Well, you posted yesterday, so I'm assuming the play already happened. 3 grades of people isn't too much. I preformed in front of 600 people in a theater every night for about a month last year. If you just imagine that they aren't there you'll do fine. Once you get used to it it isn't to bad. You're only nervous on the first day. In fact, I bet you already did fine. How did it go?
I'm glad you're feeling better, becuase just reading this poem made me feel worried about you. I hope you're okay now. I'm gonna hug you anyway. No, scratch that, I'm gonna GLOMP you. *megaglomp* I hope you feel better.
Yes! More happy poems! *bighugeflyinglargecookieglomp* This is a great thing to read if you're dwelling on something bad that has happened in the past. You're cheery poems are much nicer to read than the depressing ones. Good job.
The poem itself gives a vivid image but the grammatical errors make it harder to read. I'd like to see you correct it becuase than maybe it wouldn't be such a pain to figure out what you're attempting to say. It's a very dark poem, and I personally prefer happy things, but you pulled it off well. Good job.
Well it's great to see more and more happy poems. This is really great. I'm usually really happy and hyper, but next time I feel depressed I'll bookmark this and come back to it. And it's also really cool that you tried to help cheer someone up by writing it. Great job.
The poem itself is good but the reason it was written is not. I really hope you're feeling better now. I don't like it when people are sad. It makes me want to hug them but when it is online I can't even do that. So please don't be sad. I hope you feel better.
Like Nymph said, the idea is great and the story is flowing very well. Your word choice is a bit repetitive, but I like the overall plot so far. I'll be looking to see what happens.
Sorry. ^ Grammar mistakes bother me. But I do agree with what he said in you're never alone. Great job again, I like the second verse the best.
Your longest ever? Well it is really good! You should write long poems more often. I like them. Again, great job.
Nymph. I love this poem. Hell, I love all your poems. I really should get to typing and posting some of my own becuase I write them at school all the time. Great job on this one!
Wow! That's really good. I like the effects used and how they fit with the music. Can't wait to see it finished.
OMG Reptar you look amazing. And I think I have that same blue cami with white polka dots. XD I had a winter dance last night and I gots pictureess. I did have an orange dress but my kitty puked on it so I had to borrow a boring black one from my friend. But my stupid camera is deciding it is funny to not work so they won't be up for a while....
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I think I was like 63 or something of that sort.
I almost cried at the end of the 6th Harry Potter book when Dumbledore died. That was sooooo sad! I don't usually cry while reading books though.
NO, YOU DID NOT MENTION THAT. Imma read it now. XD
OMFG you're so lucky. Yes, Dark Blue is my favorite song by them. I just love it. I wish I went to one of their concerts.
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ZOMG NYMPHY YOUR POEM IS SO LONG! But I love it. Great job. Oh wow. I love how it ends. *huggles*
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