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  1. dancecat120
    Here are all of my of my stories, videos, and other random things. Enjoy!

    Stories:

    Kairi's Choice:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9701
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9714
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9731
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9785
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9802
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9844
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9871
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9897
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9916
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9961
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9979
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10005
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10024

    Roxas's Decision:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=13034

    Organization XIII Rockstars:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10377
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10401
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10529
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10629
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10691

    Marluxia's New Member Chaos:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=15211




    Videos


    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/90f6d6c2-4c91-4dc6-a893-9948012678d5.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/6336174b-0944-4f7e-bff5-991800a7c30b.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/1d7da29d-a96a-4e3f-a3b3-99160104a81f.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/edd2c9f2-4f8e-4352-a505-990f01197d61.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/ba69fe54-4581-477f-b356-990c00c71047.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/c3f7b656-72c7-43f0-af19-990c009ee255.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/f3d8b0cb-94af-401f-af4e-9901016a3d92.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/2867ffff-a7f8-45c3-835a-990001231487.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/3bc7922d-7bee-4544-a9af-98fa0102b507.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/5f0c7dfe-dc15-4ebe-8fa5-98f901571f28.htm

    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/f34ec808-7110-4d92-9c69-98f40162a1fe.htm


    I hope you like them!
    Thread by: dancecat120, Jun 10, 2007, 0 replies, in forum: Archives
  2. dancecat120
    Here's the first chapter of my new story. It's mostly about the chaos that came when Marluxia entered the organization. This first chapter is just the introduction.

    ~~~~



    Chapter One



    He hadn’t always been like this. Okay that was a lie, he had. But never to this extent before. He had never even come this close in the past. He had never even thought that it would go this far. Who would have ever thought that he would end up using flowers to his advantage? He was always teased for liking flowers. Apparently, it was girly and not allowed to be liked by guys. Let’s back up a bit.

    ---


    It was his first day of kinder garden. Liamura was excited to go to a school with kids his own age. He would get to do all kinds of fun things. It would be a lot of fun. Or at least that was what he thought. He was in walking distance of the school so he just walked. His light brown hair reached to just below his ears. He was wearing one of his favorite shirts: it was while with little pink flowers all over it. He always had loved this shirt. He carried a pink back pack on his back.

    When he got to school, he went to find his class room. His mom had told him to go to room nine. He walked up the steps into a large building. It was one large room with doors on each wall. He went up to the first one that he found. Then he realized something, he had no idea what a nine looked like. He nervously looked around. He spotted some one tall that he guessed was a teacher.

    “Where is room nine?” Liamura asked. At this time, his voice was still very high pitched. He looked way up to her. She pointed in the direction to a door a ways down. Liamura nodded and walked off to that classroom.

    The door was already opened and he went inside. The walls were white with posters all over them. The floor had a bright red carpet. He looked around. There were kids talking every where. As if they already had known one another. He knew no one. Some one who he guessed to be the teacher walked up to him. “And who might you be little girl?”

    Liamura felt a weird feeling. He could tell she was talking to him, but he didn’t think that she could. He slowly glanced around the room. “I’m Liamura, and I’m a guy.”


    ---


    That was just the first thing that happened that day.


    ---


    The teacher called everyone to centers. She told all of the girls to go to the art corner where they could paint pictures of flowers. All of the boys were to play with blocks. Liamura would much rather paint. He went up to the teacher and asked is he could paint. He was allowed to.


    ---


    Throughout the rest of elementary school, things went smoothly. All teachers knew about Liamura. They all knew that he would always rather draw, paint, do art, anything with flowers. Middle school went by much the same way. It was very uneventful. High school was when everything changed.

    ---


    He had just moved. He was about to start his sophomore year in high school. His hair was much longer now a days. It was down to about his shoulders and went out in random places. It was still that same brown. Today he wore a pair of jeans and a current favorite shirt of his. It was navy blue with a picture of a pink flower. He thought that he looked cool.

    When he got to school, the first thing he did was get in a fight. Two guys came up to him and talked about his shirt. Supposedly guys can’t wear pink. They were holding him up to some lockers. He tried to grasp anywhere for something to hold on to. One took out a long object and stabbed him. He felt a weird sensation, it wasn’t pain. It was just weird.

    He grabbed air behind him. Out of nowhere, a large object appeared. The end had a yellow and black section while the long handle was dark green. At the top there was an almost cross like object that was pink with a white middle. Three of the ends were short and sharp. The last end was much longer and curved a bit but was just as sharp if no sharper.

    “Woah” He said as he turned the object over in his hands. He raised it up and hit the guy’s hands with it. They flinched with pain and ran away. No one bothered Liamura any more that day.


    ---


    Liamura walked to the bus stop the next morning. He was curious, would he get into another fight, or would every one still be afraid of him. Another kid ran up to the bus stop beside him. He had black hair that was tied up into a pony tail. Liamura didn’t remember him being there yesterday. Liamura shrugged.

    They both watched as the bus pulled up. Both got on the bus. It didn’t look like the same people from yesterday. There were only nine people besides him and the boy on the bus, all of which were male. All of them had on long black cloaks. The boy from his bus stop disappeared into black for a matter of seconds and came out with the same cloak on.

    “What’s going on?” Liamura shouted. He was scared. He pulled out the mysterious weapon.

    A guy with long blue hair, elf like ears, and a black mark across his far head laughed. “It seams that number eleven has already found his weapon.”

    “Weapon? Number eleven? What are you talking about? I’m Liamura.” He couldn’t get off the bus. He could tell that it wasn’t going to school either.

    “Welcome Number Eleven. Welcome to Organization XI.”

    ~~~~

    So this is the begining.

    Did any one like it?
    Thread by: dancecat120, Jun 9, 2007, 148 replies, in forum: Archives
  3. dancecat120
    Hey, Does any one remember the story Kairi's choice? It was a story that I wrote a while back that ended a month ago. This is the sequal! No one expected it? The first part is from Axel's point of view, but after that it's really from Roxas's point of view.

    Here's Kairi's Choice if you didn't read it:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9701

    here we go!

    ~~~~

    Chapter One

    The Castle that Never Was

    Axel woke up. He was tired. It had been his job to stay up late last night to wait for Roxas to get home. He had volunteered because he thought that he would get to talk to Roxas. Yeah right.

    He was still quite tired but he wanted to get out of bed anyway. Xemnas doesn’t like late sleepers. He changed into a new coat and walked down to the kitchen. All of the organization members were there. The he instantly woke up. Roxas was there!

    Axel grabbed a few pieces of bread and some butter then sat down next to Roxas. He toasted his toast by carefully running his hand over it. After he had finished with that, he excitedly talked to Roxas. “Roxas, it’s a surprise to see you around here.” He joked. He made it sound like he was joking, even if it was the truth.

    Roxas laughed. “Yeah, I guess I just love spending time with Sora, Riku, and Kairi. It’s nice to be with people your own age.”

