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  1. rikufanattic
    This is something that hopefully gets published in my school's newspaper, I'm crossing my fingers. The minimum is three pages, that sort of kills my writing though. But tell me what you think.

    Creatura quod le Luna

    Chapter 1: Primary Sight

    The young teen walked down the noisy hallway, it was the Christmas season and bright colors of green and red, with gold tinsel, and plastic candy canes decorated the hallways as the students walked through the area reaching their classes. The young teenager, around seventeen or so looked in the distance and noticed several people standing by the reception desk.

    “Leila!†someone called out from behind her and she looked in back of her. Her friends were waving at her to hurry up. She smiled and walked down the hallway, but not before stealing a glance back, but the people were gone, no one was at the reception desk. ‘Strange…’ she thought and continued on her way to class.

    “Did you do the assignment?†a female student asked, she was roughly around the age of 17 but her appearance made her seem older. Her name was Diana Huyer, one of Leila’s bosom buddies as she liked to call them. She had slightly dark brown hair that went down to her shoulders. Diana looked at the light brown skinned girl and sighed as she seemed to be lost in thought. “Just to make it easier on yourself I hear someone new is going to be entering today.â€

    “Someone new?†Leila asked looking up slightly down at her. “I guess those were the people at the desk…†she said to herself remembering the small group.

    “Anyway…†another girl butted in laughing at a joke she remembered. “I hear that you’re not going to the dance, Leila. Care to elaborate?†she asked. Leila could feel the piercing gaze of Diana on her as well.

    “No date.†She said simply and tried to get them to move from another topic.

    “It’s our last year in this high school and all you can think about is not having a date…†the girl that was slightly taller than the other two spoke out. “Jeez Leila, not everything’s about having dates…†the girl said. She seemed to be filled with sayings most of the time, due to her love of books. She was slightly taller and fuller in a sense of the female body. Her hair was long in the front and short in the back.

    “You’ve got looks going for you though, Moni.†Leila said stopping at the door to their next class. “Ugh, Spanish AP…†she said letting her hand rest on the doorknob. Something started to make the hairs on her neck stand up and she shivered. Both Moni and Diana noticed the reaction and looked at one another inquisitively. “I just felt something… weird… like someone was watching me.†She said looked up at them, she felt she could trust them.
    ***
    “You sure…?†the teen with dark shaggy mahogany hair asked. He leaned into his desk and tried to get his hair back to its original style. He felt his bangs cover one of his eyes and he seemed pleased, he didn’t like to mess with his cap. He had light skin, slightly fleshier tone than pale, and brown eyes that seemed to match his hair at times. A friend of his was sitting to the left of him, another on his right, and one behind him.

    “Darn it Lecra, you mean you can’t tell by her scent?†the one in back asked and scoffed. “You’re more of a pup than I thought.â€

    “Knock it off, Aden.†A slightly pale looking teen responded in a musical tone. Aden smiled knowing that Lecra, the teen with dark mahogany hair was probably doubting his abilities now.

    “You protect him too much, Peter.†Aden said leaning back into his chair. He looked at the slightly pale Peter as his eyes displayed a strange laughing nature. Peter had fashionable bangs, and a light spiky texture in the back. Aden on the other hand was tan with chocolate eyes, and he had blue streaks in his black hair, he had long hair in the front and the back was cut short.

    “Be quiet you guys…†the voice in front whispered catching their attention all the same. This person’s name was Edward, he had dark brown shaggy that at the back curled up a bit. A three girl group walked past them and sat in their usual spots, behind them. Two of them were light skinned, and the other one seemed to have a slightly dark tone to their skin. They all wore the same uniform though cotton collared shirts, plaid blue skirts with the matching tie, navy knee high socks, and matching black penny-loafers. The guys on the other hand wore the same shirt, a black tie, matching black pants, and different types of black shoes.

