirl
    I agree! You are so insanely talented!!! I really like your style of writing: You tell the story and pull people into it. There's funny when there should be, and seriousness where it should be! Your are an AMAZING writer, and I hope you'll keep writing! A talent that good is too good to be wasted! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  13. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thanks! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  14. Axel's#1fangirl
    That is SOOO sad!!! *cries*

    KASHIMA WILL PAY!!!! *takes out long sword*

    DIEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! *swings wildly*
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  15. Axel's#1fangirl
    :D thanks! :)
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  16. Axel's#1fangirl
    Ok, here's the real chapter 4 :) I hope you like it, and things are getting interesting....*evil laugh*

    ~Chapter 4~

    ~~~Monday Night~~~

    Larxene was sitting at the kitchen table, sharpening her Kunais. She stopped what she was doing, and suddenly looked up. She thought she had heard footsteps behind her. She turned around and looked around the room. No one here but me. She thought, returning to her sharpening.
    “Hello, Larxene.†A voice said, right in her left ear. She quickly turned to the left and looked at who was there. There was no one.
    “It’s time to go to Kingdom Hearts…†the voice said again, this time in her right ear. She turned to her right. No one was there. Suddenly, a strong force pushed her off of her chair and onto the floor. Then, something—or someone—grabbed her by the collar of her coat, and slammed her into a nearby wall. She looked up to see Roxas, holding her by her arms, pinning her against the wall.
    “What are you doing, you PSYHCO??†She yelled at Roxas, trying to break free of his grasp. He smiled evilly, revealing his sharp, long fangs. He moved closer to her ear, closer to her neck.
    “I’m taking you home, Larxene…â€
    +++
    Marluxia came down the stairs with two magazines.
    “Hey Roxas, I got you something to read…†he trailed off. He looked around the living room. No one was here. He started looking wildly around the room.
    “Roxas?†He started to panic. “Oh boy...â€

    “AHHHH!!!!â€

    Marluxia turned towards the kitchen, where the scream had come from. That sounded like Larxene…he thought. He ran into the kitchen.
    +++
    Marluxia arrived in the kitchen and looked around. On the floor was Larxene, her back against the wall. Her head was down, and she seemed unconscious.
    “Larxene!†Marluxia said as he ran towards her and kneeled down next to her. He looked at her. She had the same bite mark on her neck that Roxas had. Marluxia gently shook her shoulder.
    “Larxene! Larxene! Are you ok?†He said. She opened her eyes, and closed them again.
    “Marluxia…†she said, quietly, strangely. She opened her eyes, and looked up at him. “We’ll…†Marluxia cocked his head in puzzlement.
    “We’ll what?†he asked. She smiled evilly, revealing a pair of fangs.
    “We’ll go together…†she said. Then, Marluxia watched in horror as Larxene’s sea-green eyes clouded completely white, and pale rose-colored cat eye pupils appeared.
    “Ahhh!!†Marluxia yelled as he backed away, still sitting on the ground. Larxene stood up and lunged at him. But he quickly dodged, scrambled to his feet, and ran out of the room. He wasn’t looking where he was going, and smacked into someone. Both of the Nobodies fell down. Marluxia looked to see Demyx, standing up and brushing himself off.
    “What’s wrong with you?†Demyx said to Marluxia, annoyed. Marluxia stood up, still panting from running.
    “We need to run…now!†He said. Demyx looked at him strangely.
    “What are you talking about?†he asked.
    “Larxene’s a Vampire!â€
    “Ok, I know Larxene’s a bit on the evil side, but a Vampire…â€
    “I’m serious!â€
    “Have you been sniffing any strange plants, lately?†Demyx joked.
    “DEMYX!!!†Marluxia yelled. “She probably got bit by Roxas, and now she’s a Nobody Vampire!!â€
    “But weren’t you supposed to be watching him?â€
    “Uhhh…†but before he could answer, Larxene came walking towards them.
    “Hello Marluxia, Demyx. Now, we can all go home together…†she said, coming closer to them. She smiled, again showing her Vampire fangs.
    “RUN!!!†Marluxia yelled, and he and Demyx took off up the stairs. Larxene ran after them. They kept running down the halls.
    “Is she still chasing us?†Marluxia asked, still running.
    “Are we still running?†Demyx replied, also still running.
    “Yeah…â€
    “Then yes she’s still chasing us!!!†he yelled, and they ran faster. By now Larxene had started to throw bolts of lightning at them, trying to slow them down. The two were about to reach the end of the hall when out of nowhere Roxas appeared.
    “Hello, Demyx. Marluxia…†he said. Marluxia and Demyx skidded to a stop. Roxas walked closer to them. “No we can go together…†The two of them turned around and were about to run until they saw Larxene was behind them closing in on them as well.
    “We can go home together…†she said, walking closer. Soon, Marluxia and Demyx were standing back to back, the two Vampire Nobodies coming closer. They thought it was all over, until someone opened the door behind them, and yanked the two inside, shutting the door after them. Demyx and Marluxia fell on the floor, and when they looked up they saw Axel, Vexen, Zexion, and Luxord.
    “Thanks for that.†Marluxia said, getting to his feet. Demyx stood up as well.
    “What are you guys doing in here?†Demyx asked.
    “The same reason you are!†Vexen said.
    “Roxas came up here and tried to attack us.†Luxord said, crossing his arms.
    “When SOMEBODY was supposed to be watching him!†Zexion said, ticked off.
    “Well, technically, I’m a Nobody, not a somebody, so…†Marluxia said.
    “MARLUXIA!!!†They all yelled, angry with him. Marluxia put his hands up as a sign of apology.
    “I’m sorry! I’m sorry! Ok?†He said, meaning it. “I only left him alone for a minute! I didn’t think he’d bite Larxene…â€
    “Wait, Larxene’s a Vampire Nobody too?†Axel said. He put his hand to his head in frustration.
    “Great. Just great.†Vexen said. “No we have two to worry about!â€
    “We’ll I think they’re gone. One of us should go out and check to see if they’re really gone.†Demyx suggested. Everyone looked at him with evil eyes. Demyx looked at them nervously. “What?â€
    +++
    The five other Organization members pushed Demyx out of the room and shut the door. Apparently he was the one chosen to check the situation out. Demyx cursed the guys under his breath as he walked down the hall. It was very quiet. Demyx took a quick look around.
    “Well, looks like no one’s here!†Demyx said quickly and nervously as he turned to walk back into the room.
    “Hello, Demyx.†A duo of voices said. Demyx slowly turned his head around. Suddenly, he felt as if he weren’t alone anymore…
    +++
    “You think we should’ve done that?†Axel said, his ear to the door. All of the Organization members had their ears to the door, listening to see if Demyx was all right.
    “Would you rather it have been you?†Vexen said, looking up at Axel, who quickly shook his head. “I didn’t think so.â€
    “Still,†Zexion said, starting to feel bad for pushing him out there, “we should go see if he’s al—“

