Traditional Art Final Distance

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by myoblivion, Jul 7, 2008.

  1. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    Note: I know I said I wasnt going to post any drawings but I need CnC >.<

    Okay, I just finsihed this drawing and its of a character I decided to make up after a story idea went through my head. Her name is Oui, and she was abused as a child and brought to an Orphanage out in the middle of the snow *Ill stop now :P*.
    Anyway, I wanted CnC because Ive never drawn so big before and just because.

    Note: The words on the side our the first sentances in Final Distance by Utada Hikaru


    Note: The butterfly net doesnt have to do with anything, it was going to be a instrument but...I need practice.

    http://s49.photobucket.com/albums/f269/xxrentedheart/?action=view&current=LastScan80.jpg

    No stealing! :yelling:
     
  2. Shiki my waifu is better than yours, thanks

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    It's really simple and yet she seems very kawaii to me. Try adding wrinkles to her dress to give her more depth ^^

    And the hand covering her mouth needs fingers unless she is balling them into a fist.
     
  3. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    Yeah....I was too lazy to draw winkles and fingers on the other hand ._.
    Ill probably finish the hand and dress tomarrow.
    Thank you for the CnC ^-^
     
  4. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    I think it looks really nice.

    The simplicity of it makes it look very gd. The only thing I can say is a bit more shading. But that won change much since it's really awesome the way it is already.

    Off-topic: I take it u've heard about the origins of that song?
     
  5. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    Thank you Dar ^-^

    And yes, I have. Its very sad....I hope I didnt ofend anybody :/ I just liked the song and it inspired me in a way so I wrote the first lyrics on it....But I do know the origins.
     
  7. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    the style of the drawing is very beautiful., and it seems to portray something, i like it

    and the massacre thing, the song , i didnt know, but nonetheless i think the drawing is fine
    just work on a few details and it will be perfect.
     
  8. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    Thank you Chervalier ^-^

    I feel proud of myself :P
     
  9. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    you should be....
     
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    nice...it's really pretty exept i think she needs fingers xD(for the first one)


    the second one i don't have any CnC it's very good