    “That’s her isn’t it?†Peter asked leaning towards Lecra. Lecra didn’t respond and looked down, a sign that Peter didn’t like all to well.
    ‘He’s starting to lose it…’ Peter thought looking back at Aden and to Edward. Aden nodded slightly and looked behind him. He noticed Moni and her group of small friends. Leila for some reason couldn’t keep her gaze off of the newcomer, the one with the cap on his head. She caught sight of Aden, remembering who he was, and looked away overcome by fear.

    Lecra felt his senses relax for a moment and looked a bit pale than his nature. Spanish classed briefly started, and the female Spanish teacher introduced a teenager by the name of Alec River. Lecra stood up and looked around giving a small but dazzling smile. The Spanish teacher asked why he was wearing a cap in the first place and a chain of student’s hands transported a small white paper, it was a legitimate excuse.

    Leila couldn’t keep her mind straight trying to conjugate the verbs, her eyes keeps wandering back to this ‘Alec River’ person. She felt as though she had known him from somewhere, but she couldn’t put her finger on it, like a memory that was out of reach.

    “Don’t get involved with Peter and his friends, especially that new one…†Diana said noticing the way that her friend was looking. “I’ve got a feeling that guy’s out of your league.â€

    “Thanks for the support…†Leila responded sarcastically. It was time to turn in the work and Leila noticed she had only scribbled down several of the answers, from the fifty words that were on the worksheet. She sighed and turned it in anyway and watched Alec’s hand extended forward, as if he had just thrown a paper airplane, and surprisingly Edward caught it without even looking at it.
    ‘What the…?’ maybe her mind was playing tricks on her.

    ‘Maybe it is…’ a voice responded before sending the young girl in a sort of haze.
    Thread by: rikufanattic, Dec 2, 2007, 1 replies, in forum: Archives
  2. rikufanattic
    Well you guys I love to draw and mak signatures, I'm not that great but I use to do request for some of my friends on other forums. I've been using Photoshop LE 5.
    I did one for Xejicka though I don't see her on that much on this site.

    Enjoy people, and CnC is more than welcomed.

    Cloud sketch
    It took me two whole days because of his hair... note I drew this before AC came out when they were still just giving screenshots.

    Bringing darkness
    I got bored and so I just did this thingy. I made it for myself when I was on WLA or as it was known as WLM. My old RP name was Case, and it's evident on some of my other stuff too.

    Happy Birthday
    I did this one for Xejicka since she liked Aqua a lot, I didn't want to make Aqua's drawn image screen with the background.

    Fate of the Unknown
    Yeah I was listening to the song when I was making this one. Luminosity... I like tampering with it.

    Birth by Sleep
    Yep that's the one I love the most out of all of them, I think it's because of the eye in the background.

    To protect
    I'm not to proud of this one though... I'll redo this one when I can find more screen shots of BBS.
    Thread by: rikufanattic, Nov 29, 2007, 1 replies, in forum: Arts & Graphics
  3. rikufanattic
    Translates to 'action paradise'.

    It was meant to read as Operation: Paradise, but I liked how Latin made it sound. Anyway on to what this is.

    Every thousand years in almost every sector of the multiple galaxies that fill the areas there has always been a need to find a so called 'Paradise' said to be locked away in a mysterious door that only chosen few can see...

    This planet that we now live on has its 3000th year approaching and the need to seek Paradise is once again coming to an opening. But no ordinary human can just go out and say that they will seek Paradise on their own, that would be a foolish feat to do at any cost. They would be missing three important items to help them find Paradise.
    Then what about what happens when that said human or other species finds the door to Paradise? Could they be able to open it?

    As far as many scholars can remember from ancient text three individuals from that time period are chosen as the 'Res de Paradise' or Items of Paradise.
    They are as followed:

    The Navigator aka the NAVIGO: That person is said to locate Paradise as they have an established mental connection to the fabled paradise of man and demons alike.

    The Key aka CHAVE: This individual is said to be able to open the doors of Paradise with a simple way with words, for the doors recognize the voice of it's opener.

