Awww, i feel bad for Sora. I mean, he doesn't know what to believe any more.
I loved it!!!! (I went back and read the other chapters) Awesome! Keep on writing! :D
*dies laughing* THAT IS HILARIOUS!!! *dies some more*
This story rocks! I love the random-ness, and how it's funny, and serious! I can't wait for ch 7! :D
I have fans? COOL I HAVE FANS!!!! *is haapy* *gets hit with the brick* OWWWWWWWWWWWW.....
:D I'm working on ch 3 right now :) Thanks!
Tell me about it! And those people don't even know whether or not he will get hurt, so basically they WANT him to get hurt. I think that is personally Hilarious :3
yay! I will make more :) I'm not sure when it'll end, but as long as i can continue the story, it'll be there :) Thanks! *is glad people like it*
Yay! Next ch is out! From the poll, Larxene getting hit on the head with something got the most votes, so that's what I put in! (I plan to make a poll for each of the upcoming chapters, so you get a say in what I write :D) Here's chapter 2: ~Chapter 2~ Larxene was watching Axel, like in a sort of trance. She was so lost in this ‘feeling’ that she had barely heard Roxas yelling to her: “Look out!†and before she could respond… THUNK!!! A Keyblade whacked her in her head, causing her to fall onto the ground, semi-unconscious. Roxas and Axel ran over to her. “Larxene! Larxene! Are you ok?†Roxas said, hoping that she was. Larxene sat up abruptly, anger dancing in her eyes. “I’M GONNA KILL YOU, YOU LITTLE PUNK!!!†She yelled out in rage, preparing to summon one of her Kunai. “AHHHH!!!†Roxas yelled out in terror (for he knew that she would probably kill him), and ran behind Axel. Axel laughed, and extended his hand out to Larxene. “Are you really ok?†He said, his voice sincere. She took his hand and allowed him to help her up. “Yeah, I’m fine.†She said, somewhat blushing. She usually hated when people actually cared about her, but when Axel did it she didn’t mind. She actually liked it. The very thought of him caring about her gave her the feeling again. But what was it? “Good.†Axel said, smiling. “Hey, Roxas and I were going to go get some Sea-Salt ice cream. You want to join us?†Larxene thought for a moment. “Doesn’t Xemnas want us to do something today?†She said. “Nope. He’s off doing something in another world.†Roxas, who had by this time stepped out from behind Axel, said. Larxene nodded. “Okay then, sure.†She said. The three of them walked over to a nearby ice cream stand. Larxene was about to pull out some money for her ice cream when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She looked up to see the hand belonging to Axel. “My treat.†He said, smiling, before he went to buy the three’s ice cream. Roxas tried to stifle a laugh. Larxene looked at him. “What?†“You like him?†“WHAT??? What would make you think that???†“That wasn’t my question.†Roxas crossed his arms, waiting for the answer. “No, of course I don’t like him. Besides, it’s impossible for a Nobody to like someone.†Larxene said. Roxas shook his head. “I don’t believe that. I know you like him.†Larxene made a fist and held it up to Roxas. “Now who do I like?†She asked, with quiet anger. Roxas gulped, fear in his eyes. “No one.†He squeaked. She lowered her fist. “Exactly.†She said. Axel walked back with three ice creams, and handed them out. “Enjoy!†He said cheerfully, licking his. They sat down on the railing of the stairway leading up to the marketplace and ate their ice cream. When they were done, Roxas stood up. “Well, I’m gonna go do something. I’ll meet you back at the Castle, guys.†He said, before disappearing in a Corridor of Darkness. Axel and Larxene sat there in silence for a little while. Sometimes, Larxene would glance over at Axel, to see if he was looking at her. And other times she’d have the feeling that she was being watched. Suddenly, Axel stood up. “We should get back to the Castle.†Axel said. “It’s getting late.†Larxene shook her head. “You go ahead, I’ll be there a little later.†She replied. Axel nodded, and smiled. “Okay, see you later.†He said before disappearing in a portal he summoned. Larxene sighed and closed her eyes. What was that feeling? And did she…like it? Oh, I wasn't very sure about what Larxene's weapon was called, but I rembember it being called a Kunai. If I'm wrong, please correct me :) *hopes someone is reading*
:) lol That would be funny
Cool idea! But i have something else in mind...but i will defininately remember that!!!