    Axel had never thought of it that way. “I guess I never thought of it that way. I just never see you any more. Well, not really. I mean I’ll see you when you get home and wake up, but that’s about it.” Axel said with a bit of sadness in his voice.

    “I’m sorry. I guess I thought you would understand, maybe see it my way? But I have to leave at 9:30 to go see them. So I guess we can’t really talk now.”

    “Um Roxas, it’s 9:35.” Xemnas said.

    “Oh my gosh! I have to go! Axel, will you clean up for me?” Roxas said. Before he even waited for an answer, Roxas disappeared into a corridor to darkness.

    “Yeah, sure thing.” Axel said. It was pointless, Roxas was long gone.

    ---

    Today Axel just had to wait for Roxas, no chores. He decided to read some magazine. He had already read all of his. He opened up the door to Zexion’s room. Zexion was always reading some thing. The room was very organized, nothing was out of place. He walked over to the book case. He picked up some random book and walked back into the main hall to read.

    He had picked up a war book, lots of blood and people dying. The story needed some sort of fire, but other than that, it was pretty good. He had read a few pages of it when he heard a knock at the door. He looked around, no one else was going to get it.

    Slowly, Axel got up to open the door. He saw a small girl standing out side. “Sorry, I don’t want to buy any Girl Scout cookies.” He said and started to close the door.

    With lightening fast reflexes, she held the door open. “I’m not here to sell anything, I want to see Roxas.”

    Axel stared at her for a few seconds before letting her in. She looked young and small, but I guess she could be Roxas’s age. She was a little bit shorter than Roxas. She had reddish-blonde hair that fell to a tiny bit below her shoulders and fell into her face. There was a pale blue head band in her hair. Her skin was pale. She had navy blue eyes. She was wearing a pale blue long shirt that had a pink ribbon around it and thin straps. Underneath of that, there were pink leggings. She also wore a pink beaded necklace.

    “Excuse me, who are you?” Axel asked.

    “Oh, I’m sorry, my name is-” She started.

    Suddenly, Xemnas appeared. “Axel, who is your friend?”

    “I don’t know superior. She is here to see Roxas.”

    “Then take her to Roxas.” Xemnas said and disappeared into a corridor to darkness.

    “Where’s Roxas?” The girl asked.

    “He is on Destiny Island.”

    “Where’s that?”

    “It’s.... well never mind. Let my take you there.”

    “Okay.” She said. She sounded a little scared. Axel quickly opened up a corridor of darkness and pulled her through it. “Woah.” Was all that she said.

    ---

    Destiny Island: On the beach (Roxas’s Point of view)

    It was another wonderful day with Sora, Kairi, and Riku. Today, it was warm and they were playing volley ball on the sand. It was Kairi and me again Sora and Riku. We were losing, but we were still having fun.

    It was warm and in mid morning. The sky was bright blue with a few clouds, not the stormy clouds, but the white fluffy kind. It was really warm but not to bad.

    “Sora, can we take a break?” Kairi whined.

    “Yeah.” Sora said

    The four of them sat on the beach, letting the sun reflect down on them.

    Suddenly, Roxas saw a black section a ways down on the beach. Axel stepped out with a girl. They walked closer to them. The girl looked familiar, very familiar. It looked like she could be… no it couldn’t be. But it looks like her.

    “Hi Roxas! I’ve been looking for you for so long!” The girl said and ran up to hug him.

    “Oh my gosh. It really is you.” Roxas said.

    Kairi had this disgusted look on her face. “Roxas, should I be jealous?”

    “Kairi, Sora, Riku, this is-”

    ~~~~

    Mwahaha! Cliff Hanger!

    So that was chapter one!

    Hoped you like it!

    Comments are very much wanted.
    Thread by: dancecat120, May 19, 2007, 125 replies, in forum: Archives
  4. dancecat120
    Chapter three is out. In this chapter Roxas finds out something and gets hurt very much emotionally. What upset him? What is going on with the band? Only reading this chapter will tell.

    ~~~

    Chapter Three


    ---

    The Castle that Never Was: The Basement


    The group had just practiced for about three hours. “Okay guys, we sound good enough. Every one can take a break until the guy come backs.†Demyx smiled. Every one except for Roxas and Axel left the room.

    “So Demyx, do you really think we were good? Do we have a chance?†Roxas asked excitedly while making a pleading sign with his hands.

    “Yeah, we were amazing!†Demyx smiled at him. Roxas did a little happy jump and left the room.

    “So Demyx, do you really think we were good?†Axel asked seriously.

    Demyx burst out in laughs. “Are you kidding? We stunk! Didn’t you hear us? I bet the guy is just going to come in laugh and leave or something stupid like that. I mean you were good and I was good but Roxas can’t sing, Vexen can’t play the piano, Zexion can’t dance, and I wouldn’t trust Luxord, Xaldin, and Lexaeus with technical equipment ever. We have absolutely no chance.†Demyx was still laughing.

    “Yeah, that’s what I thought.†Axel said sadly.

    Just then Roxas walked in he had this look on his face that said how could you do this to me. “I, I just came in to get my um sheet, so I can you know practice.†Roxas stuttered. “But I guess, it’s good I came, at least now I know the truth.†He shook his head and ran out of the room. He wasn’t crying or anything, but it looked like he easily could have.

    “You got Roxas so excited! How could you do that to him? You made him really think that he was good and we that have a chance. That was really mean.†Axel said glaring at Demyx. “Roxas, wait up!†Axel ran after him.

    “I didn’t want to hurt his feelings or anything. And you saw how excited he was and that hand gesture! Come on! Axel!†Demyx looked sad as he sighed. “Great, this is working out perfectly.â€

    ---

    The Castle that Never Was: Outside of Roxas’s Room


    Roxas was sitting on his bed. There were tears in his eyes as well as tears flowing down his red cheeks. Axel was sitting next to him with a box of tissues. He was patting Roxas on the back.

    “I thought that we were good. I thought that we could be famous. I thought that something big was going to happen to me.†Roxas cried.

    “Roxas, you are only fifteen you have plenty of time to do all of that.†Axel said trying to comfort him.

    “There’s just one thing that I don’t get.†Roxas said then looked up at him. “Why do I care so much? Why am I crying? I am a nobody! I don’t experience emotion! I don’t even have a freaking heart!†Roxas cry screamed. A lot had just come out, more than he had really wanted to say.

    “Woah.†Demyx whispered. Demyx felt absolutely horrible. It was all his fault that Roxas was feeling this way.

    “Roxas.†Axel started. “You never got over the fact that you don’t have a heart did you?â€

    Roxas slowly shook his head. “It’s just so hard. I don’t exist! I don’t have a heart! What is the point of me even being here! Why do I still have to feel things? I hate it! I hate it all!†Roxas was now crying insanely. Axel hugged him but Roxas just turned away. He was seriously upset.

    Demyx took a deep breath and walked into the room. “Roxas, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to make you this upset!â€

    Roxas was glaring at him. “Yeah you only told me that I was good when I really stunk! You got my hopes up.†Roxas’s sadness had turned to anger.

