i write raps.. =D

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  1. hahannuh Gummi Ship Junkie

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    it's kind of weird to read it without me saying it cause there's a certain beat and yeah, you guys get it.



    sight

    so hazy are my memories
    i try to see and i try to breath

    but i realize that these hazy dreams
    are more real than anything that seems.

    i grab my throat and feel the beat of my heart
    racing against time to keep me a part

    of this world that is spinning with life and breath
    but now i realize i'm gonna face death.

    1 cough 2 cough 3 cough more
    and i quickly fall to the floor.

    i feel my eyes sear in pain
    beginning to remember how i was so vain.

    slamming my fist to the floor i cry,
    "you fool, now you're gonna die."

    i cough some more, a drop of blood.
    i picture that drop turning into a flood.

    i grab my chest holding back the tears
    attempting to rid of all of my fears

    but no use, the process has already begun
    in fear and rage i stand up and run

    first shutting my eyes with all my might
    but then i looked up and saw a light

    i could feel my legs were slow and weak
    and my hand on my chest felt a leak

    i looked down and saw an open chest
    with my heart thumping at it's best

    i know that i should have been shocked
    but at that very moment my mind had locked

    there is life there is death and no in between
    and even though they many not be seen

    different paths are available for all mankind
    the good ones are just hard to find

    i realized that i chose the wrong path
    i was blind and full of rath

    but this beating heart gives me the proof
    i can turn around and fix this goof

    i can take the path of living true
    it might take a year or two

    but i don't care i won't give up
    my guide is right there if i look up


    good? bad? stupid? unclear?
    lemme know =)
     
  2. twilightsown King's Apprentice

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    We got the forum rapper (unless someone else has done this before O_o) Irregardless, this was very good Hahannih. I wish you could record it and put it somewhere for us all to hear. I bet it would be even better rapped. I should tell my bro about you, he raps as well XD
     
  3. hahannuh Gummi Ship Junkie

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    aww thanks so much!

    i just need to get something for my computer to create beats.
     
  4. twilightsown King's Apprentice

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    Actually, I may be able to help you in the beats category. There is apparently a program called frootyloops.com or somethiing to that effect, where you can record beats. I believe that is how its spelled, but you may have to try a few different iteartions, all focused arround the double o in frooty. Try and find the site. I had a friend who raps point me to it for my brother.
     
  5. hahannuh Gummi Ship Junkie

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    crap i was going to edit then i accidently clicked delete and now i forgot what i was going to say. ..@#$%^&*
     
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