Well, I check my PMs kind of by default becuase they kind of pop if I have new ones. Then I see who out of my friends are online and then I just look at different threads that appeal to my I guess. I somehow always end up creeping back to the Spam Zone even when I try not to.
That computer isn't my main one. I have more than one. But anyway, thanks.
Nope, I've never gotten detentions. My dad teaches at my school so if I did I'd kind of be in huge trouble.
=D That's an amazing thing to say.
You got the beginning wrong. It's.. "Now this is a story all about how my life got flipped, turned upside down" XD
Oh, it's tough when a good friend moves away. Do you still talk to this person? I hope you were able to keep in touch, becuase judging by this poem you missed them very much. Great job.
Awww, I'm sure you'll do GREAT. I remember my first play I was soooo nervous but everything turned out just fine. You'll do so good. I really liked the style of this one, by the way. Each line was shorter and I liked that.
Well quick doesn't necessarily mean bad or depthless. If you're really strongly feeling some emotion than you probably would write about them quickly. Still good job all the same.
Yes, I realize that, and I know it wasn't supposed to be. And I understand what you're trying to say. This is by far the longest, deepest, and probably the most well written poem I've seen on this website. Good job.
This is really random and hilarious. LOL. I love the "I sing a little rap. I wish I could erase the phrase "rap is crap"" GX you rock.
This is amazing! I love your poems, Chaser007. They're so meaningful and have a lot of depth. Even if they are talking about something sad you still wind up pulling them off. Great Job! I give you five stars! XD PS: Check your reputation. :3
The lyrics for it are great. Does it have any sort of melody on music or just in your head? If you could post a video of you actually singing it or at least post the notes for it or a recording that would be really cool. Good Job.
Good job. I like the idea for a poem about going to bed. You did it well, it's not something that many could do. Two thumbs up + some rep for you!
Okay, that's understandable, but even with the fact that you wanted to emphasize rushing you could have described the character's thought process and stuff a little more because you put it in first person so if you did so it wouldn't make actual time pass in the story. IDK It's just a suggestion. This story is still off to a good start.
That's good to know. Does it relate directly or just metaphorically? BTW, my favorite line in this is How can I save millions when I can't save myself? It really speaks to me. GREAT Job. Again. XD
Har, you're welcome again, but I must say that one thing I like about your poems is that they are all serious but not depressing and stuff. Like you have the serious style down perfectly becuase you don't sound depressing. And that's really hard to do. Good job!
XD Well that's good becuase metaphors rock. My favorite one from this poem is::: At the end of each year, my life takes shelter. <3
XD It's funny to say thank you for enjoying, becuase it's usually the opposite. But to continue the trend, I'll say you're welcome, And add that I really like the 3rd verse of the poem.
You're welcome. I love the subjects you pick for them.
You spelled Angst wrong XD