    “I understand you being mad at me but it was just a little white lie. Please forgive me!â€

    Roxas was quiet for a few moments. “Okay, I guess I forgive you.†Just as he said that, they all heard a knock on the door. All three hurried to go greet him.

    ---

    The Basement


    The room was already set up. Each member sat or stood in position ready to play. Xemnas talked. “Hello Sir! This is Organization XIII. I hope you enjoy the show!â€

    The band started playing. Just as always Demyx and Axel were good. All of the dancers were just doing their own things and not paying any attention to what was going on around them. Roxas wasn’t doing too badly at singing surprisingly. Demyx looked up at the guy. He had this look on his face that was saying are you kidding me. He could tell it was over. The song was slowly coming to its end.

    “Guys, that was um interesting! I sadly do not thing that you are what our company needs. Thanks any way.†The guy carefully ran out of the room.

    “So it’s um over?†Saix asked.

    “Yep, Organization XIII will not be rock stars.†Demyx said. After a few awws people just left. It was over, and things were exactly how they had been before.

    ~~~

    Yes, this is sadly the end of Organization XIII Rockstars. Please comment. It really is over. There will be no silly afterword like there was on my last story. Hope you liked it :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 24, 2007, 6 replies, in forum: Archives
  5. dancecat120
    Chapter two is out! We shall find out who got what parts. Did Roxas get into any thing? Will Demyx be able to transform the Organization into a band? Only reading the chapter will tell.

    ~~~~



    Chapter Three



    The Kitchen


    All of the Organization members were gathered around the table. Demyx sat down next to Axel. Axel was toasting his toast by running his hand over it. None of the other members had bothered to check the bulletin board yet. Demyx decided to make an announcement. “Everyone, the list for who made the band is up.†A few people like Roxas and Axel went to go look while most of the members just sat and remained seated. Demyx went to look at the list as well.

    ---


    Organization XIII

    Singer: Roxas

    Dancer: Zexion

    Drummer: Axel

    Back Stage Workers: Luxord, Xaldin, and Lexaeus

    Manager: Xemnas

    Piano: Vexen

    Back-up Singers: Saix and Marluxia

    Back-up Dancers: Xigbar and Larxene


    ---

    Axel didn’t really care that he got in because he knew that he was going to be the drummer. On the other hand, Roxas was jumping up and down excitedly. A few more people came in to look at who got what parts. There were a few yays or aws but there wasn’t much in the way of talking.

    “Every one, we are having our first official band meeting in the basement in ten minutes. I expect for every one to be there.†Xemnas said.

    “Anyone want to help me set up?†Demyx asked no one in particular. Most of the people just went to do what ever they were planning to do for the next ten minutes.

    “I’ll help!†Roxas said. He was still excited.

    ---

    The Basement


    Roxas and Demyx took the whole ten minutes to set up. They had microphones, drums, and a piano in place. The other members had just started to flow in. Demyx and Roxas had set up thirteen chairs in the front of the room for any meetings that they might have. Every person sat down in a chair.

    Because Xemnas was the manager he thought that he should be leading the meeting. “Every one, because I have no idea what I am doing, I am going to let Demyx talk!â€

    Demyx stood up. “We are going to play a few songs. Every one already knows how to use their instruments so we can play after we come up with ideas for songs. Before we write songs, which will be the job of anyone who can think up a song, we will play other songs that we know. So does anyone have any ideas?â€

    “I think we should play Sanctuary.†Axel said excitedly.

    “That song is a bit complicated and I think that Roxas is a guy.†Vexen said.

    “Hey Vexen, are you sure about that one?†Saix said. A lot of other organization members laughed.

    Demyx gave him a look and whispered a song into each member’s ear. They each nodded and got to practicing.


    ~~~~

    Okay I hoped you liked the chapter! Please comment :D


    Does Any One know what cut scene we see Demyx playing his sitar in? (If we see that, I always forget)
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 23, 2007, 2 replies, in forum: Archives
  6. dancecat120
    Okay, you might have read the Kairi's Choice story which ended a week ago.

    I have decided to create a new story *waits for yays or nos*

    so I am starting this one differently. I made a video for it (like a preview sort of) so check it out and if you like it (please vote on the poll and comment) then the first chapter will be up later tonight :)

    [​IMG]Click here to see Video


    please excuse the typo in the poll....

    unfortunatly you can't change it once it is up :(
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 20, 2007, 17 replies, in forum: Archives
  7. dancecat120
    Chapter Thirteen (aka Not So Secret Ending)

    OMG

    Just when you think Kairi’s Choice is over!

    A not so secret ending has been discovered.

    (This takes place as soon as Roxas returns to The World That Never Was)

    ~ ~ ~

    The Castle That Never Was

    Roxas carefully crept out of his corridor of darkness. He made it so he was in his room and no one saw him get there. It was 11:30 pm so hopefully no one would know he was there. He went to his closet to change into his pajamas.

    Just when he opened it Demyx jumped out. “Rock Star to Fire Fighter I repeat Rock Star to Fire Fighter. The Light Ranger is in the space ship!” Demyx said into a walkie talkie.

    “What are you talking about Demyx?” Roxas heard Axel say.

    “Aw you are no fun! Roxas has returned.” Demyx said blandly.

    Suddenly Roxas felt someone tap him on his back. He turned around and saw Axel standing there. “Hey, how did this morning go?” He asked him.

    “Well, I apologized and explained everything to her, she accepted, and we kissed.” Roxas said.

    Demyx gasped. “Xemnas, Roxas told Kairi about the plan.” Demyx yelled in a sing-song voice.

    "ROXAS"

    ~ ~ ~

    Not So Secret Ending number two


    (This takes place the night after the end of Kairi’s Choice)

    ---

    Sora’s Bedroom

    Sora suddenly woke up. Woah, he thought. That was a weird dream. He ran to go find Kairi. She was in her room. “Kairi!” Sora pushed open Kairi’s door.

    “Huh?” She said. She had been sleeping. Her hair was everywhere, but she still looked beautiful.

    “Kairi, I had this super weird dream! You were in love with Roxas and you kissed him and we saw it and he was planning to kidnap you and.” Suddenly he was cut off by Kairi.

    “Sora, that’s so stupid. When you know that I like you.”

    “You do? Well, I like you too.”

    “Really?”

    “Yeah.”

    They were both smiling. Slowly, they leaned in and kissed each other.

    Sora thought he heard Kairi calling his name. That was impossible, she was kissing him! He opened his eyes. “Sora, I came in to say good night to you. May I ask what you were doing to your pillow?”

    ~~~

    Hope you liked the not so secret endings! Comment please.

    The Story Really is over this time
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007, 8 replies, in forum: Archives
  8. dancecat120
    This is sadly the last chapter. What will Roxas tell Kairi? What will she do? Who will she choose? Only reading the next chapter will tell

    ~~~~~


    Chapter Twelve



    On the Beach

    ---

    Recap:


    Kairi heard a sound and quickly looked up. Roxas was stepping out of his corridor of darkness. She looked up at him. “Roxas, we need to talk.” She was serious.

