Best Poem

Discussion in '2013' started by Misty, Aug 29, 2013.

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Read the poems before voting!

Poll closed Sep 5, 2013.
  1. Be Strong

    55.0%
  2. A Life it Has Been

    45.0%
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  1. Misty gimme kiss

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    "Be Strong" by Odamadillo
    "A Life it has Been" by Myst

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  2. Amaury Legendary Hero

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    Voting for Odamadillo here.
     
  3. Mysty Unknown

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    M-my poem was nominated. O.o I... Well I'm honored.
     
  4. Odamadillo Twilight Town Denizen

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    I am just as surprised as your are.
    It wouldn't be fair to vote for my own so my vote goes to A life it has been.
     
  5. Styx That's me inside your head.

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    Odamadillo
    Odamadillo's piece was exactly as the title promised: empowering. Calling his friends by their names and thus personally involving them was a great idea. Still, some of the lines he used those names in felt a bit underwhelming compared to, say, the opening stanza. Excellent poetry nonetheless.

    Myst
    Myst treads carefully in the realm of imagery, which is a bit of a shame because I'd have liked to see it used more often throughout the poem. On the other hand, this piece was very bold and honest. This naked truth, both touching and moving, covers a wide range of the emotional spectrum. Some rhymes were off, but not to the extent that it distracts from the content. Nice work.

    Both pieces are well deserving of their place here, but I'm gonna go with "A Life It Has Been". It left more of an impression on me.
     
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