much better your in
"I need to get out of here so I can speak to the Kings guess and help get the Prince and Princess to safty," Xert said, "And I need to contact my solgers."
Nox grabed Eden's hand, "We'll go in together."
OC: you left alot of things blank
Xert pulled out a gajet it showed a large fleet on the move tords there world.
Nox stoped befor the door, "What do you think is on the other side?"
we need more people
Rick walked through first then Nox.
"Your about to be invaded," Xert said.
OC; your hundred of miles away. Kizon kept falling. He turned his suit around and fired the beam reifle. Hopeing that it would slow his fall.
"there is a large fleet on there way here. You have to tell your king to assemble his forces to defend or gather crystles to give them," Xert said.
They began to fire at Sandrock. Kizon's tarus kept falling. His thrusters were out.
"Yeah," Rick said. The Doors began to open. White light comeing from inside.
Xert took out a comunicator, "how far is the fleet." "Two hoursss sssir," it replied. "What!" Xert said. "He'sss useing warp drivesss," it said. "Send half our fleet. One quarter to the surface the other to conter the fleet to hold them for a little while," Xert said, "KING ENZO!"
hey eden can you respond to all the teads your part of with me and Axel Gundam
"One day you'll give in," Rick2 said and disapeird.
"Food," Nox opened the box there was food and cooking things.
Nox came back with the box.
Nox walked to a mimi Van and grabed a box.
"Probly just a animal. Can you start a fire. While I go get food," Nox asked.