    He looked up serious too. “I know, I understand. I haven’t been completely honest with you.”



    End of Recap

    ---

    “Roxas, I think I know.” She looked up at him.

    “Well, I hope you will forgive.” He looked sad and continued speaking. It seemed as though his mind was somewhere else. “The organization wanted me to make you well um fall in love with me. Then they would get you to come to the castle and tie you up. They would’ve made Sora give something up to save you.” He was quite. He really did look sad. They just stood there, looking at each other in silence.

    “Wait, you mean you never really liked me? You kissed me! It was all part of some evil plan!” Kairi was annoyed.

    “Yeah, it was. At first at least. After I got to know you, I liked you. I really did want to kiss you!”

    Kairi thought back to yesterday.

    ---


    Flashback


    Roxas was quite for a bit, still smiling. “I, I like you Kairi.”

    Kairi was a bit freaked out. “Wow. I don’t get it; I thought you can’t like me. No offense of anything but don’t you not feel emotions? Don’t you not have a heart?”

    “Yeah, I don’t have a heart. But that doesn’t mean that I can’t like you Kairi.” Roxas said sounding a bit sad.

    “I’m sorry but do you really like me? Or is this just some plan?”

    “I really do like you Kairi; I would never want to hurt you.” Roxas said stroking her hair.


    End of Flashback

    ---


    “You lied to me!”

    “That was before I really liked you. You have to understand! I didn’t let you come back with me this morning so they wouldn’t capture you!”

    Silence.

    They were both quiet. Suddenly they heard something coming from the nearby bushes. “Ha, Kairi we told you so!” Sora and Riku laughed.

    “Wow. Maybe you were right and he was trying to hurt me. But he really didn’t let me come back. I guess I don’t care if his intentions in the beginning were bad. Roxas, will you excuse me for a bit? I need to talk to Sora and Riku.”

    Kairi, Sora, and Riku went to behind a few bushes. “Great job eavesdropping.” She said sarcastically. She looked mad at them. They ran, quickly. “Yeah you better run!” She yelled at them.

    She went back to the beach and sat down next to Roxas. “I really am sorry Kairi.”

    She smiled as he put his arm around her. “Yeah, I know. But it’s okay, I forgive you.” He smiled. She smiled. And slowly then inched towards each other, and kissed. They heard snickering from the bushes. Neither looked up, they didn’t care.


    ~~~~

    Okay this really is the end! Hope you liked it. Please vote on the poll and comment :D

    If you have any questions about the story you can comment or private mail me

    THIS IS THE END
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007, 12 replies, in forum: Archives
  9. dancecat120
    Chapter is up! In this chapter Sora, Riku, and Kairi talk. What will happen? Only reading this chapter will tell.

    The next few chapters will be short. I am going to attempt to finish Kairi's Choice tonight.

    ~~~~


    Chapter Eleven


    On the Beach


    No one talked. They just stood there. Sora and Riku looked confused. Roxas and Kairi had stood up but were no longer holding hands or even touching. Kairi was scared. What are they going to do? By now the sun was up. Today was a nice day, the blue skies with light, white, fluffy, clouds. Too bad none of them would be able to enjoy it.

    After a long time of standing and staring, Roxas decided to talk. “I um erg need to go back to the Organization before they worry about me being gone. Come visit me sometime Kairi.†He started to turn around.

    “Yeah you better go!†Sora shouted.

    “Wait Roxas, maybe I would like to come with you now.†Kairi said.

    “No, Kairi, don’t go!†Sora and Riku shouted at the same time.

    “Well I really do have to get back.†Roxas said. “Bye Kairi.†He smiled at her and created a corridor of darkness.

    “Kairi, don’t listen to him! Don’t visit him. It’s all part of a plot.†Riku said.

    “You are just jealous that I fell for Roxas and not either of you.†Kairi said. She was mad at them. She had no idea what do to.

    “No! Okay I might be a bit jealous but you can’t trust him! I over heard him talking to the organization about his plan to make you fall in love with him and then kidnap you. They would make me do something to get you back.†Sora said. He looked sad.

    “Do you really expect me to believe that garbage? He is so nice to me. He is romantic too and unlike you guys, he isn’t immature.†Kairi said. She was annoyed with them.

    “Kairi, you are forgetting something. Roxas is part of me. I can feel him. I can feel that he is up to no good!†Sora said. He sounded as if he was begging.

    “I don’t know if I can trust you. I want to but I can't. I want to talk to Roxas.†Kairi was sad and confused.

    “Don’t go see him, let him come to you. Make him come here. See if he really cares.†Riku said.

    “I guess I’ll wait for him here. You guys, please don’t stay. I want to talk to him, alone.†Kairi said. When she said alone she looked up at them. They carefully stood up and ran away. Kairi sat on the beach waiting, hoping for Roxas to come.


    ---



    Still on the Beach, two hours later


    Kairi heard a sound and quickly looked up. Roxas was stepping out of his corridor of darkness. She looked up at him. “Roxas, we need to talk.†She was serious.

    He looked up serious too. “I know, I understand. I haven’ been completely honest with you.â€


    ~~~

    Dadada

    Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007, 14 replies, in forum: Archives
  10. dancecat120
    Chapter ten is out! In this chapter we get to see Roxas tell the organization about his morning. What will happen? What will they think? Only reading this chapter will tell.


    ~~~~


    Chapter Ten


    On the Beach


    No one talked. They just stood there. Sora and Riku looked confused. Roxas and Kairi had stood up but were no longer holding hands or even touching. Roxas was scared. Were they going to kill him? Was he going to have to fight him self? By now the sun was up. Today was a nice day, the blue skies with light, white, fluffy, clouds. Too bad none of them would be able to enjoy it.

    After a long time of standing and staring, Roxas decided to talk. “I um erg need to go back to the Organization before they worry about me being gone. Come visit me sometime Kairi.†He started to turn around.

    “Yeah you better go!†Sora shouted.

    “Wait Roxas, maybe I would like to come with you now.†Kairi said.

    “No, Kairi, don’t go!†Sora and Riku shouted at the same time.

    “Well I really do have to get back.†Roxas said. “Bye Kairi.†He smiled at her and created a corridor of darkness.


    The Castle that Never Was


    Roxas stepped out of the corridor of darkness. He didn’t see any one around. He headed towards the kitchen. In there, all other twelve members of the organization we sitting eating breakfast. Roxas grabbed a bagel and sat next between Axel and Demyx. He started to chew on his bagel. Hey maybe I won’t have to talk about my morning. He thought.

    “So Roxas is back everyone!†Xemnas started. Great, Roxas thought. So much for not having to talk about it.

    “Did you kiss her?â€

    “Is she in love with you?â€

    “When’s she coming?â€

    “Did she reject you?â€

    So many questions were being thrown at him. He stopped trying to hear them. He couldn’t even tell who was saying them.

