So lately I've been experimenting with poetry in my free time...thinking of ideas...such as picking words 100% at random and encorporating each and every one of the chosen words into a poem (that was fun :D) Now today I had this idea...Writing a story...Completely out of poetry :3 I am about to write it here and now...Starting from 2:15 in the morning UK time..how this will go...We will see~ The curious case of Hansel Life is sometimes dull Drifting along like dust in the wind Finding that those "responsible" speak nothing but bull But one man created a trail of blood, one man sinned It was a quiet afternoon This is the spine chilling case Of a man they now call "Hansel" A little sunny A little breezy But very simple Hansel's day went as normal Wake up. Eat. Work. Eat. Sleep. Repeat. Frustration was building No excitement, no friends, no fun, no help A man who was lost in the world One day in the office, innocently walking Hansel bumps into a young woman She fell The blood spilled Hansel felt shock Not knowing what to do he just watched Drip. Drop. Drip. Drop. The puddle spread beneath Hansel's boots Nobody blamed him, an innocent accident Hansel attended the funeral Many comforted him His lack of remorse was taken as shock But inside he was smiling, laughing He felt alive He looked around and took in the gorgeous nature of life His mind replaying the scene of an acquaintances death Sick thoughts spread through his mind In the few days following the funeral Hansel knew what to do He had plans And suddenly one by one random people weredying Some deaths obscure Some deaths with hidden messages Hansel was desperate Spilling blood made him feel alive yet sick But he knew it was wrong He was desperate to be caught His messages were always hidden too well Five months later Hansel was discovered He made a trail of blood leading straight to his doorstep Sweet irony, a lost man finding his way back home Following the trail of blood He demanded to be known only as "Hansel" In a note left on the door Hansel was discovered However it was his own blood on the walls Hansel, Hansel, Hansel Finding life in death, and death in life CnC is more than welcome for this ^_^ it's just an experimental idea...if you think it went well I ma write more...Perhaps of better quality...when it's not 2:40 in the morning -_- thanks for reading ^_^
So I'm doing some volunteering this summer...On such short notice the asked me to go away on a residential t helplook after some young people ^_^ So I shall be leaving on monday for 5 days, then returning but most likely not being online then going for another 5 days...So it'll be a ittle under 2 weeks before I see you wonderful lovely people again :3 we'll meet again, don't know where, don't know wheeeeee-*shot*
Issues with my girlfriend (M)...So last night I spent the evening at an "anime night" a local group organizes gatherings of anime fans and various fun happens. This is fine. What is not fine is that a friend kissed me whilst there (it was just a peck, not making out). Being the loyal and honest I told M about this...We've been arguing all day and we never argue...I told her that I did not initiate the kiss...However the person that kissed me (C) claimed I kissed her later in the evening...Then C insisted that no kissing happened...Then C told us that we BOTH initiated the kiss...In between she was also saying she doesn't remember because she was very tired...Now C has been causing us a lot of problems lately...And unfortunately M believes C...All day I've felt like a broken record...Telling her I didn't start the kiss...Apparently just because C said I did at first, this is proof. Now I insist I didn't (I will swear to you now...I did not start that kiss). M disagrees...And I burst into tears...I have cried so much today...I just want this to end...How can I get M to see sense? Please, any ideas are welcome...I need to show her the truth...I'm frightened that our 6 month relationship may be on the line...And I really truly love her. Thank you so much for any help <3 EDIT: My main concern is tht if she cant trust me with this...Then...How can she trust me with anything? It'll only get worse and if our relationship lasts...She'll be in constant misery because she won't know how to let me go out...every time I talk to someone she'll be questioning my loyalty...I am so worried about this...
What the heck did I buy? I barely started...I ran away fro a policeman with a gun, I stole a car, I ran over the policeman...The game told me "mission accomplished" I got out of the car, I shook the cop asking if he's okay! I just ran the man who was trying to kill me over, who cares if he's okay? And of course he gets up and shoots me in the chest..Seriously, is this game just for lols?
I'm Rob! Hi there! So I notice quite of people post around here so I was hoping to gain some CnC for some works of mine? :3 thanks guys and I hope you enjoy my little corner of poetry~I literally just wrote this...I very often take peoples troubles and try to ramble on until they see some sense ^_^ Tonight I was inspired to write about it after a friend of mine threatened suicide (I figured that the best poetry comes straight from the heart...So I figured I'd show y'all where I was coming from with these~ If it just sounds stupid or anything I can always edit it out ^_^) Nattering on about nothing~ My life is fine, my intentions are pure I have an angel, her heart is one with mine I embrace anything that comes my way I take it with a smile And any time a problem arises I start nattering on about nothing As if I confiscate your knife Nattering on about nothing The story of my life I offer you my shoulders I offer you the world To make sure you don't erase yourself To make sure you smile once more So you come to me with your troubles Just like I insisted So I can start nattering on about nothing As if I confiscate your knife Nattering on about nothing The story of my life I watch over you with a smile on my face I watch over you while you smile with grace I can't help but laugh Laugh at how I helped put this smile on your face I didn't do much In fact I just listened Listened and started nattering on about nothing As if I confiscated your knife Nattering on about nothing The story of my life I wrote this one while my dad and step-mum were arguing...I knew my sisters could hear them and I was inspired by sea life so this one is derived from all those factors...It's one of my favourites of my own ^_^ The girl and the beast~ A small girl stands Eight, nine perhaps ten None-the-less arms spread wide Facing the fierce waves Each pillar of harsh water crashes The lightning crack And from the depths rise the tentacles of the mighty Krakken Sailors told sailor stories And mothers told of tales at bed time Yet to none was it more real Than this small girl Battling the waves of watery grave Defiantly waiting for the beast Eternity passed, bystanders in shock