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Hey, I just started writing poetry, and I would appreciate some feedback, whether it be good, or bad.

I'm sad because you remind me of myself.
And that's someone

nobody

wants to be.
Because,
you get in this like,

spiral,

and you don't think that you can get out.
And you don't care,
because it feels good.

Powerful.

And you want to die,
because

nobody would care anyway.
And you do harm to yourself,
because

nobody wants you.

And you feel so alone.

And you cry.

Well, maybe not the cry part,

but,

You know,
you don't think that you can get out,
and you get

happy about that.

It's fun destroying yourself,
when

nobody's there.

When nobody notices

the tears you hide,

or the lies and scars,

so well washed upon your skin,

fresh from this mornings activities,

and last night's festivities.

It's a

rush,

when you can do things that you shouldn't
and can

kill you.

And it hurts the ones you love the

dearest.

It's the ultimate high.

I don't like this one as much, but I wrote it for a friend, and what she was going through.

Cry little girl.
Cry all your tears.
Cry for mommy and daddy and all your worst fears.
Don't hold back, the time is near,
you need to release,
to feel,
and to hear.
Don't fake being happy,
with a crooked smile on your face;
there's no need to lie,
just memories to erase.
Cry about your famliy,
your friends,
and past loves.
Cry about your scars,
your ugly,
and your sister spending all her time at bars.
Cry about the drugs,
the poverty,
the lies.
Cry your eyes out,
little girl,
let them fall like rainshine.
Cry your hardest,
it'll all be over soon.
And when it's all said and done,
you will be the one who wasn't fooled.