Ok, before I start to get into details, I want to inform you that the story plot that we will create will use the desouls (a kh-vids user created enemy) as the game's major enemy. I thank you all who participated by helping to come up with ideas. The desoul is nearing the final stages of completion. only a few bitty details remain. we can finish with all that while working on this new thread. The title pretty much says it all. on this thread we will establish various ideas for our kh3 made up story plot. seeing that story plots can end up being quite long, I will construct a wiki page where I will post everything that has been decided upon. As of right now, I will be in charge of the wiki and will be assisted in maintaining it along with StarSeeker99, Kme92, and lilbueno. any ideas that are agreed upon will be posted on the wiki along all with the name or names of whoever came up with the idea. Edit: Below is the link for the wiki page Wiki here For additional details on desouls, you can either view the faqs page or the desoul page on the wiki. you can also checkout the first post on the thread called, "Create the next kingdom hearts enemy (Group effort)". the tags are: enemies, enemy creation, game, kingdom hearts. The thread is located in the bbs section. the rules for this thread are simple: -No spamming -be polite about ideas -try being original with the story. -be sure to be able to explain any complex ideas thought up. -try to make the story have as much of a kh feel as possible. All right now that we have the rules straight, Here's the kind of ideas we need. First we need a basic story plot and a time period. I'm thinking that this story should put an end to the heartless trilogy. but that's up for discussion. once we have a basic story plot, we need a villain or villains, Disney worlds, Original worlds, The desouls world, main characters, playable characters, party members (if any), etc. This will take a lot of work but I want to see if we can even come up with ideas for the game play and bosses. We also need to come up with what you unlock/lock in each world, and how to access the keyhole to whatever we are unlocking/locking. for example, in kh1 you locked the keyholes to the heart of the world. these were found in a significant place in each world. In KH2 you unlocked the "walls" that separated the worlds. this could be done with the help of a significant item in each world. Any disney worlds used should be able to be tied to the plot in some way. Do not use too many worlds where you transform. too much of something gets old. any additional info that I come up with will be posted in this first post. As we work together to create the story I may from time to time ask someone, who has helped a great deal, to assist StarSeeker99, Kme92, lilbueno, and myself in maintaining the wiki. Do not ask us to help with the management please. The other managers and I will discuss alone who we think we should ask for additional help. -------- now that that is done I will start with the first idea. This could be a basic idea for the story. The heartless are still about, causing trouble. Sora and the others are thrown into another quest to put an end to the heartless. while in the middle of fighting the heartless. the new enemy, Desouls, make appear and attack the heartless, which are basically just a heart. The desouls devour the heartless' will and in doing so the heartless/hearts die. upon defeating the heartless, the desouls set their eyes on Sora and attack. A new threat has appeared. The worlds are in danger once again!
Wait, what? well, first off they aren't more powerful versions of heartless. Desouls are completely different from heartless. second off, when a new enemy is introduced to the game, then they should be the major enemy. it only makes sense. Also, only one new type of enemy should be introduced per game (like bbs, kh, kh2). So if the story were to come soon after kh2, then that game would act as a closure to the heartless trilogy, meaning that the rein of the heartless would end in that game. This, however gives me an interesting Idea plot wise. It's time to create the thread for the storyline. the main idea for the desouls is complete, only little details remain. We can take care of that while creating the story. oh one more thing, to make things a tad more organize please be sure to place your posts in the appropriate. I appreciate your ideas, it just makes things easier if they are in the right thread. at the moment there is no storyline thread (which is where this one would have gone) so I'll make one now. Nice Idea, I'll add it to the first post.
The problem with combining ideas is that the death will take too long. even number 2 would probably be a bit excessive unless it was done all at once. the death should be fast so that the player won't get distracted while fighting. the flames would have to burn up fast. we should try to be consistent here with the other kingdom hearts enemy deaths. consistency is key to games.
Looks like people are participating in the poll. I was kinda scared that we would get too many people, but everything seems to be working fine :)
that maybe a tad too much.... lol :) I'm glad to see people are voting! If only we had more votes. oh well, this is only the first day and I think we have plenty votes for day 1.
Yay, this thread came back to life!!!! ok umm.... hmmm... ok.... I would have to say... I give up, lol Dean yay! :D
axel of course!
I don't think that there is anything to worry about here unless you are keeping something back. I don't think there would be a problem with mentioning it either. but I may not be aware of the entire situation here, so I could be wrong.
I'm sorry, I was a bit rude there. It would be interesting if they did that, but I there are just a few things about that theory that could use some more thought. Sorry again. :)
We made it up. :D everything about it is in the thread that I talk about in the first post. to get the basic gist, all you need to do is read the first post on that thread I spoke of.
hmmm... can you go in to more detail? I'm having a difficult time thinking what that could be. ------- Alright I made a few slight changes to the design. very minor. I'm wondering whether we should make it more flame like by getting rid of 2 fingers on each hand and 2 toes on each foot. View attachment 2278
If that were the case, then why aren't they still around? No, I think that that is a tad too obvious. the creator is much more creative than that. but who knows, perhaps you're right.
ok I'll add the shattered death to the poll. Its in the creativity corner. the tags are for the most part the same except that there is an extra one: desoul the name is "KHV users have created the next Kh enemy, Desouls. how does it look when they die?" Edit: It's not letting me edit the poll :( I added the Shattered glass to the list on the first post so just post the number 8 if you like that the most. I'm sorry, I was a bit hasty there.
