Yay! Thanks!
Yeah, I really didn't want them to make her cry (cause it was sorta sad), but i wanted to show she had a softer side, and a rough past. :)
:D Good for you! :) *goes to work on ch 5*
Awesome! It was really good! :D
lol thanks! :D
I'm not sure...possibly...but it's not definate! lol thanks! don't worry! they will talk!
I'm gonna work on chapter 5 after more people vote on the poll. I hope to finiahe the story today. :D And thanks! :) *is happy* Hmmm...I'm not sure. Probably because everyone was laughing so much. He does say somethings in the next chapter, though
Larxene's Crush Chapter 4 Ch 4 is out! From the poll, the meanine's in this story are Marluxia, Zexion, ans Saix! And we get to find out why Larxene is always so mean! Cool! Here's ch 4: ~Chapter 4~ “Can you tell me?†“Tell you what?†“The feeling I had…what was it called?†“Wouldn’t you like to know…†“Please!†“You felt—“ Larxene woke suddenly. She punched the wall next to her. Why’d I have to wake up? Why couldn’t I have slept just long enough to hear the answer? She thought. She cursed in her mind as she got out of bed, changed clothes, and headed down stairs. She had a feeling that today was going to be a bad day. +++ This morning, instead of a ‘good morning’ from Demyx, she received a snicker from him. “What are you laughing at, water boy?†She said sharply. Demyx just snickered louder and walked out into the living room. Larxene rolled her eyes. Everyone still remembered—like they would forget that easily. Well, she thought, At least today can’t possibly get any worse. “Hey lover girl!†Marluxia called. Larxene sighed. Obviously it could get worse. Marluxia walked into the room, followed by Saix and Zexion. They all started to laugh. “What do you want, flower pot?†Larxene said smugly. “I heard you and Axel are going out tonight.†Zexion said. The three of them burst out laughing. Larxene rolled her eyes and walked into the living room to escape them. Axel was reading some manga, and Demyx, Xaldin, Lexaeus, and Xemnas were watching T.V. Unfortunately, Marluxia and his ‘lackeys’ followed her into the living room. “Hey Saix, guess what?†Marluxia said. “What?†Saix replied. “A Nobody is in love with another Nobody!†Marluxia said. At that point, the three of them howled with laughter. “Don’t they just make the cutest non-existent couple ever?†At that comment, all the members in the room started to laugh, except for Axel and Larxene. Both of them by now were blushing, completely embarrassed. “Shut up!!!†Larxene yelled. This only made them laugh harder. Hearing all the commotion in the living room, Xigbar, Vexen, and Roxas came in from the next room over. “What’s going on?†Vexen asked. “We’re having a little chat with Larxene.†Zexion said. “So Larxene,†Marluxia started, “how does it feel to be the only Nobody with a boyfriend?†Everyone laughed (except for Axel, Larxene, and Xigbar). “Knock it off!†Axel said, annoyed. “Awww, Axel’s sticking up for his girlfriend!†Saix said. They all roared with laughter. Larxene turned to walk out of the room, but Marluxia stood in front of her, and pushed her against the wall. Then he put his arms out on the wall, trapping and pinning her against the wall. “Where’s lover girl going?†Marluxia said in her face. Larxene looked down at the ground. Her eyes started to sting. She knew what was coming. ~FLASHBACK~ “What’s with your hair, bug?†Iota, Ralene’s (Which was Larxene’s name before she joined the Organization) older sister said. “Leave me alone!†Ralene cried, her eyes starting to sting. “Ralene, what’s wrong with you? You actually like those antennae that stick out of your hair?†Iota said, tugging hard on her hair. “Ow! That hurt!!!†Ralene yelled, starting to cry. Her older sister laughed hard. “You’re such a baby!†“Am not!†“Are too! You cry at every single little thing!†“I do not!†Ralene yelled, crying harder, her sobs shaking her little 7-year-old body. “You need to toughen up!†Iota said, pushing her against the wall. Ralene wiped her face with her sleeve. “How do I do that?†she asked. Iota laughed. “Well, first you gotta stop crying about everything.†She plucked her younger sister’s head. “And you gotta act tough. Don’t let people see you cry. Taunt other people before they can taunt you. Be mean, and stop being so nice!†She said, punching Ralene in her arm before walking off, laughing viciously. Ralene watched her sister walk away with evil eyes. “No one is ever gonna see me cry again!†She said, her voice low with anger. “I promise…†~FLASHBACK ENDS~ Now, the vicious laughs were back. Their insults and taunts cut into her like knives. A tear slipped down her face. I’m not going to cry. She thought. I won’t let myself. I won’t let them see that they’ve hurt me. But, another tear came. By now the whole living room was shaking with laughter. “Leave me alone….†Larxene said quietly, shaking. Marluxia laughed. “Oh, look! Lover girl has something to say!†He said cruelly. “Leave me alone.†She repeated, louder. She couldn’t take much more of this. Part of her, the changed part of her, the ‘Larxene’ part of her, wanted to take out her Kunai and slice him to pieces. But the part of her that stayed the same, the ‘Ralene’ part of her, wanted to stand there and cry like a little kid. She just wanted this to be over. “What was that, lover gir—†“I SAID LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!†She yelled so loud that Marluxia had backed away in surprise. She looked up at him. Tears were coming down her face. “Are you happy now? Are you ALL happy now???†She yelled, surveying the room (that had now become quiet) wildly. “So what if I like Al??? There, I said it: I LIKE AXEL! Are you happy now? That you’ve got what you wanted? To cause me pain? To see me cry??? Are you satisfied??? Was that your goal? Thanks to you, I can never talk to him again!!!†She yelled uncontrollably, still crying. “ARE YOU HAPPY NOW??†She ran out of the room and up the stairs to all of the member’s rooms. She went in hers and slammed the door.
