uh.....wat ?
well...that sauna bench was pretty hot.
Spoiler
YOU'RE BEASTLYISH. a YEAH....
"I was playing DOA4 right before I went to bed... strangely enough, I dreamed about 358/2 days."
The lost pop of a skipped beat flows through like a shock My heart drops at the loss of reaction the forced stop slows my ride to the speed of a fraction walking, I cant get traction and the emptiness hangs over me like a cloak I choke Something I wrote in 15 minutes...its my first poem on khv, but for awhile I had been wanting to write one here. Recently I lost my ipod at school and this is kind of how I feel about that. (Even if its a bit exaggerated) Thoughts? Advice? EDIT: This actually looks pretty bad now that I look at it again D:
I really like the idea you had here with the constant changing of feelings between your mind and your heart. I guess the one thing I would work on is metaphors, similes, etc. since you dont use too many of them and overall it makes the poem appear flat/with out feeling. Good start though! I'd like to read more of your poems.
Madvillainy - Madvillain St. Elsewhere - Gnarls Barkley Viva la Vida - Coldplay yeah...kinda flat.
expect a visit at 2:33 in the morning John. uh... on your facebook that is.... yeah.
shaq attack strikes back. That tree is such a dirty talker.
oooh In religion class, my teacher said our assignment was to hug a and tree and write about it.
soooooo borrrrredddd.
I dont get why people get annoyed at this. Its not like they're trying to marry you, they're just adding you to a useless list of accumulated members who, the only real benefit you get from adding them (that you wouldnt get if you didnt add them) is a goddamned plus sign next to their name whenever they're online. Stop setting your standards so high. (/rant)
lolo photoshopped
I havent heard it in 5 years D: I love that feeling though when you hear something thats familiar its just been a long time and you're like "ooooooohhhhhhh."
Samurai Jack and Megas XLR currently hold this position. Its like number 3 though.
Loved that show...
MUST BE THE MONEYYYY. (respect for reference getters)
Ultra Violet
"damn troublemaker."