    “Every one!†Xemnas yelled. “Stop asking Roxas so many questions; let’s let him tell the story himself.â€

    Roxas sighed. He really didn’t want to tell them. He knew that he should and would have to sooner or later. “Well, at seven I woke her up so that we could watch the sunset together. Then we held hands and walked along the beach. We sat down and talked a bit and then I kissed her. And she kissed me back.†All of the organization members were aww-ing. “Wait but that’s not the end of it. Sora and Riku saw the kiss. I’m not sure what they said but it made Kairi want to come back with me, now.â€

    “Great job Roxas!†Xemnas shouted. “Okay everyone, meeting over, you can leave now. All we have to do now is wait. Wait for Kairi to fall right into our perfectly set up trap.†The organization members all got up and left. Axel and Roxas remained.

    “So, you kissed her.†Axel started.

    “Yeah, I did. I was totally relived that she didn’t push away.â€

    “I told you she wouldn’t. Roxas, did you, um, like it?†Axel asked sheepishly.

    “I did, a lot. I feel horrible doing this to her.â€

    “Well maybe if you visit her, you can convince her not to come.â€

    “Yeah, I guess I could do that. But for now I think I deserve a break.†Axel smiled at him. They both just sat there. Thinking and wondering, what will happen next.


    ~~~


    Hope you liked it. You will have to wait till the next chapter to find out what happens between Sora, Riku, and Kairi.

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    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 15, 2007, 27 replies, in forum: Archives
  11. dancecat120
    Chapter nine is up. Roxas and Kairi are alone on the beach... I wonder what will happen. Only reading the next chapter will tell.

    ~~~

    Chapter Nine



    Kairi’s Room


    Kairi was woken up around seven by a light taping on her door. She was slightly annoyed. She got out of bed and saw Roxas standing out side of her door. “Can you wait a few minutes?” She was less annoyed when she saw him. She brushed her hair and put on her pink dress. After tidying up her room a bit she opened her door.

    “Hey Kairi!” He said excitedly. He was way too excited for this early in the morning. He hugged her. “Do you want to go down to the beach?”

    “Sure!” She started out the door. Roxas lightly griped her hand. Kairi felt a little uneasy, she did like Roxas so she didn’t pull away. She looked up at Roxas, he was blushing. Kairi felt her cheeks heat up a little.

    The Beach

    “I got you up early so that we could enjoy the sunrise.” Kairi looked up at the sky. It was beautiful. The sky was mostly a light pink. The orange sun was only slightly visible and hardly up yet. The clouds in the sky were a slightly darker pink. They looked amazingly fluffy and soft.

    Roxas smiled at her. They sat down on beach. “So Kairi, did you have a good sleep?” Roxas was caring. He was cute. Kairi decided that she definitely liked him better than Sora and Riku.

    “Yeah, I slept well, that was until you woke me up.” She was smiling not mad.

    He laughed. “Yeah, sorry about that. I just wanted to watch the sun rise with you. It is so beautiful, just like you are.” He smiled and put his arm around her.

    “Thanks, that was really sweet.” Yeah, he was sweet.

    “Kairi, you’re blushing.” He laughed. Her cheeks did feel warm.

    “And you’re not blushing?”

    He laughed and looked up at her. “The sun is almost up. It is just so great. But then again, next to you it’s nothing.” He smiled.

    Kairi was looking at him smiling. Wow, that was really cheesy. But it was sweet. Consumed in her thoughts, she didn’t even realize that Roxas was inching closer to her. She looked up.

    Oh.
    My.
    Gosh.
    He is about to kiss me. Suddenly she was worried and confused.

    What should I do?

    Should I turn away?

    Should I kiss him?

    Should I get up and leave?

    Well I do like him.

    He is nice.

    He is cute.

    He seems much more mature that Sora or Riku.

    She was still looking at him. She really did like him. She had come to her decision, she would kiss him. She inched closer to him as well. Ever so slowly, they got closer and closer to each other. There was no more room left between them.

    It was too late.

    She could no longer turn back.

    Their lips touched lightly against each others. Suddenly, Kairi heard a gasp. She looked up, Sora and Riku were standing right there.

    ~~~

    Hope you liked it! Okay when I just checked the poll people wanted her to pull away. Sadly when I wrote the chapter people wanted her to kiss him. Because I didn't want to redo the chapter, I just kept it as was...sorry

    please comment and vote on the poll :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 13 replies, in forum: Archives
  12. dancecat120
    Yay, chapter eight is up. In this chapter we get to see things from Roxas's point of view. What will he see? What will the rest of the organization think? Only reading the next chapter will tell:

    ~~~~



    Chapter Eight



    The Castle that Never Was


    Axel stepped out of the corridor first. “Roxas, stay here. I’ll go tell everyone that you are back.†Axel ran off in search of other organization members.

    Roxas sighed. He knew that the organization did things that he couldn’t know about. Any time he asked anyone they would just laugh and say ‘oh I’ll tell you when you’re older’. They acted like he was just a little kid.

    He was bored. He looked down for a second. Oh, I’m not wearing my organization coat. I guess I should go change. What is the worst thing that could happen?

    Just to be safe he avoided going through any rooms. He was so close to his room and then he saw what obviously Axel didn’t want his eyes to see. He understood why he was to stay in his place.

    ---

    Axel was in his room talking to Demyx. “Demyx, I just don’t get it. I like him but he likes Kairi. He just doesn’t get it!â€

    Demyx hugged him. “It’s okay Axel. I still like you.†He smiled.

    Axel was smiling too suddenly, a lot. Roxas gasped and ran away.

    ---

    Roxas’s Room


    Roxas changed into his organization coat. He decided to stay in his room until he was told to come out. He didn’t want to see anything else like that again. He was just trying to think.

    After sitting there for what seemed like for ever, he heard and announcement over the intercom:

    Everyone, Roxas has returned. Please report to the basement for a meeting.

    ---


    The Basement


    Roxas left his room and headed for the basement. On his way down he saw Demyx. “Roxas, sorry you had to see that earlier.†Demyx said.

    “Whatever, it’s cool. And keep me liking Kairi on the low down, please.†Demyx smiled and nodded.

    “Every one may I please have your attention?†Xemnas started. “Roxas has come up with a plan to bring down Sora. He is making Kairi fall in love with him, then kidnapping her and making Sora give something up to get her back. Roxas what happened while you were talking with her?â€

    Roxas stood up. “Well I talked to her for a while and made it clear that I really did like her and this wasn’t part of some plot.†Every one in the room smiled and started to laugh. “Then she wanted to go to sleep so I hugged her and left.â€

    Every one laughed. Larxene wanted to make fun of him more. “You guys keep forgetting that Roxas is only 15. A hug means a lot for kids at that age.†Every one continued laughing. Roxas was mad. He hated being treated like a little kid!

