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"Oh nothing, so your name is Demyx right?" she said trying to avoid his gaze.

"I think I might know why." Aerith thought. Then she let out a little giggle at the thought.
(ooc: I'm talking to Kiari.)

"Talking card, games, anything besides class I guess." Aerith says to the new boy holding a strange katana in her hand.

SAME HERE!!! Depressing, loss, sorrow, saddness it's all apart of life and everyone can connect to it. Most of my poems have that same theme only without the blood and killing. They're on lost loves and losing the people and things most precious to you. I also get alot of the "LeeLee is emo" or "Why don't you write something happier?" and I'm like "why should I? I mean just cause you don't like my "emo" peoms and stories doesn't mean that every doesn't."

Sorry Kiari I don't. Oh, crud if people found out my yahoo then they would know my first name. (oh crap stupid stupid stupid me.) Anywho I'm scared of the dark. Well... not the darkness it's self just the people and things lurking in it. Think about it the darkness hides what we can not see and we fear what we can not see. The only way to lose that fear is if we go into the darkness and try understand what we fear. Besides that the darkness is actually very calming and allows for self reflection.

"Oh great the one class I dread." Aerith thought. She then goes over to wear Kiari was and starts looking at some staffs and katanas.

I couldn't agree more Zexion. Punctuation is important.(unfortunatly I suck at it so I have my literary advisers help)

Also I can not stress how important reasearch is. If you do something on mythology, like Zexion said, then you'd need to look up the god/goddess you're story is on. Then look up who they're enemies and friends were, who they where married to and who there childeren where (if they were married or had kids). If your story is present based or a journey through a magical forest look up different creatures or make-up some of your own just make sure the geography is right because Sirens aren't forest faries and Centaurs don't live in swamps. So make sure your facts are straight.

If you're shy about your writting, like I am, and want to make sure that your writting is just right before you show the world get one or two of your friends that are good in language and have them be your literary advisers. (I have three.) Let them read your work and add adjustments. You might think that this doesn't work cause your friends would say that it was good no matter what, but it does cause if they were your friends they would tell you what was wrong and how to fix it. (Trust me you should see my poems when E-chan is done with one of them!)

I've read alot of sad stories and this one is really good is almost made me cry. (Trust me half the trumpets and flutes think I'm emo cause of all the "depressing" books I read.) Any who I like all the details you added it means that you have a good sence of imagry and are meticulous to how the objects and charactors in your story act, react, and look like. My friends say I should write a fanfic but I can never keep my people to stay in charactor. So I end up writing a poem about what I want the charactors to portray. (okay that's off topic.)

Basicly I'm saying it was a great story and that you should keep writing!!

Aerith then points at Xemnas again only instead of her finger it's her hand.
"Tidal Wave" Then a huge burst of water comes out and knocks Xemnas into the wall.

I got Sora too and I picked realistic answers. Maybe it was that wood chuck question.

(ooc: Boiler room that's funny.)
"Yeah Lunch sounds good." Then she notices Sora. " Is he coming with us? I just noticed that you and him seem to be good friends, and I don't want him to feel left out. "

"Oh thanks. It was nothing really." she says returning the smiles.

"um.." Sees that the portal hasn't closed yet and so she points her index finger directly at. "Thunder" Then a huge surge of lighting goes after Xemnas into the portal.

Aerith had to giggle alittle at this for she knew that he had that slap coming to him. But she didn't think that battle would break out. Then she turned to Kiari "Oh sorry. My name is Aerith. do you think we should stop them?"

Rain knelt down beside Zangetsu to see if he was alright. " Maybe and with our memories faded we were probably even more dangerous." She then saw his hands shaking a little so she put her hands in his hoping it might calm him down. "But if there's one thing I know it's that all of us want to get out of here."

"Um okay.. can I play with you guys?"

Happy early b-day to Misty. Just don't die in the next two days 'kay?
My b-day is August 5th. Then I'll be 15 and 15=learner's permit. Yay!! :D

"Egyptian Ratscrew? What's that?" Aerith asked Kairi. Knowing that something was up with that gleam in her eye.

Kingdom Hearts Character: Aerith
Age: 16
Bio: She's quiet but is willing to help others. She good in potions and magic but struggles alittle bit in Offensive Arts because she doesn't want to hurt anybody.
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Aerith quietly sat behind the others hoping she could hear what they were talking about or at least get their names. Then she saw a guy walk up and write someting on the board. Well... he's a little....um different.