Love me again (An Axel/Sai'x Story)

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I didn’t always hate Sai’x, in fact there was a time when I loved him, but then he went with Xemnas, if I had a heart I would have been heartbroken, I think this is why I became so wild (Xemnas always sends Sai’x to tell me off so I get more wild to make him come to me more). When I think of the times we spent together laying on his bed looking up at the moon…it makes me cry (I know it’s not real sadness, since I don’t have a heart) because I still love him.

    “Axel dinner†called Xaldin, Axel put down his red pen and closed his diary that was black with a red flame on it, he didn’t lock it because only Roxas walked in to his room without asking and he know about Axel and Sai’x

    When Axel got to the dinner room, Sai’x had already eaten his dinner and was cleaning up his mess, there eyes met over the room, Axel looked away until Sai’x went to pass him, he then looked right in to Sai’xs eyes
    “Love me again Sai’x†Axel whispered so only Sai’x could hare him, but Sai’x made out he didn’t hear Axel and just walked past him and with that Axel just sat down to eat his dinner.

    As Sai’x went back to his room, he could see that Axels door was open a little bit, so he walked up to Axels room and slowly pushed it open to look in, as he looked around the red room his eye fell on Axels diary on his bed, so he walked over to his bed and picked the book up and read the last thing Axel had put in it, as he got to the end Sai’x eyes widen, as he read the last words he sighed and then read them words over and over again, he now knows why Axel has asked him to love him again. Sai’x sat down on Axels bed and held the dairy to his chased, for the next ten minutes Sai’x remembered the times he and Axel were together, he remembered their first kiss, their first time doing it
    “Xemnas lied to me, I can feel loveâ€
    “I know you can Sai’x†A voice said, Sai’x looked up and saw Axel, his green eyes looked sad
    “Axel I-“ Sai’x said, he was then cut off as Axel kissed him, when he pulled away from the kiss Axel leaned his head on Sai’xs shoulder
    “Love me again Sai’x†Axel whispered, Sai’x put down Axels diary and lied down pulling Axel on top of him
    “I’m sorry Axel, sorry that I hurt you†Sai’x said wrapping his arms around the red head lying on top of him
    “And I love you again†Sai’x said kisses Axel on the fore-head
    “I love you too Sai’x got it memorized?†Axel said cuddling up the Sai’x

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    Hope you enjoyed that (if you don't like Yaoi please don't flame me)
     
  2. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    That was really beautiful and very touching. The sadness of the initial separation is balanced perfectly by the loving reunion at the end. Sensitively written and a new take on Axel. You are a true artist, Anniexo.
     
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    Makes me think that it'd be cool if in FM+ they would explain a bit why Axel and Saix hate eachother.
    Nicely written story though.
     
  4. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thank you Gharanth I really like Axel and Sai'x paring and it's thanks to them two that i came up with this lol

    Yeah it would be funny if they did have a thing in the game
     
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    I guess orgy members development would look pretty cool because it seems like to much is left for us to guess..
     
  6. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    I agree, there is no real explanation as to why some seem to hate each other. It would be good to know all their backgrounds.
     
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    VERY VERY NICE! I applaud your writing Annexio!
     
  8. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Thank Arc glad you like it, would you all like me to write love me again 2?
     
  9. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    sure!wonder who itll be about?
     
  10. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    It'll be a follow on for this one I think I'll write Xemnas trying to break Axel and Sai'x up or someone else doing it
     
  11. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    oh,i thought u were going to make somthin like roxas and namine or roxas and larxene or marluxia and zexion.
     
  12. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Nah it's okay to really follow this one
     
  13. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    thats cool,just throwin some ideas i like to write storys to,but i never show them to anyone accept my best friend (like axel and roxas in your story)
     
  14. no-reality_allowed ¢ℓαιяνσуαηт ℓσνєкιℓℓ

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    omg that was so sweet T-T

    it makes me wanna go yaoi and marry some member from this forum =D
     
  15. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Wow it really makes you wanna do that?
     
  16. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    i just have one question...whyed u make them gay?!:confused:
     
  17. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    because I'm a yaoi fan and I like Axel and Sai'x paring
     
  18. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    oh...(ew..)ok...
     
  19. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    lol I hope you're not fleaming me ha ha
     
  20. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    why would i? im just expressing my opinion:D i like the story but...at least larxene or somethin!(not a flam)