one of *Hippie Jesus* band's songs

That’s why I want you out of my life
You’ve taken my love
You’ve taken my smile
Grab a hold of the truth
Suffering from the pain
Everything was a stupid lie

Laughing like it was
Nothing (nothing)
Hoping you come back
Back into my arms
That tower over me
Kiss me again

Take my heart
Take my soul
Take me with you
I tried so hard
To be with you again
A stupid BREAK UP
Break up... (Break up)

Never wanted you gone
Why did we have to break up?
Don’t play with me
All these games
Can’t stand another break up

Why can’t this feeling
Ever go through your head
I WANT YOU
As the years go
I really never wanted to
LOVE YOU

I can’t stand you
Just ignoring my calls
Pushing me away
The real thing was
You were the one loving
ME

Take my heart
Take my soul
Take me with you
I tried so hard
To be with you again
A stupid BREAK UP
Break up... (Break up)

Acting, Pretending, Crying
Wishing for me
Don’t forget all of this
The love, hugs, and kisses
Deep down I truly
I miss you


i had help writing this *cough Devil's Angel* and meh like it but i wanna hear more opnions

 

Eeeeemmmmoooooo

 

Pretty good lyrics, now it just matter on how it sounds with a band you should record it and post it.​

 

correction hippie emo

we do have a recording but on meh computer it's messed up and it's in my computers library

 

See if you can try to post it, I want to hear...​

 

how would it work from taking it from meh library

 

It's really not too bad; I'd like to see some more lyrics of your's. The only thing is, this line...

It reminds me of the line in the Paramore song "We Are Broken":

 

That was kinda depressing. Try to change the lyrics to your songs. It sounds to now. Like Jonas Brothers **** SOS. I'm not saying this is a bad song, but don't try to make your songs about break ups. Instead try making really good break downs, break downs in music these days suck. What kind of band are you? Your type of style.

 

that was a rare thing Devil's Angel is the one who helped write it so if u know Devil's Angel yeah.......we're more of a heavy metal/rock band rather than sad......