Storms raged and fires blazed Cannons fire, guns are popped But the beast could not be stopped It approaches the girl on the rocks The lightning in her eyes sparked It reached for her, striking fear and panic into all those present But the girl, the girl. What happened next was a miracle The girl and the beast Locked together in a sweet embrace And together, together they fall In sweet sweet harmony they sink to the bottom of the deep blue To make their reality last an eternity And to no longer be the girl and the beast I was tired and inspired by lullaby's I totally agree that it's not my best work but I like it ^_^ Hush hush, quiet quiet Hush hush, quiet now A mouse whispers in the night Hush hush, quiet now He received quite a fright Hush hush, quiet now Close your eyes Hush hush, quiet now Hush hush, quiet now Let the songbirds sing their song Hush hush, quiet now Have you heard something is very wrong? Hush hush, quiet now Into my arms and hush little darling Hush hush, quiet now I told a lie Hush hush, quiet now All is fine, I wanted to try Hush hush, quiet now I love you so, let us kiss And hush hush, quiet now So fairly often I'll remember a horrific nightmare...Be it recent or something long forgotten...But when I wrote this I remembered a particularly nasty one where I was pretty bad...And so I wrote about how a dream doesnt accurately show who you are at all ^_^ Curse of the mirror Once upon a time a man found a mirror It was a very peculiar mirror Who is the fairest of all? It did not tell But instead captivated me in it's spell Outwards and inwards Colourless, yet colourfull All in an instant the reflection stares at me While I end up being the one staring back at him Half colour,half a breath, half a sigh, half a life In sweet innocence I am complete But then why does the peculiar mirror show half a colour? The mirror breaks, the man smiles Whistling all the while He is free, he is complete so it seems The mirror was simply a thing of dreams I felt emotional about modern day war when I wrote this...The poor people of countries where dictators and rebels rise up and start killing entire towns of people at a time in their bid to rise to power...Senseless killing is horrific but somewhere out there it still goes on...And I wanted to write from the point of view of some form of victim Stories by the fire~ Join us around the fire As I tell my tale Of a life once lived And a home we once knew We stood our ground Watched the fire burn our homes Watched the fire burn our hopes People screaming, crying for help But none arrive as guns fire overhead Hours passed and the air doesn't clear Smoke passes and atmospheres thicken Death and decay, no longer can we fight I lost a leg I got lucky I lost my family I lost my possessions I lost my home But I have not lost spirit I continue to fight For if I don't more will face my suffering The killing won't end If I do not make a stand now No one ever will So join me by the fireside Warm yourself and eat For tomorrow I lead the way to freedom And a life worth living ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is the end of my first installment of my very own poems. Any and every comment is more than welcome :) But regardless of any criticism you may have I sincerely hope you enjoyed the poetry ^_^ thanks for reading~
This isn't really urgent or anything...It's just something I really wish I could fix so if anyone can offer advice then I'd really appreciate it. :3 So I've come to a sudden realization that I am very passive and/or indecisive...A lot of the time I find difficulty arriving at a decision...sometimes even when one option is much more dominant. I hate to ask but I feel like it causes problems...especially as of late. So the main problem is within my relationship...Both me and (Let's call her M) are aware of it...But it can cause misunderstandings and such...Particularly when we talk about current problems, opinions, intimacy or the future and I find myself saying "I don't mind" or "I don't know" very often...And she will insist that I must have an opinion...But the fact of the matter is that if I'm asked if something's right or wrong...I'll immediately start weighing out different factors and find myself unable to reach a sudden decision on my opinion. But the thing is that when I struggle to find an opinion M automatically assumes that I'm uncomfortable with the topic when I'm not and it's a bother for her. I have spoken with her about this and the only thing she could suggest was to try and make little decisions and work my way up to big ones...But I struggle with something as simple as "what do you feel like doing?" or "Do you want to go to the park?" So please if any of you pretty pretty people have any ideas on getting over passivity (Auto-check didn't correct that...There I was thinking I'd invented a work xDD) or indecisiveness then pretty please could you offer them? <3 thank you duckies~
A theory about game prices...He says that to him a game is worth the hours on the game clock...So if he spends 30 hours playing, then the game is worth £30 So using my friends theory how much is the kingdom hearts series worth to you? For me I can only work on a rough average since i lost some of the games and reinvested and such...But I believe it's about £301 so far
I wrote this in class when we did a topic on homeless people, it's one of my favourite poems of my own work and I'd like to hear what you guys think (Be as critical as you like ^_^) "Homeless man out on his own Homeless man sleeping on stone Homeless man has lost his life Homeless man with bloody knife Homeless man smiling and free Homeless man, family and key Homeless man with job and money Homeless man eating sugar and honey Homeless man's life was stressed Homeless man, fights, violence and all the rest Homeless man finds an escape Homeless man's addiction starts to take shape Homeless man on the street Homeless man has lost his beat Homeless man cannot be found Homeless man finds a new crowd Homeless man looks back in hate Homeless man's life that sealed his fate Homeless man misses it so Homeless man who fell loose from the flow Homeless man is pained Homeless man's addiction leaves him strained Homeless man is finding it hard Homeless man got himself barred Homeless man has had enough Homeless man doesn't like sleeping in the rough Homeless mans new escape Homeless man, don't worry, it's just a scrape Homeless man has knife in heart Homeless man's time to depart Homeless man's final beat will cease Homeless man finally found some peace."
Hey everyone! How are you all? My name's Rob...Or Travis (A nickname I picked up, I don't know how xDD) It's a pleasure to meet you all (Or it will be when I meet you :3) So uh...I love kingdom hearts! That is what brings me here :3 Aside from that...I have lt of interest...There isn't lot that I dislike but so so much that I do like. I really hope we can be friends! :D
