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OOC : I look like a late teenager, actually. Saw that Yunsung picture I posted a link to? Or did you say "boy" on purpose?
As for the story... did you or did you not say "the more the better"? :D :D

We both live in GMT -5 then :)

OCC : I've made Trenyan a half wolf now. The exact same stroy, except I replaced "leecher" with "wolf". Makes more sense with the Wolf friendship, too.

I didn't notice the crossbreed leecher interdiction... I saw all of the other creatures, but missed the one I chose :)



BIC : "Ain't this interesting..." muttered Trenyan as he watched the man put a pile of gold on the innkeeper's counter. "For a man of his appearance, he sure is rich."
Trenyan looked closely at the man.
"Hmm...", he though "He's not a Cylian. But he might know about them."
Seeing that the man had obviously been travelling, Trenyan told himself that he'd only spend one night in this inn.
"It'd be unwise to attract attention on myself now. I'll see if I can speak to him tomorrow morning. Hm... this means getting up early enough, to catch him when he leaves."
And with that, Trenyan went back up to his room at the inn.

Trenyan had been travelling. His search for Cylians that may want or need a new home brought him far away from his home. "I may find someone once in a blue moon, but I know what's going on in the world, by travelling.", he though. Indeed, there has been some conflicts recently, but that's always the case. What proves that the conflicts of today will be those remembered in history?
Trenyan spent the last day in the village of Triwn, resting after many days of travelling. "At last I reached the Easter peak of this Kingdom. And still no one found... Of course, I've got in troube thrice by asking too much to Cylians I've met, but thankfully words solved the problem. And I didn't see anyone following me or asking who I was... that's good." Trenyan told himself that he'll spend this night in the village, and leave at dawn. "If I've met no one of interest in Baflee's capital, surely I won't meet anyone is this lost fishing village."

OCC : "OCC" means "Out of Context", right?
Also, I need to know where the Wolf Clan's lands are, since my character lives there. I talked about cliffs and forests in my character's story, but you can find those anywhere.

Desouls, InuYasha abridged series, and now this... prepare to be tired, Pezz :D

What do I think? That's I'll spend too much time on it!!!:D I'll really need to moderate myself... hopefully no one will post as many (or as...

Remember, Cylians live for thousands of years. A 17-year old Cylian is something like a infant, in theory.





I already can feel the countless hours spent on this Roleplay this summer.

***Get come tea/coffee before starting to read this***​

Username - StarSeeker99

Name (full) - Trenyan Blizzard (self-given name ; real name long since abandoned)
*Pronounced : Tre-nay-an

Race - Crossbreed - 3/4 Cylian, 1/4 Wolf Clan
(Son of a half-Wolf Clan and a Cylian)
*Has more characteristic of a Cylian than a Wolf Clan.

Powers - Master Ice Molder.
Can make nearly any item out if ice, even weapons (although they break after a few hits). Has also some Ice-related powers, such as shooting an icicle barrage. Cannot make keys to unlock doors, unless he's got a mold for the key, a copy, or enough informations as to what it's supposed to look like.

Age - 389 years (Cylian teenager)

Gender - Male

Side - Neutral.
- Usually conflicts with normal Cylians.
- Attemps to ally with outcast Cylians.
- Secret ally and friend of the Wolf Clan. Helps them with his Molding powers.
- Sometimes sells his Molding services to humans.

Weapons -

Main -
A metal Wing Sword. That's a concept I invented (at least, I've never seen it before). Here's a sketch of the weapon :



Secondary -
Everything he can make out of ice.
- Usually, a Wing Sword identical to the real one. Sometimes goes Dual Wield until the second sword shatters. (Think Roxas)
- Often, an Ice Shield. It can take a few attacks, then shatters. (Think Vexen)
- Sometimes, he will make his main sword much longer and larger with ice (think Leon powering up).

Background -

Son of a Cylian mother and crossbred Cylian/Wolf Clan, Trenyan was subject to racism from both races. The worst was that he was considred a "repeated mistake by the nature" ; his father was a crossbreed, subject to rejection himself. Thus, his birth was seen as a repeated crime. His father was banished, and his mother send him away.

Trenyan grew up (which, for a Cylian, means the first few centuries of its life), in a town separated from the most Cylians. The inhabitants of the town were mostly rejected themselves, either because of their descendance, wither because of their acts. But they were all understanding, and solidarity was extremely present.

