KH3: The War has come to Earth

The War Has Come To Earth

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This story is pretty much a where Kingdom Hearts left off with the letter and Yen Sid's announcement. Please let me no on anything I missed or grammar misspelling and any thing else. Oh, right Spanish plays a good role in this and some times I will explain somethings at the end of certain chapters.

Spoiler Alert!!! Some chapters will have Spoilers to Movies and parts of Kingdom Hearts!!!


Complete Darkness surrounds our hero as he falls, nothing to catch him, and nothing around to grab. He lands on a platform and searches around for something to happen. He steps forward and a light shimmers with countless white doves flying away into the eternal darkness. The feathers fall slowly swaying from left to right until they disappeared into the floor. As the birds continued to fly away they reveal a painting. As in his previous dream Snow White appeared, but this was different. It was the same layout as all the others, but in the center was a large circular object. It was painted with green puzzle piece like shapes surrounded by dark blue borders. Off to the sides four larger pictures of Earth, Fire, Wind and Air. Lastly, towards the center is a heart shape with half full of light and the other full of hate. A bright light appears above and hits the center of the platform, it then moves off to the edge. Suddenly, a staircase appears and extends up to a white door. A loud booming voice calls out, “Sora!”

“Hello?” He replies, “Who’s there?”

“Sora!”, again the loud voice calls, “Go and save Kairi”

“Kairi?!” our hero hesitates, "What do mean save her? What did you do to her?!”

He calls out his keyblade in a ready stance. “Follow the stairs”, the voice replies’, “Soon you will understand”

“Understand what?” the voice disappears, “ANSWER ME!!!” he screams in the air. Again the voice did not reply. He looked at the staircase and noticed the stairs were painted in the same colors of green and blue. He called back his keyblade and headed up the stairs. Sprinting up the stairs wasn't much of an obstacle for our hero he quickly reached the big pale white doors. He grasps the large brass handles and pulls the doors open. Inside was the same platform and staircase, but a boy with a crimson red t-shirt, dark aluminum pants and twilight blue tennis standing with his eyes closed.

“Sora!” the loud voice exploded like thunder, “Do not let him escape you will need his help!”

Shocked from the loud strange voice he takes a breath and shouts, “Hey you!” The boy opened his eyes and looked up, his hair was ginger brown, and eyes were gray and again our hero shouted, “Do you know whe-!” Abruptly, he was interrupted when the boy made a quick dash towards second flight of stairs. “Hey wait!” Sora yelled.

The boy dashed away up the stairs, “Wait!” Sora shouts from behind. The boy went through the same big pale white doors and disappeared in a blinding light. When Sora approached the doors the loud voice thundered again, “Inside that door you must pass without stopping!” Sora took another breath and pulled on the brass handles. He’s blinded by the light and steps forward. Gray asphalt and homes along a parallel street as far as thee eye could see. Sora peered down the road and saw the boy in a full on sprint. He follows him from behind. Down the road the two ran and our hero trying ever so hard to catch the boy. Already exhausted from running he wipes sweat off his forehead and continues running keeping mind that his friend is more important.

‘What’s his big idea?’ He thinks to himself ‘doesn’t he know I’m not going to hurt him.’

After the first twenty homes, Sora began to see statues of people extending their arms towards him. He was actually able to hear their cries:

Help!! Please!!

Ahhhhh!!

Mommy!!!

Sobs and cries for help from strange statues of people young and old. In his good nature he stopped and tried to lend a little girl statue a helping hand. “DO NOT STOP!!” the voice thundered, “HE’S GETTING AWAY!!!” He was an inch away from touching the statue when he realized the voice was right. He dashed away leaving the statues where they stood. Further and further more street, more homes, and more statues pleading for help. It nearly drove our hero insane as the cries and wails grew louder with more and more statues. Up ahead was a shimmering light. The boy without hesitating ran right into it. Our hero even though he was tired, he wasn't about to give up. He too ran straight into the light. The light blinded him, but as his vision came too he noticed he was back in the same room since the beginning. The boy stood unchanged from all the running meanwhile Sora is gasping for air. “Do you… know… where…? Kairi is?”, still catching his breath waits for the boy to reply.

“Kairi? A si ella esta en el hotel grande en mi ciudad”, said the boy

“What?”, still catching his breath

“En el HOTEL GRANDE. No oyes bien estas sordo?” the boy replies

“I don’t understand what you’re saying”

“Pues es tu problema”, suddenly the boy began to sing a lullaby:

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A la nanita nana nanita ella​

Nanita ella​

Mi nina tiene sueno bendito sea​

Bendito sea​

Fuentecita que corre clara y Sonora. Ruise​

Que en la selva cantando llora​

Calle mi entras la cuna se balansea​

A la nanita nana, nanita ella​

Nanita Ella​

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The boy disappeared and the ground began to shake. Suddenly, something huge behind Sora began to rise. He looks back and sees a red monster with a horse and roaster leg and horns that of a bull. Pulling out his keyblade he charges at the beast. He changes to his final form pulling out two keyblades. He began to fight the monster with all he had. For a final try he leaps up in the air and tries to hit the monster on the head with his keyblades. The monster sees the oncoming attack and swats Sora from mid-air sending him spiraling and crashing on his back to the floor.

In the crash Sora had ruptured his rib cage. He tried to heal, but ran out of magic. He grabbed his side and tried to get up. The monster just knocked him back down. Sora winced at the pain and opened his eyes and laid there looking up in fear. The monster pulled out a large dagger and without warning plunged it straight into Sora’s chest. His body jumped from the impact. He looked at the size of the dagger being similar to Cloud’s sword. He began to cough blood and losing consciousness. ‘Kairi……. I’m sorry’, he thought and there he laid with blood dripping down the sides of his chest. The monster disappeared with a menacing monstrous laugh.

That was the end of our hero he never found his friend. He never saved the universe. He never lived long enough to discover what a cruel life he had lived in. The platform he was laying on was alive moving, forever changing. As the blood dried it sank into floor and the whole platform began to light up. Our hero was dead, but he could still hear a faint voice calling him.

“Wake up”, a sweet voice calls.

Coming out of a nightmare Sora jumps up gasping for air and frightens his wake up call. “You scared me”, she says punching him in the shoulder. The red haired teen was sitting on a wooden stool next to his bed wearing her school clothes which consisted of a white shirt and blue plaid skirt and tie with navy blue shoes and socks. She also wore her lucky charm around her neck which was a small yellow-green shell she had found while walking on the beach.

“Sorry Kairi…” he apologizes as he begins to yawn, “What are you doing here?”

“Oh, nothing just here trying to listen to your loud snoring”, she mimics his snoring and looks to see the intimidating glare he gave her. Amused by his angry stare she laughed.

“Ha ha very funny”, he says sarcastically.

She gives him a smirk, “Oh good he’s up” a silver haired teen said standing by the door wearing the same clothes as Kairi, but with blue plaid pants, “Come on we don’t have all day we’re ganna be late for school.”

“Ugh!! Don’t remind me”, He quickly realizes an important fact, “Wait… How did you guys come in?”

“Your mom gave us the key”, Kairi began, “She said to take care of it for you while she was gone with your dad”

“Why didn’t she give it to me?” he asks

“You lost your keyblade” Riku responded

“So?”

“It was under your bed and you could have called it. Not only that you searched for it for three days!”

“Okay. Okay. I see your point”. Kairi just laughs at Sora. She stands up and heads out the door.

“We’ll be downstairs”, she said, “So hurry up”. Riku closed the door from behind him and followed Kairi down the stairs. Sora pulled off the covers and walked over to his closet he pulled out his school clothes which resembled Riku’s but more… Sora’s size. He threw his dirty clothes in the hamper and went into the bathroom to finish getting ready. He began combing his hair and brushing his teeth when his nobody began to talk.

What the heck was that dream about, said Roxas

I don’t know

Are you ganna tell Kairi

Nah let’s not let her get worried

Sora dreaming of someone you never met isn’t normal I should know.

Yeah… but I’ve had weirder dreams before, but I don’t know. Probably just nothing.

You don’t think the worlds are in danger?

Who knows? If they are the King would be the first to notify us. Right?

True. But still I wonder who that kid was or what he was saying.

He might be from another world

You think he’s trying to contact us? Or warn us of something?

Sora shrugs at his reflection in the mirror and puts away his toothbrush after rinsing it in the sink. He then, heads down the stairs.


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X equals negative b plus or minus the squared root of b squared minus four A, C over two A. If I fit it into the formula it should be X equals negative two plus or minus the squared root of two squared minus four times one times one over two times one. The answer should be….. umm…. Kairi hadn’t finished her algebra homework she was finishing the last problem saying it all in her head.

‘X equals plus or minus one’.

Stop being a smart aleck Naminé, Kairi teased her nobody

You’re taking forever. Look why don’t I just tutor you?

No because math is my strongest subject and you’re already tutoring me in art, English, and Home economics.

That’s not what your progress report says,

Shut up in an annoyed thought. She then heard footsteps coming from the staircase and began to put away her homework. She pulled her backpack over her shoulder and headed for the stairs she looked up to see Sora. With a gentle smile, “Ready?”

“Yeah. Where’s Riku?” he asked.

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Coming out of the kitchen with a half-eaten apple in his hand, “Ready?” They nod, “Good cause schools a quarter mile from here and the tardy bell rings in like five minutes so we gotta sprint it”


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Destiny Isles High School provides the optimum educational environment for our students, faculty, and staff. We believe an effective educational environment should provide the opportunity for the acquisition of knowledge and skills. A student who attends Destiny Isles High School will be challenged to develop academically, socially, and athletically. Or so it says in the student handbook. Luckily, the trio made it on time to their classes and as time passed it was lunch time. Sora and Kairi caught up with each other in the cafeteria and sat at a table in the far back corner. Two tables next to them was Riku. He saw the cute couple together (or so he teased them) and decided to let them have a moment of time together.

“They are good together aren't they”, Riku turned around to see Selphie. She smiled politely as she pulled a chair out and sat next to Riku. He looked back at Sora and Kairi who were sharing a laugh together.

“Yeah they sure do”, He replied

“Man I’m really glad you guys are back, ya” Wakka was walking with a tray in one hand and the common Bliztball in the other. Right behind him was Tidus; they both pulled out a chair and sat across form their friends Riku and Selphie. Wakka laid his Bliztball on the table took a fork and began eating.

“Me too”, added Tidus, “Now Kairi will probably stop committing suicide”. Riku shocked from the last remark.

“What?” Riku questioned.

Selphie’s hand met forehead. Meanwhile, Wakka smacked Tidus upside the head.

“OW! What I say?” Riku looks at the three for an answer.

“Tell him Selphie” said Wakka laying both hands crossed arms on his Bliztball.

“Tell me what?” Riku asked

Selphie sighed and began, “You see it all started-"

So this is the newly edited version. I'm always editing never adding. I've read this and re-read this a bunch of times. I'm pretty pleased with it. I'm sure I have stuff here and there so if you see any please write them down and PM me about it I want feed back on stuff like this I really do. Thanks for reading. The lullaby was from the Disney Channel movie the Cheetah Girl 2. Song is called La Nanita I suppose. Nice spanish song from Spain fits in well with the Mexican boy Sora chased. More of that to come. Oh and if you are curious of what the boy said in the dream you can PM me, but all it was that Sora doesn't understand and he doesn't care and Kairi is hidden in a Haunted Hotel of some sort explanations soon...

 

Thats great but the explict language doesnt match kingdom hearts...

 

Ah, I like it! The part about the reason why Sora isn't allowed a house key made me smile. Well done, I'm normally not a big fan of fanfic's but this has story has got me a tad interested. I'd like to read more of it I guess ^^;

 

I enjoyed reading this, and I normally don't sit down to read fanfictions myself as Kellyjelly stated. Since you've gotten enough praise for it, I guess I'll critique. Because it's a fanfiction, I'm going to let the whole profanity thing slide, even though it made them seem a bit out of character. The Spanish also caught me a bit off-guard, but it's a nice twist. What I can recommend to improve is to try starting your sentences out a bit differently from time to time. In the beginning and further down in to the middle of the story, there's a lot of sentence starters with "he" used and it made it seem a bit repetitive.
Also, you changed tenses a few times. Which just means you went from, "He says this" to "He did that". I don't know if that was intentional.

All and all, it was an interesting read. Remember, a critique is just there to help you improve so try not to take anything personally. c:

 

Chapter 2 Life without you...

This is the Stained Glass I was trying or some what succeeded in describing in chapter 1. This is by neepa from deviantart.com.

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%Flashback%


A typical tropical day on the mainland and the boys, Wakka and Tidus were practicing Bliztball on the beach. The sun was slowly setting over the ocean giving it, its orange and red color. Nearby was the tall cliff called Hiroyuki Cliff. In memory of Hiroyuki-San who founded Destiny Island from the top of the cliff. Down below Wakka with his much experience was mastering his opponent in their fun game. “Ha... To slow, ya”, he commented.

“No fair man” Tidus whined, “You’re cheating”

“It’s called talent”, spinning the ball on his fingertips.

“You boys are still at it”, Selphie said. She had just finished her chorus and went looking for her friends so they would go to the island together.

“Hey! Selphie. Check this out”, Tidus jumped up running towards the young shopper pushing his chest out in a proud stance.

“What am I looking at?” she asked examining his exposed torso.

“I got a chest hair”

“Where?” She searched throughout his chest, “Like one of them hairless cats”. Wakka who was listening started to laugh.

Tidus glared at his friend then turned back to Selphie “I’m serious loo-”

“Hey!” Wakka interrupted, “Is that Kairi?” Wakka was pointing to the top of the cliff where a teenage girl with crimson red hair and cherry blossom pink clothes was standing at the edge. At the very bottom were jagged rocks and the salty ocean hitting the side of Hiroyuki Cliff.

“Hey Kairi!” Tidus yelled. No reply

“Kairi!” Selphie cried. No reply

“Yo Kairi!” Wakka screamed. No reply Wakka turned around and handed the Bliztball to Tidus “Here hold the ball Tidus I’ll go talk to her”

“AAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!” Selphie screamed. Wakka and Tidus immediately turned around to realize that Kairi had jumped!

There was a loud crash in the water and Tidus and Wakka jumped in to go save her. Selphie was taking deep breaths thinking aloud, “Oh, my God!! Oh, my God!!”, as she ran into the water to help the boys fish her out.

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A day passed and Kairi was walking home from a stressful day at school. “Kairi! Wait up!” It was Selphie. Ever since, yesterday’s fiasco she has been trying to cheer her up all day.

Kairi turned around smiling hiding her depression. When Selphie had finally caught up to her the two began to walk together. The walk was very awkward, but it wasn’t long until Selphie broke the silence.

