It's pretty good, but at some points it feels like you're going too fast. Watch your grammar, you don't make too many mistakes, but just watch for them. Other than that, good start, can't want to read the rest.
The "just wow" was implying distaste, as in it was....strange.... But I suppose he's still talented. He came to your school too? (LAWL)
^ off topic much? But yeah, he's pretty good. Another great electric violinist is Mark Wood, but he came to my school and did a program that was just...wow. But I guess he's still a good violin player.
LOL that's an amazing name. And the author's likes and dislikes just make me want to read it. I'll look for it at my library and tell j00 if I like it after I've read it.
Wow. I'm reviving a very dead thread. But the only reason I am is becuase I was going to make one myself but I searched for it first and found it already existed. Anyway, I prefer Aeris. Aeris is what I saw while playing FF7 and Aerith doesn't seem right. It just sounds like you're trying to say Aeris with a lisp or something.
The KH universe is a different universe from the FF ones, we have to remember. So Aeris and Yuna should only be based on what they do in Kingdom Hearts, which leads me to believe they probably could have been. Wendy probably could have been one too, and a much better candidate than Alice in my opinion, becuase than perhaps they could have had Peter Pan come back as a possible ally in Hollow Bastion rather than an entirely new character. But Beast is more powerful than Peter Pan so I'm not complaining.
I feel like there's already been a thread about this...I'm not sure. I couldn't find it with the search so maybe not. And I think the best form is Final Form, as cheesy as that sounds. I don't have FM+ so I can't judge on Limit form, but of all the forms in KH2, final form was obviously the most powerful and GAWD I loved the abilities it gave me.
Mine is Peridot. And I think I'm the first in this thread. Yay. I suppose I like it. I would have preferred something Orange, but there are none that are birthstones, so Peridot is cool.
This is really good. And it wasn't annoying to read either becuase you made hardly any grammar mistakes or typos. Yeah, you've got a really good story going. ZOMFG another thing I have to wait for to be updated.
The Land Before Time sequels are getting ridiculous. And the Lion King sequal made me want to barf. And so did Cinderella. Yes, I think you're right, most Disney sequels do suck.
Yes! Everytime I see a Disney Movie that was in KH I think of it. And I compare how similar the worlds are and stuff and think "NO WHAT REALLY HAPPENED IS SORA CAME IN AND WHOOPED ALL OF THE BAD GUYS' ASSES!" XD I just watched Beauty and the Beast and there was this scene where they walked through the place where you fight Xaldin and I was sitting there thinking "OMFG RUN XALDIN'S GONNA KILLLL YOUUU!" =D
Where do they even get the funds? These 15 sequels can't be THAT successful. The first one is definitely the best of all. Almost all Disney sequels suck.
The trailer looks cute. I'll see it anyway, There voices are just so darn adorable.
Yes, yah did steal it from someone else! *Evil eye* I've been using this font since June. And welcome anyway....umm, we're not all high on sugar. Just post lots and have fun. And only spam in the spam zone.
Hello! Your poll is strange. And you username, axeldemiseblade, is also quite strange as well. Welcome to kh-vids. Post lots, stay active, and only spam in the spam zone.