hey im Rexmildd im new but i got help soo comment on this one ^_^ One moring it was peace-''ZEXION!!!!CLEAN UR ROOM UP!!!NOW!!'' Xemnas shouted out loud.''Xemnas...theres this thing called love and hate...soo you know i love you,but theres a proplem..you hate-'' Zexion halfely completed is sentense.In a ugly voice Marluxia sang the national anthom of the Student body of the organization XIII..''OoOoOH organizAtion OH YESSSS ...COME TO HelP WITH OUR PrIdE!!!ROCKEN ROLL WOOOOOH!'' ''ooh marluxia can u...SHUT UP!!" Larxene sang for a bad impretion for Marluxia to shutup.:yelling: ...."Larxene its really cool how we are alike in each way soo...lets sing together ^_^ BUT in rockin rule!!!'' Marluxia said.Zexion came up to Marluxia and whispered in his ear and said "thanks for letting me get away from cleaning my room....(outloud) AHEM uh dont you mean rockin roll :\..???" "oh so thats how u say it...Roxas you need to work on your spelling.Ok??" "Why i outta >:S" Roxas said and after he said that he grumbled and headed straight to his room. Marluxia sang to everyone but still in an awfull voice..Xemnas told everyone "Just keep smiling everyone dont look back"...Next morning...Marluxia ran in the hall way and sang "wake up" "WAKE Up!!! WAKE UP ON A SaTuRdAy uhhh MORNING!!!WOOOOOOOH" "you know i think he's good for an alarm" Zexion said to Xaldin...since Xaldin was carrying a pillow with him he threw it at Zexion."Ok first things first i made a list" Xaldin said "You keep a list pth your such a freak XD" Zexion said "SHUTUP!!any way... 1:clean your room 2:make your bed 3:wash your face 4:dress up 5:eat..after eating 6:wash your OWN dish 7:when Xemnas wakes up say"hi sir ugly" cuz i put i sign saying that for pay back 8:Run away cuz Xemnas is gonna smack you on the tooshy 9:come out and say "sorry sir ugly" 10:grab marluxia block his mouth with duck tape 11:lock him up in a closet..no no!wait hide him in the closet without duck tape BUT tie him up arms and legs! 12:go back in your room 13:when ur at your room...shutup and listen marluxia cry in sorrow and thats my list ^_^" "why 13 rules?" Larxene asked "cuz its organization XIII.is that soo hard" Xaldin responded he counted to 3 and said "GO" **************** Later they already did the rules ..list w/e and marluxia was stuck in the closet singing even worse ...."OOOH BABY DONT uhh GOoOoO SIMPLE AND CLEAN IS THE WAY THAT IM FEELING IN THIS DARK ROOMY THING TONIGHT OHH YESSSS ITS HARD TO LET IT GOOOOOOoooooooOOOOOO" next time..... "you can hear me sing awfull but also u can SEE ME LEAVING!! THIS THIS JUNK!!!" they had told the truth to marluxia but he had tooken it badly this is on the second chapter please comment on this first story i just made:)