Agni's Philosophy

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  1. . : tale_wind Ice to see you!

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    So, I made a thing based on that Square-Enix tech demo... o///o

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    The instinct rocketed through her veins, yet Agni found herself unmoving. She stared back at the ravaged compound. It was completely surreal; the Prophet had spoken for months about what good would be accomplished today. Where was that now?

    The Behemoth rose from behind her and looked at her, almost expectantly. Agni considered her mangled arms, the tattered ceremonial robes, the dead Hunter, the Militia seeking her out. Her life, now that she thought about it, had completely hinged on the summoning of the Behemoth and the Prophet’s plans for it after the fact. Well, here was the Behemoth...

    It dipped its head at her, then lowered its body. It wasn’t...?

    Uncertainly, Agni approached the Behemoth. No response. She placed a hand on its hide. Nothing. With a grunt of pain, she managed to pull herself onto the Behemoth’s back. It stood back to its full height, seeming pleased, and Agni couldn’t help but smile.

    Well... If there was anywhere to find answers to her questions, it would have to be in the city. It was where the Prophet had come from and, more pressingly, it was where the Militia wasn’t. Before Agni could point in the city’s direction, the Behemoth leapt from the ground and began soaring into the west. Towards the glittering black skyscrapers of the city.

    Her whole life, Agni had always depended on someone else’s philosophy. Now it was time to find her own.


    ~fin~
     
  2. Technic☆Kitty Hmm

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    Interesting story, short as it was. There wasn't any speech though, not sure if that's a problem or not. Spelling and grammar appear alright. as far as a short composition goes, this was alright. Great work ^.^