    The Shaper aka the FORMA: The most important of the three the one who gives the said Paradise shape. They can tune the world in which ever way that they desire, whether it bring salvation or destruction. Anything the individual thinks for that Paradise will be made a reality....

    It is now 3050 and the planet is in need of Paradise once more.
    It can feel the corruption pulsing through the very beings of those that inhabit its grounds.
    Only two 'items' have been recorded of being placed in a state of suspended animation.
    The CHAVE and the NAVIGO have survived the final outcome of their last adventure together, but the FORMA was unsuccessful, giving up their life for the other two items that individual considered as 'friends'.
    A middle aged professor by the name of Duarte has been given the task of insuring the well being of the two 'Items of Paradise'.

    Their day for awakening grows near but what of the Shaper?
    The soul of the fallen item reincarnates itself 17 years before the search for Paradise begins.

    What of those who oppose these three?

    A group by the name of Nefas is seeking the aid of werewolves, demons, vampires, and of that sort, is planning to destroy the items and those who are aiding.
    Nefas believes that tuning the planet is destroying the earth because of the destruction the search for Paradise brings.

    Surely the items must have allies?
    They do, but would rather not speak out against Nefas for fear of being over powered, but there are some who are willing to risk it, going against their species.

    Will you be one of the chosen ones?
    Will you be one of many who offers aid?
    Or will you be the one that threatens Paradise?

    ---
    Character Submission- up to three each
    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Race: (human, demon, werewolf, vampire, etc. be creative)
    Image (if not you can describe):
    Personality:
    Bio:
    Powers (if any):
    Weapons (if any):
    Weakness:
    Cause of the movement: aid? threaten? Chosen?

    ---

    I'll be playing the role of the Key aka the CHAVE and another.

    Name: Case F.
    Age: 18 in appearance
    Gender: Female
    Race: Human (vessel for a demonic entity)
    Description: Despite her age in appearance she is roughly older than one thousand years in age. She carries a pair of dark tinted sunglasses. Her hair is thick and dark and is cut into multiple layers. Her eye color looks like a faded grey but when in a fight they change to a crimson tinge. Her skin is slightly brown because of her background.
    She's an average looking person wearing comfortable clothing like jeans and dark shirts with tennis shoes.
    Personality: She is extremely shy with those who she does not know, and won't speak until she is addressed to do so. Calm and collected at times. She's known for being sweet to those around her.
    Bio: At a young age she was picked from several children to host a demonic entity that a disbanded government lost more than over a thousand years ago. Since then her family sent her to get physical, as well as psychological treatment, fearing the pressure of the demonic entity would overpower her.
    At the age of 12 she developed hidden amounts of strength, and a young man took interest in her, and with the permission of her family he trained her to harness that demonic spirit. At the age of 18 it was discovered that she was able to hold that entity because she was the reincarnated persona of the last CHAVE.
    Powers: Basic healing abilities, but they are still very time consuming.
    Blitz: Utilizing speed she moves with her weapon in rapid succession hitting her target roughly around seven times, at some points it creates a small shockwave around surrounding enemies.
    Buia: Tapping into her demonic entity’s power source she can use shadows to her advantage, but time is a big factor, the bigger the bang the longer the wait.
    Tractus of vices: Using the darkness to her advantage she can create for a short amount of time pressure to the surrounding bodies of her choice, giving them the sense of being frozen in time.
    Other than that she has similar attacks to demons when in her entity’s control.
    Weapon: A souba by the name of ‘Pennae’ at times it can harness the power of darkness.
    Weakness: Her eyesight became fragile when she turned twelve after entering for treatment, since then sunglasses and blindfolds have been her protectors from the light. Her wounds take time to heal since her body is inhabited by a demon spirit.
    Cause: Chosen