In order to part with his past, rejected by his people, and even his mother, Trenyan changed his old name for the one by which we call him today. He also had feelings brimming with hatred and rage for most of his life, made even more powerful by his animal Wolf Clan genes.

After having mastered sword fighting techniques, and become an Ice Molder, he gained some respect in his village. His feats were impressive at his young age.

Unfortunately, his town was attacked by Cylians seeking to eradicate the "infestations that ruin the nature". Trenyan fought fiercely along with those he could call "family", and won the first battles. A tragic event occured during one of the fights ; one of the soldiers Trenyan killed turned out to be his own mother. She apparently had very anit-crossbreed ideas, and thus joined the eradication campaign.
Trenyan, berserk with rage fueled by his Wolf side, turned into a monster on the battlefield, killing, and striking fear even in his allies.

But the town's victories only angered further the Cylians, who send their main armies to destroy the town. Unable to hold against such horde, most of the villagers fled, and the town was destroyed.

Trenyan lived for half a decade on its own, helping humans with his Ice Molding talents, in exchange for temporary shelter and money. He also sought revnege on Cylians, and thus gathered information on them.

One day, Trenyan arrived at a Wolf Clan village. After making some money with his Molding skills, he spent the night there. However, the village was attacked during the night, by other memebrs of the Wolf Clan, rebels with ideologies different from the Clan.
Trenyan, seeing the battle, joined the non-renegade Wolf Clan, and fought off the invaders. He ended up defeating by himself a great part of the attacking party. Furthermore, the rebels attacked again the following night, and Trenyan repeated his feat, gaining the Wolf Clan's friendship. Unlike Cylians, they would not reject him, not aftre he'd proven his usefulness, at least.

The young corssbred Cylian had adopted, more in symbolic than anything else, an infant wolf, a real wolf, from the Wolf Clan. This was the Wolf's Clan way of saying thanks, and Trenyan decided to live in their lands.

Recently, a few decades ago, Trenyan discovered a few survivors of the town he grew up in. Happy to find back people he knew, he joined their tribe, which lived in a small village in the Wolf Clan lands. The tribe was hidden by cliffs and forests, and only the Wolf Clan knew of their existence. The tribe was constantly helping the Wolf Clan with all kinds of Molding services, in exchange of protection, secrecy, and sometimes supplies.

Since then, Trenyan had been searching the lands for other Cylians who had been persecuted in the past. After finding more of his old friends, and new people who joined, he also discovered that not all Cylians are like those who attacked them. Thus, Trenyan always asks about a Cylian's past, usually much to their surprise, since he wants to go in detail.

He now lives with his rejected Cylian friends, and his wolves. The plans of revenge against the Cylians aren't clear, and not all agree with any further violence, but a feeling of hatred is commonly shared.

Thw wolf he received is named "Frost Fang", its mate is named "Lightning Claw", and their child is named "Flame Burst". They were anmed by Trenyan, and despite their name, have no magical capacities. They are not following Trenyan when the story starts ; they are at the village.

FUTURE IDEAS

- Trenyan lives for thousands of years. Wolves do not. Therefore, he has the pet wolf he got from the clan, as well as its descendant, and may well raise generation after generation of wolves.
- Trenyan will slowly lose what's left of his hatred for normal Cylians. He's already on that path ; he doesn't want to be racist, because that won't make him any better than those who destroyed his home. He tries not to fall to prejudice, but often fails.


Appearance
Pointy ears like all Cylians... as for the rest, dark red hair spiky, black eyes, somewhat muscular... travels in a black hooded coat (hope it's all right to steal this idea from the Organization :D).
Without the cloak, Trenyan should look like Yunsung from Soul Calibur :
http://www.ptfighters.com/wiki/images/7/7d/Art_44.gif

I think the music helped. It was a bit too loud and everything, but it made the scence better.
But yeah, the scene is pretty strange to begin with :

- How Goofy's body jumps after being hit with that boulder is physically impossible, even for a video game.
- Donald says he's sorry about the ice cream. WTF?! What's that got to do with anything? He just ate an ice cream. What harm did that do to Goofy?
- They abandon him. Way to go.

But, positively thinking, the music made the scene pretty much as good as it can get.

Sora DOES eat. When you throw potions on him.

Now, if we count all the KH payers worldwide who fought Sephiroth in KH1, and count all the Elixirs that Sora had to drink... well, Elixirs are energetic drinks, so Sora won't be hungry for a looooooooong time.

As for going to the bathroom... well...

