I didn't think he was interested in the rp, at first.
Invisibility, that's it? he should at least give his sword some sort of power. What a does his True form look like? Remember, Angelen are very...
Ask him if it's alright for me to take a look at it. I'll give him some suggestions.
OOC: Why thank you Lil' I like to think so myself. ;) This is like the only plan that worked out perfectly, lol. It was probably because nobody saw it coming. Ok everyone. One thing that I would like to clear up. The demonic realm is not connected to a demon's powers. their powers are their own. Therefore they do not get stronger with the release of the seals. We are already going to get more demons. The last thing we need is for them to get even stronger, lol
I think we are still waiting for her lol. she should be on during the weekend.
I edited my last post
"It was Saclem!" Kellington growled. "Saclem, our 'beloved' King." Kellington began ranting again. "Why bother even asking me for advice if you are just going to turn it down and come up with a plan that is completely idiotic? And then you refused to listen to my protests. Damn you, Yefian! Damn you! You've doomed your country! I warned you when the lizards began their raids. But you didn't lift a finger! Baflee has become another Ilianam!" ----------------------- Username- Pezz Name (full)- Nevirz Race- Demon Powers (if any)- Super human strength. Has an excellent memory. Has no true human form. In his demon form his voice brings terror to all who listen, He doesn’t bruise easily, and contact with his body burns the skin. Age- ??? Gender- Male Side- Evil Weapon (if any)- None Background (Go into detail please! The more, the better!)- Nevirz was born in the Demonic Realm and was freed when the first crystal broke. Since then he has been hiding among the humans in Baflee. Since the moment he was free, he sought a way to free his brethren. After a month of research he learned about the legend of the Crystal Seals. Upon learning this he devised a plan. He visited the King of Baflee and kidnapped him. He then tortured the king to gain information on the legend and on the King himself. The King, Saclem, tried to resist at first, but it didn’t take long for Nevirz to break Saclem. Saclem told him everything including the location of one of the crystals. Having no more use for the king, Nevirz killed Saclem. Saclem told Nevirz that an enchantment had been placed on the Crystal. It could only be held by a human unless the human gave it to something else willingly. The one thing that Saclem didn’t tell Nevirz was that he needed a key to unlock the secret passage. Without the key, Nevirz was unable to open the chamber. So he disguised himself as the Saclem and patiently searched for it. Finally he found the key, allowing him to unlock the chamber. Which brings us to the here and now. Appearance- Looks like a muscular human with horns and fangs as well as no skin and eyes. Nevirz stared at the Crystal in his hand. he had waited too long for this. Holding the Crystal in both hands, Nevirz shattered the Crystal to bits. Upon breaking, A shock wave spread throughout the land. --------------- Far away, all across the land of Demoir, Rifts to the Demonic Relm opened. Some lasted for a second, others, little more than a minute. Out of those rifts came some new Demons, And something else............... The Angelens all agreed that now was the time to act. A new war was beginning, and It's first battle was to be fought in the City of Cheslidair. OOC: Okay people! We need two new Angelens of the non Angel class.
Or we think we know everything, lol. Yup! that's the interesting thing about Rps.
Yup, That's why I've been keeping details on the king vague.
Saclem asked for his general's advice. that's where that scene stopped. What happen was that The general came up with something different. The...
I never said Kellington came up with the plan. I only made it sound like he did.
"I'm sorry.... Cheslidair's defenses?" Kellington clenched his fists. "You called this a defense?! THIS IS NO DEFENSE! This, here, is suicide!" Kellington couldn't hold it in anymore. "DAMN HIM! What was he thinking! He has doomed us all!" ---------------- Saclem's grin deepen. "Thank you, Biffem." Saclem repeated. "Thank you for being the gullible idiot that you are." Biffem was in shock. "Why?" he asked in a voice just above a whisper. Saclem's skin and eyes began to melt. "How pathetic you humans are to so blindly follow your king's orders." Biffem's eyes widened with fear. Saclem's teeth turned into fangs. "To so blindly follow orders that were, obviously, suicidal." Biffem's eyes began to dull. He could feel his strength leaving him. Horns sprouted from Saclem's head. "To so blindly follow the orders from a king, who has long been dead." Biffem dropped the torch in his hand. Saclem's voice became Demonic. It was a voice that shook you to the bone. "To even follow the orders of a Demon." Biffem fell face flat on the floor, dead. The Demon chuckled to himself. "You humans truly are pathetic."
sooooooooooo..... What do you think of my last post?
