cool! *waits for more*
lol :D I almost cried at that part. (what can i say? I get into my writing...lol :))
Thank you! :D
Thank you! *does happy dance* :D So, they finally got to kiss :)
Different...but still funny :) I like it!
WHAT THE SMOOF??? *bursts out in hysterical, uncontrollable laughter* AWESOME!!!!!
:D *feels really happy* I still can't believe my story is this well-liked! I never thought it was really good... :)
I didn't want it to end either, but i sorta had to :) Actually, there's one more chapter coming soon. Its short, and it tells of what happened to the Organization member who had written the message. Let's just say that.... THEY ARE DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks! *takes bow and falls out of computer chair* OWWWWWWWWWW....
The very last chapter!!! I hope enjoy it! (The poll doesn't come into play now, but it will later. Since the majority of voters wanted to din out who wrote it, i made another poll, and there's a suprise coming up!) Here's ch 6: ~Chapter 6~ Nightfall had come, but Larxene hadn’t noticed. She was too lost in thought. Maybe, she thought, I could take Zexion’s book, and find a spell that’ll make everyone forget what happened. She shook the idea from her head. She wasn’t too good with spells… ~FLASHBACK~ Zexion was sitting at the kitchen table, reading his spell book. Larxene walked up to him and read over his shoulder. “The Flood Spell?†She read. Zexion looked up at her, slightly annoyed that she was looking in his book. “Yes, it’s a difficult spell that I want to master.†He said. “Pfft, looks easy enough to me!†Larxene said, snatching the book from him. Zexion stood up and tried to take it back. “Hey! Give it!†he shouted, angry. She ignored him. “Spirit of the Ocean, Mistress of the Sea,†she recited, “Let rain pour in from the Heavens, Let Flood be Free!†Just then, a huge wave of water rushed over the Castle, flooding into the open windows and doors. Everything was soaked. Everyone was mad. Very mad. Especially Zexion. Then, complaints started to fill the halls…. ~FLASHBACK ENDS~ Larxene shook the memory away. No, she decided not to use a spell. She sat down on her bed and sighed. She’d never be able to face Axel or any of them again. Out of the blue, someone knocked on her door, startling her. “Larxene, it’s me, Axel.†Larxene went to the door, but didn’t open it. She heard Axel sigh. “Larxene, please come out. Xigbar had everyone in the Castle leave for a few hours. No one is here but you and me. No one will laugh at you.†There was silence. “Please come out.†He repeated. “I want to talk to you. It’s…important.†Then she heard footsteps fading down the hall. Why did Axel want to talk to her? She wondered… +++ Larxene finally forced herself to unlock her door and walk down into the kitchen. She looked around. Axel hadn’t been lying—no one else was here except for Axel and her. She walked into the living room and sat down on the sofa. “Larxene?†Axel said as he walked through the living room door. He was smiling. “I’m glad you came down.†Larxene smiled weakly, and then looked at the floor. The feeling had come back. That stupid feeling. She wished she could remember what it was called. Axel came towards her and sat down next to her. They sat together, in silence. Axel then fumbled around in his pocket until he pulled out a piece of paper and held it out to her. “What’s that?†she asked, confused. “It’s from the other Organization members. You know, besides you, me, and Xigbar.†Larxene took the piece of paper and read it in her head: Dear Larxene, We’re very sorry for making fun of you. We didn’t mean to let it go that far, and we didn’t mean to hurt you. Please forgive us. And it was signed by all of the Organization (except for Axel and Xigbar). She looked up at Axel. “How’d you get them to apologize?†she asked. Axel smiled slyly. “Xigbar and I have our ways…†~FLASHBACK~ Axel and Xigbar walked down from Larxene’s room and back into the living room, where everyone was talking. Everyone quieted down as they walked in. “You guys owe her an apology.†Xigbar said. Marluxia laughed. “Yeah right. Like we’d do that.†There was a murmur of approval of Marluxia’s words from the crowd of Nobodies. “You guys had better do it.†Axel said. Again, Marluxia laughed. He walked up to them and smirked evilly. “Make us.†Marluxia challenged. Axel and Xigbar looked at each other and nodded once, smiling deviously. ~10 Seconds Later~ “AHHHHHHH!!!†Vexen shrieked, along with some of the other members. They were all encircled in a ring of fire that was steadily closing in on them. Xigbar and Axel looked at each other with satisfied smiles. “FINE!†Xemnas yelled over the roar of the flames and the yells of the organization members. “You win!!! We’ll apologize!†~FLASHBACK ENDS~ Axel chuckled at the memory. Larxene looked up at him, smiling. “Thank you.†She said. Axel nodded. “No problem.†He said. Then he turned to her. “Did you mean what you said, you know, saying that you liked me and all?†Larxene felt her face become hot with embarrassment. But nevertheless she nodded. “Yeah, I meant it.†As soon as she said those words, she wished she could take them back. She didn’t want Axel to know. But it was too late. He now knew. Axel smiled. “Yes!†He said, excited. Then he quickly shut his mouth. He hadn’t meant to say that out loud. “Huh?†Larxene said, confused. He was…happy? Axel sighed in annoyance. Well, he thought, Might as well say it now. “Larxene,†he said, shyly taking her hand in his. Larxene could feel the feeling come back. “I like you too. A lot.†She smiled. So he felt the same way too! She relaxed. There was nothing to worry about at all! “Why didn’t you say something before?†She asked. He shrugged. “Why didn’t you?†he asked. She looked down at the ground. He smiled again. “Exactly. That’s why I didn’t say anything either.†She sighed. “But what will the Organization say? Nobodies can’t like others, and we can’t—“ “Forget the Organization.†Axel interrupted. He took his free hand and lifted her chin up gently, so that her aqua blue eyes met his olive green eyes. “From now on, I’m listening to my own heart.†Then, he leaned in and gently kissed her on the lips for a few lingering seconds before pulling away. He smiled. “Got it memorized?†The Castle door clicked, and they heard voices. Everyone was back. He let go of her hand and walked towards the voices, smiling foolishly to himself. Larxene sat there, grinning foolishly as well. Then, it clicked. She remembered. During that kiss, the feeling came full force, and she recognized it. She remembered its name. That feeling… Was called… Love. THE END!!! ~~~~~~~~~ I hoped you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! :D
yay! :) I'm almost done ch 6
it'll be done soon. And don't worry, if you have to leave, i'll send you the link so you can read it when you get the chance :)
lol good guess :) But i'm not sure if he wrote it...