“Hey, do you feel like going out to the island?” she asked, “Tidus and Wakka are all wrapped up in their ballgame and they won’t go with me.”

“Not today, sorry”, you could hear how sad she was in her tone. Selphie just stopped and frowned.

“Aw, why not?” She hoped to finally hear what was wrong and it seemed like the moment was about to come.

“Do you remember those boys who used to hang out with us?”

“Riku?”

“Yeah”

“I wonder whatever happened to him? I sure miss him”

“He’s far away. But I know we’ll see him again”

“Sure. Of course we will.” Selphie bit her lip she wasn’t sure she would see Riku again. It’s been two years and things were looking grim. ‘Maybe she’s worried about Riku’ she thought.

“And the other boy?”

Selphie was caught off guard, “What other boy?”

“The one who was with Riku and me all the time--”, she began, “We played together on that island. His voice always used to be there… but now it’s gone. I can’t think of his face, or his name. I feel awful about it. So I told myself—I’m not going to the island until I remember everything about him.”

“Are you sure you didn’t make him up?” Selphie was confused she couldn’t remember anybody that Kairi was talking about.

Kairi glanced at her friend before she held her head and passed out on the street. Selphie quickly knelt down checking to see if she was alright. Wasn’t long until Kairi began to stir and slowly wake up. Selphie dusted off the dirt on Kairi’s shirt and continued looking at her. Kairi looked up at her friend giving her a weak smile. “Are you okay?” Selphie finally asked. She nods. They both turn and looked at the island in the distance and Kairi just gave a coy smile and ran off.

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A week has passed since, the day Kairi jumped off a Hiroyuki Cliff and a couple of days since; she sent a message in a bottle drifting out to sea. Today, Selphie walked over to Kairi’s house to see how she was doing. She reached the mayor’s house and knocked on the blue door. She looked down and saw the doorknob jiggling till it opened. “Morning Mr. Mayor”, she said.

“Good Morning Selphie”, he replied

“Is Kairi here?” she asked

“Yes. Come in. Come in. She’s upstairs” She wiped her feet and entered the house; it was very well kept, especially since it IS the Mayor’s house after all. Selphie took notice of a large stack of papers sitting on a desk in the study. It was for an important meeting with the counsel to add lacrosse to DIUSD school district. Both girls have been dreaming to finally, join a sport together. Selphie headed towards the wooden stairs when unexpectedly the mayor asked her. “Selphie…” he said slowly, “Has Kairi done or said anything about her behavior?”

She turned around. “I’m sorry no. Why do you ask?”

“I’m getting very worried. This talk about that boy is affecting her more and more each day. Just a couple of days ago she began screaming in the middle of the night in agony. The doctors say she’s fine, but each night the screams get worse and worse. Could you find out what’s wrong?” Selphie could see how worried he was. Kairi was adopted by the Mayor when she was a little girl, but the Mayor always saw her as his own daughter. He never had children of his own and the passing of his wife before he entered politics gave him grim hope of having children.

“Sure. Don’t worry I’ll talk to her” She assured him before heading up the stairs. She reached Kairi’s room and turned the doorknob sideways. Slowly opening it she entered her room. Kairi’s room was pretty typical with a desk, full-size bed, a closet, and a large window with a built-in window seat. Its walls were pink with soft white carpet. She had photos posted on the wall of Kairi's various extracurricular activities (Gymnastics, track and field, and surfboarding.) On her bed were a couple of photos that she had recently developed. They were photos of her and Selphie goofing off at the mall. Selphie giggled at the sight of them. Kairi was sitting on the window seat staring at the island “Kairi?” Selphie said slowly.

Taken back by the voice Kairi turned around to see her best friend, “Oh” she sighs and looks down, “Hi”

“What’s wrong?” Selphie asks

“Nothing I’m fine” She lied looking back towards the island

“Kairi come on we tell each other everything, what’s wrong?”

She sighs “Sora” she spoke weakly.

“He’s fine remember he promised he’ll be back and he will, just have faith”

Kairi quickly looked at her with a glare, “How can I?!” Selphie cringed at her friend’s angry tone. Kairi looked back down and sighed again “I’m sorry. It’s just… the absence of him is everywhere I look. It’s like a huge whole has been punched through my chest. I can’t feel him or know if he’s alright. How can I have faith when he’s been gone for 2 years and that he’s probably dead somewhere”, the tears quickly traveled down Kairi’s face. All Selphie could do was hug her best friend and say

“Its ganna be alright” Kairi was sobbing on her friends new Hello Kitty Rhine stud T-shirt. Selphie didn’t care it made her friend feel a bit better to cry. But she was worried. What if she’s right? What if he doesn’t come back? What if he’s dead? ‘Sora please hurry’ she thought. “Kairi” she began, “we need to tell your dad about th-“. Kairi pushed herself away.

“No!”

“But Kair-“Selphie reaches out to her friend

“No!” She ran out of the room, down the stairs, out the door and towards the beach. Selphie stood on the white carpet and let out a big sigh. It was only after the message in the bottle that everyone in Destiny Island began to remember Sora more and more each day. Only Kairi took the hurt much more, thinking of how in the world could she have forgotten about her best friend? Though she was a Princess of Heart she behaved as a child becoming a burden to everyone to deal with her sadness. Some did avoid her, but only her true friends stuck by her side sharing her hurt.


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Kairi stood on the sandy shores of the mainland. Watching the wave’s crash on the beach and quickly retreat back into the ocean. The sun was setting and the breeze was calm. The loud sounds of the waves echoed around her and the salty sea air filled her nostrils. “Maybe…. waiting isn’t good enough” She stared out towards the island when suddenly a strange voice appeared.

“My thoughts exactly! If you have a dream don’t wait. Act. One of life’s little rules. Got it memorized?”


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%Flashback end%


“Wow” Riku sighed, “I can’t believe it was that bad”

Selphie looked at Sora and Kairi then back to her table, “We missed you guys, but I think Kairi took it the hardest”

“Well, I guess the problems should be over now that we’re back”

“I’m sure it has, ya” said Wakka, “I mean it’s not like Kairi isn't going to stay behind next time”

“Yeah” exclaimed Tidus, “Ever since you guys got back she’s become a better fighter… But not as good as me.”

“Yeah right”, cried Selphie.

Riku shakes his head with a smirk, “Well were going to the island after school for more training are you guys ganna come?”

“Nah can’t man mid-terms are coming up” said Wakka

“Selphie?” Riku looked at her.

“Sorry, Mrs. Shanti is having a sale. Mini tops and shoes at half price! And I hear she is having a SPECIAL!!”

Riku chuckled at his friends excitement “Oh, alright. What about you Tidus?”

“Can’t I got a date”

The boys looked at him suspiciously when Selphie told the real story, “No you have tutoring with Ms. Catina.”

“You mean hot Ms. Catina?” Wakka asked

“Yeah!” Tidus said, “OW!” Selphie annoyed by the boys kicked Tidus from under the table. She got up and walked away.

“What’s her problem”, Wakka asked

“I don’t know. But ouch that hurt!” Tidus complained rubbing his shin to ease the pain.

“Serves you right”, Wakka and Riku said in unison.

He rolled his eyes and slowly got up. “Well, I got to go see you guys later”

“Wait I’m done I’ll come with you ya”, said Wakka

“Later Riku” They threw their plates in the trash and walked out of the cafeteria.

“Later” he replied. He then, went to the vending machine to buy a drink before the bell rang. He looked for some cash in his backpack but found Kairi’s math book. ‘Oh, I better return this’

Ding Ding Ding

‘Shoot!’ he thought, ‘Maybe after class’.


Hiroyuki means "Great Journey" in Japan of what I understand... So yes, Kairi is suicidal a bit much more than need to, but it will be explained further in the story. Later we see more on how she grows from being weak and giving up to strong and taking control. I did picture Kairi being depressed and isolating herself from the rest of the world because of Sora's memories, but not suicidal. I figured if she was suicidal it would be more intense like "Wow the steps she goes", but I realized that is a step to far and when you discover the real reason for her high depression levels it will be more clear, but that's not until many chapters later.

 

Chapter 3

“Man I’m really glad you guys are back, ya” Wakka was walking with a tray in one hand and the common Bliztball in the other. Right behind him was Tidus; they both pulled out a chair and sat across form their friends Riku and Selphie. Wakka laid his Bliztball on the table took a fork and began eating.

“Me too”, added Tidus, “Now Kairi will probably stop committing suicide”. Riku shocked from the last remark.

“What?” Riku questioned.

Selphie’s hand met forehead. Meanwhile, Wakka smacked Tidus upside the head.

“OW! What I say?” Riku looks at the three for an answer.

“Tell him Selphie” said Wakka laying both hands crossed arms on his Bliztball.

“Tell me what?” Riku asked

Selphie sighed and began, “You see it all started-

Just a few tables away Sora and Kairi were complaining about their last class together. After rambling on about what a horrible teacher Mr. Quil is, they began going into detail of Kairi’s strengths and weakness. It was immediately after they returned that Kairi demanded to be taught how to fight. As Sora went on about the usefulness of Summons, Naminé and Roxas sat in the two empty seats across from them.

Nobodies once they become one they can never be heard from again. Naminé and Roxas were very different though. They had more power than any of Organization XIII members. They could speak to their Somebodies, appear in a ghostly form and not be seen or heard, or best of all use their energy to be human. Their only flaw is they feel what their somebodies feel even if their happy and worst of all they have to suffer going to the restroom with their somebodies.

“So what are you going to teach me next?” Naminé asked. Just like Kairi, Naminé has been getting training lessons from Roxas.

“Magnet” he replied, “It’s a magic spell that attracts orbs, items, and even heartless into a magnetic pull”

“Towards what?”

“It could be anything you cast it on. You can even cast it to yourself”

“Oh Okay”

“We just need to find a safe spot first”

“Hey!” she protested “I said I was sorry. How was I supposed to know that Firagra could cause Fire Spin!”

“Yeah tell that to the Chocobo birds that flew by”

A bit annoyed at the truthful fact Naminé socked Roxas in the shoulder. Inevitably he rolled his eyes at her childish punishment. The blonde girl took a deep breath before she continued with her next question. “So how have things been going with Sora?”

“Good I guess” sounding disappointed.

“I Guess?” Naminé replies worried

“Well... Sora didn’t want me to tell you because it might get Kairi worried”

“I promise to keep it a secret”

“Pinky” he lifts his pinky finger

“Pinky” Naminé says grabbing Roxas pinky with hers and giving a firm shake.

“Okay” He begins, “Sora has been having weird dreams about a boy. Sora has never seen him before, but he doesn’t think anything of it. But I do. I think it may be a sign of danger.”

“Hmm... I don’t know Roxas. We’ll just have to wait and see how things play out. For all you know you may never see this boy”

“Maybe, but there is something else”

“What?”

“I’ve been having weird dreams myself” Naminé looked at Roxas with concern as he continued, “I’ve been having dreams of these 2 keyblade wielders”

“Riku and Sora?”

“What? No. It’s different the guy is older than Riku and has brown hair and seems to resemble the superior, Xemnas. The girl is probably a year younger than him and she has blue hair. I’ve never meet them before. But it feels like we’re really good friends”

“You don’t think it may be something from Sora’s memories?”

“ Shouldn't you know you were closer to his memories than I am? But the girl. Sora has met her before when he was a kid”

“Wel-”

Ding Ding Ding

“Ugh!” Naminé grunts, “I’ll tell you at the island”

“Okay bye” Roxas gave her a hug and both disappeared within their somebodies.


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After saying good-bye to Kairi, Sora headed to his locker for his History book. ‘30-2-15’ He thought has he turned the lock and opened his locker and grabbed his book off the shelf.

SLAM!!

Taken back by his locker door being closed abruptly he turned to the source. ‘Oh, Great’ he thought.

“Hey there Zero. Did I scare you?” It was Ethen, an annoying bully that has been picking on Sora since they were kids.

“Leave me alone Ethen” Sora began to walk to class when for no reason Ethen followed him.

“Oh, come on tell us the story of how you defeated that guy Ansem!” He hollered in the hall drawing a big crowd. When Riku and Sora returned to the islands everyone assumed they moved away. They never knew about their adventures. Sora just had to be the one to tell the world. It didn’t help much people began to think he was crazy. Which made Sora’s friends especially Kairi “Friends of the Village Idiot”

“His name was Xehanort”

The crowd began to chuckle and giggle at Sora’s remark, “Oh, really did your Nobody tell you that” That’s when the crowd became an up roar of laughter. Roxas who was watching everything from the sidelines (Sora’s head) felt really insulted and really wanted to rematerialize in front of this jerk to kick his butt.

“Just leave it alone Ethen!” Sora screamed. He began to walk away as a civilized keyblade wielder when:

“You better walk away. It’s no wonder that girl Kairi’s such a whore, she didn’t wanna have sex with a pussy like you!”

Bang!!

Sora with full of rage and adrenaline pushed Ethen up against the lockers screaming, “TAKE THAT BACK!!!!”

Sora soon felt a lot of pain on his left check, dropping Ethen and falling to the floor. He didn’t notice the cheap shot Ethen made on his face. The crowd began to cheer, “FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!!!” Sora was about to tackle Ethen when Mr. Hattrick the principal appeared on the scene “What’s going on here!”

The crowd quickly vanished into their classrooms including Ethen. Unfortunately, for Sora the principal grabbed him by the shoulder, “You’re coming to the office young man.”

‘Busted’ whispered his nobody.


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After saying good-bye to Sora, Kairi headed to the gym for P.E. She was stretching out with Selphie. Unlike Sora she was lucky she had back-up when “Oooff”, Kairi fell over flat on the wooden floor.

“Opps Sorrry~”, Janette one of the popular girls has been a rival with Kairi for as long as she has been friends with Sora and Riku.

“You did that on purpose!” She yelled

“Oh, really” She stepped forward and pushed Kairi, “What are you going to do about it”

Kairi was about to go BEAST on this white trash when Naminé spoke up, ‘Kairi don’t she’s no worth detention’

After a long awkward silence, “Nothing” she finally said.

“That’s what I thought coming from a worthless hoe” Janette walked away victorious and got into position to serve the volleyball. Selphie looked at Kairi.

“What’s the matter with you? You could have totally kicked her butt.”

“I know I know. But she’s not worth it”

“Worth it nothing, give me 3 minutes and I’ll make sure she never messes with us again”

“Shut up” The Princess chuckled socking her loyal friend on the shoulder, “I know showing her whose boss would probably make things better, but one small mishap and there will be a newspaper article with my name written all over it”

“Ugh!” the brunette moaned, “Must suck to be watched by the paparazzi all the time”

“I guess, but I mean come on, even Sora wouldn’t be picking fights and neither should I”

I think I better captured Namine as more innocent and curious than previously as a abrupt independent girl. Also, having Ethen and Jannette being more ruthless is better brings more tension between our heroes and their fellow classmates. Personally I was never bullied so badly so really this is tough to write about. As for the bullies motives I have some pretty clever ones just have to wait and see what they are.