    Name: Nero
    Age: 20 in appearance
    Gender: Male
    Race: Demon
    Image: Human form Demon form
    Personality: A strange happy go lucky guy at points. He’s not afraid to speak his mind and will defend his view should the occasion rise.
    Bio: He came from the first opening of Paradise some thousand years ago and roamed earth gaining knowledge of the humans and other creatures. At one point in his life he trained a young girl who he came to know as ‘Sister’. She was his pupil and then one day she vanished, with it bringing the second opening of Paradise. He had been placed as a guardian to her by her parents, and has tried to search for her, but his efforts have been in vain.
    Powers: Healing abilities that take up less time, but seem less effective.
    Aura: Massive balls of dark energy or lightning form around him and blindly search for their targets.
    Howl: In demon form his howl is capable of creating a thick black mist that causes some visions problems in battle.
    Procella: His arms turn into blades up to the elbow and can use them for long periods of time.
    He rarely uses weapons preferring to go with his dark and lightning energy, and using his claws and feet, and should he ever his wings.
    Weapons: Built in blades
    Weakness: Holy water in the form of bullets, talismans, anything a demon cannot stand physically.
    Cause of the movement: Undecided


    ---
    Navigo –the darkness within
    Chave – rikufanattic
    Forma – Deathsight 44

    Allies:

    Foes:

    Undecided
    Nero

    All we need are some foes and allies and we'll get this party started!.



    "Do not fret young ones... I shall guide you. When things seem dark I will be the light." -Book of factum
    Thread by: rikufanattic, Nov 27, 2007, 46 replies, in forum: Retirement Home
  4. rikufanattic
    Title: KH3 Another Side, Another Story
    Disclaimer: I don’t own anything that deals with Square Enix, never have never will.
    Summary: Riku’s been dealing with some issues since his two best friends have decided to start a relationship, yet even a complete stranger can prove to help him out. What’s more is that this stranger is no stranger to the darkness, could this person help unravel the dark past of the Keyblade War, and the Chasers?

    Chapter 1: Destati

    “Hey Riku, you aren’t coming?â€

    “Naw, I’m good here, you two go ahead.â€

    “Are you sure?â€

    “Don’t worry about it Sora, I have some things to do here anyway,†the teenager waited for his friend to finish speaking once more, “Yeah, I’ll be fine. I’ll talk to you later.†With that he clicked, and stuffed his cell phone back into his pocket.

    The boy walked down the shores of the beach, letting the afternoon sun touch his skin. Riku was wearing a white sleeveless, with black cargo pants, and stripped shoes. He still looked the same as he did a couple of months ago when he finally came back home. His other friends had remembered him, and they did forgive him for the sins he committed in the past, they knew he did something wrong, just that they never bothered to ask what it was.

    Riku’s turquoise eyes scanned the clear water of the beach, and seemed to be shimmering, just like it always did. He sat down at stared out into the ocean, collecting his thoughts just relaxing. And that’s all he ever did, he just relaxed.

    ‘We’ll be the darkness…’ those were the very words he said to Sora. Now that the light was restored the darkness was the only thing left.

    Other than that there were other things on his mind. He was happy that Sora and Kairi decided to start dating each other, but he didn’t always want to tag along with them. They needed their space, so he figured leaving them be sometimes was good for them.

    Riku never really cared about dating, he was always busy training to always get better than Sora. To be honest he never thought about dating, or going out by himself. The only time he could be found by himself, alone, was only when he went to island where the three of them use to play as children.

    Sure at times he would go out, but that was only when he felt really bored. A lot of people would just call him lazy, and maybe they had a good reason to do that…

    At that point his phone rang out a melody, and Riku blinked for a couple of seconds. ‘Who is it now?’ he thought while he answered the phone.

    “Riku, Sora told me you can’t come, is that true?â€

    “Yeah, but don’t worry Kairi, I’ll be okay. You two deserve some time alone together.â€

    “Wha, Riku?!†she protested.

    “Don’t do anything I wouldn’t do, you two!†Riku said teasing the two of them.

