A serious question at the end of a beautiful song (awww)

I just wrote these lyrics like, an hour and a half ago in a science lesson...
Happy valentines day everyone!!! =) Hope you guys like this one

(SONG: Within the future)

Look for a memory within the future,
one where you and me are forever,
we can find it together,
just hold my hand and love

beauty isnt true without love,
and love isnt true without beauty,
search for both within our memories.

Sleeping in sunsets that only last a minute,
slit it, let it bleed,
not even beauty can last forever

Look for a memory within the future,
one where you and me are forever,
we can find it together,
just hold my hand and love

oh- this memory we're searching for,
deep inside the future,
it begins with you and ends with me
and shows us whats going to be,
only love can save us now
and we can find that in this memory...

Look for a memory within the future,
one where you and me are forever,
we can find it together,
just hold my hand and love

sometimes there are some things we shouldn't know

Look for a memory within the future,
one where you and me are forever,
we can find it together,
just hold my hand and love

when we found it,
was it a memory of the future
or a figment of the past?

 

Nice lyrics ^^ lets hear you sing them to us now =o lol, j/k

 

That would be funny if she did. Lawl, but cool lyrics.

 

But she does sing. xD

And I bet she owns. <3333

And I love the lyrics. =D

I want to listen to the actual song!! Angel = WIN. <3

 

lol. when i actually record me singing it, ill upload it and put it up here for you guys.. how does that sound??

 

Song ruined since you have that line in it =/ ugh

 

the line will stay in there unless i can find another way to express the same meaning with it... and thats hard, because ive already put all the triggers and everything into the song.

i put [slit it, let it bleed] in there as a trigger for [not even beauty can last forever] its a meaning and therefore, cannot be changed.

but thanks for the comment anyway =)

 

Nice song. Get Evanescence to sing it for you XD

 

I honestly like your lyric writing!
Maybe when we hear the tune then we can judge it?:p

 

1. I dont need Evanescence to sing it for me =) i can do it myself lol
2. Sure you can judge whatever i do whenever you like...
3. There is an interlude between this song and my other song (the lyrics to the other song are in a thread somewhere down below this one) that explains the meaning of both songs... oh and,
4. Yes, i am making an album!! WOOT WOOT!

 

Yessss, ALBUM!

*is buying it* :D

 

this song is so beautiful and elegant
i cant believe you wrote this
its wonder ful:D

 

thank you guys soo much *hugs all*
i hope you all support my album if i end up getting signed to a record company...
or i could sell it on itunes///

 

>_< i wish i could write lyrics as good as you can DX
they're awesome =]
you can sing and write lyrics >.< it's not fair i can only sing D=
good job anyways XD

 

im bringing out an unsigned album soon, hopefully it will hit the states.

im getting recognition XD

 

Well nice song. I like it more because it's a love song an'all and i like romantic stuff (to some point though). Say, you are preparing an album? Why are you some memer of a group or a singer?

 

singer... i used to record all my songs onto my computer before it crashed. Now i'm singing at evey chance i get. I performed at my brother's work the other day... it was so nerve-racking o.o

its unsigned though, which means i dont have a record deal or anything. I'm hoping though ;)