 

Chapter 4


“Young man this is a school of learning. Not a school of….” Mr. Hattrick was giving the lecture of the millennium. He has worked at the school for years even with the Dinosaurs. He wore clean suits every day. The only thing different each day was his ties. Sora noticed this time he was wearing a palm tree tie. It was really hard to hear him with a giant mole on the side of his face. No matter how hard you tried to look away your attention headed straight for it. “Do you understand?”

“Yes. Mr. MO-Hattrick”

‘Nice save’ Roxas commented. Sora mentally glared at his nobody as he continued with the principal.

“I’m sorry it won’t happen again” Sora said to escape detention.

“You see that it doesn’t” He sat back down in his chair and began sorting papers. He looked up at the brunette teen who was still sitting. “You’re dismissed”

Sora got up and ran out the door. School already ended, so he headed to the island. He was supposed to meet up Riku and Kairi at the town square, but Mr. Hattrick had kept him for an hour with his lecture.


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After school Kairi and Riku waited for Sora at the town square. Sora was taking forever that Riku decided to meet him at the island. “Come on. Well, meet him up later”

“Okay, but wait” she paused, “I’ll meet you there I have something to take care of at home” Kairi replied

“Alright I’ll be at the tree if you need me”

“Bye”

Riku waved to Kairi as she started heading in the opposite direction. Naminé who overheard asked Kairi, ‘You don’t have anything to do at home?’

‘I know, but I’m going to grab the Oblivion charm I left it sitting on the counter’


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Kairi was locking the front door when, “Kairi!” she turned around to see a brunette teen running up to her.

“Hey Sora” Kairi exclaimed. Apparently Sora went home to change because he was wearing his everyday clothes the Good Fairies gave him.

“I thought you and Riku went to the islands”

“Well we were, but I just had to grab something at home” revealing to him the charm, soon the tone changed and her voice sounded concerned, “I heard you were in a fight”

Sora sighs, “Yeah….”

“Sora?” she replied frustrated

“Ethen deserved it!”

“Yeah, but you’re a keyblade wielder you know better not to get in a fight. Or to let others provoke you into one”

Sora looked down a bit ashamed of what he did. Kairi lifted his chin so he could see her, “But it’s very sweet that you stood up for me”

They smiled at each other before taking the shortcut to the pier. They climbed into Sora’s boat and set sail to the island. The trip took 15 minutes, but Sora was a good paddler and got them their safely. The keyblade wielder jumped out of the boat and tied it down to the pier. Sora stretched out his hand to help Kairi out of the boat. The Princess of Heart still had her bag and headed off to go change. “Riku’s at the tree I’ll meet you guys there okay”

“Okay” He replied


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“Roxas!” cried out Naminé. She sat near the shore watching Kairi enter a room to change while Sora headed to the usual bent tree.

“Hey!” Roxas called out. He walked up to the blonde haired teen and sat next to her watching the sunset. They exchanged hellos and took note of the vibrant colors of the sunset. “So what were you going to say before?” breaking the silence.

“What? Oh, right. Well, it was funny you mentioned that blue haired girl. Kairi has memories of her too” replied Naminé

“Really. Huh?” pondered the blonde

“What?” raising an eyebrow

“If Sora and Kairi have meet her before then maybe she’s out there somewhere” Looking up at the sky.

“Maybe. And it could also, be connected to that weird dream Sora has been having”

“Hey what’s that?” Roxas was pointing to a drifting bottle. As he picked it up he saw the King’s symbol, “It’s from the King!!” he cried. Naminé took it out of his hand.

“You go back to Sora I’ll go tell Kairi” She ran off to find her somebody while Roxas vanished in thin air.


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The sunset was amazing, just like every night on Destiny Island. Riku was sitting alone looking past the brilliant blue sea and straight ahead to the sky. He was thinking like he usually did.

He heard running footsteps cross the wooden bridge and onto the islet, Sora jumped over the Paopu tree and leaned his back against it, not bothering to look at Riku.

“Nothing’s changed, huh?” Riku said still looking out at the sunset.

“Nope. Nothing will.”

“What a small world.”

“But part of one that’s much bigger.”

“Yeah.”

“Hey Riku,” Sora lifted his head up to look at him. “What do you think it was- the door to the light?”

Riku jumped down from the Paopu tree and faced the young brunette, pointing his right hands index finger at Sora’s heart. “This.”

“This?” Sora moved his left hand to his chest.

“Yeah. It’s always closer than you think.”

Sora seemed confused at first, and then he smiled.

“Sora!Riku!”

They both looked towards the sound and saw Kairi running to them with something in her hand. She was wearing her usual pink outfit nearing closer to the boys. When she got close to them, she stopped to catch her breath.

“Hey what’s up?” Sora asked moving closer to her

After catching her last breath she held up a bottle with a note in it. “Look.”

“From the King?” Sora grabbed the bottle from her and opened the cork. Tipping the bottle upside down he grabbed the note from inside it. With the silver haired teen standing on his right side and the Princess of Heart to his left, they read the note together.

I wanted to tell you immediately
There were memories asleep inside you
And those memory fragments connect to the future
Sora, Riku, Kairi
The truth surrounding the keyblade passes through numerous connections
And were inside your hearts
Sora
Everyone connected to you is waiting for you
The only one who can heal their sadness is you
It’s possible that the travels up until now
May have been easy in comparison to what’s next
Everything thought to be accidental was really connected
It seems the door to a new departure
Is already opening

King Mickey​

They looked at each other and back at the message. It seems Sora is the key to happiness and Riku and Kairi were going to be left behind. They gave Sora time to think it over and decide to go or not. Sora sat on the curved paopu tree staring at the sunset. “Sora” cried Riku as he walked back across the bridge.

Startled from the voice Sora turned around to see his friend, “Riku?”

Riku continued walking without looking at his friend and continuing to stare at the sunset. As he stopped under a palm tree, “Your minds made up?” he questioned.

Sora turned back to see the sunset, “Yeah” he replied. Suddenly, Kairi walked up from behind them

“Sora” she called out. Both Sora and Riku turned to see her.

“Kairi” Sora hesitated and jumped off the tree, “I….”

She nodded. Giving Sora a sign of that she understands so in return he smiled back nodding to his true love (though they’d never admit it). Sora looked into her sky blue eyes telling her how he felt and what his decision was, “It’s just they really need me…. I have to go. I am who I am because of them.” Riku grinned at Sora’s statement. Kairi smiled and sighed, grabbing Sora’s hand to give him her lucky charm.

“See you soon” She replied, deep down Namine knew what she was really thinking ‘Just don’t disappear again, and please come back’

There was a sonic boom in the sky and the trio quickly looked up. It was a gummi ship. They immediately thought of Donald and Goofy. But the ship was coming in pretty low and had no intentions of stopping “LOOK OUT!!” Riku shouted. As the trio dived out of the way, the ship flew over their heads and crashed near the pier. Luckily, in a shallow area. The door opened up and out popped Donald and Goofy. “Hey Sora, Kairi, Riku!” the two said in unison.

“Donald Goofy!!” Sora cried as he ran to greet his friends with a hug.

“Nice landing” Riku commented

“Are you guys here for Sora?” Kairi the only one worried on Sora’s departure.

“Riku too” added Goofy.

“Me?” he questioned

“Yes the King says you and Sora are to meet with him and Yen Sid. ASAP!” Donald announced

“So we got to get a moving” chimed Goofy

“What’s the rush you guys just got here” Kairi was going to say and try everything to keep them here a little longer.

“Um... Sure. A-hyuck” Goofy chuckled, “Ow!”

“Goofy we are under direct orders and need to be back pronto” Donald boasted after taking a good swing at his good ol’ pal.

“Oh, Yeah”

Sora turned around and gave Kairi a hug. “Well I guess this is good-bye”

“Not good-bye. See you soon. Remember”, she shook her head reminding him to come back sooner than 2 years.

“Right” Sora nodded. Kairi not wanting her partner to go empty handed leaned in for a kiss. Sora saw the action and cringed grabbing Kairi’s hand and shaking it saying “W-well be b-back soon” Roxas could see he was blushing red from embarrassment.

Kairi stood their dumbfounded. While Riku shook his head in disappointment. The four climbed into the gummi ship and headed off for their next adventure. They looked back waving to Kairi and as quickly as they crashed they were gone. Now she was alone on the island (yet again). ‘Kairi’ her nobody called out, ‘Are you okay?’

Kairi smiled ‘Yeah’ She stared off into the sunset and looked back up into the clouds “Those boys didn’t leave us empty handed” Namine rematerialized herself in front of her somebody

“What do you mean” said the pale white blonde teen

“I mean Riku told me if there was ever a time they left he wrote down every spell and every move in a journal”

“Oh, good. Now I can learn Magnet. Where is it?”

“He mentioned hiding it in the secret place”

“Well what are we waiting for let’s get practicing” Namine boasted as she grabbed Kairi’s wrist running towards the secret place.

 

I quite like it so far. Other than a few simple spelling mistakes, I can't complain too much.
I mean, some parts seem a bit etchy in terms of characterisation, but it isn't bad at all, I especially like the awkwardness between Sora and Kairi.
I also like the feature of Roxas and Nanime still being able to play their own parts.
I think Namine's personality change was a bit too much... but you did explain why she is now like that, so I guess it works anyway.
Good job.
At least now you can post the next parts too :P

 

Chapter 5 Twilight Town

Yen Sid’s Tower was inaccessible. So Sora and his friends had to take the train. They landed in the station plaza and were heading into the train station of Twilight Town. As they were entering Sora noticed some blue spots on the floor. When he looked up a blue drop splatted on his face, he wiped the sticky substance off. Riku who had witnessed Sora’s luck laughed. Sora turned and glared at his friend. “I’ll meet you guys inside” he said

“Alright, but don’t take long the train will be here any minute” Riku advised.

Sora nodded and headed up the stairs and found his way up onto the terrace. Thanks to Roxas. Sora looked in awe at the view. ‘You could see the whole town’ he thought.

‘You can see sunset hill’ replied Roxas.

‘Huh?’

‘What’s the matter the view not grand enough for you?’ Roxas replied jokingly

‘Not that. I was wondering where that blue drop came from’

‘I don’t know but from the stairs in the main entrance I’d say they were Sea Salt Ice-Cream’ It was then, Sora noticed a purple object moving on the tracks.

‘Hey, look the trains here!’

‘We should head back down mysterious ice-cream or not we shouldn't be late to see Yen Sid’

‘Right’

As Sora turned around he ran into an unsuspected guest. She wore a black Organizations cloak her hair was raven black with sky blue eyes. They only looked at each other for a second until they both screamed. Sora jumped to far back, he was literally on the edge of the terrace and was stumbling back and forth to regain balance when…

“Aaaaaahhhh!!!”

THUD!!

Our hero laid there in shock looking up at the clock. His spine was crooked and he was slowly losing his vision from landing on his head. Roxas was too much in shock from the girl he couldn't wake himself up to heal Sora. Luckily a silver haired teen came out to find him.

“Sora!” he cried as he sprinted towards him. He looked at the pool of blood that was surrounding him.

“Hey Riku” Sora replied with a happy smile. As if he couldn't recall the fall or the predicament he was in.

Riku glared at him for that stupid reply, “Heal!”

A green light and the jingle of bells surrounded the brunette. The blood vanished and all of Sora’s internal injuries disappeared. “Thanks”

“Are you trying to kill yourself or what!?” Riku glared at him.

“Sorry… I thought… I thought I saw something and scared me off the terrace”

“Sora, just be more careful. Where’s Roxas?”

The blonde stood near the entrance his face completely spaced out looking at the top of the tower. “Xion?” he questioned.

Sora waved his hand in front of his Nobody and brought his friend back to reality “Roxas… Are you okay?”

“Yeah” he replied weakly, “I’m fine”

“Good” Riku boasted, “Next time stay a little more focused, Sora almost bleed to death and I need you to be alert if you two are going on a mission together!”

“Okay Superior Jeez” Roxas snapped.

“There you are the trains here hurry up!!” Donald shouted standing at the door. Sora and Riku ran back into the building ready to face the task at hand. Roxas took one last look at the top of the tower before disappearing back into Sora’s heart.

Sorry for such a short chapter of Twilight Town I really wanted to be brief and I have thought about Seifer's gang approaching them and the Mansion as well, but all that adventure in a further chapter :)

 

Chapter 6 Mysterious Tower


The next 3 chapters is about Yen Sid and a new character and a bit of history of our Earth.

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The train arrived as mysterious as it always did. Sora, Riku, Donald, and Goofy were just about to board the train. “Hey Wait up!” a voice called out.

Sora was quickly able to recognize them, “Hayner, Pence, Olette! What are you guys doing here?”

“Where coming with you” boasted Olette

“No it’s too dangerous” replied Donald

“Actually” Pence pulled out a message with the King’s seal, “Your King, Mickey, asked us to join you on your trip when you arrived”

“We would have been here sooner if somebody didn’t have to go shopping last minute” Hayner exclaimed

“Well we would have been done earlier if somebody didn’t start a fight with Seifer’s gang” Olette snapped

“What’s that supposed to mean?” Hayner demanded

“Would you guys stop bickering and get on the train!” Pence wailed. Hayner and Olette didn't realize during their little bickering everyone had ignored them and boarded the train.

“Hey Wait Up!!” they shouted

As the seven sat in the only train leaving Twilight Town they talked about, what else sports. Hayner and Pence bragged about Struggle Battles, Sora and Riku mentioned Bliztball games. New to the sports fanatics Donald and Goofy mentioned Rumble Racing and Fruitball. Of course Olette found the conversations boring seeing that she didn’t find them all as interesting as her friends. ‘I wish they would talk about something else!’ she thought.

“Yeah those sound cool, but Struggle Battles are where it’s at” promoted Hayner

“No way!” Sora cried, “Bliztball is way better”

“Hey Bliztball is just another rounded sport. Struggle Battles take concentration and skill and using quick maneuvers to get your opponent” spoke up the rematerialized nobody.

“And who are you?” asked Pence. After a long awkward pause of blank stares Roxas mood shifted.

“You guys don’t remember me?” sadly Roxas questioned. They only stared at him even more trying to recount where or if even they remember meeting him.

“Oh yeah!” cried Olette, “I remember you”

Roxas smiled thinking friendship was strong; everyone else looked at the orange shirt girl to hear an answer.

