epilogue

ok im writing a book and i need feedback on my epilogue. if u dont like it then please be nice about it. and no flaming. (Katachi is the main character, Ekitai is his best friend, Oroshiken is Katachi's darkside that split from him in the beginning, and the old man is the main enemy from book #2. Oh and Sutekki Kouhii is Katachi's sword, Chishio is the old man's sword, Sakkarakan is Oroshiken's sword and Yakuin is Eketai's sword. Oh and i did borrow a few things from the KHFM+ secret ending) well, here it is!

It has been three years since the end of the war. Since then, the world has plunged back into the hand of darkness. There are only two warriors strong enough to end this terror.

A lone warrior in thick, golden, full plated armor, with the Sutekki Kouhii rested on his shoulder, stares into the dusty, endless desert. In the cloud of dust before him, two figures begin to come visible. The warrior clenched the handle of his sword tightly in his hand. One of the figures charges at him from out of the dust.

"You won't come back this time, Oroshiken," said the warrior.

"So you did come and figure me out that fast," said the figure (Oroshiken). The two began slashing at each other.

"You got better, Oroshiken. But you're not the one i want. NOW EKITAI!" the warrior yelled over the loud sound of clanging swords. Ekitai jumped out of nowhere and cut Oroshiken's arm on the side. The warrior turned toward the other man in the dust.

"You will regret what you did to my brother! I WILL AVENGE HIM NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS!" shouted the warrior.

"Well go ahead. Avenge him," the old man said.

"HAAAAAAAAAAAA," cried the warrior as he charged at the old man. Just then the old man pulled out the Chishiro Sendo and blocked. The two began to slash at each other, without a single drop of sweat. Soon the clashes became louder and more frequent. The old man kicked the warrior back. The warrior pulled off his helmet, revealing himself as Katachi. As this was happening, Ekitai lunged his sword into Oroshiken's dark heart. He twisted the blade. A dark blood-like ooze leaked from Oroshiken's body. Ekitai looked at the epic battle between Katachi and the old man. The two leaped into the air, prepared to deal the finishing blow to the other.

"Katachi..." Ekitai mumbled to himself.

*I am done*