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  1. DestinedToMemoriesCorrupt Destiny Islands Resident

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    ello there, ^^ im new to the site and i thought it would be fun to start a thread. ^^ I actaully happen to be a lyricist (or a poet). I'm rather bored at the moment.. but i'd like to get a reply. ^^ I was wondering if anybody had a favorite set of lyrics from any song they would like to share. Something they're passionate about or something they can relate to. Something funny, or just plain nonsense ^^ im willing to hear it all. ^^'
     
  2. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    There kinda is a topic like this but oh well, I'll post anyway.
    I find the lyrics beautiful but sad cause of the pain.


    So where do I sail?
    A ship losing control
    My cries swallowed up, lost in the raging sea

    So where has love gone?
    Will I ever reach it?
    The Cape of Storms echoes the pain I feel inside

    You'll never notice
    The colour of sin
    Just as the storm clouds closes in
    It's dark

    Here in the shadows
    I am pursued
    Until the ends of the earth
    Embraced

    The ghost ship wanders far
    For there is no guiding star
    And this treasure has no meaning anymore

    So where do I sail?
    A ship losing control
    My cries swallowed up, lost in the raging sea

    So where has love gone?
    Will I ever reach it?
    The Cape of Storms echoes the pain I feel inside

    You know completely
    The taste of sin
    Melting sweet in your mouth
    Like chocolate

    A moment of pleasure
    You are fulfilled
    But every dream has its time
    To die

    The ghost ship wanders far
    For there is no guiding star
    And this treasure has no meaning anymore

    Will this be my fate?
    So where do I sail?
    A ship losing control
    My cries swallowed up, lost in the raging sea

    So where has love gone?
    Will I ever reach it?
    The Cape of Storms echoes the pain I feel inside
     
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    Nickelback-Feelin' Way Too Damn Good

    I missed you so much
    That I begged you to fly and see me
    You must've broke down
    Coz you finally said that you would
    But now that you're here
    I just feel like I'm constantly dreaming

    Coz something's gotta go wrong
    Coz I'm feelin' way too damn good

    For 48 hours I don't think that we left my hotel room
    Should show you the sights
    Coz I'm sure that I said that I would
    We gotta make love just one last time in the shower

    Well something's gotta go wrong
    Coz I'm feelin' way too damn good

    And it's like, every time I turn around
    I fall in love and find my heart face down and
    Where it lands is where it should
    This time it's like
    The two of us should probably start to fight
    Coz something's gotta go wrong
    Coz I'm feeling way too damn good, oh
    Feelin' way too damn good

    Sometimes I think best if left in the memory
    It's better kept inside than left for good
    Lookin' back each time they tried to tell me
    Well something's gotta go wrong
    Coz I'm feelin' way too damn good

    And it's like, every time I turn around
    I fall in love and find my heart face down and
    Where it lands is where it should
    This time it's like
    The two of us should probably start to fight
    Coz something's gotta go wrong
    Coz I'm feeling way too damn good, oh
    Feelin' way too damn good
    Oh, oh, feelin' way too damn good

    I missed you so much
    That I begged you to fly and see me
    You must've broke down
    Coz you finally said that you would
    But now that you're here
    I just feel like I'm constantly dreaming

    Coz something's gotta go wrong
    Coz I'm feelin' way too damn good

    And it's like, every time I turn around
    I fall in love and find my heart face down and
    Where it lands is where it should
    This time it's like
    The two of us should probably start to fight
    Coz something's gotta go wrong
    Coz I'm feeling way too damn good, oh, oh
    Feelin' way too damn good
    (I missed you so much
    That I begged you to fly and see me)
    Feelin' way too damn good
    (I missed you so much
    That I begged you to fly and see me)
     
  4. DestinedToMemoriesCorrupt Destiny Islands Resident

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    *tears up* i like it A LOT! what does anyone think of the lyrics I wrote?

    i watch as the
    rain falls from the sky
    wasting so much time
    asking myself why
    i never asked you to dance
    i never looked back
    when i saw you glance
    i realize that its too late
    but despite the fact i
    just have to say
    when you're low
    when the grey skies
    outside your window
    start to pour
    when your life is falling apart
    and you cant take it anymore
    i'll be outside your door
    i want to be the one
    to catch your tears
    and when the lights go out,
    eliminate all your fears

    it's not done... but is it alright? or is it dumb? o.0
     
  5. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    I think you have a great start, I really want to read the rest when you are finished.
     