    Xemnas decided to continue on the meeting. “Okay you guys, it’s time to stop making fun of Roxas. Roxas, next time you have to do more. Just a hug doesn’t mean anything. You have to kiss her!â€

    Roxas stopped breathing and looked at Axel. He liked her but he was way too embarrassed around her to kiss her! Maybe if he didn’t like her it would be easier. It really didn’t matter because he did like her. “I have to what?â€

    Saix talked now, he was a bit annoyed. “Kiss her; you know your lips touch hers. It’s really no big deal.â€

    Xemnas started to talk again. “Okay meeting over. Every one leave, except for Roxas and Axel.†Every one got up and left. “Axel, I want you to talk to Roxas about this.†He got up and left as well.

    “So, Roxas are you okay.†Axel asked.

    “Yeah, I guess. It’s just that I actually do like her and would be terrified to kiss her. What if she rejects me?â€

    “Roxas, stop worrying so much. She won’t reject you! Just make it romantic for her. You will be just fine.â€

    “Yeah I gues.†Axel got up to leave and patted Roxas on the back. Roxas sat there with his head in his hands and sighed.


    ~~~

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    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 13 replies, in forum: Archives
  13. dancecat120
    The next chapter is out. What will happen when Roxas and Kairi meet? and isn't it convient how there are always bushes never every thing? Only reading the next chapter will tell :)

    ~~~


    Chapter Seven


    Outside of Kairi’s Room

    Some how, Sora got to Kairi’s Room before Roxas did. Gasping for breath, Sora started talking to Riku. “Riku, they have a plan! Kairi falls in love with Roxas, Roxas ties up Kairi, they hold her hostage, they demand something from me.†Sora was still panting.

    Riku looked worried. “Sora, you have to leave. If what you say is true they can’t know you know. I have a plan.â€

    Sora looked utterly confused. “What?â€

    “You just have to trust me okay? I am going to do nothing. I will let him try to make her fall in love with him. If I know Kairi, which I think I do, then she won’t fall for him.â€

    “But what makes you so sure?†Sora asked worried.

    “Like I said, you have to trust me! Now go!†Sora ran off. Riku looked up and saw Roxas coming. Riku hid behind a bush.

    ---


    Kairi’s Room


    Kairi heard a tap on her door. “Sora, Riku, go away!â€

    “Huh, it’s me, Roxas. Please open up.â€

    Kairi got up and opened the door. She closed it behind her and sat back down on her bed. Roxas sat next to her. “Roxas, what are you doing here? What do you want?â€

    Roxas smiled sweetly. When he didn’t say anything Kairi continued. “I’m confused, what’s going on?â€

    Roxas was quiet for a bit, still smiling. “I, I like you Kairi.â€

    Kairi was a bit freaked out. “Wow. I don’t get it; I thought you can’t like me. No offense or anything but don’t you not feel emotions? Don’t you not have a heart?â€

    “Yeah, I don’t have a heart. But that doesn’t mean that I can’t like you Kairi.†Roxas said sounding a bit sad.

    “I’m sorry but do you really like me? Or is this just some plan?â€

    “I really do like you Kairi; I would never want to hurt you.†Roxas said stroking her hair.

    “I still don’t know. I just can’t find myself believing that you really like me. I thought you and Namine were†Roxas cut her off.

    “No, Namine and I are nothing.†Kairi continued to look up at him.

    She really didn’t want to believe that he liked her, but it was hard.

    She needed to think about this. “Roxas, I have to go to sleep. I’ll see you in the morning.â€

    Roxas smiled and got up. He hugged her and walked out the door.

    Woah. Kairi thought. What just happened here? She knew exactly what had happened. She had complicated her decision. There was now another guy to choose between. She still had no idea.

    She lay in bed for a while thinking until she slowly fell to sleep.

    ---

    On the Beach


    Axel sat there waiting for Roxas to return. He was sitting letting the waves just touch his feet. Roxas sat down next to him. “I’m back.†He smiled.

    “So, um how did it go?†Axel asked. He sounded a bit sad.

    “Well, the plan is working so far. We talked some and, uh well, and I hugged her.†Roxas was blushing.

    “Roxas, do you actuallyâ€

    Before he could finish his statement Roxas cut in. “Yes, I think I do.†They just sat there on the beach in silence. Both thinking over what had really happened.

    After a while, Axel decided to talk again. “Come on, let’s go back. They are probably wondering what happened.â€

    Roxas got up so that he could follow. “Axel, can you, um, try to not let them know that I actually like her.†He was embarrassed but he had to say it.

    “Sure, no one will know.†They stepped through the corridor of darkness.


    ~~~~

    Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll.


    Also a little note (axels#1fangirl had this first)

    I go back to school on monday and that means home work. I am going to try to finish up the story tonight or tommorrow but I might not be able to. That means there might not be new chapters for a long time :(


    but enjoy the story for now :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: Archives
  14. dancecat120
    Okay, for some reason I don't think many people saw chapter five so here's the link:

    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?p=197459&mode=linear#post197459

    In chapter Six, we get to see some thing from Sora's view. What will he see? How will he react? Only reading the next chapter will tell :)

    ~~~~

    Chapter Six


    Still on the beach


    Kairi noticed that it was getting late. She turned and went back to her room. Sora and Riku stayed for a bit.

    “Riku, why do they want Kairi? They can’t love, they don’t have hearts! They have to be up to something!” Sora said.

    “Sora, I am going to let you watch them. I’ll be near Kairi to protect her. Have your key blade ready.” Riku warned him. He slowly turned and went in the direction of Kairi’s room.

    Sora went off to behind a nearby bush and waited.


    On the beach- Sora’s bush


    He was starting to get tired but he knew that he had to stay and watch the organization members. After about an hour of waiting, Saix returned.

    “I put the moon up early to night to get rid of Kairi.” Saix grinned.

    “Nice.” Axel started. “But we need a plan!”

    They all thought for a while until Roxas finally spoke. “Okay I have a plan.”

    Demyx laughed. “Ha, you have a working plan? I gotta hear this!”

    “Okay, first Kairi falls in love, with me.” Roxas smiled.

    “Wait.” Demyx started. “Why do you get her?”

    “One, no interrupting the genius at work.” Roxas continued. Axel, Demyx, and Saix, broke out into laughing.

    “After she is in love with me, I say that I have to go.”

    “But I shall ask her to come and visit me.”

    “Once she is there, we tie her up and hold her hostage and demand Sora to um erg give up some thing? Okay I don’t know what we demand from him but some one else can think of that.” Roxas smiled.

    At hearing this Sora gasped. I have to save Kairi. But how?

    Saix smiled. “Great thinking lover boy.” Roxas glared at him. Saix continued to talk. “You just go make her fall in love with you while we come up with the rest of the plan.”

    Roxas smiled and started towards Kairi’s Room.

    ~~~~

    Okay that was chapter six. Sorry it was so short. I had to break it off there from reasons that you will find out later :)

    Please comment and vote on the poll :D :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 9 replies, in forum: Archives
  15. dancecat120
    Okay here is chapter five :) normally I say something witty about the up coming chapter right here but I've got nothing. Please read :)

    ~~~~



    Chapter Five


    Kairi was suddenly sad. Gosh that dream was great. I had finally come to a decision! If only it was that easy in my real life. She sighed. I guess I’ll go find them so we can sort this out and talk.