“Aren’t you that boy that went out with the girl from the mansion?”

“What?” Sora looked at her, “No this is Roxas. He’s my Nobody, he was friends with the other Twilight Town versions of you”

“Wait he’s one of those white guys that attacked us at the mansion?” Hayner questioned.

“Yeah”

“Well It’s nice to meet you Roxas” Olette smiled, “I’m sorry that we know nothing about you”

“But this is amazing” Pence commented enthusiastically, “Were our copies exactly the same as our persona?”

“Well…” the Nobody pondered, “Yeah, Olette was the mother-one of the group she always kept us on top in homework and that we didn’t miss a day, and Hayner was great in the Struggle Battles”

“What do you mean WAS great?” Hayner commented a bit ticked off. As Pence went on asking questions of the other Twilight Town, Olette couldn't help but recall a boy ten years ago in Twilight Town just like Roxas. Everyone else sat quietly listening to Roxas regain friendship with his old friends again. Riku on the other hand stared out the window and saw the castle appear in the distance.

The train arrived at Yen Sid’s tower the door opened up on the side of the train. Hayner Pence and Olette looked in awe at the castle. Sora and Riku sensed something wrong with the setting. They were right something was wrong because heartless jumped out in an ambush! One was heading straight for Olette.

Hayner jumped in front of her to block the attack. He was knocked down and surrounded; his only weapon was his struggle bat. They inched closer and closer ready to pounce, luckily Donald used Thunder and they all disappeared in a poof of smoke. “Hayner, Pence, Olette! Head to the tower!” Riku yelled, “Well, handle this”

“No way!” Hayner protested, “Were not leaving you guys here”

“Thanks but this is too dangerous. Head to the Tower and find Yen Sid” Sora assured them.

As the trio ran into the Tower, Sora and his friends took care of the Heartless. Out of nowhere a hooded figure jumped out and slashed the remaining heartless with a strange bronze sword. The figure was very agile and finished the heartless as quickly as he appeared. It stood up and removed its hood. It was a girl! Her clothes where as dark as death itself, her eyes were gray and her hair black as coal. Her blade was copper smaller compared to the swords Sora has seen and her stare was as dead as a rotting corpse. Sora was about to speak when the girl hushed him, “My name is Jade Earth” she announced.

“Are you from another world?” Goofy questioned

“No”, she admitted, “I’m from another planet”

“Other planet isn't that the same thing” Sora pointed out.

“Come inside I’ll explain things soon” She put her blade away and walked into the Tower. Sora and Riku looked at each other then back at Jade as she was opening the door.


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Yen Sid and King Mickey have been discussing very important matters when three youths interrupted them, “Help Sora and Riku are in trouble” cried Olette.

Yen Sid stunned from their rude entrance stood and headed to the moon crest window. He looked down and saw Jade helping them out. He turned around and assured the trio they were fine, which called for a sign of relief. As they showed their respects to Yen Sid and the King, something was bothering them “Your Majesty why did you ask us to come?” asked Pence

Mickey was about to answer when Yen Sid extended his arm out, “I requested your presence. You see I have been informed that we are in grave danger” the trio looked at Yen Sid in concern of his announcement, “Follow me”.

The group walked into a circular room with mirrors of all sorts covered up. Yen Sid approached the largest one and pulled the sheet off. It was a door. “I need you to join Sora and his friends for a war”

“A war?” Hayner questioned
Yen Sid nodded as he continued explaining, “When you enter you will experience time go slower. Being in here will seem like 10 years, but out here it would only have been 5 days”

“Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! You’re telling us you want us to basically live out 10 years of our lives in there” Hayner pointed at the door

“Won’t we be older?” Pence questioned

“What if we die inside? Would it even count out here?” Olette asked with great concern

Yen Sid raised his hand to silence the parade of questions, “You won’t grow and you won’t die. It will seem like a training camp” He then opened the door and a bright light shimmered nearly blinding the trio. “So what do you say?”

“Alright” Hayner responded as he and his friends headed into the Chamber of Time. After they had disappeared into the chamber Yen Sid closed the door making sure it was ready for the other recruits.

I know this is pretty weird chapter with a strange character like Jade, but all will be explained soon. Chamber of Time is based on Dragonball Z the episode when they spend a few years in this time capsule. And yes their is something about Olette's memory of Roxas but again soon.

 

Chapter 7


“Sora Riku stay here” said Donald

“Well, go talk to Yen Sid and the King. A-hyuck” chuckled Goofy

“Well wait here” Sora replied

Donald and Goofy both entered Yen Sid’s Chamber. They expected to see the all-powerful sorcerer, but found the King instead. “Your Majesty” bowed Donald and Goofy.

“Hey a fellas”, boasted Mickey

“Uh... Where’s Master Yen Sid?” asked Goofy

“He’s busy going over important matters with our new guest. Donald Goofy” the two stood in attention, “I need you two to head back to the castle and protect everyone”

“How come your majesty?” asked Donald

“Yen Sid says that this time it’s serious and I need you guys to be on your guard”

“Ay ay your majesty” the two said in unison as they ran out the door.

“Please let Sora and Riku in now before you go!!” he shouted.

Wasn’t long that Sora and Riku entered the Chamber this time they saw Yen Sid sitting in his chair. He must have finished quickly to have sat back down. “Welcome chosen wielders of the keyblade” he greeted.

The boys showed their courtesy as they bowed. “What’s the problem?” Riku asked

“You two are old enough to know that neither of you are true Keyblade Masters”, the boys were a bit disappointed, but had their direct attention to Master Yen Sid, “So today we will be having a Mark of Mastery Test”

“What’s a Mark of Mastery Test?” questioned Sora as usual

Yen Sid motioned his hand across the desk and in an instant Sora, Riku, Yen Sid, and the King were outside of the Tower again. “A Mark of Mastery Test is to see who is worthy of a title of Master. Today, Not one but two of the keyblades chosen stand here as candidates. Both of you may prevail or neither”

They nod understanding what lies ahead, “Are you ready?” Yen Sid asks

“Yes” they replied in unison

“Then, let the examination begin” Yen Sid motioned his hand again and five light orbs appeared in a straight line in front of the keybladers. Luckily, there was no Xehanort to tamper with the test this time. On command Sora and Riku charged at the orbs and destroyed them in record breaking time. Sora used his ordinary Kingdom Key while Riku used Way to the Dawn.

When they were done Yen Sid looked upon them and nodded, “Now for the final test Sora Riku the two of you will face each other in combat.” The friends stand in front of each other with keyblade in hand as they wait for Yen Sid to call, “Begin!!”

Instantly they charged and Yen Sid’s Tower has the first clash of keyblades clang in years. Sora and Riku continue to clash when Riku makes a risky thrust towards Sora’s chest. Sora sees the incoming blow and backflips to dodge.

Sora runs back and tries to hit Riku’s defenseless leg in an attempt to trip him backwards. Riku stabs his keyblade down and the keyblades clang again. Riku gets his Way to the Dawn and swings vigorously at Sora who dodges each one. When Sora noticed an opportunity he regained himself and did the same to Riku. Sora lunged and came up with an upper cut that narrowly missed Riku if he had not backed up.

They continued with backflips, front flips, side flips, every dodge and attack when finally, Sora found another opportunity. Riku was slow in turning around so as Riku charged with another thrust to Sora’s chest. Sora leaped in the air front flipped behind Riku and got him on his back. He then moved his keyblade forward to disarm Riku of his keyblade.

Just like that the test was over and Sora was the champion. Riku got up after dusting himself off. He called his keyblade back and made it disappear. He then walked up to his best friend and gave him a hug, “Your ganna make a great Master” he said.

Sora smiled at him and nodded. Again Yen Sid motioned his hand and everyone was back in his chamber again. “That was really good” said Yen Sid at last, “You both had battled trimendably” the next words he spoke brought smiles on both Riku and Sora’s face. “I have reached a decision for your great use of the keyblade the two of you have passed”

“Alright!!” they cheered in unison giving each other a high five.

“So this means were both Official Keyblade Masters?” Sora asked

Yen Sid nodded, “As our newest Keyblade Masters you both are entitled to certain knowledge please wait here till I have finished speaking to our guest”

Yen Sid exited and left the boys in his Chamber with the King. “Nice job fellas” the King congratulated them.

“Thanks” they replied

“Welp I’ll see you soon”

“Where are you going?” asked Riku

“I’m off to search for a lion named Aslan”

“Be careful” Sora warned him

“I will good luck”

With that the king was gone as well. They sat in that chamber for nearly an hour “How do you think Kairi’s doing Riku?” Sora finally broke the long silence they have been sitting in.

Riku came out of his long concentration, “I don’t know. But with Namine I’m sure she’s doing fine”

Sora nodded “If only I could see her at least”

“Why don’t you use that crystal ball” Roxas had rematerialized in front of the now Keyblade Masters.

“What crystal ball?” questioned Sora

“The one sitting on the table” He pointed a finger that Sora a Riku both followed to see he was right there was a crystal ball sitting on the table. Sora got up and walked over to it. He lifted it up.

“Don’t break it Sora” Riku warned

Sora tilted it shook it around, but nothing. He tried banging it on the table to see if it would work. Both Roxas and Riku face palmed, “YOUR GANNA BREAK IT!!!” Riku shouted.

Which was a bad idea cause Sora nearly dropped it, “Okay… Geez.Umm… Show me Kairi” He finally said and viola the crystal ball listened and Sora could see Kairi. So that Sora doesn't break it Riku placed it on the table.

It was hard to make out what was going on or what Kairi was saying, but that didn’t bother Sora. She seemed to be arguing with someone when finally her voice rang out and Sora was in disbelief.

“That idiot never loved me. He only cared about himself and was never around when I needed him. Ugh! As if I didn't have enough to deal with… I hope I never see him again.”

The image was lost and Sora couldn't believe what he saw more importantly heard. Riku put a shoulder on him “Sora…” He tried comforting him.

“Sora you can’t believe that she really feels that way about you?” Roxas was trying to remind Sora of Kairi’s love, but he remained silent, “Sora. Kairi loves you she couldn't have meant all of that. Look at the charm she gave you.”

Sora pulled out the shelled charm Kairi had given him before he left again. He smiled weakly “You’re right I’m probably blowing all of this out of proportion.”

Suddenly, the door slammed so loud Roxas vanished and Riku and Sora immediately turned around. It was Yen Sid and behind him was a girl. Her gray eyes hung low and black clothes and cape made her more ominous. “Sora Riku this is Jade “

“Yeah we meet her outside” Sora replied

Yen Sid nodded “She has some very important matters to discuss” The boys cocked their heads, “Sit her tale may take a while”

Jade looked at Yen Sid nodded and looked back at the boys. “What are you going to tell us” Riku asked

“How Fantasy and Earth were created”

Well I'm proud about the fight scene I'm pretty lame on description and I'm sure you all have noticed this by now. And yeah this is one of those big build ups to the next chapter which I'm really proud of because I was actually able to just say rarely anyone has dialogue, but yeah this chapter is okay not my best and I'm sure some edits will come in the future, but no guarantee because I feel like moving on or I'll stay stuck on this editing forever.

 

Chapter 8

Years ago there was a brilliant scientist who discovered a way to create life on a planet. Though he never proved it he and a group of colleagues joined together to make at least twenty. Twenty planets with life is an interesting idea. What was more interesting he planned to use a strange element now known as Oxygen and Hydrogen to sustain life.

For five years they searched for an ideal star. Until one day they found one. It was a G-type main sequence star the perfect specimen. They were unsure of how far the planets needed to be, but immediately sent out the two elements that morphed with the surrounding compounds.

Centuries passed and the scientists returned to discover that 9 planets had been created which was a success. Unfortunately, neither had life or was stable enough. They thought it was an utter failure. But a silver lining was shining through and a tenth planet had circled out from the opposite side of the star.

They named it Fantasy for it was a miracle and a fantasy for any planet to actually be created and have life walk amongst the giant mass. One important aspect they also discovered the third planet was in the same rotation and had the same exact elements. With that said Planet #3 was going to have life and the scientists named it Earth.

For a while the two planets circled around the Sun at the same speed and rotation almost like twins. Earth was home to lizard like giants at the time and Fantasy was home to powerful warriors who wielded a key like blade.

Wasn't long afterwards planet Fantasy collapsed on its self and was destroyed. Apparently the warriors were given a light that they loved and began to fight over. With their strange mutation darkness entered their hearts and began to consume everything on the planet.

The one thing Fantasy did not have that Earth did was a spirit. The Spirit of the Earth. Her and her daughter, Jade, devised a way to bring back the planet. They captured the light that was given to the warriors and gave it to the hearts of children. The children of Earth who were nomadic at the time with the great Ice Age re-built small worlds with the light that they had in their hearts.

Many worlds were being created the light began to disappear within each generation of children ultimately disappearing. Although, with every child that is born on Earth their imagination of a new world comes true. No matter how sinister they may be a destiny is created giving Fantasy the new birth. To this day the small worlds of Fantasy have not been discovered by Earth and may never will.

When Fantasy was destroyed the scientists were completely disappointed that they sent out a search as to what happened? No matter how good anything is there is always evil. One of the scientists tampered with both planets. Fantasy was given light to bring about darkness. Earth was inconclusive. As punishment they sent him to the core of the sun and allowed him to burn to death.

As for Earth the scientists feared of what trickery had been placed on it that they sent 10 mediators. Each mediator had a special power. 1st mediator had bonding capabilities almost like love. 2nd mediator had control of the moon. 3rd mediator controlled night. 4th mediator controlled light. 5th mediator controlled the sea. 6th mediator established war. 7th mediator had pure wisdom. 8th mediator controlled the sky. 9th mediator controlled the rays of the sun.

The tenth mediator was a time traveler and kept a well recorded history of births and deaths of everything on Earth and used it to control life and balance on the planet. His knowledge was passed down to his daughter Jade.

Now a mediator was an inspector of planets, but as humans were humans they gave them strange names like. Lakshmi Goddess of Love. Mama Quilla Goddess of the Moon. Nyx Goddess of the night. Yhi Goddess of the Light. Enki God of the Sea. Enurta God of War. Thoth God of Wisdom. Ehecatl God of the Sky. Chu Jung God of the Sun. And Ah Pukuh now known as the Grim Reaper.