That's ok! everyone is entitled to their opinion! :D
i agree! who really doesn't like pie? lol :) Although i think Larxene getting hit on the head with something is a lot funnier :)
Wow alot of ppl want to see larxene in pain, lol :) yay! thanks! :D i wante to add a funny part in there :)
Yay! Thanks, there will be more! I'll try putting out a new chapter each day, so check back soon, ok? :D
I'm writing a mini Organization story, and I hope you like it! Comments and suggestions are ALWAYS welcome!!! :D *passes around cookies to the readers* ~Chapter 1~ “Impossible.†“It’s true!†“Larxene, a Nobody can’t feel emotion. Therefore, you can’t like another.†“Well I can!†“As if.†Larxene awoke with a start. She took a breath and sat up in bed. Xigbar’s words still burned in her mind. A Nobody can’t feel emotion. She thought again, mouthing the words as she thought. She got out of bed, changed into her Organization uniform, and walked out of her room. If I can’t feel emotion, she thought, then what was I feeling? +++ “Good morning Larxene!†Demyx called cheerfully as she walked down the stairs into the kitchen. She grimaced. She couldn’t understand why Demyx was always so happy. She walked over to the table he was sitting at and sat down. Demyx was reading some sort of manga again. “What’re you reading?†Larxene asked as she reached into a bowl of fruit sitting on the table, extracting an apple. “Kingdom Hearts manga.†Demyx replied, looking up at her. “I mean, it’s so good! This Sora kid is awesome! And the bad guys are even cooler! Man, I wish stuff like this really happened!†Larxene gave him a blank look before rolling her eyes. “Demyx…†she said slowly. “What?†“…You know what? Never mind.†“Seriously, what?†“It’s nothing.†“Whatever.†Demyx shrugged as he went back to reading his manga. Larxene gave him another look before taking a bite of her apple and walking outside to the back of the Castle. Luxord and Xaldin were sitting outside at a table, playing some sort of card game. “Hey.†They said in unison as she walked over to the table, never looking up from their hand of cards. “Where’s Axel?†Larxene asked. Xaldin looked up for a moment. “He’s with Roxas. They’re having a fight in Hollow Bastion.†“I would’ve gone to see it, but they said they’re not letting us bet on it.†Luxord said, placing a card down on the table. Larxene watched a little more of their game, finished her apple, and summoned a Corridor of Darkness to take her to Hollow Bastion. Before she stepped through, she turned around. “Oh, and Xaldin, he just put down a six.†She said before quickly stepping into her portal. Luxord turned at her in annoyance as Xaldin happily placed another card on top of his, winning the game. “Thanks Larxene.†Luxord said sarcastically, angrily. Larxene laughed as she disappeared. +++ Larxene appeared in the Hallow Bastion marketplace area. She listened for a moment and heard the clashing of what sounded like metal. She walked towards the sound and, surely enough; Axel and Roxas were there, battling it out. She could tell that they were just playing around, by the way they were laughing. Her eyes fixed on Axel. Seeing his fiery red hair sway when he moved, hearing his continuous laughter, she had barely noticed that a feeling, the feeling, had come back once again. *hopes someone is reading*
WAIT A MINUTE!!! I am in the right place!!! :D I think... I'm not sure. Is this where you write stories? Ohh. *feels sorta stupid* Okay then :) *takes story to Creativity corner* Thanks alot! :D *give you a cookie*
Wrong place? Isn't this where you post stories you've written? Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh..... *reads title of forum* Whoops! Sry about that! *takes story over to the writing forum*
I'm writing a mini Organization story (to take a break from writing this really big story I'm working on), and I hope you like it! Please let me know what you think :) Chapter 1: “Impossible.†“It’s true!†“Larxene, a Nobody can’t feel emotion. Therefore, you can’t like another.†“Well I can!†“As if.†Larxene awoke with a start. She took a breath and sat up in bed. Xigbar’s words still burned in her mind. A Nobody can’t feel emotion. She thought again, mouthing the words as she thought. She got out of bed, changed into her Organization uniform, and walked out of her room. If I can’t feel emotion, she thought, then what was I feeling? +++ “Good morning Larxene!†Demyx called cheerfully as she walked down the stairs into the kitchen. She grimaced. She couldn’t understand why Demyx was always so happy. She walked over to the table he was sitting at and sat down. Demyx was reading some sort of manga again. “What’re you reading?†Larxene asked as she reached into a bowl of fruit sitting on the table, extracting an apple. “Kingdom Hearts manga.†Demyx replied, looking up at her. “I mean, it’s so good! This Sora kid is awesome! And the bad guys are even cooler! Man, I wish stuff like this really happened!†Larxene gave him a blank look before rolling her eyes. “Demyx…†she said slowly. “What?†“…You know what? Never mind.†“Seriously, what?†“It’s nothing.†“Whatever.†Demyx shrugged as he went back to reading his manga. Larxene gave him another look before taking a bite of her apple and walking outside to the back of the Castle. Luxord and Xaldin were sitting outside at a table, playing some sort of card game. “Hey.†They said in unison as she walked over to the table, never looking up from their hand of cards. “Where’s Axel?†Larxene asked. Xaldin looked up for a moment. “He’s with Roxas. They’re having a fight in Hollow Bastion.†“I would’ve gone to see it, but they said they’re not letting us bet on it.†Luxord said, placing a card down on the table. Larxene watched a little more of their game, finished her apple, and summoned a Corridor of Darkness to take her to Hollow Bastion. Before she stepped through, she turned around. “Oh, and Xaldin, he just put down a six.†She said before quickly stepping into her portal. Luxord turned at her in annoyance as Xaldin happily placed another card on top of his, winning the game. “Thanks Larxene.†Luxord said sarcastically, angrily. Larxene laughed as she disappeared. +++ Larxene appeared in the Hallow Bastion marketplace area. She listened for a moment and heard the clashing of what sounded like metal. She walked towards the sound and, surely enough; Axel and Roxas were there, battling it out. She could tell that they were just playing around, by the way they were laughing. Her eyes fixed on Axel. Seeing his fiery red hair sway when he moved, hearing his continuous laughter, she had barely noticed that a feeling, the feeling, had come back once again.
ROTFLUSE!!!!! Vexen dying was hilarious!!!! *lol*
