A new poem

I just cam up with this about 5 mins ago and it only took about 2 mins to write anyway hope you like it

Listen to the rain
Can you hare them calling?
The Silent angels in the wind
Do you feel the rain falling on you skin?
And the cold wind blowing on your cheeks?
I do and it is what makes me feel alive…

 

I love the way it describes so well the feel of rain. How did I miss this earlier? Great! :)

 

I may of posted it while you wasn't on but I'm gald you like it

 

Sweet! I love how you describe the rain,and I like what you write. Keep writing poems,your good at it!

 

I will, I can never stop writing poems

 

anniexo lexa!!! That is the best poem!! Just amazing!!!

--200th post!! yay--

 

Thats awsome poem I have one to but It anit as good as yours

 

Do you have a good one Jordier??? Post it!

 

The storm is dark but the day is bright
you have to look for that shinning light
The strong is weak but the weak is strong
I have to like where I belong

But the funny thing Is it is i just made up a song out of that then...Weird

 

WOW Jordier! that's deep! very deep.

 

Lol thanks sorry i hadint been posting my brother wanted the comp

 

The Kingdom of Light
The Kingdom Of all our Hearts
We Protect with Might.
Ta-da!a Haiku poem!

 

Can you two please post your poems in there own threads please