After a few years with the Earthlings the mediators returned to the scientists to discuss what they have learned. “What did you find?” they asked

“The Sumerians knew nothing” said Enki

“The Babylonians knew nothing” repeated Enurta

“The Aborigines mentioned Uluru again. I mean it’s just a big rock!” replied Yhi, “But I couldn’t find anything else than that”

“The Chinese formed a calendar of animals” informed Chu Jung, “But didn’t mean much”

“The Aztecs where clueless” said Ehecatl

“The Incans are very protective of their land” motioned Mama Quilla, “But I found nothing”

“The Egyptians thought I was an actual bird with this mask”, boasted Thoth, “So they wouldn’t know anything”

“The Indians near Kanauji spoke of a demon flying” spoke Lakshmi, “But it was only Ehecatl flying by”

“The Greeks spoke of ash and fire raining down” acknowledged Nyx, “But it was only a volcano eruption”

The scientists were about to conclude of no problems on Earth. Until Ah Pukuh entered screaming “The Mayans found something! They say there’s a red demon in the center of the Earth. In future time they will call him the Devil”

“Devil?” asked one of the scientists, “What does he do?”

“He’s a Soul Eater” replied Ah Pukuh, “Once a person dies on Earth this monster eats the souls. But he is very cunning and has appeared on Earth more than once. He’s a creation of the scientist that died”

“What about my son?” the head scientist asked.

“Sadly, he can only save a handful of souls of the millions it consumes”

“Is he capable of destroying the Planet?” questioned another scientist.

“No. Unless he is helped by the darkness that surrounds the worlds of Fantasy”

“What do you purpose we do?” asked the scientist with the Planet idea.

“By 2000 A.D.’s my daughter will travel to Fantasy and speak to the residence to see if anything can prevent such a disaster”

“2000 A.D!!!!!” They screamed

“Why not sooner?” one asked

“The time is not right”



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“And that is how the planets were created” Jade had told the young Keyblade Masters everything she knew. So far.

“So you’re from Earth?” asked Sora

‘No she’s from Hollow Bastion’ retorted Roxas

‘Really?’

Roxas face palmed from Sora’s lack of attention. “So what is the problem?” asked Riku

“You see someone has been contacting the Soul Eater”, Jade replied, “If he gets a hold of the darkness Earth will also, collapse on itself”
Sora stood up, “No worries will handle this”, reassuring her that they would take care of it.

Jade nods, “Yes, but...There is more”

The boys stayed quiet. Yen Sid rose from his chair, “It would seem Xehanort is up to no good again”, said Yen Sid.

“WHAT!?!?” the boys replied in unison. Even Roxas rematerialized screaming.

“It would seem Xehanort has been planning to go to war with Earth”, Yen Sid continued, “For what I don’t know, but he shouldn’t be under estimated”

“That’s why we need you two to gather your friends”, Jade added, “We are short on time so you two will have to split the missions”

“Wait!” Sora interrupted, “Where’s Hayner, Pence, and Olette? And Donald and Goofy?”

“The King sent them back to the castle” Jade replied, “They won’t be accompanying you on the trip”

“As for the Twilight Trio” Yen Sid advised, “I have already sent them to begin their training”

“Are you crazy we can’t risk their lives”, Riku argued

“I thought I was clear when I said ‘Your Friends’” Jade emphasized

“Does that mean everyone?” Sora questioned

“Yes”, Yen Sid nodded, “Including new friends and the Princess of Heart”

“Yen Sid!” a voice called out, “Don’t forget”

The Master looked down on his table, “Ah, yes” he said, “Jiminy, will accompany Riku. With his knowledge of the worlds he will be a great ally”

“And we go with Sora!” two small chipmunks cry from the floor.

“That’s right” Jade nodded, “Chip and Dale have come up with some GPS device they planted on the Gummi Ships”

“We will be able to keep in touch as we go on our adventures”, added Dale.

“With that said you boys should get go-” Yen Sid was cut short when a man in a long black trench coat and biker gloves crashed into the room screaming

“MASTER YEN SID!!”

Shocked from the fellows entrance he replied, “What is it Balthazar?”

“Horvath has escaped. He has the Grimhold”

“That only means”

“Morgana will soon be freed” Everyone looked at the Immortal Earthling.

“You know about Morgana?” Balthazar asked removing his black hat.

“No”, she replied, “Not here, but on Earth people have created stories of this. All of this. Who Sora is? The Princess, Morgana, everything has been created by Earth.
This is why I know so much”

“So you know where we can find Xehanort and this Horvath?” asked Riku

“No I only know from Earth’s Past, Present, and Future. If it involves the worlds of Fantasy I have no clue. Not until a child creates this world, everything is confusing to me here.”

Everyone was a bit disappointed. The new keyblade master looked at his silver haired friend, “Come on Riku let’s go”

“Wait. Horvath, Morgana and the Morganians are very dangerous. Never let your guard down” informed Balthazar

“How do we stop Morgana?” asked Roxas who was still in the room.

“Take the Grimhold”

With that share of advice Roxas vanished and the young keyblade masters, a cricket, and 2 chipmunks departed ways as they went to gather their friends.

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Balthazar had gone in search of Jade’s Father. Which left Jade and Yen Sid in the chamber alone. Jade let out a huge sigh. “Is something troubling you?” Yen Sid asked

“Oh, no” she replied, “I saw the boys’ future on Earth and that makes 8 more for my father”

I believe in God. So much of the story will have religion playing in, but not really as preachy as many church's make it. I would talk more about it, but I would just be going off topic. This isn't really all true it just created to seem believable and I'm really proud of it. All the pieces just fit. If you have any questions seriously ask because religion and non-religion is really hated often for just being mentioned. Thanks for reading :)

This is a better visualization of the mediators that I search and researched hard to find xp

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Chapter 9 Destiny Island High School

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Early in the morning, a pale blonde was running through the streets of Destiny Island. As she went up the steps of the high school she could hear the tardy bell. She knew that this is going to be close. She ran through the doors, down the green painted hallway and reached room 621.

Knock Knock

“Come in”, said the teacher, “Can I help you?”

Ms. Catina was very kind and greeted the girl without much concern “I need to see Kairi” spoke the young teen. She was a bit red from all the running and she held a very heavy math book in one hand. As the teacher motioned for the young crimson haired teen to come forward, the two girls left the room. Ms. Catina watched the door close behind the girls and turned back to her class.

“Alright class, take out your math book and start reading page 135 on Quadratic Expressions”


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“Thanks Namine. Where did you find it?” asked the Princess of Heart

“Riku left it in the secret place on the island. I had to paddle all the way out there to find it”, she explained.

“Alright thanks I’ll see you at lunch?” Namine nodded and waved good-bye to her somebody as she went back into the classroom.

Namine began walking down the hallway thinking about a certain blonde and how she is going to show off her new magic. She smiled at the thought of him being amazed. She suddenly had a strange feeling in the pit of her stomach. It was hard to describe it. The whole hallway began to glow white until everything was consumed and she was blinded.

%%%%%%%Flashback%%%%%

As the light dimmed she could see the old mansion from Twilight Town right in front of her. Memories of that horrible building rushed through her mind as she was abused by Organization 13 and Diz. Nonetheless, she was confused, but she couldn't move her arms or legs. Neither could she speak or hear anything all she could do was watch.

She felt a very firm hand grip on her left hand and a delicate soft grip in her right. As she turned her head she saw a tall man with brown hair and lovely sky blue eyes. On her right she saw a blonde green eyed woman they both looked at her and smiled.

The tall man picked her up and put her on his shoulders. It seemed that Namine was looking into the eyes of a young girl and her parents who owned the mansion. They entered the house and it was clean as it ever had been. The chandler was dazzling and the Egyptian cotton rugs extended down the stairs. The furniture was all new and the paint smelled fresh.

The man took the girl up the stairs and to the room where Namine drew all her drawings. She could already see the large table and window. As she entered the room she saw the familiar paint and curtain that blew even with the window closed. There was also, a bed with a crown sitting upon the pillow.

No table no drawings just more little girl furniture and a full length mirror. The man whom had brought her here left closing the door behind. The memory witch was unable to do anything but watch some pale arms grab the crown and jump on the bed.

After a while the jumping stopped and the young girl climbed off her bed to see her reflection in the mirror. Namine was stunned and without words as she saw the little girl with blonde hair, blue eyes and a short white skirt. Was this her? No. Couldn’t be.

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The Memory Witch stood in the hallway of the high school slowly coming back to reality. As she snapped the shock out of herself was she able to think about what had happened. She only denied it. It couldn’t have been her. She never had memories like this before, but that didn’t stop her from wondering if she was really a nobody or something more.

After lunch with Selphie and the guys, Kairi headed towards her history class. She bit her lip looking over her book page by page as she studied. It was the midterm exams and she wasn’t sure how Destiny Island got its name.

‘Hey Namine ca-‘

‘I can’t help you cheat Kairi’

‘Ugh! Well could you at least tell me how Destiny Island got its name?’

‘Hiroyuki sailed on a pirate ship. It was his job to guard the treasure. After his crewmates and captain died he found the island. He then, married his girlfriend or “slave” and later had a daughter named Destin. The whole island was named after his daughter’

Kairi took her seat in class and put her book back into her bag as she waited for the tardy bell to ring. The teacher Mr. Xine was reading his Destiny Isle Daily Dispatch paper ignoring the flood of students that entered his class. The Princess of Heart took in some deep breaths and went over what she could remember.

“Oh look guys, it’s the island whore”, shouted Jannette, her friends laughed of course and Kairi clutched her fists ready to hit her. The blonde and her groupies walked off and sat in the far corner near the window. Kairi watched as they laughed, as they walked, and how much she despised them.

“Hey?” a stranger called. Kairi turned around and looked at this silver haired girl. She too had sky blue eyes and held a greenish backpack on one side of her shoulders. She took the desk next to the Princess.

“I’m sorry who are you?” she asked

“My names Hamako” she replied, “Do you mind if I sit here? Um….”

“Kairi”

“Nice to meet you” she smiled.

“Hamako?... Don’t you usually hang out with Jannette?”

“Yeah, but I’m tired of her and how mean she’s been”

“Tell me about it?” Kairi added sarcastically.

“So where’s Sora haven’t seen him or his silver haired friend around lately?”

“Riku? Well they’re probably on vacation”

“Midterms are TODAY!!! Aren’t they worried about failing?”

“You’re right!” the princess pondered, “Well they told me they finished it early so they could get going”

“Oh! So where did they go?”

“Um…”

“Shhh!” Mr. Xine was out of his desk handing out the midterm papers. Kairi was saved… for the moment. And who was this girl Hamako? Why is she so curious about Sora and Riku? Why isn’t she with Jannette?

After class Kairi made a sneaky escape from Hamako. She seemed nice, but the princess sensed a devious plot. Suddenly, an arrogant blonde caught up to Kairi, “Soo I hear your boyfriend left again”

‘Oh Great what does she want now?’ She thought, “Yeah Sora left yesterday. So?”

“So the idiot’s come to get some form his **** and took off” Jannette spoke almost sympathetically, Kairi’s fist clinched at her words, “You might as well walk around with an “A” on your shirt hun”

“Hey leave her alone Jannette” cried out Hamako.

“Who do you think you are?”

“I’m the one who’s telling you to back off or else!”

As a final attempt Jannette slapped the books out of Kairi’s hands and spit on her Algebra book as she flipped her hair and walked off, “Next time little miss newbie won’t be around to help you out tramp”

Kairi stared off glaring at her as she knelt down to pick up her books. “Hey are you okay?” Hamako asked as she helped her with the princess with her stuff.

“What’s your motive?”

“W-what?”

“Why are you helping me?”

“Isn’t it the right thing to do?”

“Yeah, but you have been here for almost a year and not once did you ever stand up for me”

Hamako took a deep breath, “You’re right… I’m sorry, but I really am trying to help you against Jannette”

“What do you want in return? Huh? Money? The Newspaper?” Kairi was fed up with her and wondered what she truly wanted.

“Riku”

“Excuse me?”

“Your friend Riku” she said again, “I think he’s kinda hot and well…”

“You want to go out with Riku?”

The silver haired girl nervously pulled her hair behind her ear, “Yeah~”

“KAIRI!!!” down the hall a brunette girl was rushing over to the two.

“Selphie, what is it?” Kairi asked

“It’s bad”

“What?”

“It’s really really bad”

“Selphie what is it?”

“Jason’s back”

The Princess of Heart was silent and in utter shock. “Who’s Jason?” asked Hamako.

“I’m sorry and you are?” asked Selphie

“Hamako”

“Selphie… aren’t you one of the plastics that hangs around Jannette?” she noticed, “Why don’t you follow your tyrant b&^%& and be gone”. With a disgusted look Hamako turned away and disappeared in the crowd of students. Immediately Selphie returned to her friend, “Kairi?... How are you going to deal with Jason now that he’s come back?”

“Ugh! I don’t know! That idiot never loved me. He only cared about himself and was never around when I needed him. Now he’s back! Ugh! As if I didn’t have enough to deal with… I really hoped I’d never see him again.”

“Kairi I think you should tell someone about what happened?”

“I already told you it’s embarrassing enough”

“Yeah I know, but if you keep this within you, I’m just worried about you okay”

“Thanks” she smiled, “But I’ll see how this will be handled.

“Well okay… Hey! Movie night at the Megaplex?”

“Yeah sure”

“Yay we can see the Diary of Godlub”

“How about Vampire Night? I don’t think the guys will appreciate seeing a diary of a poodle”

Selphie frowned at her silly idea, “Okay~”

“See you at my place?”

“Yeah”

As they hugged their good-byes Selphie went downstairs to her next class. Meanwhile Kairi looked out the window in the hallway and watched as the greenish birds chirped outside. Suddenly she felt sick in her stomach and began hearing things.

“One day when you’re in trouble the light within you will lead you to the light of another. Someone to keep you safe.”


I think this is an improvement, but depends on what you guys think in my editing skills. Lets' see who can figure it out. What movie is Jannette refering to when she says "You might as well walk around with an 'A' on your shirt hun" ?

 

Chapter 10 Earth

“WE’RE GOING TO DISNEYLAND!!!!!!!!!”

The James High School Marching band was ready for their first trip to Anaheim, California. They had raised just enough money for everyone and eight chaperones to go. Since, they traveled by charter bus it took them 10 hours and everyone was excited.
There was one student that was more excited than the rest. Not only was it his first trip to Disneyland, but also, a trip away from his town. Just like the rest of the students he wore a black shirt with a bulldog and musical notes encircling it. He had his twilight blue tennis and black wrist watch.

The young brunette teen had very intense gray eyes, but he was slightly asleep from the long travel. Slowly he was waking up to some random song:

La banda norteña los carros del año​

Las mejores plebes las traigo a mi lado​

Pura buchanita del cellito rojo​

me gusta cumplirme todos mis antojos​

las playas las discos y los malecones​

palenques y en tastes apuesto millones​

me sobran amigos portoditos lados​

son gente muy buena de muy alto rango​

y les digo a mi gente​

Soy Enamorado​

He leaned forward from his seat to find his friend Rodrigo singing. “What the hell are you doing?” he asked

“Oh, hey what’s up man?” Rodrigo replied.

