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    That was really great ^^ It's so good to ahev such a talented community here as we do, I feel so priveleged to be a part of it ... yet not be so talented ^^;;;.
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 20, 2011 in forum: Kingdom Hearts News & Updates
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    Saged for content.

    Saged for content.
    Profile Post by Clawtooth for Sanya, Aug 16, 2011
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    Another thing is how many players in the session. It tends to be a multiple of 4.
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 16, 2011 in forum: Retirement Home
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    Aradiancestor is the demon, it is her.

    The Handmaid seems like such a tragic character ... she was manipulated so unfairly by scratch ;___;
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 16, 2011 in forum: Literature
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    I think I'm going to try and do some of the arts now that i have Photoshop on this PC ... prepare yourselves.

    It's good that everyone seems to like this addition ^^.
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 15, 2011 in forum: Community News & Projects
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    This seems like a good idea, and I agree with What about using MSN as Pesterchum / Trollian.
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 15, 2011 in forum: Retirement Home
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    Cargo

    Thanks to both of you. I really wanted to get the duality of the love for is family and his total racism and hate towards the to-be-slaves. The "It" thing was something that happened in the middle, where I was thinking "how can I make him more evil" and that happened. It wasn't enjoyable to write, but I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^.
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 15, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    This is an essay that I had to write for my English course over the summer ... I don't like it ;__; but I thought I would post it here.

    Cargo
    “Captain’s log, 27th of June in the year 1834â€, I wrote. I leant back in the chair and sighed. It was to be 3 weeks before we would be back in England. Three weeks is a long time for the heart of a man, and especially that of a woman. My wife, Elizabeth, would be overjoyed to see me return, and I could not wait to see her again.
    “Weather – Hot, little to no windâ€, I penned, using the pan given to me when I had last visited France with cargo. Fountain pens they called them ... and I must say the wrote much better than a quill, if living up to their name every-so-often by splashing one with a torrent of ink. It was hot, sweat beading on my brow in my cabin as I wrote, the sun a lidless eye staring through the windows of the cabin behind my desk. I still thought about Elizabeth ... and my mind wandered. I saw her standing in the church in her dress, with I beside her. My mind snapped back to the task in hand almost as quickly as it had wandered.
    “Day’s eventsâ€, I scrawled. What a day it had been. Sometimes the cargo was more trouble than it was worth...
    ***
    “One of ‘em’s been fightin’ again sirâ€! Perkins shouted to me through the open door of the cabin.
    “Whatâ€!? I sighed exasperatedly. This was the fourth time in three days that one of them had started a fight down below. “Have you brought It up yet?â€
    “Yes sir, ‘e’s being brought up now ... what are you going to do to ‘im�
    I turned my head to look at him, a knowing smile on his face, reflecting that on mine.
    “Punish It of courseâ€.
    Slavery they call it. Our job is to go to Africa, take some of the stronger ones and put them on our ships. We then sail back to England and sell them off. It’s not exactly glamorous work, but there’s loads of money in it, and that’s what I like about it. Some would say it’s cruel, but it isn’t. Only the powerful survive in this world, and that’s just the way it is.
    I walked out onto the deck from the cabin. The hold was open, a black pit in the centre of the ship where we kept them. One of them was being hauled up by two of my men. I took a glance at It, Its black skin like chard meat across Its body, Its eyes like sour milk with a deep black hole in the centre; the dead, soulless eyes of a primitive “people†if you can call them that.
    “So you decided to start a little fight down below, eh?†I mocked, “What’s that? Wanted a little more room?†I laughed, and the rest of the crew on deck started laughing with me. It looked frightened, I could see it in Its eyes. It was shaking and wildly looking around, not knowing what we were going to do to It. I relished that moment, the fear in It giving me glee.
    “Well, you see†I continued, “I can’t exactly have you injuring the others. You see, you’re cargo for us, and the most important thing about cargo is that is needs to reach the destination in as best condition as possible; to achieve the best price you see? So I’m afraid ... we’re going to have to punish you. Grab It boys and tie It to the mastâ€.
    They did so. Grabbing It by the arms and pulling It to the mast, tying Its arms to a metal hook on the mast itself. It tried to resist, pitifully. There was no point in resisting. Its fate was sealed the moment he was brought aboard this ship.
    Perkins handed me the whip to me, the warm leather seeming excited at the prospect of another victim. She had tasted the blood of three of them in the past few days, yet her thirst had not yet been quenched.
    “I think five lashes ought to do the trick!†I laughed, loosing the whip from her knotted slumber.
    It turned Its head, fear once again in Its eyes. I didn’t care. I brought the whip over my head, and then flicked my wrist bringing it down on its exposed back.
    One.
    It cried out in pain, Its breathing becoming heavy as blood began to seep slowly out of the cut on Its back, bright red blood against the burnt black of Its skin.
    Two.
    Its shouts were a terrible cacophony to my ears, most troublesome to my disdain.
    Three.
    The whip was now becoming whetted with the Its blood, drinking its fill of Its lifeblood gleefully.
    Four.
    I wondered if my wife back home was getting along, raising our son she had given life to before I had left.
    Five.
    It cried out its last, and then slumped down in the bonds. It seemed to be unconscious, though I could not be sure.
    “Throw it back in the hold†I said as I tied the whip back into a knot. I looked over at the men pulling him off of the mast. Then they threw him, bodily into the hold - a black shape falling into the blackness.
    ***
    I stopped writing, blotted the page and closed the book. I stood up and looked out of the window. The sun reflected on the cerulean sea. Three weeks I thought and I shall be able to return to my wife and my son.