I'm working on it now :) I hope to put it up soon :D
Sure! Go ahead! :D
Yay! I'm REALLY glad people like them! I never thought people would like them :) :D *feels happy* I'm in the middle of writing ch 4 now :)
:D thanks :D
Love it!!! I can't wait for the next ch!
Yay! :D Ok, I'm writing ch 4 now
Yeah, there's a chapter 1 and 2. I'm gonna fix my sig so that the links to the chapters are in there *goes to fix sig* Fixed it! Now you can read the chapters from my sig! :D
Thanks! :) Great minds DO think alike :) I'm gonna start on ch 4 in a little bit :D I'm just waiting for more people to vote on the poll, so i know who to include in the next chapter
I like it!!! *waits for more* :)
Yay! Thanks!!! :) I was really glad that the one who got the most votes wasn't Axel (Cause she'd never hurt him), Larxene (she'd never hurt herself--dur!), or Xigbar (in my story, she and him are really good friends, and she'd never hurt him) :)
W00t! Ch 3 is out! In the last chapter's poll, Roxas was the Organization member who got the most votes, so he's the...uh..."Lucky" one...hehe... Ok! Ch 3: ~Chapter 3~ “I don’t believe that.†“It’s true! I felt it!!†“Felt what?†“…†Larxene woke up, the words echoing in her head. Felt what? She thought. This was really starting to annoy her. She wished she could figure out what she was feeling, and get it over with. She could remember feeling this same feeling before, but she couldn’t remember the name of it. She glanced over at her clock. 12:31. Larxene grunted. She hated when she woke up late—Xemnas always scolded her about that. But today she wouldn’t care. Today she had something else in mind… Larxene snapped herself out of her thoughts, changed clothes, and walked down the stairs into the Castle kitchen. +++ “Good—“ “Save it.†Larxene said, agitated, cutting Demyx off. Demyx got up from the table he was previously sitting at. “Whatever.†He said before walking off outside. Larxene sat down, laying her head on the table. She sighed deeply. “Something wrong?†Larxene looked up to see Xigbar, standing only a few feet from the table. Larxene shook her head before laying it back down on the table again. “It’s nothing.†She said. Xigbar walked over and sat down next to her. “Sure seems like a whole lot of nothing to be something.†He said, smiling. Larxene looked up at him. “Hey Xigbar, do you think Nobodies can feel? You know, emotions?†Larxene asked. Xigbar thought for a moment. “Naw, I don’t think so.†“Can Nobodies remember emotions?†“I’m not sure. Can you?†Xigbar said. Larxene was silent, and then shook her head. He continued: “Maybe we can, maybe we can’t. Just because we don’t remember them, doesn’t mean we can’t feel them, right?†Larxene shrugged, sitting up. “But do you remember? What it was like?†She asked. “No, not really. It’s just been so long…†he replied. “But emotions weren’t really important to me. What I remember, and what others remember, is what was important to them. Were emotions important to you?†“I guess so.†Larxene said. “Then you probably remember. Just try to remember what is in your heart.†“My heart? I don’t have a heart anymore. None of us do.†Larxene said, confused. “You still have a heart.†Xigbar said. “It’s just not with you. Listen to it, wherever it is. You may not have it, but you are in control of it.†Larxene nodded. Suddenly, what sounded like a million laughs echoed throughout the Castle. Xigbar and Larxene looked around, trying to figure out where it was coming from. Just then, Roxas came running in from the door in the kitchen that led outside. He was laughing very hard, and was out of breath. “Larxene!†He said, still laughing. “Come here, quick!!!†He ran up to her, grabbed her wrist, and literally yanked her from her chair and dragged her outside. Xigbar got up and followed close behind. +++ Outside were all of the Organization members (except for Xemnas, Axel, and Xigbar). They were all facing the side of the castle, laughing their heads off (even Saix, and THAT was saying something). Roxas joined them in their laughter. Larxene walked closer to the group of members. “What in the name of Kingdom Hearts is going on…?†Larxene started, and then trailed off. She saw what they were laughing at. And she was mortified. Scribbled all across the wall, in jet-black paint were the words: LARXENE LOVES AXEL!!! LARXENE + AXEL FOREVER!!!!!!!! She was absolutely horrified. But greater than her horror was her rage. The skies turned from a sunny and clear blue to a dull and dark gray. Lighting flashed across the skies, and thunder shook the earth itself. Larxene turned towards the rabble of Organization members. Her eyes were close to glowing an intense red color. Everyone grew quiet. “Who…wrote…this?†She said, trying to control her anger. No one moved or spoke, because they were too afraid to. “WHO WROTE THIS????†She yelled, lighting and thunder matching her words. Once again, no one moved nor spoke. Then, Roxas stepped forward to speak. “I think that…†he started, but right now she wasn’t in the mood to hear what he had to say. She lifted one of her hands straight up, and then brought it sharply back down. As she did, an enormous bolt of lighting came down from the sky and struck Roxas, knocking him nearly 10 yards from where he was standing. Everyone looked in fear, as Roxas didn’t move. “WHO DID THIS???†She yelled once again. She was furious by now. “Whoa.†Larxene turned to see who was behind her. It was Axel, who was looking at the wall. Instantly, the skies cleared, and her fury transformed into pure embarrassment. Her face flushed bright red. Axel was about to say something when Xemnas came walking outside. “What is going on ere?†He said, obviously angry. Larxene pushed past him and ran inside of the Castle. She heard talking and loud laughing as she walked up the stairs and into her room. She sat down on her bed. A feeling had come over her then, two actually. But what were they? What were they?
