1. Cold

Discussion in 'Archives' started by TheLightIsGone123, Feb 12, 2009.

  1. TheLightIsGone123 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Drip Drip Drip
    The echo of the bloodied knife falling from his hand to the floor rings in his ear
    Drip Drip Drip
    Her body coiled on the floor, the blood pouring from the small wounds on her chest slow to a faint trickle
    Drip Drip Drip
    Both of their eyes are glazed over, his are red and swollen, her cold gray and dead
    Drip Drip Drip
    Blood begins to flow from his nose, a faint reminder that it's broken
    Drip Drip Drip
    He rises from the floor and steps through the pool of blood encompasing her still warm body
    Drip Drip Drip
    She continues to bleed alone in the dark
    The love they have for eachother has never been stronger
    Drip
    Drip
    Drip
     
  2. Senbonzakura Kageoshi Kingdom Keeper

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    wow this is really enticing and revealing! two thumbs way up!
     
  3. TheLightIsGone123 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanks
    im glad you liked it
    first thing ive written in months and im actually happy with how it turned out