Tthis is my very first fanfic every so some good constructive critisism would help, thankyou :) It's writen in he said she said pov so you can guess who they are by the discription i give (i'll say who they are at the end) oh and it takes plase befor kh So with out ferther ado... Secret Admire He watched her from the coffee hop window as she walked down the streets in all her misunderstood beauty.She didn't notice him there, infact she didn't notice him at all eventhough she saw him every day.But he was ther trying to comprehened her strange characteristics.he had something to say to her but he knew that she was too good for him.He tryed seeing himself with her but the vission never quite fit.He even tryed to compare and contrast, but always came up with more contrat. It was starting to rain so she huried into the coffee shop for a warm shelter. She started up to the cashier serching for her walete but it came up empty.Fortunatly for her it was him. He'd already prepared her usual and plased it in frount of her. "It's on me" he said in a low voice as to not disrupt the peacfull suroundings of the coffee shop. "Thanks'she said with a smile.He liked it when she smiled, it was rare but when she did it was nice and he wanted to make her smile more. he sat down at a small table next to the window. The pail light of the sun through the storm clouds complemented her colorless complextion in his eyes.He acknoleged her every detail from her sun lit hair and curvy figure to her bloodless lips and emerald eyes.A cupple minutes passed had by and the rain let up a little.He watched her as she rushed down the wet streets before the rain started up again.Her departure didn't bother him that much for there always tomorrow... end chapter 1 well its short but its a start! :D it's clear that this was a complete waste of like 2 minutes of your life but thanks for your time! :D so if you'd be so nice as to a respons i'd be prety happy! :) and i'll be motivated to put up chapter 2
first rp hope this works... WWSD?(what would sora do?) after kh2,sora returned to destiny island and told the children about his great adventures. sora then leaves to go fight more heartless and nobodies taking riku and kairi with him. well some children deside to do a little exploring of their own to sora,riku,and kairi's secreat place only to discover the door.tey get worled off to different words with weapon that,if used properly,should help them stay alive as they fight their way through each world so they can get back home. All through out their journy they find themselves asking,What Would Sora Do? you can play only 1-3 character from any kh,ff (except sroa,riku,kair or any of the org 13 mebers...at least not yet..) game or disney character you like and join in at any time put your name,age,world,and weapon mine is: name/fuu age/10 world/destiny island weapon/a reagular bat with nails in it we can strat as soon as at least 2 other people join to destiny island pm me if you have any questions. lullaby13 name/fuu age/10 world/destiny island weapon/a reagular bat with nails in it Larxene~Miss Antenne2~ Name: Aeris Gainsborough (main) Age: 10 World: Hollow Bastion (in the roleplay) Weapon: Strong wooden staff Name: Rikku Age: 9 World: Hollow Bastion (in the roleplay) Weapon: 2 Daggers Ienzo Name: Cloud Age: (I'm making this up) 20 World: Hollow Bstion/Radient Garden Weapon: An oversized sword Name: Simba Age: N/A World: Pride lands Weapon: Claws and teeth Jordie0xs0x Name: Jordie (She is my main character) Age: 12 World: Twilight Town Weapon: A medium sized sword with markings on it she cant understand Name: Krystal Age: 13 World: Twilight Town Weapon: A long sliver chain she spins around (Like Selphie's skipping rope) Color (Her color for when she speaks): Pink
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is there already a thread like this?oh well i just put it here cuz i donno where eals it could go.any way this is how old i think every one in org.13 is starting with 1.xenmas-late 20's or early 30's 2.xigbar-somewhere in his 30's 3.xaldin-about 27 or 29 4.vexen-90! alright 50 or something like that 5.lexaeus-this ones hard im gonna say either 30-something or 40-something 6.zexion-is it me or does he look younger in the manga than he does in the game? well i read some where that he is the youngest and the shortest of org.13 so ill go with late teens(mana)or early 20's(game) 7.saix-same as xaldin 27-29 8.axel-18 9.demyx-17 10.luxord-35 11.marluxia-25 12.larxene-i say 17 my friend(not of this site cuz idont have any here) says 14 13.roxas-well we all know he's 15 well this is just how old i think they are go ahead and post however old you think they are
helo i lullaby13,new to this site as most people who introduce themself are.