    ---

    She walked out to where Riku and Sora were standing on the beach. The sun was almost down. The last light in the sky highlighted Riku’s gorgeous shiny silver hair. Sora still looked cute like always.

    Suddenly she had an idea. It was quite unlike her to eavesdrop. It wasn’t something that she would normally do but she was willing to try. She ran behind a bush a ways away from where Sora and Riku stood.

    Sora was talking. “Okay, I know how we can decide who gets Kairi. I think you shall approve of this and no one shall be hurt. We shall play rock paper scissors.†Then he smiled. “Best two of out three.â€

    Wow.
    Kairi thought. They are going to decide who gets me by rock paper scissors? What am I, property?

    Kairi came out from the bushes. Both Riku and Sora looked at her. “What am I, property? You two are so immature. I am not picking either of you!â€

    Sora was sad. “But, but Kairi, who else is there? Who else are you going to pick?â€

    Kairi was still angry. “Well there’s the organization. Also, who said I am even picking some one?â€

    Riku laughed. “Kairi the organization is way too old for you.â€

    Kairi just starred at him, shaking her head. “That’s not the point. The point is neither of you are going to get me and there is nothing you can do about it.â€

    All of a sudden, out of nowhere eight organization members showed up. Axel, Roxas, Vexen, Marluxia, Larxene, Saix, Xigbar, and Demyx appeared.

    Kairi smiled. “Okay, first of all Larxene please leave. Also, any members that uh like guys more than girls, please leave. Xigbar, you are too old for me.†Larxene, Xigbar, Vexen, and Marluxia left. Demyx, Saix, Axel, and Roxas remained.

    “Wow.†Sora said. “This is going to be interesting.â€

    ~~~~

    Okay that was chapter five. Please comment and vote on the poll. :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 14, 2007, 1 replies, in forum: Archives
  16. dancecat120
    Okay, chapter four is out. Sadly, it will be the last chapter :( . Kairi has made up her mind. Who will she choose? Only reading the next chapter with tell ;) .

    ~~~~

    Chapter Four:

    Kairi was still in her room. She had cooled off since the latest talk. She was trying to think of who to choose. Still she had no idea. She decided to take a walk. She was just walking along the beach, thinking.

    The sun was just starting to set. Light pinks and oranges filled the sky. No! Kairi thought. I need to pick. She tried to decide. She decided to say a plus for each one until she could no longer think of a good thing for one of them.

    Well, Sora is my age, Riku is less immature.

    Sora is the Key Blade master, Riku was on the dark side.

    Okay they are both very, very cute, no need to go there. ;)

    Sora is sweeter, Riku is um stronger? No Riku is, um no.



    Oh. My. Gosh. Kairi stopped walking. She had come to her decision. She took a deep breath and started walking to go find Sora.

    ---


    Sora was already in his room. She lightly tapped on his door. “Sora, it’s me, Kairi. Can I please come in?” Sora came to open the door.

    He smiled and opened the door. Then he sat down on his bed. She sat down next to him. He lifted his arm and put it around her shoulder, she didn’t squirm. “So, do you want to talk?” He asked sweetly.

    Oh gosh. Kairi thought. He is so sweet. “Sora, I was thinking for a while and I came to a decision.” Sora took his arm off of her. Kairi shook her head and smiled. She gently put his arm back on. “I’ve picked you Sora.”

    Sora looked up and smiled. “Really?” He continued to smile and started inching towards her.

    Just then Riku walked in he saw them and had a shocked look on his face. “Kairi, I see you’ve made up you mind.”

    Kairi got up and smiled. She walked up to him and kissed him on the check. “Sorry Riku, I’ve picked Sora. That is all you are getting, ever.” She pushed him out the door and locked it. She sat back down next to Sora. “So, where were we Sora?” Sora smiled again. He inched towards her. Closer, and closer, and closer and finally, their lips meet, every thing went black.

    ---

    So many thoughts raced through her head. Did I pass out? She slowly opened her eyes. She was in her room. The sun was just starting to set. Wait, that was a dream? She started to think about her dream. Oh gosh, I was a huge flirt. That dream was so unrealistic! She knew that what ever she had thought in her dream was wrong. Oh gosh, back to square one.

    ~~~~

    Hehe, Did I fool anyone? Okay it wasn't the last chapter. There are still many chapters to go :) . Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007, 12 replies, in forum: Archives
  17. dancecat120
    Okay the story is going fast. Wow. What will happen when Kairi confronts both Riku and Sora together? Only reading this chapter will tell :)

    ~~~~

    Chapter Three

    Kairi was annoyed. She could hear the Sora was shouting at her to come back but she decided to ignore him. She wanted to see Riku. She wanted to talk to him and figure out what was going on!

    ---

    After searching for him for ten minutes she found him sitting on the beach. The sand was damp still from yesterday’s rain. Now the sky had cleared up some. The sky was a pale blue with scattered white puffy clouds. “Hey Riku, do you mind if I sit with you?” Kairi questioned.

    Riku smiled. “No, I don’t mind. I would like it a lot if you sat with me. Come sit down,” Kairi carefully sat down next to Riku. He continued to smile and continued. “So, you’ve mad your decision?” He asked her and ever so slow placed his arm around her shoulder.

    Kairi glared at him and then when he didn’t get off she started to squirm. “Riku, get off of me!” Riku quickly took his arm off. Kairi continued talking. “Why do you want me to choose between you and Sora? You are both my friends! What do you want me to do?”

    Riku laughed. “Kairi, you don't get it. We are done with sharing you. Of course I want you to pick me, and why wouldn’t you?”

    Kairi was definitely annoyed with him. “Riku, go get Sora and meet me back in my room. I want to talk to both of you!” Riku got up and ran to go find Sora.

    ---
    Kairi’s Room

    “Wow.” Sora exclaimed. “So this is what Kairi’s Room looks like.”

    Riku laughed. “Wait, you’re serious, you’ve never been in here before?”

    Kairi stood up. Neither Riku nor Sora had seen her. “Riku, when have you been in my room?” Kairi questioned.

    Riku smiled and winked. “Oh, sorry I didn’t know that you didn’t want Sora to know about that.”

    “About what?” Sora yelled, suddenly quite defensive.

    “Relax Sora.” Kairi said to him. “Riku has never been in my room. He was just trying to make you jealous. Okay, will one of you please tell me why I have to choose? I mean you’re such good friends, why fight. What ever I end up saying, one of you will hate my and I really would not want that to happen!”

    Riku decided to start. “Well you don’t have to choose.”

    Kairi instantly smiled. “I don’t?”

    Riku smiled. “Of course you don’t! I mean you don’t need to choose, because you already know you’re going to pick me. Look at Sora. He’s is so tiny! And he’s an immature, crying baby.”