“I’m trying to sleep what do you think?”

Rodrigo laughed and apologized, “Soo Jose, you excited for the Tower Terror!!!”

“Sure if you stopped saying that” Rodrigo was a nice guy annoying at times, but was a true friend. He too was wearing the black bulldog shirt and had his glasses. He had been to Disneyland, but was excited to be going with his good friends.

“Alright then” He turned to the adorable couple sitting next to him “What about you Joanna?”

“Of course” she said. It was her first trip too and she was going with her boyfriend Frankie. They were just the cute couple of Jose’s friends and ultimately inseparable when together. She treasured her friendship and was never going to abandon them.

“Frankie?”

“Yeah” Frankie was enjoying sitting next to Joanna he gave very few answers, but he was still very smart and knew enough about everything. He always over explains things, but he always gets his point across.

“And you Jacob?” Jose nudged his best friend who was asleep.

“F*** off!!” he growled before sleeping again, Jacob was obnoxious, but he would back you up in a fight which was all Jose really needed in a good friend.

“Hey watch your mouth Mr.” scolded Joanna.

Jacob waved his hand as a sign of ‘Shut up’; everyone else began to laugh at his behavior as always. Jose smiled for a while until he looked a bit upset. He looked down at the floor of the bus.

‘Who was that kid?’ he thought

“Hey are you okay?” Joanna noticed her friends change in mood.

“Oh, nothing I’m alright just tired” he stood up a bit to find the band teacher, “Mr. are we there yet?!” The teacher shook his head and Jose sank back down into his seat

“Frankie do you have your DS?” Rodrigo asked. He was already bored and it was still a 3 hour ride.

“Sure. Which game do you want to play?” he replied

“Umm.. Do you have 358/2 days?” He handed the game console to him and watched as he lost himself instantly.

“Did you ever finish?” asked Joanna

“Yeah it took forever. The game was really long and it was hard to kill that girl… uh… Ugh!! What’s her name?”

“Xion” Rodrigo spoke up “I saw the cutscenes didn’t seem so hard”

“What are you guys talking about?” Jose questioned

“Kingdom Hearts It’s about this boy and gir-”

“Stop!” Jacob interrupted, “I don’t care so shut up and me sleep now”. Jose was a bit interested. He’s never heard of the game before and the blonde on the screen seemed vaguely familiar.

‘Kind of looks like that kid in my dream’ he thought.


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At Disneyland for 13 hours and they have already gone on Splash Mountain, Space Mountain, Tower Terror, Indiana Jones, It’s a small world, Thunder Railroad and California Screaming. The five friends and Frankie’s mom (chaperone) were having the best time and the parade was about to begin in the Disneyland park so they rushed on over.

Joanna was looking over the pictures she bought from a previous ride. “Rodrigo you’re always smiling!!” she noticed.

Rodrigo looked at the pictures and began to laugh as well. “What’s up with you Frankie?” he pointed at his portrait in the Tower of Terror he had some lemon face with a bit of rage look.

“I was looking over at Joanna and I was screaming” he made the face, “I hate you! I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU!!!”

Frankie’s mom was laughing, but Rodrigo had another opinion, “Awe” he laughed, “That’s mean”

“Well yeah she begged me to get on” was Frankie’s excuse

“But you had fun?” said Jose

“Yeah”

“Hey kids stay here we’re going into this store for a sec” said the chaperone. Just a little gift shop and not too far from the side walk where Jose, Jacob, and Rodrigo sat. Joanna and Frankie entered the ‘Crystal Arts’ shop. It was where you can get very well crafted pieces of glass.

“Yeah no worries we’ll be here” assured Rodrigo, “We’ll save you some seats”

“Cool” thumbs upped Joanna as she entered the store. The boys waited on the sidewalk watching as huge crowds began to gather for the parade.

“I remember when I was little I actually judged the parade as it went by”, Rodrigo was telling another one of his stories again. Jacob sat next to him on the curb as he listened to his story. Jose on the other hand stayed standing next to a light post.

“I’m sorry dude I was looking at that” said Jacob. Rodrigo followed his finger to a girl in a short mini skirt.

“Well, I’ll just leave you to your staring” Rodrigo turned his head towards Jose, “What are you thinking about?”

Jose wasn’t paying attention “Huh? What? Sorry just got a lot on my mind”

“Alright then” He returned to Jacob “Dude your drooling!”

“Shut up” he replied

Jose gave a weak laugh, but suddenly was pushed to the floor by some random stranger in a long black over coat. Immediately Jacob and Rodrigo looked back to find their friend flat on the floor. Jose tried getting up and rubbed his hand on his lip to see if he had bitten it. The stranger however, grabbed him by the arm and hulled him up, placing something in his hand. He pulled him close so Jose could hear and turned away disappearing into the crowd.

“Jose you okay?” Rodrigo and Jacob were immediately at his side and the whole incident took only seconds.

“Does he look okay?” Jacob replied sarcastically

“No te metas o te matamos” Jose suddenly replied

“What?” Jacob asked

“Don’t get involved or we’ll kill you” Rodrigo translated

“Dude what the f*** just happened?”

“I don’t know. Jose what did that guy give you?”

Jose began unfolding the paper that said the same thing and the consequences would be his family. Rodrigo turned into the direction of the stranger thinking about what he looked like.

“Dude that guy was a pedophile. Why would he just pick on you?” Jacob tried lightening up everyone’s spirits by cracking jokes. Jose smiled and turned to see his other friends and chaperone coming out of the store.

“Were back did anything happen while we were gone?” asked Joanna

“Jose was attacked by a pedophile” replied Jacob

“What?!”

“Did not” Jose explained, “Just some random guy knocked me on the floor and threatened to kill me”

“What?!”

Frankie’s mother touched Jose’s chest, “Are you okay mihijto?”

As she dusted him off with her other hand from some dirt Jose replied saying “I’m fine no worries”

“Why was the guy a pedophile?” asked Frankie

“Dude he was an inch away from sucking Jose’s face off” Jose rolled his eyes and socked Jacob’s shoulder, “Ow!”

“Stop exaggerating it then!”

“Wait!” Joanna protested “Threatened to kill you?”

“Don’t worry about it” Jose tried to calm her down. Didn’t work she only stared back at him shaking her head with a disappointed look.

Everyone sat down to watch the parade begin. Rodrigo on the other hand was too busy thinking about the guy who had pushed Jose ‘That was really weird. Jacob’s right why would some random guy in an Organization 13 coat just randomly pick on Jose? He’s probably a cosplayer, but still it makes no sense!’ he thought, but quickly got over it and returned to his friends to watch the parade.

“Hi” a high pitched voice rang out.

“Jasmine” Joanna stood up hugging her best friend

“I lost my group” she replied

“Oh it’s okay mihijta” reassured Frankie’s mom, “Who was your chaperone?”

“Mr. Gonzalez” Like that Frankie’s mom sent the teacher a text informing him one of his kids are with her.

“Sit” said Joanna

“Okay” Jasmine took a seat on Rodrigo’s lap

“Jasmine” he laughed “Get off”

“You’re mean”

“No you’re sitting on my phone”

“Jasmine” Joanna called, “Bajate”

Jasmine was a party girl, always doing silly stuff, but her friends never got annoyed by it because they’re so use to it. As the parade began Jose still couldn't shake the feeling in the pit of his stomach that something was wrong. As the crowd cheered Jose looked up into the sky noticing a bright star. Making a wish, “Esme… I hope you’re okay”.

So this is the introduction to the strange Mexican kid in Sora's dream. Song is called "El Enamorado" by Los Titanes de Durango. This is half and half true story. Me and my friends did go to Disneyland from our high school. But I'm going to leave it up to all of you to guess who I am. Of this entire story 3 are not real people. Everyone else is based on real friends, parents, and teacher's. Only in Earth chapters. Anyway thanks for reading :) and more on these new characters to come.

 

Chapter 11 Underland

“Miss Kingsleigh… Will you be my wife?”, Hamish smiled at the lovely blonde girl. She stared at him with worry as they held hands. She has always been told what to do and was tired of it. She stood under the gazebo with this red haired lord and wasn't ready for marriage.

Miss Kingsleigh was unsure of what to say. She looked around at the huge crowd that has gathered to see her get engaged. It was silent and she stared back at Hamish seeing his big smile. “Well…” she finally spoke, “…Everyone expects me to…. You’re a lord…. My face won’t last… and I don’t want to end up alone…”

Everyone was getting excited and impatient to hear her say yes, but she didn’t she let go of his hands and said, “…But this is happening so quickly. I….I think I… I need a moment”

Just like that Miss Kingsleigh ran out of the gazebo and ran to a meadow of many different kinds of colorful flowers. She stopped to catch her breath and began thinking about the engagement. She was always told of how to think, how to dress, how to behave, and more importantly who to marry. Enough was enough she sat down near all of the flowers in her blue dress and white boots and thought about flying.

“I’m late! I’m Late! No time to say hello good-bye. I’M LATE! I’M LATE! I’M LATE!”

Miss Kingsleigh quickly looked over her shoulder and saw a white rabbit in a blue waistcoat holding a very large pocket watch. ‘What in the world?’ she thought. The strange talking rabbit was running not wasting time to enjoy the flowers. Miss Kingsleigh was unsure of what to do so she followed him.

She ran into the woodland forests pushing tree branches away from her as she followed the rabbit. Miss Kingsleigh found her way to a rotting dead tree and the rabbit was gone. She looked around for anything out of the ordinary, but nothing. It seemed hopeless and she began to walk back to the party.

“Whoa!” she cried, ‘A rabbit hole?’ she thought. ‘Maybe the talking rabbit came here’.

Miss Kingsleigh looked into the hole. It was dark and really deep, she couldn’t see anything. She shifted her hand to get a better grip, but the dirt was unstable and she fell into the rabbit hole.

“AHHHHHH!!!!” she screamed. Falling into a deep hole that seemed to take centuries, but with strange obstacles falling around her made it very dangerous. Books, book shelves, pianos, lamps, clocks, what else could have been falling around her?

As she was coming to an end of the drop she hit a mattress and bounced off continuing to scream and fall.

CRASH

She fell right through the ceiling? And right on the floor? The chandler was dangling from side to side. Miss Kingsleigh picked herself up staying put looking around. It was the strangest thing the chandler was upside down and so were the candles and flames. Even her hair was strange it was being pulled up. That’s when she realized she wasn’t on the floor. She was on the ceiling!!

“Ahh!!” she cried as she was detached from the ceiling. She hit the floor with tremendous force and fell unconscious.

​

A large red aircraft landed safely in an open area. The cockpit doors opened up and a silver haired teen stepped out. “Where are we Jiminy?” spoke the young teen.

“Well, judging from my journals it appears we are in Wonderland” A green cricket was looking over his journals from a previous adventure.

“Wonderland? Alright then who are we looking for?”

“Well on our last adventure I recall meeting a Princess of Heart”

“Hmm…” He thought.

“Hey you!”cried a voice, “Get out of here before I make you a dead boy!”

Riku looked around and saw no one, “Down here idiot!”

“A mouse?” Riku replied

“That’s Dormouse to you”

“Look I’m not looking for any trouble I’m looking for someone”

“If you’re here for Alice it be best you got back in your plane and left. Or Else!!” the small mouse threatened with is sharp pin sword.

“Alice! Of course!!” Riku shouted, “One of the Princess of Heart”

He looked down at the mouse, “Can you take me to her?”

“Not on your lif-”

“Mallymkun don’t be rude” a white rabbit interrupted, “I’m dreadfully sorry for my friends’ behavior he means well”

“So we noticed” replied Jiminy.

“We are looking for our friend Alice” Riku informed

“Well I have just led an Alice here maybe she’s thee Alice” the rabbit replied

As Riku followed the rabbit and dormouse they ran into a dodo and some twins named Tweedledee and Tweedledum. They found a door sitting on some stoned stairs in an open area with nothing behind it or keeping it up.

“Is this it?” Jiminy asked

“Well, actually we are waiting to see if thee Alice figures out how to open the door” spoke the dodo.

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“Ouch” groaned Miss Kingsleigh. She slowly stood up rubbing her head as she looked around the room. There were six doors. Each painted with strange symbols. Miss Kingsleigh tried opening the one nearest to her, which was an ordinary door with and apple and seven little men painted on it.

The door was locked so she moved to the next one which was a door with tiny mice and what appeared to be glass slippers. Again it was locked. The next had a rose and a menacing spinning wheel. Also, locked.

None seemed to be opened. She turned around and found a glass table in the middle of the room ‘This wasn’t here before’ she thought. Slowly she walked up to it and noticed a bronze key sitting atop of it. ‘Maybe this will help’

Again she tried the doors, and again they were locked. Not even the door with the purpled colored carpet and lamp, the strange beast like creature, nor the door with the palm trees that had strange star like fruit hanging on them.

Miss Kingsleigh thought for a moment and suddenly noticed a curtain. She walked up to it and yanked it off the shackles kicking it off to a side. Voila there was a door and the key opened it with ease, but it was quite small and Miss Kingsleigh didn’t fit.

She sat back down thinking. When she came across a bottle that was sitting on the glass table. Another mind trick. She crept up to it and held it with concern. It had a tag that read “DRINK ME” She popped the top off and smelled the substance.

“Ugh!” it wreaked a putrid smell, but never the less she drank a little bit of it. She set both the key and bottle on the table as she noticed her whole body began to shrink. Her blue dress didn’t fit anymore so she used her undergarment as a dress. She realized she was now small enough to walk through the door.

One problem, the key was on the table and she couldn’t reach! Figures that she never learned from the first time. She let out a huge sigh and looked at the floor to see a small box with a kind of candy with frosting reading “EAT ME”

A small bite and she immediately grew to great proportions. She was so big she didn’t fit in the room. She realized what a fool she was so she thought it through she grabbed the key then drank the bottle that made her shrink again.

Now the undergarment was stretched in her growth and when she returned to a bite size it fit her slightly big. It didn’t matter how anyway she was too small to fit in her blue dress regardless. As she unlocked the door she prepared herself to see what lies beyond it.

A peculiar place with actual dragon flies and horse flies, trees, flowers, and mushrooms, that tower over her. She was definitely not in London anymore. She walked down a stone stairway and followed a path under a huge gate. She made a spin to look at everything clearly. When she turned back she found 2 twins, a dodo, a mouse, the rabbit in the waist coat, a cricket, and a boy.

“I told you she’s the right Alice”, spoke the rabbit. Miss Kingsleigh looked at the group with wonder as they were looking at her as well.

