YAY! RIKU! XD Sorry. I like Riku. And that's a perfect last name for him. Anyways, its really good so far. I like your style of writing. But you make it seem like Riku doesn't care about Sora at all, and that seems a bit out of character. But that's my only complaint. This is amazing. Continue!!
Err...I suppose it is good, but you really need much more than a few sentences to get a real prologue and story. Try writing a little more, becuase even a prologue should be a little longer than that.
OMG!!! The FF8 stuff totally cracked me up. And I'm SOO excited to see Kairi fight the Organization members XD HOMGUHAFF2UPDATESOON!
We're getting a bit off topic here, guys, this is not supposed to be about Ven in relation to Sora.
Wow, those are pretty cool. The PSP one is especially convincing, although since you can put images on the PSP and view them in full screen mode and you just happened to find a picture of the "menu" the effect is kind of ruined. Only thing is, Something about Mickey being the main focus seemed wrong. The 358/2 days one wouldn't even be good if they did use the right title considering the fact that the image the used for the Organization is a poor quality picture taken at TGS.
I'll try to ignore that very strange spelling of resemblance and get that actual meaning of your message. Well, there are already multiple threads about Ven. As for him being there in the picture, that could mean anything. Just becuase he is there does not mean that he lived there. In the screen shots before KH2 there were lots of pictures of Sora in other worlds. That doesn't mean he lived in those worlds. Ven just visited Destiny Islands in the past. Sora, Riku, and Kairi don't know about everyone who ever goes to Destiny Island. As for Ven being Sora's father, I highly doubt it, but I don't want to get to deep into discussion on that issue since there are already multiple threads about it.
Thanks. I'm kind of glad that chapter 8 is Riku's, because I know where I'm going with the story, but the next Sora/Kairi chapter seems to be hard to put into to words. (I've already started trying) Thank you, I appreciate it. XD!! Thanks! Yeah, Sometimes I purposely do cliff hangers at the end of chapters. It gets people to check back for updates more.
Amazing! Amazing, Amazing, Amazing! I never would've thought of Kairi going on her own adventure. It's a great concept. I'll definitely be looking to see how it turns out. Awww. *kicks school* I hate it too. Last week I couldn't work on any of my stories becuase I had to write a narrative.
Perhaps, but it could be becuase they don't want to reveal what the new keyblades would be. Remember the promotional images for KH2 and KH? Sora only used Kingdom Key in those.
Thanks. Sometimes I wonder how long the story itself will end up being, considering the fact that I'm already working on chapter 8 and I'm nowhere NEAR the end of the whole thing. XD
Alright, well, you've got a good story going here, but even though you told not to ask this, You really should give some background knowledge as to how it got that why. When did Riku and Cloud become nobodies and join the organization? What happened to Sora and Kairi? Why is TWTNW is ruins? I know you said not to ask, but you also asked for suggestions, and to make a good story, you need to know what happened before the events of the story to make sense of what the story is. (It would be like watching Advent Children without playing FFVII. You just wouldn't get it.) Maybe a little grammar and spelling mistakes here and there as well, but other than that, it's a great concept, I'd like to see it continue.
This is really great, and funny. You have to continue! And LOL, "they hadn't gone into any of their own Final Fantasies".... XD
Yes! Finally Chapter 7! You know what that means....The next chapter is a Riku chapter! *confetti party* I felt a bit rushed on this one. I'm not sure if I like it or not. Anyway, here you go, more notes and such at the end. Kairi stared at Sora. He shook his head and began pacing. "Okay, okay, Let's take this one step at a time" he said, taking deep breaths. "You think that was Namine's memory?" Kairi nodded again. "Are you sure?" Kairi looked down at the ground, poking at a seashell with her shoe, obviously avoiding the question. Sora waited. After a moment, he said. "Kairi, look at me." She looked up at him, and their eyes met. She closed them immediately and then nodded. Now it was Sora's turn to look down. They both stood there, looking down, for about a minute. Then Kairi looked up at him again, a scared look in her eye. "You know, Kai, It would be really helpful if you would talk." Half-joked Sora. "I'm sorry. It's just all so overwhelming." She said, her eyes beginning to tear up. "Riku's gone and we're stuck guessing about something huge we have hardly any information on." Sora was torn. He wanted to hug her; to hold her and tell her everything was okay, but the uncertainness of these things being true inside of him was holding him back. She looked down, and so did he, but before it could develop into another long moment of silence, Kairi addressed the issue pressing both of their minds. "Do you think that your promise has to do with Roxas?" "I don't know. Roxas doesn't remember being in the Organization. ?" responded Sora, as Kairi shook her head. "So I only have his memories of after that." "Wait a minute." Kairi said, suddenly staring at Sora. "You have his memories?" Sora looked at her like she was insane, and jumped up onto the tree, laying on his back. "Of course. Well, the memories of after his time in the Organization. Don't you have Namine's?" he asked, already knowing the answer simply because she asked the question at all. "No." Kairi said, now jumping up on the tree as well, even though saying this was unnecessary. "But why would you remember and not me?" Sora rubbed his eyes in confusion. "How are we supposed to figure this out? We're the only two cases of this ever. And we're just two teenagers with nobody to ask-" "Sora! That's it!" Kairi interrupted, feeling like this day was completely full of realizations. "What's it?" Sora asked again, feeling some intense De-ja-Vu. "We CAN ask someone! We can ask King Mickey!" she said, positively bursting with glee. "And just how are we gonna do tha-" Sora said, but before he could finish, Kairi pulled out the bottle in which they had received the last message. "We can write him a note and send it back!!" she said, looking absolutely sure of herself, and then jumping of the tree and running