I have been working together with StarSeeker99, Kme92, and others to create the next KH enemy. We are almost done! what we need now is to decide on how it looks when the desouls die. before you vote please read about what the desoul is. the topic can be found in the birth by sleep section. the name is "Create the next kingdom hearts enemy (group effort)" the tags are: enemies, enemy creation, game, kingdom hearts. The ideas listed after 9 are ideas listed for other. The following is the ideas we thought up so far (Idea number 8 on this list I forgot to add so just make a post and say number 8. please do the same for any ideas after number 9): 1 - Going up in flames (of any color) 2 - Turning to dust that is quickly taken by the wind 3 - Simply vanish quickly (like in the KH games) 4 - Disappearing instantly, during a single frame 5 - Evaporating (like the Organisation members) 6 - Turning into a sort of gas which quickly dissipates 7 - Stay motionless for a few seconds, becoming more and more transparent 8 - Shattering like glass (Like the monsters from Yu-Gi-Oh) 9 - Other (please specify) 10 - They explode with a high amount of light emitting. *ShiningDreams idea* 11 - Quick explosion with flames *StarSeeker99's idea* 12 - Have it's Elements of Life Visually Seperate (Heart, Body, Soul), then being Swallowed up by a Portal Underneath. *Brexen's idea* All the idea's here before 9, except 2, were StarSeeker99's ideas #2 was my idea personally I like the first Idea below is the look for the most common desoul. we are still working on it. The design was based on the idea that a desoul is similar to a flickering candle (more info on that is in the original thread). View attachment 2277
perhaps a very pale purple would do. let me play with it a bit. the shape of the eyes could also be subject to change to make the eyes look more empty I want to stay away from making these guys too evil, because remember that desouls are not necessarily evil. lol about the pikmin comment. :) I'll fiddle around with it. that was suppose to be like a flame on the end. remember the comparison I made with desouls and flickering candles? I wanted to give them that sort of feel. Perhaps these little guy should have only one form because they are weak at heart. As fore the death scene Let's take a poll using 1 - Going up in flames (of any color) 2 - Turning to dust that is quickly taken by the wind 3 - Simply vanish quickly (like in the KH games) 4 - Disappearing instantly, during a single frame 7 - Evaporating (like the Organisation members) 9 - Turning into a sort of gas which quickly dissipates 17 - Stay motionless for a few seconds, becoming more and more transparent 18 - Other (please specify) lol, yeah good ideas here. I think we should have Brexen here to make sure he's fine with these ideas. I don't want him to feel like the idea was stolen from him. also, we should try to keep the triad(d)s separate from the desouls for now. take note of your ideas for later.
Someone said that you may be interested in reading a thread I started. It's called Create the next kingdom hearts enemy (group effort). He told me...
Wow, that's quite a lot to deal with... hmmm.... Do you move around a whole lot? by senior year do you mean collage or high school? If you are in high school then their is no reason for you to feel bad about being a virgin. I'm nearly 21, and I'm still a virgin. sigh.... kinda does suck to be in such situations though... but I don't think the virgin thing is the issue here. I don't drink, smoke or do drugs either. I think you are doing the right thing by that, and I respect you for it. Yes you may feel left out, but that doesn't mean you have to be left out. you can still go to parties with alcohol and not drink. you will be pressured more, but by refusing, you will only strengthen your resolve to not drink. Me I'm not the party kind of person, as a matter of fact, I prefer not having parties even on my birthday. But I don't think that this here is the issue either. You said you were lonely. Get a facebook. If you don't check those kind of things, then just make an effort to. you moved? join a club at your new school. Maybe a video game club or something. That is the perfect place to make friends. You need to put forth an effort here. Drinking in self pity will only make it worse. You have to make the best of what you got. Keep on walking. Look for a new tomorrow. It's hard. it will always be hard to leave behind what you knew, but that is how you survive in this world. You have already made an effort here by asking for help. Now you need to take action. good luck! :)
Ok, so I decided to do a little sketch for a Desoul in Photoshop. This is the basic look that I thought up. It probably could use some work but I think I did a decent job. This could be the most common form of Desoul. Perhaps we should just give this guy a name that doesn't start with De. View attachment 2275 lol, thanks! :D Who's Mike though?
great idea, but first we should have a few other ideas, at least one more but preferably two. We should probably post it in a different section of the site. I'll look for a more appropriate location. I like the name. I'm assuming that these guys will be similar to org 13. But lets not get too ahead of ourselves. we need more details and ideas before moving ahead to names and such. We should start with this "Source" what exactly is it? can is it an extra part of life? No, it can't possibly be an extra part of life since life consists of 3 basic elements. Triads would be above life. they would be more than life. In a sense more god like. that being the case, we can start defining this Source of yours. It can't be something like magic, because normal life forms already can use magic. Considering that they are god-like, I think it would be reasonable to assume that they can manipulate the elements that comprise the universe in a similar fashion to how the org members would manipulate an element. but instead, they should be able to manipulate elements around them. For example, the can't produce water out of thin air but the can manipulate the water in the environment around them. If this were to be so, then the Source would refer to matter. Source is what makes up the universe. they have the ability to shape the world. oh and I too wonder if these guys should maintain their human form. perhaps those with better control can maintain their shape. So what do you think? does that sound good?
I would just wear it till the doctor says to take it a few days even after the pain is gone. you know just to be safe.