*Sora wakes up, and yawns*
Donald and Goofy : Sora!
Sora : Donald ! Goofy!
*jumps down the pod, and runs towards them*
*runs past them*
Donald : Quack?
Goofy : Sora! Where are you going?
Sora : To the nearest treasure chest!!!

There's a way to settle this.

Gather your friends, go to the next Anime Convention, and cosplay a different guy each. Then count the number of times girls ask you to take pictures with them :D

As a guy myself, I can't really post my opinion... All I can say is that I'm surprised so few girls go after Lexaeus. He's got the muscles, and his personality isn't bad either. His hair is the most unoriginal one, however.

We did already discuss this becoming a game. But before we get back to that discussion, Kme92 (?) suggested making a video first. That may work better than having a ginormous project that can be shut down at any time by Squeenix because of copyright.

Hm... I think we all live in somewhat different hour areas. For me, this Thread is more active late at night, for example, so either Pezz and LilBueno live in GMT-7 or something like that, either we all go to sleep very late :D
If you're unlucky enough to come home from school when we all just posted, you'll get cut off from a lot of fun... Try to... go on KH-vids late at night like us?


Anyway...

So, where do they meet? Or hasn't it ben decided yet?

I like!

True... but is Highnoon Hamlet a nest of Desouls? Surely that Turpis made a few of them, but I thougth it didn't have a problem with Desouls. If I'm right, then it must be changed.


Btw, I finished Rin's story, but it still needs to be refined in some places. Notably :
- Eclipse's personality, as Pezz pointed out.
- Towards the end, when Oriens mention Sora to Rin. I didn't know how exactly to make that, so I improvised. The last 2-3 sentences, however, I like a lot. It's a link to BBS.
- Turpis' second lab. That part is really short, and I'm not sure what Turpis was doing in his lab.
- As said above : I made Highnoon Hamlet the target of occasional Heartless attacks. But Desouls MUST be the main, if not ONLY, creature there.
We can say that the Desouls came recently, which will allow us to keep the Heartless/Nobodies mentionned already, but Desouls must thrive at some point.
- Chronology. Accroding to me, Rin is 16. She lost her parents at 13, lived with Turpis and Oriens until 14, with Turpis alone until 15. The last year is when they separated from Turpis and everything else.

What I noticed, is that the last year of all the Keybladers' lives is when Sora was asleep. KH2 can't have taken a full year, a few months only, if not weeks. The year before that, is during KH1. Yet I'm not sure if all we thought of follows this rule.

The numbers should be the same. I haven't tested, and also happened to lend my KH2 copy on the exact same day.

But as Pezz pointed out, you can less abilities in normal KH2. You can't synth those Archives thingies ( the "Marluxia Accessory(+)" ), so that's 4 less MP Hastes right off the bat. There's no Critical Mode, so no extra MP Hastera. Also, I'm not sure if Wisdom Form has one, or two MP Hastegas in normal KH2.



If anyone can check a few of the times of normal KH2, I'll gladly mention your contribution.

Great job, Captain Obvious...

Ok, well I gotta admit, it's often a surprise when you suddenly realise who made the Post! It happened to me like 4 times on your Threads.

Kairi meets Turpis at night? Don't they meet in Highnoon Hamlet? Where there is no such thing as "night"?
Good point with his loss of sense of time. He shouldn't be too shocked to see changing skies.

I like what you wrote about the roles. This gives each character an agenda to follow. It's good to have something other than "Find Riku/Save Kairi".

As for Rin's sunset/sunrises... well, I've got an idea in mind...
She meets with Riku (it can be Sora or Kairi too, but Kairi's got things with Rin already, and Sora might start off on the wrong foot with Rin)... in a world without any special skies. A world with what we call normal skies. Those will impress Rin, but she won't be able to truly focus on them because she's focusing on her other objectives.

However, since she gets along with Riku, she'll mention that she's intrigued by the changing skies of the Disney world they're in. Riku will then mention Destiny Islands, who have the most kickass tree on which you can sit to watch the sun.

So when Riku goes to DI, he should find that Rin stole his spot.

Hm, no wonder that tree naturally grows at 0-degree, then 90-degree, and 0-degree angles. Riku must've watched the sun/sea for so long that the tree adapted to his butt always being on it.

Lol, sorry. I was referring on his opinion for my suggestion on Turpis, since he's fleshing him out. Not that your opinion doesn't matter, don't worry.

Of course, everyone is free to give his opinion, and everyonse is asked to :)

... now that I think of it, why do I always write "(insert name, or say "guys"), what do you think about this?"
It's obivous that everyone wants to know what the others think of their ideas ; why do I write it every time...