    “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!â€

    A scream could be heard from the other side of the door. Marluxia quickly opened the door and they all peeked out into the hallway. Demyx was lying on the ground, Larxene and Roxas standing over him. Then, they disappeared, laughing, into their Corridors of Darkness. Once they were gone, the five members ran down the hall towards Demyx.
    “He’s unconscious.†Zexion said, examining him. He could see he had the bite mark on his neck. “And he’s been bitten.†Luxord shook his shoulder.
    “Demyx! Wake up!†He shouted. Marluxia stopped him.
    “Don’t wake him!†he said. “When I woke up Larxene, she turned into a Vampire Nobody.†Zexion thought for a moment.
    “Hmmm…it seems that once someone is bitten, they’ll remain a regular Nobody until as long as they are unconscious.†He said thoughtfully.
    “We’ll, we can’t leave him here.†Axel said. He took his left arm and put it over his shoulder, while Vexen took his right arm and did the saThey dragged him back to his room, and placed him on his bed.
    “He’ll wake up in the morning, you know.†Luxord said. Marluxia looked at him.
    “But at least he won’t be a Vampire Nobody in the morning.†He said. “We already have two to deal with tonight.†Axel looked out of Demyx’s window.
    “Tonight’s over.†He said, pointing outside. The moon was gone, and the sun was peeking over a distant hill. They had been up all night.
    “Well let’s get some sleep.†Zexion said, as they all filtered out of Demyx’s room. Then he muttered, “We’ll need it for tomorrow night…â€
    Thread by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007, 7 replies, in forum: Archives
  17. Axel's#1fangirl
    Maybe thats just ur style of writing. Everyone has one!

    mine is that, when i come up with an idea for a story, i picture the characters in my head. Before i actually start to write, i see the story as like a movie in my head (i know it sounds stupid, but its really cool!) then, when i write, i just describe what i see. :)

    Just figure out your personal style, and go with it! Your stories will be awesome! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  18. Axel's#1fangirl
    :D Almost done! And its a good one!
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  19. Axel's#1fangirl
    :D thanks! Next chapter is almost done!
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives
  20. Axel's#1fangirl
    Thanks! I was aiming for sad :)

    You should post your fanfic! I was SUPER nervous when i posted my Larxene's Crush story. I thought ppl would think it was stupid. But i was suprised to find people liked it!

    As long as you like it, it doesn't matter what others think. If you think it's good, then its probably the best story ever! :D
    Post by: Axel's#1fangirl, Apr 8, 2007 in forum: Archives