Apology Glad to hear you're nearly done. Sorry I didn't give any feedback on your work but my computer's got a virus so I'm using either my dad's computer or my PS3 to go on the internet until my computer's fixed or I get a replacement
Nice work on the chapters. Sorry I'm late but I've been busy at college, was ill for the past 2 weeks. Right now, I'm still recovering.
It's been over a month since your last chapter in your kh/sonic crossover so I thought maybe I can help if you've got any trouble with continuing...
That was a quick chapter. Anyway, I mentioned the website about where I thought it could be a good opening if it was like a tv show and here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E2w2R39QV4Q Don't worry, it's just an opinion.
Nice chapters so far. I bet Yzma will be more madly concerned about Kuzco being still alive than she would about the hedgehog potion Kronk dropped. (snickers)
The 'Huge Waterfall' chapter was good. What I don't believe is that after all of the worlds Sora, Sonic and went to so that they could get the chaos emeralds, 4 of the emeralds they found were fake! It's almost like Eggman used technology similar to what the Meterax from Sonic X used to make the fake emeralds or took a page from Tails' book and made the fake emeralds himself. Maybe even advanced the technology if those fakes can fool Shadow. I wonder what wil happen next.
Wow I never expected Sora and co. to end up in world of Emperor's new groove, let alone Sora turning into a hedgehog. Oh and about the email I gotten rid of before, I actually did some counting through the other chapters. Its 1 in Station Square, 2 in Port Royal, 2 in Twilight Town, 2 in TWTNW, 2 in Agrabah and so that makes 9 unless you do some editing on at least two or more of the chapters.
Great work! I was playing an mv of 'A Whole New World' while looking at the lyrics here and I could just imagine Sora and Kairi about to kiss each other at the end of the song. Too bad Shadow interrupted though. And Sora was so close too!
It should be interesting to see how having Hara and Ryoko there will affect the new worlds they and the others will go to like, for example, The Land of Dragons or Pride Land.
Hi, it's been a while. You did a good start on the add-on. I look forward to the next chapter.
To SlippingStar Actually, COM is straight after the first KH so Sora is still 14, but probably a few months older, so he is 15 in KHII
I looked at it a few times and I gotta say, a few errors e.g. how did the Lord of Dragons get special summoned? Other than that, everything else looks good so far.
Nice cliffhanger. Just a thought, but maybe you could add more characters later on in the story.
Nice move, adding the part of when Hara who forces Sora to battle with her on Destiny Islands. Can't wait to see what happens next.
That's a good beginning on this world. It's creepy, just right for 'Haunted Mansion'.
I've read it and so far, I think it's great. Keep it up P.S. I bet there'll be plenty of drama when Sora discovers about the metal version of himself
Appreciate the mail. Thanks
Just asking but, what's your username at gaming source?
I read all of your chapters and I gotta say, that was amazing!
[To Shades] Just an idea of one of new worlds to visit alongside old ones like Olympus Coliseum [To Kentucky Hearts] You could also mabye try adding more characters that are chosen by keyblades like you did before