“I am not convinced” said the mouse

“How’s that for gratitude?” argued the rabbit, “I’ve been up there for weeks trailing one Alice after another and I was almost eaten by other animals.”

“Come now you’re safe and home so stop your worrying” spoke a flower, it was purple, rooted into the ground with a blue and yellow one. It looked at the suspected Alice gazing at her, “You look nothing like yourself”

“That’s because she’s the wrong Alice!” the mouse complained.

“If she was, she might be” spoke a twin.

“If she isn’t, she ain’t” replied back his brother.

“If she were so, she would be”

“But she isn’t, no how”

“I’m sure she’s Alice” spoke the boy with silver hair, “Her light shines bright like the others”

“She’s still the wrong Alice” replied the mouse

“How can I be the wrong Alice? If this is my dream” asked Miss Kingsleigh. Everyone looked at her with the look of “What?”

“And who are you if I might ask?”

“Oh, I’m Tweddledee and he’s Tweedledum” advised a twin

“Yes, yes, and I’m McTwisp” spoke the rabbit, “And this is Mallymkun”

“Don’t introduce me to this not Alice” yelled the mouse

Alice still was curious of what’s going on and then looked at the boy with a cricket on his shoulder. “I’m Riku and this is Jiminy”

“Nice to see you”, said the cricket, “Again” he whispered under his breath.

“We should consult Absolem” said the dodo

“Exactly, Absolem will know who she is” replied the flower.

“Alright I’ll escort her” reassured Tweedledee

“No I will” said Tweedledum

“You both can escort her” bargained McTwisp

As everyone headed towards Absolem, Riku was wondering if this really was the Alice he was looking for. She’s all grown up how could she be the little 9 year old girl he saw in Hollow Bastion. “You think this is Alice Jiminy?”

“Well, I’m not sure, but you said yourself that she has the same light as the others. Are you having second thoughts?” asked Jiminy

“No, but… she seems different… like…. I don’t know” he sighed as they got to a blue smoke cloud. “We’ll see what this Absolem says”

The not Alice saw the smoke and looked at it with much curiosity. As the smoke cleared there was a blue caterpillar smoking a hookah. “Who are you?” he asked

“Absolem?” Miss Kingsleigh asked

“You’re not Absolem. I’m Absolem. The question is, who are you?” he took in a blow from his hookah and blew it in Miss Kingsleigh’s face. She coughed and spoke up with a hoarse tone.

“Alice”

“Hmmm” he hummed

“What do you mean ‘Hm’ I ought to know who I am”

“Yes you ought stupid girl.Unroll the Oraculum”.
Alice looked confused and looked at everyone around her when McTwisp hopped over to a scroll sitting on a mushroom. Mally unrolled it and Alice took a good long glance at it.
“It’s a calendar?” Riku asked.
“Compendium” boasted Absolem
“It tells of every event that will and has happened in Underland. Today is Griblig Day” chimed McTwisp.
Alice looked closely at the scroll and could see her and everyone in her group in the same pose looking at the scroll. “Show her the Frabjous Day” said Absolem.
The scroll magically changed to another day, on top of a high tower stood a girl with long curly hair slaying a gigantic dragon. “Yeah Frabjous Day being the day you slay the Jaberwocky” smiled Tweedledee.
“The Jaber-What?” replied Alice.
“Jaberwocky” advised Absolem
“And you all think I’m the prophecy?”
“Well, Yes” said McTwisp
“It can’t be me!” she protested
“I know” Pointed out Mally
“Resolve this for us Absolem, Is she the right Alice?” asked McTwisp
“Not hardly” he said smoking in his hookah and disappearing in the blue smoke.
“I told you” responded Mally
“Little imposter. Pretending to be Alice, she should be ashamed” scoffed the flowers
“I was so certain of you” sympathized McTwisp
‘But her heart?’ thought Riku
“I’m sorry”, apologized Alice, “I don’t mean to be the wrong Alice”
“Wait, this is my dream. I’m going to wake up now and you’ll all disappear” she closed her eyes and pinched herself. When she opened them, everyone looked at her wondering what she is talking about.
“What does she mean dream?” whispered Jiminy. Riku only shrugged.
“Odd. Pinching usually does the trick” being confused she thought of how she was going to wake up.
CRASH
Everyone immediately looked back “Bandersnatch!!!” cried the Tweedles.
“Run!!” cried Riku as he snatched the Oraculum just before some strange red cards grabbed it. He pulled his Way to the Dawn out and tried to distract the creature known as the Bandersnatch long enough for the others to escape. It was white with black poke-a-dots with the face of a bear and the stealth of a leopard. The keyblade wielder charged at the creature as it roared in the air. It lifted its paw and made a move to slash him. Luckily, he dodged before getting seriously hurt.

Meanwhile, everyone else was being chased by red card soldiers with nets. One by one they captured by standing flamingos, the dodo, and even McTwisp. The Tweedles took cover and Mally kept up with not Alice.

“Riku!!” shouted Jiminy. The teen turned his head to see that the cards were about to capture Alice. He ignored the Bandersnatch and took off towards the not Alice.
Alice and Mally got surrounded by the cards. One lifted its net and made an attempt to snag them. Alice put her arms up to defend herself, but nothing happened she looked and the card was split in two. Riku had gotten their in time and sliced all the cards.

They felt safe, but forgot about the Bandersnatch. It roared again and charged at them. Riku knew it be better to stay with her and protect her. So he motioned everyone to run. The Bandersnatch was nearing closer and closer. Mally jumped into a wooden log, as Riku and Alice continued to run.

‘Wait’, thought Alice, she stopped and turned around, ‘It’s only a dream nothing can hurt me’

Riku was a good distance away stopped as well and turned around. Mally popped his head out of the log. The two saw the blonde girl standing still facing the creature.
“What she doing?” the two said in unison. Riku and Mally sprinted towards her before the Bandersnatch did.

“Can’t hurt me. Can’t hurt me” Alice repeated to herself

The Bandersnatch crashed infront of her lifting up dirt and rocks in the air. It lifted its head up and roared in Alice face making her hair and everything around her be pushed away by the wind. She looked up thinking that it won’t hurt her.

“Run you big lug” cried Mally in front of her

“Alice Get out of there!!” shouted Riku from behind

The Bandersnatch took one step, but Mally jumped on its back took out his pin sword and stabbed it into the Bandersnatch’s eye. Riku caught up to Alice, “Come on!” he ordered

She was frozen, but as Mally took the eye out the Bandersnatch swung its arm and scratched Alice’s arm. Making both wince in pain. Alice reacted in fear and ran with Riku for safety. Mally disappeared with the eye and the Tweedles reunited with Alice and Riku and escaped the scene.


They reached a tree that pointed in two different directions. Everyone rested to catch their breath
“What was that?” questioned Riku
“A Bandersnatch” replied Tweedledee
“It’s the Red Queen’s pet” added Tweedledum
“No. It’s her monster” argued Tweedledee
“Pet she wouldn’t make goo goo to a monster”
“Anyway which way should we go?” asked Riku
They looked at the sign that led to Quest and Snud. The Tweedles took a hold of Alice’s hand. “This way East to Quest” said Tweedledee pulling to the left.
“No. South to Snud” argued Tweedledum
“No no no. This way”
“These two cannot agree can they?” Jiminy noticed as the two fought over which way to take Alice to safety. They suddenly stopped, for there was a loud screeching sound high in the sky. They all looked up seeing a bird like creature aiming towards them. Alice and Riku immediately ducked and the Tweedles were gone.
Alice gasped as they disappeared. Riku hit the ground being very irritated that everyone keeps getting kidnapped. No more he was going to protect Alice no matter what. Even if she isn’t Alice.
“Come on” Riku helped Miss Kingsleigh up as they continued to find more answers. Alice was trying to let everything sink in. Riku needed to know why this Queen is causing them trouble. They entered a forest and were completely lost.
Alice let out a sigh, but winced at the pain. Riku checked her arm and the Bandersnatch left a pretty bad cut. “Here let me” he offered
“No it’s alright”, she replied
“Trust me” he pointed his keyblade at her and shouted, “Curagra!!” there was a bell ring and green light forming around her arm and to no avail it was still there.
Riku looked at the cut and wondered why it wasn’t working. “Thanks for trying” said Alice. So he tried bandaging it so it would heal on its own.
“What are you two doing here?” spoke a creature in the trees. They looked up in the direction it was coming from, but nothing was there. Slowly a figure began to appear. It was a smiling cat.
“W-who are you?” asked Alice a bit frightened
“I’m the Cheshire Cat” he said “What do you call yourselves?”
“Riku”
“Jiminy”
“Alice”
“Thee Alice?” he questioned
“There’s been quite a debate about that”
“I was never involved in politics”
“Can you help us find our way?” asked Jiminy
“Depends on which way you want to go” said the cat
“Please, All I want is to wake up from this dream” boasted Alice
“Fine. I’ll take you to the Hare and the Hatter then”
He disappeared, “I’m not so sure we can trust him he seems very shifty” whispered Riku
“Coming” the cat appeared again at the end of a nearby path. No one had very many options so they took off following the Cheshire Cat.


It was the rise of morning and Riku and Alice stumbled upon a destroyed windmill. They were curious of what had happened, but noticed three characters napping at a table in front of the enormous windmill.
Riku stepped on a branch, which awoke a man sitting at the head of the table. The man looked up and saw the familiar girl. The other two at the table were Mally with the Bandersnatch eye and a brown rabbit who began to stammer at the sight of Miss Kingsleigh. The man rose from his chair with a smile and stepped on the table walking across it knocking things down on the floor and stepping on scones and biscuits.
Alice and Riku stopped and saw as the man knocked over teapots and teacups. Mally and the Hare complained as he did this, but once he stepped down he kneeled in front of them. The man was tall seeing that Riku and Alice had shrunk. The man smiled and said, “It’s you”
“No. It’s not McTwisp brought us the wrong Alice” Mally complained
“The wrong Alice!!!” the Hare cried.
“It’s absolutely Alice” Hatter assured them, “You’re absolutely Alice. I know you anywhere” he turned back to his friends, “I know him anywhere”
As Mally and the Hare giggled, Hatter grabbed Alice’s hand and hulled her up on the table with him as they walked back to his chair over the table. Riku being forgotten followed right behind them.
“Well as you can see we are still having tea”, said the Hatter, “And all because I was obliged to kill time waiting for your return…”
It was hard for Alice to keep up she was practically being dragged over the table. “…You’re terribly late you know. Naughty” he scolded putting her on his left side. “Well anyway Time became quite offended and stopped all together”
Riku stood by Alice and noticed the Hare pouring tea into a broken cup that spilled into another. ‘Oookay’ he thought. Then, the Cheshire cat appeared. Alice walked off to the right side of the Hatter and sat in a stool. Riku did the same, but on his left side.
“Time can be funny in dreams” replied Alice
“Yes, and now we must get on to the Frabjous Day” said the Hatter
“Frabjous day!!” cheered Mally and the Hare
“I’m investing in things that begin with the letter “M”, the Hatter changed the subject. He leaned forward to Alice and whispered, “Do you have any idea why a raven is like a writing desk?”
Alice thought for a moment, but abruptly, “Downal Wyth Bluddy Behg Hid” Everyone cried in unison.
Riku and Alice where confused, “What?” asked Alice looking around at the table
“Down with the Bloody Big Head” informed Cheshire, “the Bloody Big Head being the Red Queen”
“Come come we mustn’t commence with slaying and such” said the Hatter
“All this talk of blood and slaying has put me off my tea” whined Cheshire.
“Ah, our whole world is falling apart and poor Cheshire’s off his tea” the Hatter spoke sarcastically.
“What happened that day was not my fault” Cheshire cleared
The Hatter’s green eyes turned red with anger he stood up and walked over to the cat. “Oh, Dear” sputtered the Hare
The Hatter approached Cheshire, “You ran out on them to save your own skin” scolded the Hatter as the cat sank in his chair, “You guddler’s scuttish pilgar lickering shukm juggling sluking urpal. Bar lom muck egg brim-”
“Hatter” shouted Mally
The Hatter paused looking at Mally back with his green eyes, “Thank you. I’m fine” he said hoarsely.
“What’s wrong with you, Tarrant? You used to be the life of the party”, said Cheshire stirring his teacup, “You used to do the best Futterwacken in all of Witzend”
“Futter what?” questioned Riku
“Futterwacken!” exclaimed the Hare banging on the table
“It’s a dance” explained Mally
“On the Frabjous Day, when the White Queen once again wears the crown, on that day, I shall Futterwacken vigorously” said the Hatter as he returned to his seat and sat down.
The Hare suddenly heard something, “Oh, No” he cried, everyone turned to see him hide behind Cheshire. They then, looked to see what he was looking at. Red cards and a man riding a horse were approaching them.
“Uh, oh,” said Cheshire, “Good-bye” and vanished.
Mally gasped and recognized the rider, “The knave”
“Quick hide them!!” ordered the Hare
Immediately the Hatter handed both Alice and Riku a bottle and forced them to drink. The two shrank to a smaller size of what they already were and were picked up by the Hatter and tossed into a teapot. The Hare and Mally were sitting acting like nothing was happening and looking over at the Hatter struggling with the teapot.
Alice’s undergarment dress out grew her leaving her somewhat naked in the teapot. Riku was fortunate that his clothes shrank with him. Though they were in the tea pot Alice’s undergarment was quickly being folded into it as well. When the Hatter was done, he set the teapot down on his lap.
“Well, if it’s not my favorite trio of lunatics” spoke the knave sarcastically. He jumped off his horse and walked up to the table. They were quite nervous and tried hard to keep a straight face. For Alice’s sake. Alice and Riku heard the voice and remained silent to listen to the conversation.
“Would you like to join us?” offered Mally
“Because you’re all late for tea!” cried the Hare and threw a cup at the knave. The cup missed and hit a red card soldier breaking into tiny pieces. The knave was not amused, but the trio clutched their sides for laughter.
The knave ignored them and walked towards the Hatter, “We’re looking for a girl called Alice”
To avoid the conversation, “Speaking of the Queen, here is a little song we used to sing in her honor” the Hatter rose his hand as he and his friends sang.

Twinkle Twinkle little bat​

How I wonder where you’re at​

Up a-​

The song was cut short when the knave got the Hatter in a choke hold, “If your hiding her. You’ll lose your heads” he threatened
“Already lost them” the Hatter replied hoarsely
Everyone laughed at his answer. The knave was fed up and let go and continued walking around the table. The blood hound that was with the knave and soldier cards was sniffing around for Alice. The Mad trio didn’t notice him and continued with the song:

Up above the world you fly​

Like a tea tray in the sky​

The dog went under the table banging against it and shaking everything on top. That’s when everyone was getting nervous and the song began to repeat.