EDIT :
Just noticed the spelling and grammar notice. I know, I didn't reread, and I sometimes make quite some mistakes while typing. As I said, I got tired of writing, because some other things popped up at the time I was writing, so I didn't reread it.
I'll correct tomorrow, along with adding the last part.

Ok, so no, I didn't think of Silver-eyed Nobodies. I said "silver colored eyeless creatures". Their body is silver. But it was a good idea! Many great things come out by accident.

As for Riku, well, the "problem" is that he doesn't get as much attention from other Keybladers. Kairi is taken under Oriens' wing, Rin helps her, etc. Sora doesnt' have much attention yet, but we know he will. Riku's got less. He meets Blaze at the beginning... I planned him to meet Rin when he goes back to DI, but now DI is his 11th world, so that can't work. Hm...

Is there another world which boasts sunsets/sunrises? Riku could meet Rin there. I have no idea what Kuzco Empire is, and I can only surmise Heart of the Jungle is with Mowgli (sp?).
Now that I think of it, Rin has all the reasons to enjoy sunrises and sunsets! Highnoon Hamlet is a world at permanent noon. I don't know if anyone pointed this out, but no wonder Rin takes a liking to see the Sun moving once in a while.

Perhaps we can say Turpis took a liking to the night, after living at constant noon for so many years. LilBueno, what do you think?

Cool, but... where did that come from?

Doubt and Trust, by Access

*Japanese*

Owali mo miezu hashiri nukeru
Yasuragi wa tooku sugata mo naku
Kodoku wo fuujikomete
Tozashikakeru manazashi

Habataku mono wo mukaeru sora
Shihaisareru no wo osoreyashinai
Akogaleru mabayusa wa
Subete wo kaeru tame ni

Dale mo yurusazu ni
Doko he yukeru darou?

Hikali no moto Yami wa umale
Shinjitsu wa itsuwari ni yulelu
Kokoro wo tsukisasu
Fuleta yolu wo Koorasete mo
Yume to iu Yokubou no kage wo
Yobitsudukeru

Kimi no tsumi to itami wo
Shinjite yuku


Zenbu hoshii to sasayaku koe
Nakushiteku koto ni oitsukezu ni
Saki made motomelu yubi
Tsumetasa ni kitsukanai

Ai wo nokosu nala
Tometa kuchibiru ni

Hikali dake ga Yami wo unde
Nukumori wa utagai kasanete
Tadoritsuku omoi
Kawasu mune ni Chikau mono ga
Eien no kizu de kamawanai
Kizami tsukete

Toki ni kizuku hazama ni
Kieru mae ni

Hikari no moto Yami wa umare
Shinjitsu wa itsuwari ni yureru
Kokoro wo tsukisasu
Fureta yoru wo Koorasete mo
Yume to iu Yokubou no kage wo
Yobitsudukeru

Kimi no tsumi to itami wo
Shinjite iku





*English*

Without even being able to see the end, I run through
Peace is distant, shapeless
A glance confines and begins to close loneliness

The sky greets those who fly
I don’t fear being controlled
The dazzling brightness that I aspire for is to change everything

Without forgiving anyone, where can I go?

Under the light, darkness is born
Truth wavers in falsehoods
Piercing through my heart

Even if I let the night that I touched to be frozen
I’ll keep on calling for the shadow of desire known as ‘dreams’
I trust your sins and pains

A voice whispers, “I want everythingâ€
Without catching up to the things that I’m losing
My fingers that yearn for the rest don’t notice the coldness

If you left behind love, then it stayed on my lips

Only light gives birth to darkness
Warmth accumulates doubt and make its way to my thoughts

That which I vowed in my chest that crossed with yours
Doesn’t mind the eternal scar and carves into me
Before it disappears in the crevice that time constructs

Under the light, darkness is born
Truth wavers in falsehoods
Piercing through my heart

Even if I let the night that I touched to be frozen
I’ll keep on calling for the shadow of desire known as ‘dreams’
I trust your sins and pains





I hope this is a good translation!​

Ok, I wrote a huge part of Rin's story. Ii've got tired however, so I've let the rest up in the air.
I've posted it on the Wiki, and I created Rin's page.

I've read the alst pages of posts from this Thread, and noted down everything abotu the characters, in an attempt to be as continous as possible. A lot of things are new, but many are reused from LilBueno's bio of Turpis.
I'll reread Turpis' bio to make sure there isn't anythin messed up.