A Dedicated Poem: Please

My friend, please don't cry
Please, don't let me see
Your precious eyes, so full of tears
Threatening to fall down your cheeks

My friend, please don't frown
Please, don't let me see
Your precious face, etched with sorrow
And so full of pain

My friend, please don't hate yourself
Please, don't let me see
Your angry eyes, so full of emotion
Hatred, as well as sadness

But...

My friend, please laugh
Please, let me see
Your precious voice, so full of joy
I can hear your delight

My friend, please smile
Please, let me see
Your precious mouth, curved upward
Beaming at me

My friend, please love yourself
Please, let me see
Your precious heart, showing love
It makes me happy

So don't weep anymore...

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This isn't one of my best poems...but I put my best effort forward for my friend, Chaser007...yes, this is for you, Chaser... :)​

 

YAY for Nymph good work again.... why is it i'm always first to comment on your work?

 

It's a really pretty poem, even if you say it isn't one of your best. It's better than any poem I've tried to write.

 

lol Thanks. And because...you read my mind! XD

Thanks. :) And you wrote some poems? If you've posted any, I'd love to read them!

 

Thanks. :) And you wrote some poems? If you've posted any, I'd love to read them![/QUOTE]

I haven't posted any; in fact, I haven't written one in years...

 

Thanks, I feel a better now thanks to this *Hugs* :).

 

Well if you ever do decide to give it a shot again...let me know! XD

I'm glad. :) *hugs back*

 

Ohh Nymph!

j00 ish very talented.

And you write non-depressing poems which makes me happy.

Good jobbies.
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Thank you! :D Unfortunately, I write some pretty depressing poems sometimes. :sweatdrop: lol But anyway, I'm glad you like it. :)

 

Really?

Could you post some? I'd like to see them.

Anyway, back on topic, I liked the second half where you were talking about laughing the best.
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Aw, I liked it a lot, Nymph! Well, I loved it. Great job.

To tell you the truth, that made me feel better cause I'm going through a really tough time as well. Reminds me of what my best friends would say to me.

 

Well, I have one...um, this one: http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=35987

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! :) It took a long time thinking of all the words. XD