  6. DestinedToMemoriesCorrupt Destiny Islands Resident

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    ^^ YAY! i have finished works. several actually... but i've misplaced my notebook... D: but i have a couple already typed on the computer... i doubt anyone is interested though... Silver_Bullet, i also like you're lyrics too, it's a really good song. i love that band ^^
     
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    I like it a lot actually.I thinks it's gonna turn out great.
     
  8. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    Well if is anything like you posted then it must be really great work.
     
  9. DestinedToMemoriesCorrupt Destiny Islands Resident

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    *girlie hyteria* I FEEL LOVED! ^^ does anyone have any ideas for a title?
     
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    I thought it was called Tears Up because you put that when you posted the lyrics.Oh,did you mean tears up as in ripping up a paper or tears up meaning something with crying?
     
  11. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    I think she was refering to one of our songs.


    But for a tiltle

    How about

    "I realized"
     
  12. DestinedToMemoriesCorrupt Destiny Islands Resident

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    well that would make a good title actually.... ^^ thank you. I'll make that work! and as for my finished works... I guess I'll post one...

    A song….

    Does anyone else
    Hear me right now
    Does anyone else
    Wonder how
    They got where they are
    How they ended up wishing
    On the wrong star
    Well it’s dark at midnight
    Can’t tell the moon from a streetlight
    But hey a wish is a wish
    All the same
    But I’ll let it be my fault
    Yeah I’ll take the blame
    Just like every other thing
    *I’m just a girl
    Trying to make it
    In this world
    And I know that I done wrong
    But I’m trying to make it up in theses songs
    I live each day
    Just looking for a way
    To erase all my lies
    I’m a butterfly with broken wings
    And I just wants to fly

    This wall keeps building up
    Oh how long to
    Be strong enough
    To break it all down
    My heart would be free
    The second it crumbled to the ground
    But it’s a lie on a lie on a lie
    There’s a feelingless feeling
    On the inside
    *Oh I’m just a girl
    Trying to make it
    In this world
    And I know that I done wrong
    But I’m trying to make it up in theses songs
    I live each day
    Just looking for a way
    To erase my lies
    I’m a butterfly with broken wings
    And I just wants to fly
    I just want to fly
    I’m sick of all these lies
    I just want to fly
    I’m sick of all these lies
    All the dark memories
    Of no sunshine
    My wings may be busted,
    Folded, and rusted
    But I still have to try
    *Oh I’m just a girl
    Trying to make it
    In this world
    And I know that I done wrong
    But I’m trying to make it up in theses songs
    I live each day
    Just looking for a way
    To erase all my lies
    I’m a butterfly with broken wings
    And I just want to fly

    i appreciate comments ^^ and/or suggestions for a title... it's not called "A Song..." ^^'
     
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    I really like it, it was well worded. But sorry I can't help you with a title. I suck at titles LOL.
     
  14. Spike H E R O

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    You have talent,you know that?As for a title,how about 'I Wanna Fly'?
     
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    tee hee! im happy to hear you like it ^^ I'm not so great with titles either... maybe... "Broken Flight" or something... hence broken wings. i have no idea -_-'
     
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    Broken Flight sounds good.
     
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    I also like "I wanna fly" i am very indecisive... it may just kill me someday... 0.0 let's hope not! hmmm... here's another... that IS titled... but not finished ^^'

    I’m Not Okay

    Every time
    I close my eyes
    I’m holding a single tear
    Near
    Holding it close
    Not letting go
    Thinking these thoughts in side my mind
    If everyone else was blind
    Then I could cry
    Let the tears fall free
    If no one was watching me
    They all expect I’m crushed
    That I’m upset this happened in such a rush
    But I’m not sure
    Just how to feel
    Is there any cure?
    Is this even real?
    I’m here with my head held high
    Times like these I wonder
    If it’s better just to die
    Shove this aside
    They all say
    Nothing could make you feel so bad that way
    And it’s okay
    But they don’t know
    No
    It’s not okay
    I’m not alright
    Wondering what it would be like
    If you were here to hold me tight
    I just don’t know
    Maybe I should have let my feelings grow
    But I should have known
    I was just a little girl seems like yesterday
    Now everyone expects I’ve grown
    I can handle this
    I can’t let them down
    I’ve got to make them proud
    Forgetting about myself and who I am
    Not remembering where I stand
     
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