OOC: Fruits Baskett.........The chinese zodiac show....
OOC: yeah....what happened to Star? BIC: Xane saw Geryl smoking a pipe. "Hojan. Old guy Hojan!" he yelled randomly.
OOC: Since when is Skinnar an elder? BIC: Elder Rentu? Venture thought.
Nice 1st chapter........Nice little details...... I think this is gonn go well....
OOC: I'll be sure to check it out... BIC: Venture walked down the hall and noticed Rentu Skinnar....
OOC: What's going on?
OOC: Once again it's up to me to get the plot moving......... And how did everyone else like The tale of Xane pts. 1 & 2? Go back a ew pages to see them....... BIC: "Hojan? He's a bratty little snot, not an old geezer.." Xane said. "Yes, but I'm telling you the truth." Venture said. "I'll see for myself. Does anyone else know this junk?" Xane said. "Vecked." Venture said. "Oh great. Vecked." Xane said sarcastically. "He won't help..."
OOC: I require a detailed explanation.....
OOC: I'm not sure about that last part.......anyway in the next chapter in the Xane story a knight will appear and say that line......but seriously....d you understand what happened in the story so far....?
OOC: Wow Nulix leading a new normal life is really letting the audience think he's more interesting. Please note that there only was a small hnt of sarcasm in that statement.
OOC: Upon reading that it's out of 1 I suppose your right....
OOC: Eh? What a terrible score........
OOC: That's not in part one.....I'm to impatient to wait to do part two...and so..... BIC: The tale of Xane pt. 2 The small boy.....had become a young man....and he was no longer small....... "Pay attention!" The swordsmith said. "My apologies....." the young man said. "You are skilled but if you want me to train you in thr proper art of swordsmanship then you must pay attention!" the swordsmith said. "Wouldn't it be easier to just use your own sty-" the young man began.. "You must first learn the basics!" the swordsmith spat. "My apologies.........where's Miss. Swan?" the young man asked. "You'd best keep yer fantasies of marrian' that one to yerself lad." the swordsmith said. "Can't I just relax a bit?" the young man said. "I think I-" "There is no relaxin'! ....boy sometimes I swear....you think like a pirate..." the swordsmith said. "A pirate?" the young man said. "I wonder why ol' Ms. Errow mentioned those stories of pirates to you..." the swordsmith said. "Before she left to who knows where..." the young man said. "Knowin' how much she loved pirates she'd probably be headin toward Tortuga." the swordsmith said. "Tortuga eh?" the young man said running off...... "Hey! where are you goin'?" the swordsmith said. The young man snuck on a ship and waited..... He was sure this was the right ship. It was full of rum. Rum was bound to head to Tortuga at some point..... After a long wait he heard loud yelling, people fighting , and glass breaking....Tortuga. Walking around he found nothing else to do but go inside a bar......He didn't drink and he didn't know how to gamble so he felt kind of awkward just sitting there. Waiting for something..... A bar brawl.....this was obviously bound to happen....The young man at first wanted nothing to do with it. The fight was spreading throughout the entire bar now.....aat one point a man hit the bartending woman at the counter for no apparent reason. That was it for the young man... He joined in on the fight. It was a long fight. As long as those kind of fights get. Then he was pulled away...... "Say there boy...what d'ye think ye be doin'?" a pirate said. "Why do you wanna know?" the young man said. "Well fer one yer fightin' like yer a pirate....but yer only a chi-" the pirate said. "I ain't a child..." the young man said. "Very well then...what are ye?" the pirate asked. "I.....don't know yet...." the young man said looking down. "Then how about becomin' a pirate, You'd get everything ou'd evr want. Food, money, women, glory..." "Me? A pirate?" the young man asked. "As long as you don't stay so...serious..." the pirate said. "What's wrong with me bein' serious?" the young man said. "A pirate can't be free if he doesn't joke around a little..." another pirate added. "Joke around, eh?" The young man pondered...... OOC: The next one will be better..This one is okay...
OOC: .....Vecked...Wing? BIC: Venture looked in schock at the body of the dead Elder Hojan. ********** The tale of Xane pt. 1 "Hide!" One of the girls said. "I dun wanna!" the small boy said. "We have to! We're under attack!" another girl said. "But I wanna watch t.v!!!!" the small boy said. "Silence! Do you want to be heard?" their father asked. "Where's mama?" the small boy asked. "She went into the escape pod...like the you all are about to do..." their father said. The scene was chaos. 5 million lightyears above any known world and a battle was taking place. The ship was under attack. And the leader of these attackers was none other than the brotherhood member....Novice.. Unlike his seemingly rediculous name, Novice was ruthless.... "Novice....." the father said with a growl. "why are you here?" "Time....." Novice pondered..."The clock is always tickig' but will it ever stop ticking...and just rewind?" "I know what your after..." the father said. "And it will ruin everthing I've stood for!" "Truth? Justice? Such heroic nonsense..." Novice sighed. "Well, one winner one loser, I suppose you should get thee kiddies out of here." "I was just in the act.." the father said as his daughters went in the pods and blasted off. The boy went inside a pod too... "No! Get out! I have to set the coordinates for your pod!" the father yelled. Novice pressed the pod dispatch button and sent the boy flying off to parts unknown... "Papa!!!!!!he small boy yelled. "Son!!!!!" the father yelled not knowing what will happen... 1 hour..... 2 hours..... Plop...... a splashing noise came from a landing pod. "Eh? Ehat was that?" a guard asked. "Dunno? It.....hey what's that!?" another guard asked. "I don't know....but that's a child inside of it!" the guard said. "Then get him out!" the other guard said.. "Hey! Don't tell me what to do!" the guard said. "Excuse me, but what are you two...Oh my goodness!" an old woman said as she looked at the boy and pulled him out of the pod. "What's your name...?" the kindly woman asked. The boy told her his name and the woman sighrd. "What a strange accent...are you from the New world?" the woman asked. "Huh?" the boy asked confused. "It's okay.....do you know where your parents are?"the woman asked. The boy shook his head. "Well we should find them then. But first , how about something to eat?" the woman said. "What do you like to eat?" "Food." The boy said. "Haha. what a good sense of humor you have! Welcome to Port Royal!" the woman said. OOC: Well....what do you all think?
I usually plan my thoughts out more when I'm speaking aloud. I never think when I post...(on the Spam Zone)
OOC: I feel sorry for Nulixjae though he eventually becomes a jerk..And the elder is Hojan!!!???? BIC: Venture listened in....Hojan Kyba.....Could it be that-? This is worse than I thought he thought.
So that's what's gonna happen, eh? Time to get to work then.... Xane thought.
I'm on a few....this one of course.., TFW2005..
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As long as people don't spam it, it could be pretty cool....
