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  1. Konefeddi
    This is my first fanfic so be gentle. This fanfic happens after Kingdom Hearts 2. Something happend the last time I typed this so I had to re-type this whole thing (that sucked)(this time or everytime now im going to copy it at the end just incase it messes up again lol).



    Ch. 1 Realization
    "OMIGAWD, what has that runt with the keyblade done to my perfect copies of us?!" Vexen shouted.

    "Well, uh . . . why did Xemy ask you to make copies of us again Vexen?" Demyx asked.

    "Just so we could watch ourselves die again?" Axel asked looking more clueless than Demyx.

    "Talk about blank with a capital 'B'." Xigbar stated.

    "Then why did he ask you Vexy?" Larxene asked while looking like Axel and Demyx in their confused state.

    "Well, I guess if we quit bickering, maybe he would tell us." Zexion said coldly shooting a glare at Axel, Demyx and Larxene sitting in their white chairs. Then nodded at Vexen.

    "Well" Vexen started "Superior wanted copies of us to get some data. That might not be his true aim, but that’s all he made clear to me."

    Axels face brightened as if he understood some of what Vexen was talking about.

    "To fix your earlier statement Vexen, there was another keyblade wielder, Riku." Zexion stated.

    Vexen's face grew red with anger from Zexion correcting him. Everyone watched to see what would happen next.

    Demyx, out of his confused state, returned to his playful self. "Dance Water! Dance!" Some water splashed Vexen's face as if to kewl ( = my way of saying cool, it is easier to spell it that way for me lol) him off. This only made him grow angrier. Everyone busted out laughing (except Vexen). An insulted Vexen disappeared into a shadow portal he created while everyone laughed.

    Vexen reappeared at The Altar of Naught (all of the Organization were in the lower part of The World That Never Was while Sora and everybody else was here. They hid there to let their copies gather info. and such (oh and I don’t know why this had relevance to this part I just put it here)) only to find Xemnas. He was marveling at their Kingdom Hearts (somehow it survived). "Superior . . . what are we going to do about" Vexen pointed at the brilliance of Kingdom Hearts "that?"

    "Well, we could always try again, try to unlock it or . . . destroy it" Xemnas said with his orange eyes staring into the emanating glow of purple. "After we destroy it, we would have to remake it if we still need Kingdom Hearts." Xemnas quickly added.

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    Leave some gentle comments as I said this is my first fanfic so CnC? (I dont even know what that means but since other people say that at the end of a chapter I will too lol)
    Thread by: Konefeddi, Dec 24, 2008, 15 replies, in forum: Archives
  2. Konefeddi
    Where would I like post a . . . uuummm like a fanfiction at? Im new to this site . . . ( and not to bright either:stupid:, i didnt even know how to make a new thread until I clicked that button "New Topic") so some help would be very appreciated TY!!
    Thread by: Konefeddi, Dec 18, 2008, 2 replies, in forum: Feedback & Assistance