    “Yeah we’ll be on our best behavior,†Sora’s voice could be heard in the background.

    “All right then Riku, we’ll talk to you later.â€

    Then there was silence, and he placed his phone back into his pocket. He was getting ready to head back home. ‘I think I’m just getting lazy…’ he thought as he made it down the pier to his boat.

    Now to Sora and Kairi…​


    Sora walked alongside Kairi, and both were talking about their friend Riku. The wine-red haired girl looked at her crush, and sighed. The brunette just looked at her feeling a bit confused about the whole thing.

    “He’s been acting like this since we started to date,†Kairi said staring at the ground as they walked. “You think he’s feeling left out?â€

    “I don’t think so, I think he’s just giving us some space,†Sora said trying to cheer up his date.

    “Hey, you know what, we should by him some sea-salt ice cream later on.†She said.

    “Yeah that’s a good idea. I just really think he needs a girlfriend…â€

    “Are we gonna start this all over again?â€

    “I’m just saying…â€

    Kairi just sighed and decided to just let it go. In part Sora did seem to hold some truth into what he just said. They both did start to think that Riku needed to start dating, either that, or at least go out some more.

    “He’s just getting lazy.†They both said.

    About a couple of feet away from them there was a park. The two teenagers decided that they should hang out there for the day. Sora picked out a spot under one of the big trees that was there. There were a couple of hills here and there, and it was very green. Kairi spotted out a little puppy that was running around.

    “It’s so cute,†Kairi said pointing out to Sora. “I wish I could have one…â€

    “That thing? It’s so… so little…†he frowned a bit looking at the puppy.

    “It is a puppy after all…†Kairi remarked.

    The puppy was coming closer towards them, and the owner was nowhere to be seen for now at least. Sora tried to shoo the animal away, he thought it belonged to some crazy person. He had a bad experience when a cat was following him because he smelled like tuna, and some lady thought he was abducting cats…

    Kairi patted the puppy softly, and smiled at the little thing. It had these curious looking ears with a lot of fur sticking out. It had a black and tan tinted coat, it looked like a terrier, or some sort of mix.

    Kairi was watching the dog as it was sniffing the area where Sora was sitting. He was blissfully unaware of the situation.

    “Sora, I think that dog has to use the potty…â€

    “He can go around.â€

    “But I don’t think he can hold it…â€

    In the distance the most awful sound ever known to man could be heard at least two blocks away. Birds were scared out of the trees, and a couple of people looked at the problem.

    “…†Sora blinked and looked at the side of his shirt. It was very moist, and it had a bad smell to it. He just stared at the puppy still trying to figure out what had happened to him. “I got peed on… It actually peed on me…â€

    “I was trying to tell you to move…†Kairi couldn’t help but laugh at this whole thing.

    The animals ears perked up, and it looked ahead, it could see someone running towards them. It was person around their age. She was wearing a pair of jeans, and a black shirt with the word ‘The Black Mages’ printed in white, and black sport shoes with yellow stripes on them. She had light brown skin, and dark brown hair with blue streaks. Her eyes were of a dark color, probably a dark brown.

    “Chico, bad dog,†she said waving a finger to the dog, and scolding him with her firm voice. She turned to Kairi and Sora, “I’m really sorry if he was any trouble, he likes coming here from time to time…â€

    “We’re okay…It’s just that…†Kairi then explained what had happened.

    “Oh that… He does that to people he doesn’t like,†the owner said feeling a bit embarrassed. “I’m really sorry he did that… Sora was it?†she said looking at the blue eyed teen.

    “Yeah, but don’t worry I’ll live…†he said starting to take off his stained shirt. He had an extra shirt underneath.

    “I-..I can wash it for you if you like.†She offered. “I’m really sorry we ruined your date though…†she bowed slightly. She noted the blush on the other two, and smiled. “We’ll be on our way then, come on Chico let’s go.†And with that they walked away.