OOC: Quel is in ruins and right now, nobody is there. BIC: "General Kellington!" Kellington turned to find a soldier coming towards him. He was escorting a Wolf... or was it a crossbreed? Kellington looked over the crossbreed with irritation. He then fixed his gaze back on the soldier. "What is it?" "This Crossbreed wishes to speak with you." Answered the soldier. "I'm a little busy at the moment...." Said Kellington. --------------- Biffem stared at the dull glowing crystal in wonder. It lay on top of a pedestal, in the middle of the secret chamber. "This is what you require me to look after?" asked Biffem curiously. "It is." was all the King had to say. Biffem went to take the Crystal from the pedestal. He turned it over a few times, in his hands, before walking back towards the king. "Let me see it." Said Saclem. Biffem gazed at it a moment longer before handing over to the king. Saclem took the crystal and examined it. He then began to grin. Slowly he looked up at Biffem. "Thank you, Biffem." Said Saclem still grinning. "You're wel-" Biffem stopped in mid-sentence. There was a sharp pain in the center of his chest. Biffem looked down to see that he had been stabbed with a dagger. Biffem stared at his king, in disbelief, before falling to his knees. OOC: Surprise! Surprise! bet you didn't see that one coming. Heh heh heh.
Saclem stared out of one of the castle's north windows. Fire rained down from the sky setting buildings alight. Saclem knew they were really arrows lit in flame, but from this distance, it just looked like it was raining fire. He had just been informed that the army had surrounded the kingdom. The situation looked grim. Saclem looked away from the window and stared at the tapestry on the wall behind him instead. It pictured an image of an ancient war. "Interesting work of art, isn't it my liege?" Saclem nearly jumped in surprise. He looked to his left to find a Biffem staring at the tapestry as well. "Yes, it is indeed." Saclem agreed. Biffem was still staring at the tapestry. "The soldiers think that we are all going to die. What do you think?" "I think...." said Saclem slowly, "I think that I have another job for you, Biffem." "And what might that be?" said Biffem while still staring at the tapestry. Saclem began to approach the tapestry. He took another glance at it before tearing it down. Biffem just stared. His expression unchanging. Saclem began feeling the wall. finally he stopped and pulled out a loose brick. Behind the brick was a Keyhole. Saclem frowned at it before pulling out a key. "Behind this wall lies a secret room that holds an ancient treasure. Your job will be to take it and run. You must not let anyone have it. You are my most loyal servant, Biffem. I trust you to perform your job with excellence." Biffem nodded. "You can count on me, Sire." Saclem nodded and inserted the key. He then turned the key and then let go of it. A section of the wall, to the king's left, slid beneath the floor. Biffem grabbed a nearby torch. "Allow me to lead the way, Sire. We have no way of knowing what is in there." Biffem waited for Saclem to nod before entering the passage way, with Saclem following close behind him.
OOC: You didn't discuss this idea with me Riku. If I were to have a sword like that, It wouldn't have a name such as that, and it would be a normal sword with a power different than that. Let's leave this for later if at all.
OOC: Ok, that's a load of BS Death fix it NOW or you get kicked. lightening doesn't do that to metal. I mean hello, Lightening Rods. To do that would require a slightly prolonged blast and also Jacob would be at risk of massive burns on his body. Not to mention the fact that you are sending electricity into metal that is touching Jacob's skin. That, right there, is suicide.
ack! you changed it on me again?! lol I'm doing good! I'm glad that school is out but now I have nothing to do. :-/
"General Kellington! General Kellington!" yelled a soldier in a panic. "We are under attack from all sides. Leechers are setting up latters on the south side, and Lizards are scaling the east and west Walls! That's not all! We're getting rained down on by hundreds of arrows from the north. Some of them are on fire. The city is burning." "They came faster than I expected." said Kellington. He then turned to the soldier. "Archers should focus on the north wall. Swords men to the south. use our wall defenses for the east and west. How much oil have we prepared?" "Not much, sir. We didn't have much time." said the soldier. "Use it sparingly then." Said Kellington sternly. "I'm going to head to the castle. I want you to get someone to send word to the king that it has begun." "Why are you heading away from the battle?" "Just do as I said." Kellington said impatiently.
OOC: Nobody knows of the mystery demon except the leechers and Karchit. He has kept his presence unknown.