thanks i'll look over the line structure awwww ur too sweet for your own good sometimes but i love you and i'm glad yo liked the poem
I love you like I’ve never loved before. Being alone and upset my heart it tore. Now you’re by my side, someone who is mine. Your sweet words make everything seem fine. When I’m sad you’re there to give me a hug, maybe even a kiss. At night your presence I dearly miss. I don’t want this moment to ever end. Together, you and me, because my heart you did mend. I want our few minutes together to turn into hours or days. When I’m alone my heart for you it prays. With you next to me I see the world with different eyes. Between us there is no madness, or sorrow not even lies. You are the sun that shines my life. Without you in my life in my heart there is a knife. I’m glad you came into my life because you’ve turned it upside down. When I’m with you I feel like I’m wearing a crown. I am the princess and you are my charming prince. Please stay with me because life has been a blast ever since. i wrote this part of yesterday and today once again it is cheezy but cute so CnC please
i like it a lot i've been using raindrop as a metaphor for some of my writing i posted one here but this one is so sad and sweet i like it and it sucks when u can't let go because that is the hardest part hope you can't relate to the poem but incase u do i'm rly sry *gives cookie*
aww that was a really cute and sweet poem i like it fab job luna!! :)
my fav anime song is colors of the heart its i thik the 2nd new opening of Blood Plus
awww gracias that really was amazingly sweet
We are like the first raindrop. We are fresh, happy, and one. We are together combined as one. I love you and you love me. Nothing can and will tear us apart. You are my everything and mine. One second away from you makes me sad. In one second without you I feel like dying so just imagine two seconds. I like the feeling of you standing next to me knowing you like me. I love the way you smile at me and the way you protect me. In that raindrop that we are, we land together to look at the sky. We stay and watch the rest of the rain fall. Then when the rainbow comes you hold my hand and say you want me. You say you're my leprechaun with a pot of love instead of gold. I kiss you and want to keep you with me forever. Please keep raining so I can see the rainbow. The rainbow that leads me to you and only you. I love you. yes this is extremeley cheezy but i'm in"love" well thats a strong word but like is too weak so you decide. i admit it isn't my best but either way i want to see your comments please
1) Do you know what it is? 2) Have you read any? 3) Do you like it? 4) What is your favorite pairing? 5) Do you write any? 1) yes 2) yes 3) yes 4) Ryden and Treckett 5) not really
I sit down at my desk and patiently wait for my name to be called. I look around and i see a mixture of faces, some are happy, others sad, and few seem careless. At last I'm called and my teacher bears a big smile on her face. I walk up, take my paper, and Congrats is all I am told. I sit down at my desk and look at my paper. Straight A's all the way down. A classmate leans over and says " Congrats." I am left speechless. The bell rings and I'm the first one out of class. It takes me a minute to get my things and I quickly exit the building. As I'm walking on the sidewalk I continue to stare at my report card and tears trickle down my face. This small piece of paper is all that makes me worth something. My thoughts, ideas are meaningless, even my feelings! No one cares that I love candy or that poems are my life. No, alll that matter are my grades. I HATE IT!!! why is being smart the only thing that counts?!?!?The day i fail a class will that make me be worthless and useless? I tear up my report card into pieces and throw it on the ground. Tears of frustration fill my eyes and without looking back i continue to walk. Let me worthless and meaningless becauseI could care less. I'd rather be ignored and trampled on than be appreciated for silly letters on paper. I walk back and pick up the pieces of my report card. When i get home i place them on the table . Let my parents see what i think of my life because it's my choice. And I choose to have my report card be shoved up my a** than admired upon because the worthless one is that paper not me I wrote this forever ago and i know its not a poem but i wrote it in this format because .......well i don't know i just write whatever like this in my notebooks but yeah...its an okay piece of writing i hope you guys like it !!!
hey just wondering if you checked any of my old poems out and if you liked any
yeah i've had writer's block lately so idk but if you like it check out some of my old ones they're not too good but hey they're something
lol thanks i'm glad you liked it :)
yeah i have read it i went totally insane because it was so amazing i've read the whole trilogy and i can't wait for the 4th book to come out i totally fell in love with all the characters its a phenomenal read :)
i wrote this poem today like 3 or 4 hours ago its mkay but i feel it need more what do you think Lost I thought I loved you but in the end I guess I was wrong. You seemed perfect in every way but a new seed was being formed. I no longer cared about you and simply saw you as a friend. All those mixed emotions I felt for you were slowly coming to an end. I began to care for one thing and nothing else. The thing I looked for could not be found not even in my house. This abstract object had me mad for I thought it was forever lost. Yet I was determined to find it no matter the cost. What possible thing could have made me forget you, you ask. Easy, I decided it was time to pull off the mask. It was time to look for me.
uh...get to know her better and ask her out??? or be a coward and drool from a distance every time she goes by you
mkay muffin :)
lol i was thinking adoption
hmm... i wouldn't mind one but i think i'd be a bad mom :P
aww that really sucks poor you buti know its awful but if he was in suffering i'm sure he will be better off but either way its horrible "gives cookie"
lol cute kids muffins :P i'll babysit anytime they're so adorable