    Now to Riku…

    Riku was walking down the sidewalk, trying to play that game the little kids use to play, the one where you use to avoid stepping on the cracks. He frowned as he saw his foot underneath one of the cracks, even as a little kid he could never do it all the way.

    Riku pushed some of the silver strands away from his face, he was pretty close to his house, and it wasn’t that far away from the park where Sora and Kairi were at. ‘I could really go for some sea-salt ice-cream,’ he thought as he started to get a craving for it.

    “Chico, hey!†a girl yelled out close to his house.

    Riku looked at the scene and noted that she was trying to get her dog back; it had wandered into his yard. She looked around, and stepped onto his lawn, and snatched the dog up. It ended up getting away from her though as it had struggled in her arms, and she couldn’t hold on to the animal.

    Riku was still on his way to house and decided to help the girl, if she still couldn’t get her dog. He felt something tug on the lace of his right shoe, he looked down and saw the puppy playfully pull the lace, it growled at the shoe.

    “Chico, hey leave that guy alone.†The girl said in a firm voice. At that moment the puppy went back to the owner’s side.

    Riku finally let his eyes catch a glimpse of the owner. She had light brown skin, with blue streaks on her dark brown hair, she looked to be Kairi’s age. She wore a fan made shirt with the name of a band called ‘The Black Mages’, with jeans and black tennis shoes with yellow stripes. He was able to make out that she had dark colored eyes.

    “He’s been causing some trouble today…†she said shyly, as she finally looked at Riku, and noticed what he was wearing. She stared down at the ground, and then looked at her puppy. “He peed on some guy today…†she finally picked the puppy up and held him tight.

    Riku let out a small laugh, “Really?â€

    “Yeah…†she said laughing a little. “Do you live far from here?†she asked.

    “No, you stepped on my lawn earlier,†he pointed out giving her a small hint.

    She looked back at the lawn she was previously on. The house was pretty small, it had a beige color to it with the window panes in a light tan color. She looked back at Riku and felt a bit more embarrassed, “Oh… He didn’t do anything on your lawn, if that’s what you’re worried about…†she said looking at the puppy in her arms.

    “How about you, where do you live?†he asked trying to get her a bit more comfortable. “Is it far from here?â€

    “No,†she shook her head, “I live a block away from here.†She said turning her head in the direction where she lived. In that moment she heard a small growling noise, she looked at her dog, but it wasn’t him.

    “That was me…†Riku said she saw that he had blushed a bit.

    “You’re hungry… what have you been doing all day?â€

    “Relaxing…†he said honestly.

    “…You’re kidding, right?â€

    “Nope,†he said giving a big smile.

    “Well me and my dog we’re going to get some sea-salt ice-cream, do you want to go?†she said pulling out a leash from her back pocket, she hooked it up to the dog’s collar.

    “Yeah, all right…†at this point he didn’t know what her name was.

    “That’s right, we didn’t introduce ourselves…†she outstretched her hand, “My friends call me Selma.â€

    “My name’s Riku.†He said shaking her hand. He then bent down and stroked the dog’s fur mainly on top of his head, “and this must be Chico.â€

    It had been about a good three weeks since that day, and a strong bond was formed from then on. Riku and Selma became inseparable, wherever one was there the other was right behind, no doubt about it. Kairi and Sora never met her personally, but Riku talked to them about her.

    Kairi took a great note on how Riku acted around them now, he was a bit more cheerful than how he had been weeks before, and he was spending a bit more time with them. Other than that it was right as rain, well sort of anyway.

    The silver haired teenager was walking down the block where Selma said she had lived. In his eyes she was a good friend, though she never talked so much about herself. He was surprised that she showed him where she lived. It had gotten dark the day he met her, and so maybe that was why she let him walk her home.

    Selma was just waiting by the steps of her home, with Chico sleeping at her side. Her dark colored eyes spotted Riku from a couple of houses away. She waved to him, and he waved back at her.

    “Did you bring it?†she called out.

    “Hello to you too, Selma,†he said jokingly.

