Discussion in 'Archives' started by Chevalier, Sep 25, 2008.

  1. Chevalier Crystal Princess

    Jan 8, 2008
    Trapped on an Island
    i was speaking to CTR, about the word "Alture" and then, after hearing something this came to mind, its not very good.

    but please CnC.


    I will climb to the end
    were i can finally find rest.

    the end that breaches
    everything in sight
    within all it's glory and might.

    away from conflicts and war
    i'll sleep this night
    without darkness or blight.

    I'll outstrech my arms to the sky.
    and i'll reach toward the light.

    in this high and mighty place.
    i will finally see everything again.

    all the things that fall into place.
    among this grand scheme of life.

    let me reach higher
    among the grasp of angels.

    Don't let me fall
    into the den of Devils.

    where i can only find
    something horrendous.

    let me see light one last time.

    before i fall into a painful demise.
  2. Styx That's me inside your head.

    Sep 16, 2008
    Marvellous flow, and a fitting title. I can picture the narrator pleading for ascent while looking down and fearing the dangers coming towards him. You depicted this in a very stylish manner. Great piece!