Twinkle Twinkle Twinkle Twinkle​

Twinkle Twinkle Twinkle​

Twinkle Twinkle Twinkle​

Twinkle Twinkle​

The dog ran into the Hatter underneath the table and growled at the teapot. The Hatter looked at the dog, “Downal wyth bluddy behg hid” he whispered. The dog looked up and ran off barking in another direction leading the cards in a different direction.
“Follow the blood hound” ordered the knave
“Pass the sugar” said the Hare. Mally tossed 2 lumps and landed perfectly in the cup
“You’re all mad” the knave replied
“Thank you very much Bah!” the Hare replied
As the knave climbed his horse and followed the bloodhound as well the Hatter took out the teapot and set it on the table. He opened it up and immediately closed it.
“Opps Sorry” he apologized. Alice wasn’t wearing much and Riku had to keep his eyes shut to respect his friend. Didn’t hurt much that he gave a couple peeks. The Hatter lifted the cap just a bit and pulled a piece of her undergarment. He folded and sowed another dress for her. He tossed it in the teapot and closed the cap again.
Riku, till she was done getting dressed, turned around, when she was finished she banged on the teapot which gave the Hatter the sign to take them out. As he set Alice on the table he glanced at her dress.
“I like it” he complimented
“Good thing the bloodhounds with us, or you’d be-“ Mally made a motion of cutting his head off.
“What do they want with me?” she asked
“Wait a minute; best take her to the White Queen. She’ll be safe there” the Hare glanced at his utensil after finishing his suggestion, “Spoon..” he trailed off.
The hatter pulled his hat off and placed it on the table near Riku and Alice. Looking at Alice smiled, “Your carriage. Milady”
“The Hat?”
“Of course” the Hatter replied sure of himself, “Anyone can travel by horse or rail, but the absolute best way to travel is by hat. Have I made a rhyme?” he reflected in his statement.
Everyone laughed even Riku. Carefully they climbed onto the hat. Mally clapped his hands walking up to the Hatter.
“Oh, I love traveling by hat” he said
“Mally, Just Alice and…. What was your name again?”
“Riku” he grunted as he tried getting a good grip of the hat.
“Ah well, then fairfarren all” the Hatter stood up leaving the table knowing he will see his friends soon.
The Hare was still a bit crazy. He always was. “What you mean? Wait Gae!” he shouted throwing a cup at the Hatter. He was smart enough as to duck and watch the cup fly over his head and crash into many tiny pieces on the ground. Behind him he left Mally and the Hare laughing their brains out.


“Twas brillig, and the slithy toves Did gyre and gimble in the wabe…” The Hatter was stating a saying in the prophecy. He was walking down a long familiar path near the woodlands. Riku and Alice just sat on the hat, but as the Hatter continued they tried to understand what he was saying….
“…All mimsy were the borogovves And the mome raths outgrabe”
“Sorry, what was that?” asked the curious Princess of Heart.
“What was what?” the Hatter replied staring at Alice and then returning to his saying.
“The Hatter seems to be angry about something” the keyblade wielder whispered to Jiminy who was even smaller and still on his shoulder.
“I’m absolutely sure it has something to do with the Red Queen” Jiminy replied
“The Jabberwock”, the Hatter continued, “with eyes of flame and Jaws that bite and claws that catch! Beware the Jabberwock, my son! And the frumious Bandersnatch! He took his Vorpal sword in hand The Vorpal blade went snicker-snack! He left it dead, and with its head He went galumphing back”
A chill went down Jiminy’s back. Riku felt the cricket shake from all this ominous talk and frightful tale the Hatter had just described. The Hatter then turned to Alice looking into her eyes.
“It’s all about you, you know” in the creepiest tone. Alice wasn’t much afraid she stood up for herself talking back to the Hatter.
“I’m not slaying anything. I don’t slay, so put it out of your mind” she protested. The Hatter stopped and was insulted by the word ‘MIND’.
He grabbed the Princess of Heart and keyblade wielder and set them down on a rock and began to walk away.
“Wait!” cried Riku, “You can’t just leave us here!”
The Hatter ignored him, “Hatter! Come back!” shouted Alice.
The Hatter turned, “You don’t slay” he said, “Do you have any idea what the Red Queen has done? You don’t slay”
“I couldn’t if I wanted to” she defended herself.
“You’re not the same as you were before” he returned to them, “You were much more muchier. You’ve lost your muchness.”
‘Her what?’ Riku thought
“My Muchness?” Alice questioned. The Hatter poked her chest just slightly
“In there. Something’s missing”
“Tell me what the Red Queen has done”
“It’s not a good story”
“Tell me anyway”
“Did you hear that?”
“Hear what?” Riku asked. Suddenly, there was a loud dog barking.
“Oh, Red Knights” The Hatter quickly grabbed Riku and Alice and stuffed them in his front coat pocket. As the Hatter ran Riku and Alice kept bumping heads into each other being that the Hatter’s pocket was crowded.
The Hatter could see the knights were closing in on him. That’s when he saw a tree across a small lake. He took his hat and placed both Riku and Alice whispering, “Go south to Trotter’s Bottom. The White Queen’s castle is just beyond. Hold on tightly”
The two nodded as the Hatter flung his hat like a Frisbee over the lake. It crashed standing up sending Alice and Riku tumbling off in the landing. They stood up knowing they were alright and looked back to find that the Hatter has been taken captive as well. The two frowned at the site. They were abandoned and alone and unsure of what to do now. So they hid under the Hatter’s hat and rested for tomorrow. They laid under the hat thinking about the Hatter’s last words before being captured...
“Down with the bloody Red Queen!”



Alice in Wonderland directed by Tim Burton (2010) story is credit to him, his loyal workers for the movie, and Disney :type:

 

Chapter 12

I'm sorry jajaja I've been super busy, lazy, and obsessed with other stuff I completely ignored this fanfic. But don't worry I'm still writing it and I've been looking it over to fix some grammer and spelling mistakes and planning it out with my loyal friends. Thus, far I only have this from Alice in Underland It's not finished though!!:registro5B15D:::L:


Alice Kingsliegh had a dream. It was one she has had many times before. Of how she fell down a hole and met some strange characters. Dodo’s, singing flowers, white rabbits, crazy hatters, and a big headed red queen and so much more to imply that she was absolutely bonkers.

There were also times where she would dream of six princesses, a loud duck, a goofy dog, and a spiky haired teen wielding a keyblade. It had been years since she had such a dream and she can feel it deep within that they are very significant to her. This time she dreamt of an evil witch with horns like the devil and her silver haired minion. His back was to her but when he turned around to reveal his face.

“Ah!!†Alice gasped in fear as she awoke. She looked aroundto see that she was under the Hatter’s hat and morning was just around the horizon. She looked back to the other side of the hat and there laid the silver haired boy asleep. ‘Him’ she thought in anger. She picked up the keyblade and crept slowly towards him. She stood unsure of how to wake him up when.

“Argh!â€Riku groaned holding his side. “Alice?†he looked up, “What are you doing?â€

“It’s you†she yelled

“Why did you kick me?†he asked.

“It’s youâ€, she said again, “You’re the one who kidnapped me and sent me to an evil witchâ€

Riku remained silent for a moment, “Why?†questioned the Princess of Heart, “Why are you here? Are
you here to kidnap me again?â€

The keyblade wielder sighed, “Look I’m not the same person who captured youâ€

“Why should I believe what you say?â€

“Because I’m your friend, aren’t I?â€

“I don’t know what to believeâ€

“Listen to your conscience†spoke up Jiminy

“What do you mean?†asked Alice

“We could stand here and talk about the good and bad that Riku has done in the past, but it’s your decision do decide if he is good or notâ€

Riku could have taken The Way to the Dawn away from Alice, but he waited to see what she would do. The Princess of Heart sighed looking at the key in her hand she turned to the boy and handed it back to him

“I trust you and I’m sorry for kicking you†she apologized

“It’s oka-†he was suddenly, interrupted by some loud sniffing going on outside the hat it was then tipped over and their stood the blood hound dog that captured the Hatter. Alice was still furious she became upset with the dog.

“You were supposed to lead them away! The Hatter trusted you!â€

“They have my wife and pupsâ€

“I’m sorryâ€

“What’s your name?†asked Riku

“Bayardâ€

Alice glared at Bayard, “Sit!â€

“Is your name Alice?†asked Bayard

“Yes, but I’m not the one everyone’s talking aboutâ€

“That Hatter wouldn’t have given himself up for just any Aliceâ€

“Where did they take him?†asked Riku

“To the Red Queen’s castle at SalazenGrumâ€

“We are going to rescue him†blurted Alice

“It’s too dangerous†Riku warned

“Look ever since I fell through that rabbit hole I’ve been told what to do, I’ve been shrunk, stretched, scratched and stuffed into a tea pot!!!†she argued, “And I’ve been accused of being Alice and of not being Alice, but this is still my dream. I’ll decide where it goes from here.â€

“If you diverge from the path-†warned Bayard

“I make the path!â€

Bayard sighed and lowered his head for the two to climb on top. Alice was already a top of the dog’s head when, “Alice are you sure?†Riku asked

“Yes. He wouldn’t be there if it weren’t for me. So we’re going!!†she spoke determinedly, “Now take us to SalazenGrum, Bayard, and don’t forget the hatâ€

It didn’t take the blood hound long to realize there is no changing her mind. On command he snatched the hat and ran out of the dark woodlands and into mountainous valleys and deserts until the Red Queen’s castle became visible to all three.

They snuck away from castle guards and stopped near a castle wall. For some it must have been some 19-23ft tall, but for the Princess of Heart and the keyblade wielder it quadrupled, tripled, and finally doubled in height.

The three stood near the moat filled with floating heads. “There’s only one way across†examined Jiminy

Riku took in a deep breath before following Alice who had already hopped on top of a rotting head. Slowly they hopped making sure they didn’t slip or miss and plunge into the moat. Alice made a risky jump and landed right foot into a mouth. She shook off the water gagging at how disgusting and crazy this may seem.

Eventually the two made it and examined how truly high the castle wall is. Riku went off and found a small crack in the wall that made a good tunnel into the castle. Meanwhile the Princess of Heart turned to the blood hound across the moat shouting, “Bayard, the hat!!â€

Riku saw the hat fly up and over the castle wall like a Frisbee. He turned to the Princess and said, “Come onâ€.

They crept inside the small crack and entered a very green vegetation area with bushes of red roses. They hid behind one of the stems and looked out into the garden. Seemed the Red Queen was play croquet, she held a flamingo as a bat and swung hard to the ball. It was hit so hard it whizzed past Alice and Riku. The Red Queen’s loyal servants cheered her amazing shot. “Splendid shot your Majestyâ€.

On instinct Alice ran towards the hedgehog (ball) and helped unbind him. At the same instant the Queen was waiting impatiently for the small creature, “Where’s my ball? Page!â€

“Yes, your Majestyâ€, replied the Page.

“Alice hurry upâ€, Riku whispered

The hedgehog was making too much noise, “Shh†Alice whispered, “I want to help youâ€

With that the hedgehog stopped crying and was freed. It was only then they all turned around to be caught by the Page. The Page was luckily to be McTwisp who looked at Alice disappointedly, “Well if it isn’t the Wrong Alice†he mocked

Immediately the hedgehog scurried off as McTwisp wondered what they are here for, “What brings you here? Mmm?â€

“We’ve come to rescue the Hatter†informed Riku

“You’re not going to save anyone being the size of a gerbilâ€

“Well, do you have any more of that cake that made me grow before?†asked Alice

“Upelkuchen? Actually, I might have some left†he searched his pockets and found a small piece and broke it in two and handed to the two. Riku took one small bite while Alice two chunks. “Not all of it†warned the Page, but it was too late Alice was growing too rapidly and she was now here normal size!!

“Page!†the Red Queen screamed as she drew closer to Alice.

“Oh, Dear†McTwisp was worried and ran off to inform the Queen.

“And what is this?†she asked

“It’s a who your Majesty this is um…†he tried to think of something to get her out of this.

“Um?†the Queen questioned

“From Umbradge†Alice made a daring save.

“What happened to your clothes?â€

“I… I out grew them†she said, “I’ve been growing an awful lot lately. I tower over everyone in Umbradge. They laugh at me. So I came to you hoping you would understand what it’s likeâ€

“My dear girl, anyone with a head that large is welcomed in my courtâ€, the Queen reassured, “Someone find her some clothes! Use the curtains if you must, but clothe this enormous girlâ€

She looked up at Um and smiled. The Queen looked down to see the silver haired boy next to her, “And who is that?â€

“He’s eh…†Um studdered.

“Eh, from Ehlestan†Riku saved

“You accompanied Um? I’m sure†the Queen asked

“Yes, she asked me to bring her hereâ€

“Ah, very well then come this wayâ€

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The Red Queen, Um, and Eh entered the throne room. It was large room with twelve pillars painted red around and gold at the bottom. There were many stained glass windows, but the largest was behind the throne. It was seated with large red curtains and a heart shaped chair. Um was dressed from the curtains and Eh had his clothes grow with him. Eh wasn’t as tall as Um, but then again they grew into their normal sizes.

As the Red Queen sat in her throne she immediately screamed, “I need a pig here!!â€. Just like that one big fat pig was dropped in front of the Majesties feet and she kick them right on its belly. “I like a warm pig belly for my aching feet. Would you like one Um?â€

“No thanks†she replied

“Sitâ€

The Princess of Heart looked at her chair that was being lifted by two monkeys. “Sit!†the Queen commannd carefully she sat down sinking down to the floor. Eh immediately sat on the floor next to Um.

“So what’s the plan?†asked Jiminy

“Shh!!†Riku hushed

The Queen looked at him, “Is something wrong Eh?â€

“No nothing at all your Majesty. Just admiring how amazing your kingdom is†he replied

“Oh, well thank youâ€



Finally right! well the idea for Alice hurting Riku was because only Mickey, Donald,and Goofy know he's changed, but the Princess of Heart and their Prince don't know that. :3 Catle of Dreams and Agrabah are going to be interesting for him:poketoungeb:

 

I'm sooo sorry you guys. The delay is due to massive editing and revising. Once I have re uploaded chapters 1-12 I will continue to post. Then I can continue with chapter 14 and 13 is done so hooray :) for that. So you don't leave feeling disappointed here's a picture :)

Thanks for Reading.

 

I hope you guys like the updates I'm giving this :) Thanks for reading and if Chapters 12 and 11 are still weird give me maybe tomorrow or this week and I'll have them fixed and Chapter 13 and possible 14 if I have plenty of time for it :)