    “Sorry!†she shook her head.

    He walked up the steps and sat next to Chico, he placed the black notebook at his side, and just sighed in relief.

    “Did you tell your mom I said ‘hi’?†she asked curious about the other day.

    “Yeah, she says ‘hi’ too.†He said.

    “She seems really nice.â€

    “You’re mom’s nicer though, she’s cool.â€

    “I’m glad to hear you think so,†a women said opening the screen door, she was a middle aged woman, with brownish curly like hair. She was wearing an apron, she had just finished cooking.

    “So, lunch is ready, Mamì?†she asked turning around.

    “Yes it is. Riku, you know you’re always welcomed to come and join us.†She said.

    “Thanks very much, Mrs. Hikari.†He said politely.

    “I’ll call the two of you when I have the others at the table.â€

    “Wait, all of us?†Selma asked a bit bewildered.

    “I’m making everybody’s favorite, Fettuccini with chicken breast, and that creamy sauce you like.â€

    “Hey, then Riku, will you be able to stay and eat with us?†Selma asked him.

    “Yeah, I’ll stay then, besides I like you’re mom’s cooking.â€

    “At the rate this is going, your mom might as well just give me the adoption forms… You practically spend more time here…†Mrs. Hikari said in a joking manner as she walked back inside the house.

    As Mrs. Hikari left Selma heard the little jingle that sounded a lot like Chico’s collar. She looked around and noted that Chico had just woken up, the smell of the food had gotten to him. She let him back inside the house, and sat back down on the steps.

    “So then, Riku, how have you been feeling today?â€

    “Good, I guess you could say.â€

    “Have you been spending some more time with Sora and Kairi?â€

    “Yep.â€

    “Why were you avoiding them anyway?â€

    “I thought it was because I felt they needed some time alone… But now that I think about it, it was because I was a bit jealous…†he said embarrassed to admit it.

    “Now why was that?†she asked, trying to get him to open up a bit more.

    “I… I had this small crush on Kairi, but I knew she liked Sora… And I accepted it…â€

    “See that wasn’t so hard to say!†she said patting him on the back.

    “Noasn’t…†he said a bit surprised himself. ‘I’ve only known her for a while, but she’s been the only one who listens to me…I feel bad I don’t ask her so many questions…’ he thought for a moment.

    “Oh yeah, hey did you write down your story?†she asked breaking his moment of thought.

    “Umm, oh yeah...†he handed her the black notebook.

    “So all of this really happened?†she asked reading what was written in the notebook. ‘He has beautiful penmanship… Hell it’s even better than mines, no offence but he writes like a girl,’ she thought for a moment.

    “You don’t think I’m crazy?â€

    “Nope, in fact I believe you… You see the reason is because…â€

    “Hey you two, everybody else is ready!†another female called out from the doorway.

    “That was my older sister…†she answered before Riku could even ask. “You would’ve meet them sooner or later…†she smiled. "Let's go and eat."

    A/N: Yep it's the same one from ff.net... lol well anyway you know the drill, constructive criticism is welcomed!
    Thread by: rikufanattic, Nov 25, 2007, 35 replies, in forum: Archives
  5. rikufanattic
    Thread

    Ello ello!

    Hello! *waves*

    My name's RF, well not really but you get the jest of it I'm more than sure.
    I should've done this a couple of hours ago but I forgot on account of another engagment I had... -__-;;

    Um... man I'm bad with introductions...

    Of course I love Kingdom Hearts to death, that's my main thing anyway. A couple of people might know me from fanfiction under the same name, and from deviantart.
    Big anime/manga fanatic and I love Riku from the KH series a lot.
    Video games range from first person shooters to RPGs, and well yeah that's me in a nutshell. Oh!
    I love drawing as well, I'm not that good but I can at least do something.

    This is rikufanattic over and out!
    Thread by: rikufanattic, Nov 25, 2007, 20 replies, in forum: Introductions & Departures