Thanks! I'm really glad you ppl like ti :)
That'd be funny!
Thanks :) :D
CHAPTER 5!!! As dicated in the poll, Larxene's gonna stay in her room for a day. Wow I hope she's ok...Heres ch 5: ~Chapter 5~ All of the Organization members were silent as they watched Larxene run away. Xigbar immediately ran after her. “Larxene! Wait!!!†He called as he chased after her. Once he left, the silence resumed. No one had ever, EVER seen her cry. She had always been the toughest of the Organization: always strong, sarcastic, and uncaring. But seeing her like that, with a softer side, they realized that maybe there was more to her than they thought. Axel suddenly stood up and walked over to Marluxia, anger painted on his face. He then slapped Marluxia in the back of his head. “OW! What was that for?†He yelled, angry. Axel crossed his arms and gave him a sarcastic smirk. “Nice. Very nice. You had to make her cry, didn’t you?†Axel said, before running off towards the stairs to Larxene’s room. +++ Once in her room, she locked the door and leaned against it. Silent sobs shook her. She hated this. Right now, she hated the Organization. He hated ‘existing’. And most of all, she hated the fact that she was crying. She had no reason to cry. She was a Nobody, incapable of feeling sad. So why was she crying? Everyone had seen her cry. She’d no longer be respected. Everyone would taunt her more. She sank down against the door and sat down, bringing her knees to her chin. Unexpectedly, she heard a knock on her door. She turned her head to face the door. “Go away or I’ll shoot you.†She said angrily. “Larxene! It’s me, Xigbar!†Xigbar said from the other side of the door. Axel was behind him. “And I’m the one with the laser guns!†He joked. Larxene didn’t find it so funny. “I’ll still shoot you if you don’t go away!†She yelled. Axel rapped on the door with his hand. “It’s me, Axel. Open up.†He said, leaning against the door. Axel! That was the last person she wanted to see right now! “I don’t care, I’ll shoot you too!†There was a silence, as if Axel had been offended. Larxene sighed. “I’m sorry but…I just don’t want to talk to anyone right now.†Xigbar nodded. “Ok, we’ll see you later then.†He said, beckoning Axel to follow him down the stairs. Axel lingered a moment, staring at her door, and then ran to catch up with Xigbar. +++ A day past, and Larxene stayed in her room. Xigbar began to worry about her. “I hope she’s ok.†He said to Axel, who was sitting next to him on the living room sofa. “Yeah, me too.†Axel replied. “But she was pretty upset.†“Yeah.†Xigbar said. A moment of silence passed. “I can’t believe Marluxia did all that, just to get her to say she liked me.†Axel chuckled. “Like she was for real.†Xigbar gave him a wow-you’re-an-idiot look. Axel noticed this. “She WAS for real? So she really does like me?†Xigbar followed up with a duh-isn’t-it-obvious look. “You didn’t notice?†Xigbar said. “No, I…never thought it was possible.†“Well, it is.†Axel sighed. “Actually, this is sorta a good thing†Axel said. Xigbar looked up at him. “What do you mean?†he asked, confused. “At least now I know that she likes me. And at least she had the courage to say so. I just wish I had the courage to say it back.†Axel said. Xigbar nodded. “Yeah, I just guess some peopl—HOLD UP!!!!†He shouted, startling Axel. “YOU LIKE HER BACK??†Axel took a pillow from the sofa and shoved it in Xigbar’s face, muffling his words. “Man, shut up!!!†Axel said, taking the pillow from Xigbar’s face. Xigbar sat their, his mouth wide open. “You like her back?†he said, quieter this time. Axel nodded shyly. “How come you’ve never told me before?†Axel shrugged. “I don’t know. I guess…I guess I was a bit afraid of what you’d think. And what the Organization would think.†Xigbar shook his head. “Dude, it doesn’t matter what we think. It only matters what you think.†He said. Axel thought for a moment. “But it doesn’t matter. Nobodies can’t feel emotions, and that included liking someone.†Xigbar shook his head again. “I’m gonna tell you the same thing I told Larxene.†Axel turned towas Xigbar, who continued. “Even though we don’t have our hearts with us, we are still in control of them. We can feel if we want to. We just have to listen to our hearts.†He stood up, and walked outside. Axel remained seated. He thought for a moment, and then looked up. “Maybe it’s time that I listened to my heart…â€
Yeah! all i have to do is make a thread! *goes to make thread*
*lol* Trust me, there is an ending (although i wouldn't mind an everlasting story)
:) Thanks! I don't want to say how many chapter there will be, because it could change. You'll just have to wait and see. I'm almost done ch 5 now :)
*lol* I was aiming for something dramatic. Thanks! :)