    Thank you for reading ... I really did not enjoy writing that ;__;.
    Thread by: Clawtooth, Aug 15, 2011, 4 replies, in forum: Archives
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    Only if I can play as Mami.
    Profile Post by Clawtooth for Sanya, Aug 15, 2011
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    To deeped the religious paralell even further, Nepetancestor = Mary Magdalin.

    Loving the ancestor stuff, it's great ^^
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 14, 2011 in forum: Literature
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    Instead of using the reaction command, I used Trinity Limit when I got the 10 clones in 10 seconds bit ...
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 13, 2011 in forum: Kingdom Hearts Help
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    Definitaion of a Sonnet: A sonnet it a fouteen line poem writen in iambic pentameter which means that each line has fifve beats. This strucure finishes with a rhyming couplet. Sonnets tent to be love poems, especially those of Shakespeare ^^.

    I like the use of the venacular of the time in this poem, but I sometimes feel you could possible stick closer to the pentameter rhythm. It is a really wrought form, so it's difficult, but it's a really good form to be able to master. I really like the way you introduce the love, then the conflict and then th resolution, as should b with all sonnets.

    All in all, good work.
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 13, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    Should I re-make mine, or is it fine as it is??
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 12, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    *sigh* ...

    *sigh* ...
    Profile Post by Clawtooth for Guardian Soul, Aug 11, 2011
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    I am not a tsundere!

    I am not a tsundere!
    Profile Post by Clawtooth for Guardian Soul, Aug 11, 2011
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    I think I kind of threw a curveball at this theme ... but I like it ^^

    As the final chord hung a glittering cadence in the air, I looked up at the conductor from my seat in the second row of players. I thought for a second that I saw a small tear in his eye as we finished. The moment seemed to last an eternity as silence reverberated in the hall, my violin and bow perfectly poised as though wishing to continue playing. I looked to my right, and saw a dear friend, who I would rarely meet again after tonight. We had been through a long journey this past year, the seventy of us in the orchestra, living and working together; the uncertainty of the future was palpable in the air. We didn't know if this would happen again, and we made the most of it.

    The clapping began, slowly at first, then rising to a clamour like the first droplets of a downpour after a long drought. We stood up as was our custom and the conductor bowed to the applauding audience, then shook the hand of the leader, the concertmaster standing only a few feet from me. So much emotion had been shared between this group of young adults, all now going their separate ways, whether back to high school or to university, college or work, and one thing had brought us together. Music.

    Some say music is pointless and mundane -- a futile, powerless thing. Artful, and requiring skill, but nothing compared to science or language. Yet what can be more powerful than the ability to bring people together, and resonate emotionally even after the last note is played? Is there such a thing as mundane at all, when everything has ties, emotional and mental, that bind us together as people? That is the power of music.

    I hope it's okay ^^.
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 11, 2011 in forum: Archives
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    I am not tsundere!
    Post by: Clawtooth, Aug 10, 2011 in forum: The Spam Zone