I've Found You Once Again

Alrighty folks, time for something COMPLETELY different. This is the first Fanficiton I ever wrote and its *drumroll please* a POEM! That's write, before I wrote my storied, I wrote a poem, and this poem right here is what got me into fanfiction. I hope you enjoy it. It is ancient, so I don't know how good it is, but I liked it. Hopefully you will too.
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Summary: [To save another, one must often give of themselves]Sora's ultimate sacrifice. oneshot [Twilight to Dawn]
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I’ve found you now,

but your not here,

Why must they keep you away?

I’ve searched for you,

both near and far,

Why must they keep you away?

Your body lies,

lifeless on the floor,

Why must they keep you away?

They took from you,

what made you you,

Why must they keep you away?


I’ve found a way,

to set you free,

I know now what I must do.

To free your heart,

I shall pierce my own,

I know now what I must do.

I say goodbye,

for good this time,

I know now what I must do.

With one final sorrow,

I set you free,

I know now what I must do.


Do not weep,

I’ve done what is right,

I cannot be there anymore.

With my life gone,

seven lives were saved,

I cannot be there anymore.

Most importantly though,

I’ve set you free,

I cannot be there anymore.

Cry not for me,

for at least you are free,

I cannot be there anymore.


Ever in darkness,

I see no more light,

I drift onward without you.

I long to see your face again,

but know my wishes shall not come true,

I drift onward without you.

Slowly I start to fade,

and loved memories begin to wane,

I drift onward without you.

The darkness engulfs me,

and I pray for it to end,

I drift onward without you.


A voice in the darkness,

and I remember who I am,

Could I too be saved?

I listen intently,

thought the voice is very feint,

Could I too be saved?

Who is calling,

are they calling for me?

Could I too be saved?

I focus my mind,

and head for the sound,

Could I too be saved?


I awake to the light,

to find myself in your embrace,

I’ve found you once again.

They are there too,

but for the moment I don’t care,

I’ve found you once again.

The enemy closes around us,

and still I refuse to let go,

I’ve found you once again.

I whisper softly in your ear,

then grab your arm and run,

I’ve found you once again.
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I hope you enjoyed this foray into poetry. I don't do a lot of it, but it's fun to do something different from time to time.

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Whoa. Dude. That was like...totally awesome and you used really good words to display the mood. I'm sorry to say that I have no experience in poem judging and writing what-so-ever. :P

 

I really like the poem, especially when you repeat thopse sentences in the verses.
Even though I'm not big into poems, I like the poem format. The only thing that might make it better is repeating less those sentences...say, only three times per paragraph.

 

it sounds almost like song lyrics. *drools* you're too talented. jk

 

Hehe, I've tried writing songs before, but without the ability to make music, kinda just turned into more poems ^_^ I'm glad ya like it sis, and I'm glad your stumbling onto everything you missed this weekend XD