    Sora looked up his mouth quivering, on the verge of tears. “I am not!”

    Kairi laughed and then looked serious. “Do you know how immature you sound when you say that?”

    Sora smiled. “Yeah”

    Kairi was annoyed. “Shut up Sora, you are just as immature.” Both boys looked up. They were angry. “You both have to realize that the more you put each other down, the more I don’t like you, either of you. And who knows. Maybe I won’t choose either of you” She smirked.

    Sora was confused. “Who else is there?”

    Kairi was still annoyed. “Well, maybe I’m not going to tell you.”

    Riku decided to talk after a while. “Relax Sora, there’s no one else. But why does it matter. We both know perfectly well that she’s picking me.”

    Kairi looked up in confusion and said. “What?”

    Sora was mad for real now. “Yeah, I mean she’s hugged me, twice. That’s more that you can say.”

    Kairi had it with them. “You guys just don’t get it! You both need to stop it! You two stay here and settle this. I’ll be in my room until you two have talked it over!”

    Sora looked. “Um Kairi, this is your room.” Riku stopped him from saying anymore and dragged him out of her room.

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    Okay I hoped you liked it. Please vote on the poll and comment :D
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007, 10 replies, in forum: Archives
  18. dancecat120
    Sorry it took so long for this one to come out. I had to do this stupid thing called sleeping. I have taken into consideration of the comments I have recieved. There will be more spaces and longer chapters! In this chapter Kairi confronts Sora! Before I say much more, here's the story: :D

    Please note that none of this happened in the game, it is made up.

    Here's the link to the first chapter: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9701


    Chapter Two

    Kairi stayed in her room for the rest of the day. She was scared and confused mostly. She didn’t want to face them. She couldn’t decide between Riku and Sora, they were her best friends. Her current goal was to avoid seeing them at all costs.

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    She woke up at around 9:00 the next morning. She had a horrible dream last night. She could strangely remember it in great detail. Usually she only remembered bits and pieces of her dream but could never seem to get the whole thing back into her head. This was different. She could remember everything about this dream as if it had really happened! She was talking to Riku and Sora. For some reason they wanted her to choose between them! Good thing it was just a dream, if that had really happened, who knows what she would do.

    Today was another gloomy day. Another gray sky filled with clouds. Thankfully today there was no rain. The sky made it look like there should have been rain, but currently, there was none. She wanted to find Sora so that she could tell him about her dream. This morning she was so anxious, she hardly bothered trying to look nice. She saw him walking out of his room. He looked tired still and his hair was all over the place. For some reason he seemed mad. She hoped that he and Riku weren’t in a fight again.

    “Hey, Sora, wait up!” She yelled after him.

    Sora stopped and turned around. “Hi Kairi, are having a nice day?” Sora asked.

    “Yeah, my day has been nice so far. I had this really weird dream last night.” She started to tell him all about her dream.

    Sora looked up, he no longer had a mad look on his face, but it wasn’t happy either. “Kairi, that wasn’t a dream, it really did happen.” He said and looked at her like she was crazy. Then the you’re crazy Kairi look disappeared off of his face. In its place came a look of happiness with a little bit of embarrassment. “So, have you chosen yet Kairi?”

    Kairi looked angry and confused. “Why? Why do you want me to choose between you? You two are my best friends. What do you want me to do?” Kairi finished her statement and starred at him, waiting for a reply.

    Sora was smiling again. Wow, doesn’t he look cute when he smiles? Kairi told herself to stop and pushed the positive Sora thoughts out of her head. She continued to wait for a response. “Well, I want you to choose me of course!” Suddenly he stopped smiling and looked a bit sad. “I don’t know why Riku wants you to choose, but everything is a fight between us I just figured that you’re the next fight.”

    Kairi looked angry now. “I don’t care why Riku wants me to choose, I want to know why you want me to!”

    Sora took a few steps back. “Wow, no need to get angry. I just want you to choose so that we can be together.”

    Kairi was definitely confused now. “Wait, who ever said I was choosing you?”

    Sora smiled. “Well, look at him. The guy is so old! He even has gray hair! He was on the dark side for a while, do you really want him?”

    Kairi was mad and disgusted. “Sora you idiot, the more you make fun of him, the less I want you!” She stormed off shaking her head.

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    So that was chapter two! Hope you liked it. Yet again please comment and vote on the poll. Criticism is welcome!
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 13, 2007, 17 replies, in forum: Archives
  19. dancecat120
    Okay I have decided to attempt to create a story. I don't know how it will turn out. And yes, this is my first story. Please note that none of this ever happened in the game! I would very much appreciate it if people were completly honest about what they really think. If you feel that it is bad, please do tell me so. So now that everyone thinks that the story is going to be horrible (:) ) here it is!:

    Chapter One
    Setting: Destiny Island


    Kairi suddenly woke up. She must have had some sort of bad dream. She couldn’t remember it what had happened or even what it was about so she just decided to forget it. She looked up the clock in her room; the time was 9:30 so she decided to get up. She climbed out of bed and brushed her hair. After she was done she put on her pink dress. She always felt prettier when she wore it and she wanted to look good for Sora and Riku. Even though neither of them had really told her that they liked her... it was quite apparent that they did.
    She decided to see if anyone else was up yet. As soon as she left her room and got out side, she could tell that the usually clear blue sky had been replaced by a dark gray-blue, cloudy sky. There was heavy rain coming down. She quickly ran to the cave where she used to draw some times.
    When she got there Sora and Riku were already there. They were fighting- typical- and it appeared that Sora was winning. Sora looked up and smiled at her. While Sora did that, Riku hit him. “Hey, Riku, that was so unfair! I was just saying hi to Kairi!” Sora whined. Kairi placed her hand over her mouth and giggled. She thought it was adorable how whiny and immature Sora was. But she liked how Riku took every possible chance to beat Sora as well. She happened to like them both, a lot. She always had.
    Kairi watched them fight for a while. It was really boring to her. All they did was whack each other with sticks. Come on, don’t they have anything better to do? After what seemed like forever, Sora gave up. Smiling, Riku took a bow. Then he looked up and winked at Kairi. “Riku, what was that for?” Kairi questioned.
    “Well, Sora and I have been talking lately. We both like you a lot. We know that you already know that. We both want you.” Kairi looked up, confused and let Riku continue. “You see Kairi, Sora and I aren’t kids anymore. We have many more feelings than we used to. Many of those feelings, are about you. We are tired of fighting over you Kairi! We want you to choose!” Riku ended.
    Kairi looked up startled. She knew it would come to this sooner or later. She had of course hoped it would be later, “You want me to what?” Kairi asked.
    Sora looked up now, he was definitely angry. “We want you to chose who you like Kairi. Me or him. There is no happy medium.”
    Kairi knew what she heard was true. She wouldn’t accept it though. She was scared and ran back inside to her room.


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    Okay that is it so far. Please comment! Be completly honest :)
    Thread by: dancecat120, Apr 12, 2007, 19 replies, in forum: Archives