off of the islet, away from the sunset again. "Alright." Sora yelled to her as he got off of the tree and ran after her. "But there's no guarantee it will work. It could not work both ways-" but he didn't finish because Kairi was too far away and too convinced that it would work to hear him. When he caught up to her, she was in the cove, and she had taken out a pencil and paper from the bag around her waist. "How do you fit that in there?" Sora said, looking from the paper to the pouch in astonishment. "Does it matter? Help me figure out what to write." Kairi said impatiently. After a half an hour of many ideas and concepts for the letter being thrown around, Sora and Kairi's combined efforts pulled through and they had created a letter. (Kairi did the writing; she had much better handwriting than Sora.) "Dear King Mickey, We are very confused. Sora called his keyblade the morning after Riku left and destroyed the secret place. We both ended up passing out. I had a very strange "dream" (for lack of a better word) involving Sora, a Castle, and a promise. The weird part is that I passed out before Sora, and when he was about to go unconscious, he had a thought that he made a promise to protect me from a shooting star when we were little; a promise that was in my dream. We were thinking about who's memory it could've been, and then I thought of Namine. This lead to us discovering that Sora holds all of Roxas' memories besides his time in Organization XIII, but I hold none of Namine's. We were so stuck here, we had to ask somebody for at least some sort of explanation. Please get back to us soon. We're dying for news. -Kairi" Kairi eagerly read the letter aloud and Sora nodded. Then she rolled it up and stuck it in the bottle, sealing the cork on top as tight as she could. She ran over to the waters edge and stuck it in, and they both watched it bob out in and out of the water until it could no longer be seen. Then, suddenly, Sora looked at Kairi. "Kairi!" He said, sounding confused. "What?" she replied, wanting to know why he had said her name. "I think there's another way to get answers that we didn't think of." "And what is that?" she said, confused again. "Well, I don't know if it would work, we've never tried to do it, well at least I haven't, but-" "What do you think we should do Sora?" Asked Kairi, impatient. The sun had almost completely set now, and the moon had come out. However, there were no clouds tonight, and the moon was full, so they had enough light to see. "Well...we could try contacting our nobodies." "Contacting our....what?" Kairi asked, more confused than ever. "You know! I could try talking to Roxas and you to Namine." "And what would that do?" "Well we could see if that memory was Namine's, and you could ask what it was of, and-" Kairi still looked a bit confused. "How could we do that?" she asked. "How should I know? I told you I've never tried." Sora said, thinking again. "Maybe just...close your eyes....and...think of something you want to ask them...and then... I don't know where this is going!" he said, flustered by the massive amounts of ideas and information coming in one day. "No, no, I think you're getting somewhere with that." Kairi encouraged, closed her eyes, and then continued his instructions herself. "Just concentrate on them, focus on talking to them......." she said, her voice trailing off. She was silent now. Sora didn't know what to take of this. He hoped it meant that it worked, and then closed his eyes and attempted the same thing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (OOS: These two events happen at the exact same time) (BIS) "You've finally come." "Namine?" "Yes." "What's going on?" "I thought you'd ask that. What do you need to know?" "First I need to know about my dream. When I was unconscious." "Oh yes. That." "Was that your memory?" Namine didn't answer. "I don't think I can tell you that." Namine sighed. "I'm sorry." "But why?" "For Sora's sake." And Kairi abruptly opened her eyes. "Roxas? Roxas?" "What?" "Woah!" "What do you mean Woah?" "Sorry, I just, wasn't expecting it to work, that's all." "Well it's about time you tried. That promise wasn't mine." "It wasn't?" "Nope." "But....It wasn't mine." "Maybe it was." "What do you mean?" "What I mean is Namine knows more than you think. Ask Kairi." "I'm confused." "I keep on telling Namine to tell Kairi so she can tell you, because apparently I'm not allowed-" "Wait a minute, you can communicate with Namine?" "Of course." "Do you know why I have your memories but Kairi doesn't?" Roxas hesitated. "That's a touchy subject." "What do you mean?" "What I mean is you won't know until Namine is ready to let you know. It's hard for her" finished Roxas, with a touch of sympathy in his voice. And Sora abruptly opened his eyes, turning to stare at Kairi, more confused than ever, and dying to know if Namine had told her anything. Just to let you know, Namine didn't, obviously, tell Kairi anything. Sora just doesn't know that yet. And If the dialog between Sora and Roxas is confusing to anyone, I'll add and R and S by each phrase if you just let me know. Oh, and OOS means out of story, and BIS means back in story....
Hmm. I'd say probably Demmy. I'd like to see an all-out battle between Demyx and Axel. That'd be cool. But I don't think you play against other characters, so just Demyx then.
Endless could be the name, yes. But just becuase the name could be endless does not mean that if it is it is related to heartless and nobodies. An Endless could be created in a completely different way for all we know.
You're right. Didn't Xigbar also make a comment about Sora being "half the hero all the others were" ? Maybe that's why he knows about "the others"? Becuase he was there?
No, you fight Sephiroth in the Dark Depths. They're shown in the Great Maw, the area before the Dark Depths that you have to pass through to get there after saving. And there's a thread about that shadow. I think it's aqua too. And I suppose it would be cool to see Cloud and Leon and stuff as kid. But Imagine what they'd make Aeris look like XD
Yeah. Maybe we'll somehow find out the real names of members 7-12? I would like that. Although I would still probably like the game if Organization XIII is completely unrelated, which is probably more likely, becuase of the fact that it is in the past.
*nods in agreement* Although, It's hard to figure out a weapon when you don't even have an image of who the character is..
That's a stupid reason not to get an iPod. They are superior.
